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This is the Corruption of Champions mod being developed by OtherCoCAnon and the denizens of /hgg/.
Corruption of Champions is a text-based flash game overhauled with new dungeons, new mechanics, new characters, and a lot of lolis.
The mod is open to content submissions, anons can and are writing new content to be implemented all the time.
 
Downloads
Latest Version (1.6.15) +Changelog in link
https://mega.nz/#F!St0HiaTC!oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA

Use a standalone flash player (projector), this shit is no longer supported by any web browser.
Remember to save to file to prevent save loss.
https://www.adobe.com/support/flashplayer/debug_downloads.html The standalone Flash player is now also in the Downloads MEGA since Adobe killed their downloads.

Information
>Game Related
Source Code: https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod
Changelog: https://pastebin.com/CDU8byhd The changelog is in the downloads folder

>Thread Related
Previous thread: >>49613
Thread Archives: https://gitgud.io/Blank/CoCAnon_mod/raw/OPT/Archives
OP Template: https://pastebin.com/raw/q38Ccy3n

>Writing Related
Content Submissions (Chronicles): >>44060 >>44061 >>44062
Submission & Misc. Archive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LGK4sPuWH69iEZ9ZmX2fnfDRrhj7h4hQ
Writing Guide: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PGysInt0S0VHYvPv0b__4xpHqrfbE-zikQiRonsnUsU
If you can't write, read. Get what you want in game by engaging in the creative process as a critic or proofreader.
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FemPC x Sharkdaughters WHEN
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>>51663
Sharkdaughters x parasites when?
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>>51664
Sharkdaughters x Vampires when?
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>>51665
Vampires x Vines when?
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>>51666
vampires x that one guys piss and puke content when?
>You find your overly feminine face loses a little bit of its former female beauty due to your body’s changing hormones.
how do i stop this from happening without having a vagina
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>>51668
Androgyny perk.
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>>51263
>I read here some time ago that Dominika is actually the OC of some guy intended for the Warcraft Universe, which he ported over. Do you know more about that? I always liked dangerous characters and the implications of what Dominika does to you are quite dangerous. So what's up with that?
Dominika is not quite a ported OC. The author created different variations of her for different settings he placed her in; 'WoW' Dominika has green eyes whereas CoC Dominika's are blue, for example. There was always an unspoken implication that the world she originally came from was Azeroth, but I seriously doubt the author would have taken any steps to make that canon to her story because he had too much taste. Dominika's author, Symphonie, hated waifus and recruitable friendly-friend-oh-I-love-you-hero! characters and actually left the CoC community because (in addition to disagreeing with Fen's money-for-content-or-it-will-never-be-added development ethos) of the explosion in what he believed were bland 2D waifus during the later half of 2012. A quote by Symphonie from September 2012, memearrowed below for easier reading:

>i think the fact that all the femdom characters are one-note interchangeable monstergirls with a single word personality to be a bigger deal than the fact that they all femdom
>‘ooooh this monstergirl has RED SCALES and her personality is LIKES FIGHTING, this one has GREEN SCALES and her personality is WEEABOO JAPANESE WORD, this monstergirl is BROWN and her personality is GERMAN, this monstergirl is FEATHERS and her personality is BIMBO’
>boooooooriiiiiiiiiiiiiing
>i'm very critical about the trend of Generic Monstergirls added to the game of late. it feels like writers are relying on the fact that they are monstergirls to be a part of their uniqueness, as though the fact that kiha is a dragongirl somehow adds to her character, but for someone like me who doesn't give a flying fuck about monstergirls all something like kiha is is an annoying anime stereotype. and it's fine to have stereotypes for characters in small numbers but we are well beyond the point of it being ‘in small numbers’. when we're in a position where a new character is added who feels like they have as much if not less personality than a drider i think that's dumbbbbbb

Dominika was definitely meant to be dangerous. Though he never completed the character and so didn't get a chance to make this canon, the author always made it very clear that Dominika never even liked you and "was always just using you." Any and all paths involving actually helping her in her mission resulted in Bad Ends because she would dispose of you during or shortly after returning to her own world. Symphonie's remarks on the unimplemented "good ending" where you defeated her and turned her into a human battery of sorts who was imprisoned and used by the Covenant to power their wards:
>Basically while it's possible you could agree with some of Dominika's arguments (against the Covenant) it's important for the player to recognize that she is the wrong person to enact those arguments. She's hypocritical, judgmental, manipulative, shallow, and selfish. She's the NPC embodiment of high corruption with minimal physical changes. The 'good' ending would be to defeat her, then look the Covenant in the eye and say "Get your fucking shit together. I'm going to go kill the Demon Queen. Me. One guy. Who's been here like four fucking months. Come the FUCK on"
>"Kinda fucked up that the Covenant uses her as a human power generator."
>It'd basically be a constant mana drain-style effect on her as she sat in some dungeon spitting at a guard

>>51250
Marble's author's mother proofread his writing.
>>51670
Huh. Kinda respectable, I suppose
>>51670
>author created different variations of her for different settings he placed her in; 'WoW' Dominika has green eyes whereas CoC Dominika's are blue, for example.
Is that all he changed? I assume the vag mouth is CoC only. Still disgusts me a bit. I have that same gross feeling I got when I read Savin planned to have some TiTs character just be Hel until Fen told him no.
I also feel the need to point this out despite us discussing it before.
>kiha is is an annoying anime stereotype
<The experimental demon soldier is less interesting than my mage donut who would undermine the demon's whole plot point about escaping mareth.
The only thing I'd give credit for is letting the pc beat Dominika at least. Her actually succeeding in escaping mareth, even with the champ's help, is still dumb.
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>>51672
>Is that all he changed? I assume the vag mouth is CoC only.
I haven't the faintest idea. Dominika's author did most of his character building in WoW itself or on Darknest, a now-dead-and-private Warcraft-themed ERP and sex modding site to which he was a major contributor/moderator/administrator(?). Dominika's transformations are the result of meddling in demonic magic after arriving in Mareth; that's also why she has a chastity belt on, since she figured out that actually getting fucked would put her soul at risk.

>Savin planned to have some TiTs character just be Hel until Fen told him no
He sure did. Savin also insisted for months after the change was made that "Space Hel" had always been a prank and that he'd never had any intention of adding her(despite a design document with some scenes existing), only admitting years later that he had been banned from using the idea by Fen. I find their working partnership extremely interesting.
>>51673
>Savin also insisted for months after the change was made that "Space Hel" had always been a prank
I would unironically have liked Space Hel to be canon, it'd have been the final nail in the coffin that was the chance for TiTS to be anything but furry futa horsecocks in space.
>>51674
Space Hel more or less exists already in the form of Anno. She always sleeps around and gives you no option to ever stop it.
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>>51674
>>51675
He turned Space Hel into Saendra.
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>>51658
Sounds good, but also like something that'll end up never being finished unless it's open enough for others to just write whatever
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>>51673
Being a huge fucking cuck, Savin probably edges hard every time Fen denies him something.
>>51670
Honestly a lot of that could be said for the characters you're forced to interact with to see other characters, only to find out THEY'VE GOT FUCKING HORSE COCKS TOO
I never interacted with Dominika personally, does she have sex scenes or is it all just simping?
>>51673
Crazy how Savin's price to betray his claimed principles and vow to 'unfuck COC' was Fen just offering him his shitty MGE Clone cuck fantasy pushed onto others.
>>>51670
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Something I've been meaning to do even since before the current Storage menu was implemented was to adjust it with buttons not touching and things like dividers that don't look like they belong in a completely flat UI straight from TiTS. It still needs work and I think I'll tighten up the spaces between categories a little, but I wanted to show what I had so far first.
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>>51693
It has been centuries since the vampires are done and they are still not in anyways
>>51701
Damn, that's a sexy storage menu.
>>51674
>>51675
>>51676
I thought space hel was the lobotomized prison guard Hella Brandt
physically speaking, at least.
>>51696
He's an unironic cuck. There's no reason to believe there's anything good or human left in him.

>does she have sex scenes or is it all just simping?
She has some bj scenes, but it's very obvious she's evil within a few interactions, and seems like she's doing some kinda of mild mind control magic on you or something.
It's been a long time since I touched her, so I could be misremembering.
But I distinctly recall not seeing why so many people are into her, unless their specific fetish is being used in a non-sexual sense by a sociopath.
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how do i build it? ant keeps yelling at me about not being able to read environment variables and i dont know why
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>>51709
You probably don't have the right flexsdk
the one on the git is wrong, get a newish one
Haven't played this game in years. Does it have a character viewer yet?
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>>51731
this retard means to say "no"
>>51730
>Character viewer
>In text game
This rarely ever turns out well and the art would be garbage anyway. Every other disaster by Fen and co was very efficient at making sure I was never turned on
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>>51749
Xianxia one is pretty good for parts it supports
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>>51752
>Xianxia
LOL
it looks like xianxia is stealing from us they keep bragging about it in their private space
https://github.com/Ormael13/CoCX/pull/176

it even says that it was ported to them by one of our own when the commit is by someone else differently
https://github.com/Ormael13/CoCX/pull/176/commits/753153858a1e92b1e877e584a3f3f0d629d18410#diff-cd9322e1b1b63cb3667340b2387e19643098561da5d03138817b415bc0f56157R15
>>51707
Yeah. If you go far enough into her quest instead of reporting her straight away, she makes it so you *can't* report her. Basically, IIRC, she makes it so the details slip from your mind when you try to rat her out.
>>51661 (OP) 
Does the mod work on android or nah?
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>>51757
Look in the downloads folder you retard.
>>51754
I thought it was just Revamp that hated /hgg/'s mod.
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>>51754
nice
>>51767
Kitteh didn't really care much besides the usual attitude of a normalfag being disgusted. Over at Xianxia everyone actively discusses and openly displays their disdain about us all while envying the engine and UI work in the same breath. It's quite sickening, really.
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>>51754
That's what open source projects do. It would be quite a shame if they didn't.
>>51769
Isn't the lead dev Chinese? Makes sense he'd want to engage in Two Minutes' Hate against us to keep his social credit up. Loli is a decadent and evil Japanese custom or whatever. Xianxia hate Savin, which is more than Kitteh did when he ate shit from him for years.
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>>51754
Xianxia sucks anyway.
They love horse cocks and cuckshit.
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>>51782
Horse cocks are based, all species should've had them.
>>51773
chinks love lolis too
there is even this couple in the late 1800's where both the husband and the wife were under 10 years old and they had a kid
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>>51773
I think the correct joke here is that since the lead dev is a chink, of course he's going to steal IP.
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Hmmm haven't been here in while let me read the last two threads to see what they are arguing about now......Holy shit satan came back.....MOD IS UPDATED WITHIN A YEAR OF THE LAST UPDATE.

Holy shit Anons I am actually excited for once. Did Touhou fags stuff get in finally? Is this a good sign for the future?
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Marielle is made for cock
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>>51811
yes she is. Let us Dyke Break her!
>>51811
Yeah it's weird that the mod that lets you de-dick all the futas also adds a lesbian that you can't de-dyke
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>>51814
The ultimate de-dicked character. Has none, won't willingly take one
>>51809
>2hu get in?
No
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>>51821
?
>>51822
That shits been in for a long time now. His new shit is not in.
>>51822
oh he's the one behind those Kiha scenes? Oi 2hu, you should make more. I like Kiha but she's still a bit lacking. Could use head pats.
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>>51822
I forgot he did the alternate frog girl. Not a fan of the vampire touhou stuff, but fuuuuck that frog girl is too wonderful and underrated
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>>51828
never forget what hampered his vision, the froggy milky nipples were too good for this world.
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>>51829
Literally just one autist reeing really hard and really loud.
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>>51829
>froggy milky nipples
>never put in
I need this. Why can't the world let me stay happy just for once
>>51829
Rest in F frog milk
>>51827
There's a ring gifting scene for her (and for Izma) that I wrote a few months ago. I have to agree that Kiha needs love. Huge waste that she was tossed aside in vanilla. We don't even get a chance to go wreck up that demon lab that she was made in together.
Damn shame. Imagine going to destroy any and everything the demons were researching with Kiha. New demon soldiers like her? Free em, then get them on your side. Demon's portal research? Burn it up right in front of the scientists. I guess you could just steal it for yourself too. But assuring the demons are stranded in Mareth with your own (and kiha's) hands just seems like it'd be fun. 
>Could use head pats.
Patting her head after beating her in a sparring match would be cute. Maybe I'll try working on that this weekend.
>>51853
Nice
Holycrap, you nerds are still modding this text game that was low grade furshit in the first place? Why not just make your own choose-your-own-adventure stories? Do you need the popularity of furry games to sell people on your 2hu doujins?

>>51754
>Us
>Stealing open source code
>For another open source project
Wow. I didn't know piracy was theft, and downloading free stuff is piracy
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>>51832
>Not using the superior filename
>>51855
I can't think of a better porn text game that's out. Lilth's throne has almost no content from what I remember. TiTs, you can't go really anywhere without finding a futa or some weird cuck stuff thrown in your face. CoC2? Pretty much the same as CoC1's problems that this mod has somewhat fixed. Too many plotlines that get dropped and one note OCs that are shoved down your throat.
>>51855
Open source is not a license, you dumb fuck.
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>>51859
I think you misread. I'm clearly being facetious.
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>>51860
No, you're clearly being retarded.
>>51858
I still am reeling at CoC2 kitsunes.
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>>51853
Maybe we'll have that dungeon someday
>>51855
>Why not just make your own choose-your-own-adventure stories?
Ah yes, that's exactly what Slablands is, and it's deader over there then here.  At least I think it is, I haven't checked in about a year I'm going to assume they're slower still.
>>51858
>I can't think of a better porn text game that's out.
I can think of a few, some of which aren't furry but none so open as CoC, which is probably a good thing.  The variability of CoC many transformations often don't get accounted for most scenes so most people either stay human or play for the meta.  Honestly Flexible Survival should've been what CoC became, I may not like it(furry) but it's certainly using transformation more.
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>>51864
>>51858
Don't forget coc2 is very very anti-relationship and the few relationships you are allowed to have are cuck based. 
>>51853
Hey, are you or anyone you know interested in adding the ability to turn the huntsmen into a full female?
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In the alice fox scene 'Arouse' is greyed out what am I missing here I know the black magic arouse but it says 'You can't currently cast any arousing spells'
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>>51873
Do you meet the requirements to cast it?
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>>51874
Should do, over 50 lust and have the INT unless there is something I am not remembering.
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>>51872
>the only character that is fully monogamous and genuinely cares about the player, Brienne, is only accessible after cucking another character of his masculinity entirely
>cuckvin hates this character so much he tried to force cuck scenes for Brienne, only to be denied by the writer
>minor writers get harassed for not falling in line to the point where one, being hugsalright, quit and needed to go to a mental health institution
>other writers leaving left and right
Who would have thought that having a faggot and a kike and the lead for coc2 would have had consequences.
I would have called him anal obsessed, especially when there's an anal only toggle, but that's just par for the course for kikes.
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>>51875
Checking again, fatigue and lust are ignored for that, so you should just need to know the spell and have your magic set as black/white.
Or if you go directly to the scene with the debug menu, you could bypass the arouse check so it would default to disabled.
I can't think of anything else that would prevent it so there may be a bug, in which case I'll probably need your save to find the problem. The scene is working fine for me.
>>51859
Yes. And?
Embarrassing how some of us took the bait
>>51876
Could you share some more details of the CoC 2 drama you mentioned? Screenshots, sources, and so on?
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>>51898
I'm not part of the discord, so you'd have to look elsewhere for more information/screenshots. Hugsalright still has a ton of tweets about what happened available. I'm sure you can get more information from the cocg/titsg general on /vg/.
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>>51900
I think he might be acting kind of melodramatic, but at the same time, you'd have to be insane or have had a lobotomy to be able to keep writing for Savin and Fen. Wasn't Amily's writer mad that Fen wanted to shove in the Urta cuck scene and that's why they left? Or am I remembering wrong
>>51902
I think I remember us discussing that Amily's author is the one who wrote that scene a few threads back. Another thing I recall being brought up then was how Amily's writer said he regretted making Amily hate futas as much as she does too.
Assuming all of that is true, I have no idea how the guy managed to write best girl. Just really makes you think.
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>>51905
Might have been actual corruption. The company you keep can change you, especially if you have few to no outside voices.
Case in point, the number of people who move to the California bay area. In a couple of years you see a lot of them go from normal if naïve for wanting to live in that shithole, to militant cucks who are so insane you wonder how they function day to day.
>>51902
The fucking what? I don't really mind Urta, maybe because I don't really interact, but that was something they were gonna do?
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>>51914
>was going to
did
and you're a bad man if you weren't happy about it
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I'm so glad I get to post this again.
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>>51916
Wasn't the "threesome" scene that the one where Amily gets drunk and then Urta bangs her without your involvement?
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>>51902
Furries are literally brain damaged.
It was only a matter of time before the echo chamber formed and started attacking the minor writers.
Probably doesn't help that they're hyper liberal california retards with the mental fortitude of a grapefruit.
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>>51917
I thought that you "catch" them right before they start banging, where you then decide to join or or nope out of there.  The scene itself wasn't terrible(That's a lie) but the main issue I have with it is the character(s) involved, Amily doesn't seem like a threesome type of gal, if it was Helia it'd make more sense.
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>>51929
>I thought that you "catch" them right before they start banging, where you then decide to join or or nope out of there
No, you come in after they've been at it for a while, with Amily already looking pregnant (or more pregnant) from all the cum. And then you watch for at least a few seconds before saying anything.
>>51902
Amily's author wrote those very scenes years before he stopped working for Fen; Doctor Badger is what prompted his departure, not Amily x Urta.

>>51918
As of 2015, which is as far as my work has taken me so far, Fen is from Missouri and Savin is Texan. A surprising number of CoC authors are from the South.
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How can I get rid of obsidian vines?
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>>51947
Southerners are just as often into cuck shit as anywhere else, they're just ashamed of it instead of being proud of it like californian cucks
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>>51948
>TFW no daughteru that you can constantly tease as she begs for you to tell her how to remove them
>>51949
It's just that Texas is so fuckin big, statistically speaking a few will pop up
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>>51955
don't forget that california has been exporting their "best and brightest" to Texas cities to try and turn it blue.
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>>51670
Interesting. Thanks for answering my question. I thought you would forget about it in the new thread. 
I like Characters like Dominika. I am currently working on my own erotic FanFiction and I have the same attitude as Symphonie has towards Femdom Characters. I want raw real rape, humilation, defeat and misery in my stories. No these feel good "she says no, but she enjoys the rape and consents in the end". I don't want to write stories in a parallel erotic universe, where everyone implicitly consents and no one gets hurt.. Doesn't mean I am going to actually go as far as possible and depict the most disgusting, brutal acts in my stories, but the theme is just different. Just like I don't enjoy Femdom IRL and would never voluntarily submit to a Dominatrix, my characters shouldn't submit to them either and their humiliaton and degradation should actually be real and not some fetish thing that some people pay for, when they go to experience a BDSM event.
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>>51965
Please don't remind me. Though I guess Austin was always a bit of a cesspool
Speaking of defeat, humiliation, and misery, kudos to whoever wrote the frog girl(s) anal scene(s). That was some good shit.
Factory rework when so we can have liddellium when?
>>51975
dungeon based on the worst aspects of vanilla when?
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I wish CoCXianxia had more uooohhhh. Thanks for making this, nerds.
>>51976
Joy dungeon when?
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>>51968
I don't forget, just delay. I also haven't forgotten that anon from two months or so ago who didn't believe that very few of CoC's donation days were majority furry. Two more weeks until I complete the spreadsheet!
>>51975
Liddelium factory so we can mass produce Alices when?
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>>51985
Liddelium factory so we can be an Alice when?
>>51985
Good idea, at least we will have a fresh supply of loli pussy.
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>>51988
Always have a supply when you ARE the loli
>>51976
>>51978
>bimbo dungeon starts off strong, falls apart in the middle and ends with nothing great because the bimbos inside got too horny to make a proper dungeon
>there's a room with a piece of cheese in it, but no one remembers putting it there.
Had this idea of corrupting Kiha
instead of tsundere, she becomes yandere
but then i met moth and thought it might not be the bestest of ideas to have 2 yanderes (if you can call moth that)
In a perfect world. There would be no followers or lovers. Only slaves.
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>>51990
>there's a room with a piece of cheese in it,
that's nice.
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>>51993
>but then i met moth and thought it might not be the bestest of ideas to have 2 yanderes
It wouldn't be any worse than the current situation, where we have two tsundere dragons.
>>51990
Let's do it
>>51990
not enough cucking and furry futas
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>>51999
Bimbo urta kidnaps shark daughters
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>>52000
Too on the nose, should be a new character.
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>>51990
>>51978
You kid but Joy is a very much requested char whether as a Bimbo(slave) or as a pure girl waifu(lover). I know there are at least four or five of them if you count me anons that have been wanting it to happen for the past two years. Shits frustrating man.
>>52004
I kid because I desire.
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>>52004
Or turning the Huntsman into a real girl instead of an annoying ass troon who contributes nothing and the only way to get rid of it is to straight up kill it. Seriously why are we not allowed to have centaur/Cervitaur waifus/Slaves. Give us the horse/deer pussy.
>>52006
With horse/deer pussies
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>>52007
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>>52006
The author had recently transitioned and was autogynephilic
>>52006
Who the fuck is the Huntsman, I haven't followed COC in forever.
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>>52016
Deepwoods, some stag faggot with 2 hellhounds that chase you.
>>52004
someone tried to fix up joy but gave up when it saw the job was going to be too much
>>52004
>>51975
Reminder that 0 (zero) maintainers are even willing to discuss simple changes to tigersharkdaughters and in the past 4+ years haven't spent the ~30minutes it'd take to add lidellium and cover every edge case (there are only three).
If it isn't some donutsteel backstory attached to someone's slablands tier waifu or an extra screen you have to menu through in combat or finding something else to break the formatting/make the buttons slide around the place for it isn't getting in till you fork coc yourself.
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>>52023
>Reminder that 0 (zero) maintainers are even willing to discuss simple changes to tigersharkdaughters
I have no clue what this is referring to, but it's obviously wrong. There are 0 (zero) maintainers who are unwilling.
>and in the past 4+ years haven't spent the ~30minutes it'd take to add lidellium
Implementing Liddelium properly (which you all but admitted that you didn't, you implemented a bastardized version of it that's a lot simpler) would take much more than 30 minutes (still not very long though), especially when you'd also need to write a method of obtaining it and implement that too.
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>>52023
>Reminder that 0 (zero) maintainers are even willing to discuss simple changes to tigersharkdaughters
If nothing else you continue to prove no one should ever take you seriously and because of that you will never have a positive influence on this place and the work it does.
>>52004
It wouldn't be that hard for someone to rewrite it. 
Use the scenes for beating up jojo a few times like the normal corrupt/slave route, but add scenes where the pc can give him succubus milk, or the pure variant if you rather "joy" not gain horns, or whatever. I can't remember if jojo can be unenslaved or not, but you can account for that too and have "joy" just stay in your camp. For example, treating joy like she's not just your fleshlight will have her start to see you in a positive light. Maybe she'll gain back her religious beliefs or whatever so you can meditate together again. I think it might be fine for us to have a mouse girl with stockholm syndrome? It's probably worth discussing to flesh out the idea more.
As for other character reactions, Amily would probably even forgive you if you explained "I was a pos and genderbent this mouse guy, but I'm trying to make up for it." or "I made a mistake, but look at it this way, now we can make more mice children." Would anyone else really care? 
Also, reading Jojo's corrupt scenes grosses me out a little.
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>>52026
Feels a bit odd to beat the fuck out of jojo and then later be fine with it
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>>52026
Honestly it'd make sense if you can talk Jojo into genderbending, not so much the bimbo part.  Since regardless of sex(unless it's low standard mode) he develops a crush on the Champion.
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>>52032
>Since regardless of sex he develops a crush on the Champion.
What the fuck are you talking about?
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>>52031
He's a Buddhist, he'll forgive you.
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>>52034
Both for beating him up and for turning him into a cock-sleeve.
>>52031
"When you wake, you discover a note: The fighting allowed me to exorcise most of your inner demons. A part of me wanted to seek revenge for what you had done to me, but I know it was the taint on your soul that was responsible. If we meet again I would be happy to meditate with you." 
It seems like if he beats you senseless after you rape him, he goes back to being chill. Such a bro.
But, I'd say it should take time for jojo to warm back up to you if/after you genderbend and enslave him. It's not like one headpat afterwards should cause him to go: "I now love and forgive you for cutting off my twig and berries." The player should need to make more than a few kind gestures to get Joy to not be terrified of them. 
Another thing to discuss: Rather than bimbo-ing jojo, wouldn't turning Joy into a loli be better? Just shove 5 lolipops down her throat and bam, you've got a cute mouse loli. I would say to use Liddelium, but that would remove her mousey features, right? That feels a little lame to me.
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Does this mod add Minerva content?
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>>52039
Loli Joy? My friend, how did this only now come up?
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>>52041
Nope. Be the change you want to see.
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>>52033
Didn't play the mod, huh? Not that I can really blame you, but that's what it comes from.
If Jojo turns into Joy through an event that totally wasn't garbage, nonsensical, and hamfisted, she reveals that she had developed feelings for the champion as Jojo, but never pursued it because it could lead to temptation and corruption. Pretending that somehow makes sense, then she says she used to masturbate by the river at night to get the thoughts out, which sounds counterproductive but whatever.
There's a reason Joy is one of the lowest parts: Writing is trash, completely OoC, and unnecessary. It should be a different character entirely. That's no reason it can't be turned into something that actually does make sense and is of at least some quality though.
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>>52034
Would she still be a priest-monk or would she become a Nun Monk?

Like pic one or two in a practical nun outfit.
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forgot other pic
>>52053
I see no reason she wouldn't be a priest. Honestly I liked >>52039 loli suggestion, but anything's better than her just becoming a bimbo. I imagine she could be gifted nun clothes or something though if you really wanted.
>>52053
Different kind of priest anon.
I guess if you really wanted you could shove bimbo juice into jojo instead of succ milk or lolipops. That being said someone would have to write the bimbo route
>>52048
>Didn't play the mod, huh? Not that I can really blame you, but that's what it comes from.
>If Jojo turns into Joy through an event that totally wasn't garbage, nonsensical, and hamfisted, she reveals that she had developed feelings for the champion as Jojo
You're saying that if Jojo became Joy through a currently not existing event your headcannon becomes correct. Truly the best of arguments. If you're arguing that this happens in any of Joy's terribly written shit then it still doesn't do you any favors because the entirety of it is out of character for Jojo. Unless you can point me to Jojo being in love in his original content, don't bother.
Any new moth content or are you fags still doing literally nothing?
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>>52060
Are you doing anything more than that?
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Jojo's corrupt content feels weird. I tried going through it in game to get a feel for how it is and got the same scene after pounding him 5 or so times. Guess you might need really high corruption to enslave him. Would that mean a player wanting to genderbend and enslave him should have high corruption too? You meet jojo early in the game, around lv4 I think, so it just seems odd for the corruption requirements to be so high. Hell, I don't even think we need to be corrupt at all to turn kelt into kelly. I don't remember Amily's corruption scenes don't have requirements that are all that high either. Jojo was the first slave character, or at least one of the first, so maybe that's why.
To discuss genderbending him more, would/could it be reasonable to just let the player genderbend jojo each time they beat him up? The first dose of succubus milk makes his face more girly, a second gives him small tits, giving him the third makes his dick smaller, the fourth makes him full girl, and then beating jojo up a fifth time lets the pc have the choice to enslave "her." Is that too simple?
>>52043
I agree, that it's odd to think the idea never came up at all. Maybe it has and everyone just ignored it? The joy question gets brought up (what feels like) all the time, so maybe that's why it would've went unnoticed.
>>52053
Can't women be monks? But there's no reason you couldn't dress up your mouse slave/second wife in multiple different outfits like: a maid, nun, chinese dress, or even the skimpy bikini.
>>52062
>I agree, that it's odd to think the idea never came up at all. Maybe it has and everyone just ignored it?
It's been brought up a couple times before.
>>52062
I juist want to jerk off with Jojo like good bros without it being all weird and corrupt.
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>>52064
And I just want to turn all my bros into breedable women, Grandma Rathazul content when?
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>>52041
Yes, you can now progress your relationship with her without having sex, if you so choose.
>>52059
NTA
>Talking about Joy improvements
>Joy is from a mod
>Mention things from mod
>I am now angry
Read the thread next time, newfag. Next you'll throw a fit over people improving Aiko
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>>52062
A lot of the "legacy" stuff in CoC is pretty awkward, and that's saying something compared to the rest of it and Fen's spaghetti code. They likely at the time thought corrupted versions of characters would maintain some semblance of their original selves which is why he's resistant and self-aware of how abnormal his changes are.
I think it'd be possible to change his sex, sure. It's nothing out of the ordinary for this game and would likely involve Succubus Milk and/or pink eggs. I'm also with >>52064 though, Jojo's pretty adorable and it'd be nice to just friendly fug. I think the xianxia mod also allowed for normal Jojo sex, but it was obviously rushed and low quality with only a couple paragraphs for a scene if I remember right.


>>52059
We're literally talking about the mods, you brainless neanderthal. Also
>your headcannon
Not a headcanon, we're talking about another mod. Already been explained to you in the most simple terms. By that logic, /hgg/ is all headcanon too, so why did you come to a thread full of things you don't like, retard?
>don't bother
How about go fuck yourself? We'll do whatever we damn well please
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>>52065
Gilf rathazul would just be either just female rathazul (funny but boring after a while) Or older horny milf rathazul less in character (sexy as fuck).
>>52060
Be the change you want to see, anon. The writing guide's up there

>>52059
>Unless you can point me to where you can fuck your loli harpy/shark daughters in their original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to where you can find corrupt dryads in the original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to any sexable lolis in the original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to any non-pregnant frog girls in the original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to where Urta can be removed in the original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to where there are mothgirls in the original content, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to where there is a mansion in the deepwoods, don't bother
>Unless you can point me to where you can brutally kill most demons in the original, don't bother
Where do you think you are?
The fact that Joy rewrote normal Jojo's character was one of the problems with Joy. Fixing her enough to get her back in will involve fixing those problems, so the whole "Jojo secretly lusted after you even before becoming a bimbo because Joy said so" won't be a thing regardless and can't be used as a justification for anything.
Maybe we could have degrees of joy, kinda like "making" ember. I don't really know how much of a clusterfuck that would be though. Anyways, so we have base joy, just female jojo. From there, loli and bimbo. Or maybe just do incremental changes, I don't know.
>>52068
The majority of Jojo's pure content came a long time after his corrupt path. For months his interactions were "Meditate with for two paragraphs or rape."
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>>52071
Not that anon
I don't care how much you meditate or how pure you think you are in a land of corruption spending a large amount of time with someone here you will start to develop feelings weather that is lust or love depends on the path you take. It seems to me you are the minority who doesn't want Joy. But I do understand her needing a rewrite or like >>52072 which is a very good idea.
>>52071
>The fact that Joy rewrote normal Jojo's character was one of the problems with Joy
Yeah, it's a bimbo character. They're gonna be completely different. Same with corrupt versions of characters like Amily, but I don't see you complaining there.
No, the main issue was with how ludicrous the circumstances were with how he changed into that in the first place (where yes, that actually was OoC and Jojo would never drink it or use such braindead logic). The next issue was just with how trash-tier the writing was in general. It was a mess all around and that's why it's so infamous here.
>Fixing her enough to get her back in will involve fixing those problems
You're half right. She has plenty of issues, but "she doesn't act like Jojo" is not an issue. She's a retarded bimbo. Again, complaining about that is the same as complaining about any newly-corrupted characters and how they act different. The better thing would be to do away with that entire bimbo prospect and go with a simple feminization thing, forced or otherwise. Then she can retain her personality.
>so the whole "Jojo secretly lusted after you even before becoming a bimbo because Joy said so" won't be a thing
Says who? You? Are you going to write it?
Amily wasn't into watersports, your shark daughters weren't sexually interested in you, and Shouldra didn't possess demon "children" for you to fuck. Find "justifications" for the changes made in the /hgg/ mod if you're so anal about it
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>>52074
>I don't care how much you meditate or how pure you think you are in a land of corruption spending a large amount of time with someone here you will start to develop feelings weather that is lust or love depends on the path you take
Bullshit. That makes no sense at all and nothing in the game suggests anything so absurd. Corruption or not, you're not going to automatically have romantic or sexual feelings for every single person you spend time with.
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>>52075
>Yeah, it's a bimbo character. They're gonna be completely different.
>She has plenty of issues, but "she doesn't act like Jojo" is not an issue.
You're completely misunderstanding the issue. Obviously Joy will be different from normal Jojo. The problem is that Joy retconned normal, non-bimbo Jojo. Jojo's character was changed by Joy even if he didn't turn into Joy.
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>>52076
And why not? The mod adds plenty of things that shouldn't be sexually interested in you and vice versa. Just admit you're in the minority and don't want Joy.
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>>52077
>The problem is that Joy retconned normal, non-bimbo Jojo.
Then what the hell is the point of discussing anything about Joy or Jojo? Or any existing characters?
In that case, how would turning her into a female make her start having feelings for the champion? You wouldn't have any sexual relations with her unless you went the corrupted or bimbofied route. Also you very conveniently ignored the points made about other characters which debunks your argument.
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>>52078
>And why not? The mod adds plenty of things that shouldn't be sexually interested in you and vice versa
You're still making no sense and don't even have an argument, only non sequiturs.
>Just admit you're in the minority and don't want Joy.
Joy as written was garbage and I wouldn't want that particular implementation back at all (almost nobody does, and you're a deluded retard who hasn't been paying attention if you think otherwise), but the general concept of a female/loli/bimbo Jojo or whatever other transformations you want to have sounds good to me. I just don't agree that the only way it can be done is by destroying Jojo's entire character first.
>>52079
>Also you very conveniently ignored the points made about other characters which debunks your argument.
The points made about other characters are unrelated, they have nothing at all to do with the argument I was making.
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>>52080
>and you're a deluded retard who hasn't been paying attention if you think otherwise
Most people seem to disagree with every point you've made so far. I'm not even the same guy you were responding to. It seems you're the one who wasn't paying attention and if all you have are insults, you're not going to get any traction.
>>52081
The point he was making was that multiple characters and features were changed, yet you're only complaining about one character. If you're fine with the rest, then that makes you a hypocrite.

>>52080
So how would a female or loli bimbo fuck you? If Jojo isn't sexually or romantically interested in you at all, why would turning him into either of these change that? You see where you bit your own tail? Hypocrite
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>>52083
*loli Jojo, but you obviously know what I meant.
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>>52072
I really like this idea. It could literally satisfy everyone.
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>>52083
>The point he was making was that multiple characters and features were changed, yet you're only complaining about one character. If you're fine with the rest, then that makes you a hypocrite.
"Something was changed" is not the point, none of the examples mentioned are similar at all. I also can't think of any examples myself, but if there are any I'm overlooking then I'd probably dislike those too.
>If Jojo isn't sexually or romantically interested in you at all, why would turning him into either of these change that?
It wouldn't. Why would Jojo abandon his sacred vows just because his gender changes? Something else would have to happen as well in order to change that (the obvious examples being corruption, mental retardation (bimbo), or drugs).
>>52086
You could always get permission from The Goddess who we are on speaking terms with.
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>>52086
Cry harder
There was a civil and decent discussion about Joy changes until you started screeching. You're the reason we can't have fun things. Part of the basic writing guide is a group trying to figure out what's in-character for an NPC. You spend countless hours meditating, training, and bonding with him. If you go on to fix multiple problems and tell him of your tales, he regards you with awe. For some, he's been with your camp since the very beginning and he can often be a PC's first or second follower. It isn't reaching at all to say he might've been hiding some form of interest, but it's doubtful he would be the one to initiate. It's not like he has to go jerk off into the river every night either. It would take persuasion and obviously a pure PC. He has no reason to believe showing romantic or sexual interest would ruin him considering how many characters the PC fucks and are fine.

This obviously isn't the place for you if you're going to complain about something like this, because the mod in its entirety goes against your "issues." You said it yourself. Go play original CoC instead.
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See not every relationship has to be based on lust, corruption, or bimbofication.
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>>52086
>Something else would have to happen as well in order to change that (the obvious examples being corruption, mental retardation (bimbo), or drugs).
Why does it have to be these? It sounds like you just want bimbo or corrupt Jojo and nothing else. A relationship can blossom based on romance and affection instead of hard lust.
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>>52090
to be fair, mouse has his monk vows
>>52074
>minority
not fucking likely. Joy was an abject sack of shit. Absolutely garbage content. 
I don't want it either
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>>52090
>Why does it have to be these?
It doesn't. The fact that I called them "examples" at all implies that it's not a complete list, and that I qualified them as "obvious examples" further implies that there are others without that qualification.
>It sounds like you just want bimbo or corrupt Jojo and nothing else.
I don't particularly want those, I especially dislike bimbos. My preference would be a friend who doesn't want to fuck you (age or gender isn't important), which is something rare in this world so Jojo and Rathazul fill an important niche in that regard. The game would be greatly diminished by taking that away just to add another generic waifu.
>A relationship can blossom based on romance and affection instead of hard lust.
Obviously, that should be most relationships.
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>>52068
>A lot of the "legacy" stuff in CoC is pretty awkward
It sure is. Apparently, enslaving Jojo doesn't move him into your camp. He just lives out in the "jungle" (forest) and can hear you shouting for him from your camp.
"You yell out into the jungle, [say: Slut!] Minutes later Jojo slips into your camp from the jungle's shadows, dropping to his knees with a timid look of fear in his eyes. You step forward and grip the hair between his shell-like ears firmly, hissing angrily, [say: When I call for you, you need to be here. Do I need to teach you your place again?]" It's just odd to me.
>>52086
>Something else would have to happen as well in order to change that (the obvious examples being corruption, mental retardation (bimbo), or drugs).
I can agree with that. That's why it'd be genderbending and rape until he submits to your will. Minus the genderbending bit, I believe that's roughly what you do to enslave him now, right? Rape him a bunch (though you also need high corruption checks in game. I'd say the corruption requirements from his current scenes to enslave him should be removed. Considering we can mind break a few other characters without having much corruption to start, it'd make more sense for the actions you can do to jojo to simply corrupt the pc a lot in the end instead.) and he submits to you. It'd be reasonable a genderbent version of him would somewhat be the same.
As to why Jojo would agree to stay if you decorrupted(?) him after all this genderbending nonsense, maybe she admits you're an alright person and enjoys the non-sexual time you two have spent together. Getting her to have consensual sex after should be a bit harder, but perhaps requesting she help with Amily's plan, or simply admitting you've grown fond of her, could be enough.
>>52092
I think a reasonable amount of people want to genderbend jojo. We probably shouldn't reuse the revamp scenes. I'm sure they did their best, since even jojo's vanilla corrupt scenes are questionable.
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>>52093
>My preference would be a friend who doesn't want to fuck you
If it was ever added, there would be nothing preventing you from staying his friend. Nothing forces you to do it and you have to initiate it, just like most NPC interactions. It doesn't affect you in the very slightest. You are literally telling people to stop having fun.
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>>52074
>cuckchan filename
>muh minority
What you said will never happen or come to pass. Jojo doesn't love you or has fallen in love with you. It's not who he is nor his character. Also, Joy has always been garbage.
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>>52093
You already said you're unfamiliar with the mod and that you don't recognize any character changes, hence why you keep dodging that topic. You've already admitted you don't know what you're talking about and you're very conveniently ignoring the many arguments anons are making against you. This is because you know you're wrong.
You have literally no valid reason to stop content being written. Your thought process is "I don't like it so that means nobody can enjoy it." If you want to keep crying and throwing a fit, then follow >>52087
At least then you'd have an actual leg to stand on if you got the answer you wanted
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>>52088
>There was a civil and decent discussion about Joy changes until you started screeching
My first message on the topic was no less civil and decent. The unnecessary hostility didn't start with me, though I was admittedly pretty insulting to the civil >>52074 because I found the argument entirely absurd and coming out of nowhere (still do).
>>52095
>It doesn't affect you in the very slightest
If it's done as it was with Joy, it would. There's a difference between "if this optional thing happens, then Jojo will want to sleep with you" (perfectly fine) and "no matter what does or doesn't happen, Jojo always wanted to sleep with you" (changes things no matter what you do, so it's forced on everyone).
The latter is what I'm arguing against, and it's not even necessary for making Jojo a romantic/sexual partner, you can do without it.
>>52097
>You already said you're unfamiliar with the mod and that you don't recognize any character changes
I've said nothing of the sort.
>hence why you keep dodging that topic
I haven't dodged anything, only pointed out that someone's objections were based on a misunderstanding of what I was saying. To address why the things brought up are unrelated:
>Amily wasn't into watersports
She isn't in her watersports scene either. But even if she was, making her into watersports doesn't contradict her previously established character.
>your shark daughters weren't sexually interested in you
They were always very sexually curious and horny in general, and had sex with each other, even before this mod. Extending that to you is entirely in line with their characters. They didn't take a vow of chastity either.
>Shouldra didn't possess demon "children" for you to fuck
Shouldra's entire character revolves around doing extreme and fucked up things because she's been bored and horny for hundreds of years, and possessing people for sex because she can't feel anything on her own. The specific scenes didn't exist, but the general concept (possessing people for you to fuck) did.
None of these things have any similarity to Joy's "even if I didn't become a bimbo, I wanted to fuck you anyways" stuff.
>You have literally no valid reason to stop content being written
I have literally no interest in stopping content being written. My interest is in making sure that content is written in a non-retarded way that doesn't fundamentally destroy a character's concept, especially when it's not even necessary.
>then follow >>52087
That idea is an example (although a pretty silly one, and I'm not sure why Marae would care) of exactly what I've already been suggesting: You don't have to rewrite Jojo's character to add new stuff.
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I don't want to turn jojo into some ugly retarded bimbo. I want the same personality
I want to romance him. Give me some cute, chaste monk that I can spend more and more time with until I have him really wondering about his feelings
I want him to accept my advances and respond by performing gestures and acts that come straight out of old books and tradition. The entirely disconnected-from-reality idea of what you do in a relationship, to the extent that even pre-demon era, basically no relationship was like that, but his life without civilization, and the fact the world was changing radically even when he was born, means he just doesn't have a grasp of any nuance like that.
Romance is what the monks of the order explained and what some crusty old tales show. 
Then he finds it awkward and hard to adapt when actual reality shows up, like the player having other relationships, or just casual sex as a fact of life. Still, traditional depictions is all he has to go on for how romance works.

In the end, he can be convinced to forsake his vow of chastity after coming to understand his feelings and how important the relationship is. He's yours, and when it's safe enough to settle down, he's going to marry you. 
As you can tell, I shouldn't be given the reins to write this, but I hope someone does something like that, just better thought out.
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>>52099
I wish people would stop trying to fundamentally change a character and would instead clamor for making a different one for whatever they want to otherwise force.
>>52098
NTAs, but I'll respond to everything anyway, why not
>My first message on the topic was no less civil and decent.
>>52033
>>52059
No, you were incredibly rude from the beginning. Stop lying. Also a protip: No matter how "good" you think your argument is, nobody is going to listen to you if you insult them and act like a piece of shit.
>"no matter what does or doesn't happen, Jojo always wanted to sleep with you" (changes things no matter what you do, so it's forced on everyone).
Nobody was advocating for this. You made it up as a strawman. It wouldn't affect you because you would have to bring it up yourself as the PC. It has literally nothing to do with you unless you choose for it to happen. Otherwise there is literally no behavior change if you want to go the corruption route. You're making a mountain out of nothing at all. You just want to ruin fun things.
>I've said nothing of the sort.
>I also can't think of any examples myself
You haven't played the mod if you can't think of any.
>I haven't dodged anything
Then respond to the many posts debunking your mindless ranting. Your only excuse is "that's different form this," without explaining, when it's been explained to you over and over how they are similar. You're cherry-picking what's allowed to change and what isn't because of your personal preferences when it won't affect you. Again, grow up.
>making her into watersports doesn't contradict her previously established character.
>Amily doesn't mention she's into watersports
>Jojo doesn't mention he might feel romantic feelings toward the PC
Hypocrite
>Extending that to you is entirely in line with their characters
It absolutely is not. Earlier you said content has to be base don what's in the original. The sharks being attracted to their father was not in the original.
>Shouldra's entire character revolves around doing extreme and fucked up things
She also didn't possess children, but you just immediately assume she would've because it suits your palette.
These all have something to do with the argument because they are changes to the original characters, and you can try all the mental gymnastics in the world, but you aren't convincing anyone. You're just lying to yourself.
>My interest is in making sure that content is written in a non-retarded way that doesn't fundamentally destroy a character's concept
Lying again, you're sorting through and saying what changes are allowed and what aren't based on your own preferences and using the most retarded reductions. You already admitted you want Jojo to stay a bro. You can have that, so stop whining.
>That idea
Yeah, do it. Stop whining and do it if you have so many issues. But you won't.
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>>52099
Cute. Jojo would be an absolute dork when it comes to romance, I can see it now. The fact he would actually react to the PC fucking others in the camp would already set him above a lot of NPCs.
>As you can tell, I shouldn't be given the reins to write this
It's not like there's some claim. If you wanna write it, write it. The hardest part is actually sitting down and starting, but it gets much easier once the ball gets rolling.

>>52100
Jesus man, let the anon have his dream.
Everything he said makes perfect sense and I can imagine Jojo doing all of those things. Don't be a stick in the mud
>>52094
Yeah, corrupt Jojo kind of just lurks in the woods and there's no real interaction with him. I think he grows dumber too since he barely speaks. It's pretty disappointing since the enjoyment of corruption shouldn't just be "you can fuck them now," it should be just how drastically they changed and I enjoy witnessing that through dialogue and behavior, not just calling when I want them. Tentacle Jojo is even weirder, but the idea of a rat tail splitting into three tentacles is kind of cool.

>>52073
Damn, well I guess now we see where the priorities were at the time

>>52100
I wish you would leave
>>52098
>If it's done as it was with Joy, it would.
Wow, good thing we're not porting revamp's Joy then, huh? Good thing nobody was suggesting that and you made it up.
>changes things no matter what you do, so it's forced on everyone
What? No it doesn't. That's like saying the gargoyle is forced on everyone. You wouldn't see any of the content unless you actively wanted and pursued it. It's all on you. Unless you're some kind of completionist where you just HAVE to see every single scene available, you would boot up the mod and nothing would be different. Why are you so anal about this?
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>>52100
While I agree with you in general, I don't see anything wrong in principle with what that anon wants, it can be done without destroying the character.
>>52101
>No, you were incredibly rude from the beginning. Stop lying.
Neither of those were me. My first post in this discussion was >>52071
>>52101
>Nobody was advocating for this.
Then nobody should have a problem with avoiding it. I think you're wrong there though, the whole thing started with >>52032's "regardless of sex he develops a crush on the Champion", referring to the Joy stuff that I've been arguing against.
>You haven't played the mod if you can't think of any.
If it's so easy to think of examples, someone can point one out. So far nobody has.
>Then respond to the many posts debunking your mindless ranting.
I've responded to all of them. What did I skip?
>Your only excuse is "that's different form this," without explaining
But I just did explain, in the very post you're replying to.
>when it's been explained to you over and over how they are similar
Nobody has made a single argument as to how they're similar, only said that they are.
>Hypocrite
Nor have you.
>It absolutely is not.
It is. Can you explain how?
>Earlier you said content has to be base don what's in the original.
I never said that, but even if I did, it is.
>She also didn't possess children, but you just immediately assume she would've because it suits your palette.
I don't assume anything. It's consistent with her character either way.
>These all have something to do with the argument because they are changes to the original characters
There's nothing wrong with changes. I've only argued against a very specific type of changes (clearly outlined several times) which are in an entirely different category than any of these.
>You already admitted you want Jojo to stay a bro.
Yes, though a female bro or an older/younger bro is still fine, just to clarify.
>You can have that, so stop whining.
I can have it as long as nobody changes Jojo in such a way that it becomes impossible. That's literally the only thing I've been asking for.
>Yeah, do it. Stop whining and do it if you have so many issues. But you won't.
Do what? Write it? Of course I won't, my writing is garbage, nobody wants that.
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>>52105
You've already been directed to >>52087 there you can get the best possible answer. The only reason you haven't followed through is because you just want to keep arguing
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>>52106
Anon, I couldn't write that even if I wanted to (and I don't). It would literally be worse than Revamp writing.
Or are you suggesting that I literally ask for permission myself? I'm actually not on speaking terms with any goddesses, unfortunately.
>>52106
Anon, that post was sarcasm, no one is retarded enough to actually think asking the goddess for permission makes any sense or is any good as a solution
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>>52104
>Good thing nobody was suggesting that and you made it up.
That's what the discussion was about before I joined in. At the very least, one anon was arguing against it and others were arguing against that anon (and therefore implicitly arguing for it, even if it was based on misunderstandings on one side or the other).
>That's like saying the gargoyle is forced on everyone
The fact that the gargoyle exists in the world is forced on everyone, even if they haven't seen the scene that introduces here. It's an undeniable part of the setting. If for some reason you want to play a game set in a world where gargoyles couldn't possibly exist, that would be an issue even if you chose to ignore it. Canon is canon; if the game says something is so, then it's so.
I guess toggles can muddy the waters there by changing the setting directly, but I've never heard of anyone proposing a "Jojo has a thing for you" toggle.
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>>52108
That's a reference to him writing it, I'm not literally saying he can ask Marae, how would that make sense?
Though now that you mention it, if Marae told Jojo it was okay, I mean who would he be to deny the icon of purity?
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>>52105
>Neither of those were me
My mistake then
>"regardless of sex he develops a crush on the Champion"
I wouldn't know for sure, but he was referring to if the content (from the mod) was rewritten, as in edited, and considering what could be kept or not. Then it was explained to that anon where the Joy content came from. Not written from the ground up like we're discussing now. We've moved on from that. We're using the name "Joy" just because it's a fitting name unless you can come up with a better one.
>Examples
Already brought up Amily, shark daughters, etc. No, you do not have a proper explanation for your LOGIC, not the content. I already explained it to you, but I'll sum up an example of your reasoning here.
>Amily has never mentioned any interest or willingness for watersports
>She now has a watersports scene where she is willing
According to you, this does not change her character.
>Jojo has never mentioned any romantic or sexual interest in the PC
>He now might harbor feelings or at least be willing to try if the PC initiated
According to you, this changes his character. It is such a minor note that it's nonsensical for you to be so distraught over it. You described that possibility as retarded here >>52098 and apparently that completely destroys a character's concept. Ridiculous. An oath does not prevent affection. You're downplaying some elements and blowing this one out of proportion. Don't keep saying "It hasn't been explained to me" because this is the 3rd or 4th time people have said it, including me. You can either advocate for minor character changes or advocate for none, you can't pick and choose.
>It is. Can you explain how?
Already been explained. Just because they have sexual interest doesn't mean it automatically extends to you, their father. That's you cherry-picking. Same with Shouldra and others, there is nothing in the game that states she would be willing to do that considering how horrid that would be. She does sexual stuff for fun and it doesn't harm anyone in the end. Raping a child would be far out of her morals.
>I can have it as long as nobody changes Jojo in such a way that it becomes impossible.
Nobody is doing this. You've imagined some kind of invisible anon who wants to force this into everyone's face. This is 100% a decision the PC, likely a corrupt one, would have to consciously make. it is not an automatic event, it's not an incident like the shitty thief bimbo nonsense, it is something YOU must seek out and YOU must choose. It does not affect you. Show me a single post where someone said they want Joy to be forced on players. Nobody said this.
>Do what? Write it?
Yes. If you're such a Jojo advocate and purist, write the content you want to see. Show people they're wrong, even though nothing they've said goes against your desires.
I'm done responding, this is such a waste of time. If multiple people are hammering the same point and you're still arguing against the strawman you've built instead, nothing will change your mind. Feel free to get the last word in, I don't care.
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>>52110
Sounds like a philosophical discussion. It's not as though his order is built on worship of Marae, so Marae saying "It's okay" is just kind of weird.
It's not for Marae that he is chaste, it's for the celestial lotus or whatever the order was called.
But it would give him a lot to think about, just for how out-there the experience would be. The goddess herself decided it was worth weighing in on this to tell him sex is fine between pure and consenting adults beings. How bizarre! Is it really so important? Is she implying some kind of dismissive view of his orders' ways? Surely she's not so judgmental... But nevertheless, why would she have anything to say about this situation?
For centuries to come, theologians and scholars would debate this historic event.
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>>52112
In the end, his old tradition and methods are extremely outdated. He can look at Tel'adre, Whitney's Farm, etc. where there's little to no corruption and there are literal hookers in the former and they get on fine (even though Marble has minor corruption in the latter ruh roh).
Marae isn't a part of his beliefs, but he can't deny the Goddess herself and he's smart enough to sense and recognize her absolute purity. Now that's a gal I would trust, just don't dump toxic waste in the lake okay
Clearly she weighed in to play counselor because the champion shut down a weird porno factory and did not dump the toxic cum in the almost-pure waters.
"Shit [player], I mean I don't get why you need me or why this is such a big deal, but I guess I still owe you. Yeah sure, sex is fine, whatever. Go plow the mouse fields."
-Marae, probably
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>>52109
>The fact that the gargoyle exists in the world is forced on everyone
But you wouldn't experience the content aside from the initial church visit, which is actually more intrusive than Jojo having emotions. That's like someone going mental because someone invented glass chopsticks and now they're in 1 out of 999999999999 restaurants.
>If for some reason you want to play a game set in a world where gargoyles couldn't possibly exist, that would be an issue even if you chose to ignore it.
Well, we're not playing that. We're playing a game where mice, and romance, and romantic mice exist.
>Canon is canon; if the game says something is so, then it's so.
All of /hgg/ revamp xianxia and so on is non-canon already. If you wanna argue canon then show me in vanilla where it says Jojo will never feel anything toward the PC. I'll wait. If you can't, then him falling for the PC doesn't go against canon, that is a fact. I'm dead serious, I won't acknowledge anything you say further until you can prove this one point you're on about. Giving this evidence will shut everyone up though and you'll be the king of mice. It's all you have to do
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>>52114
>his friends were turned by sex
>his family was turned by sex
>everyone he has ever known safe for Amily is dead or a demon because of sex
>he is in an order centered around chastity and lives his life like that not just because of worshipping some deity but also because he lost everything because of, you guessed it, sex
<hurr durr point me to where it explicitly says he will never fall in love with and fuck you
Read the room. And before you start sperging out further by thinking I'm the guy you're replying to, I'm not. Not everyone is the same person.
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>>52115
>I'm the guy you're replying to, I'm not.
Sure buddy, that's why you just had to mention it. Gotta make sure I don't catch on. I'll play along
>Sex
Where did I say sex, speedreader? Read the room. Also love and sex are quite different. I understand that's a tough concept for you to grasp though.
>point me to where it explicitly says he will never fall in love
Notice how you didn't do this. Sucks to be wrong, huh? Feel free to try again, unlimited continues
>>52111
>We've moved on from that
We hadn't when I started, and that's also the only thing I've been talking about this entire time so not everyone had. If we have now though, that's good, there's nothing further to argue about.
>>He now might harbor feelings or at least be willing to try if the PC initiated
That would be similar to the Amily/shark/Shouldra examples, I agree. It's also entirely acceptable, I haven't argued against it.
>You can either advocate for minor character changes or advocate for none, you can't pick and choose.
I haven't advocated in any direction in that regard, major changes, minor changes, no changes, or some combination of the three are all fine.
>Nobody is doing this
Then my work here is done.
>Show me a single post where someone said they want Joy to be forced on players.
I can't, nobody said this. I might have argued against it if they had.
>Feel free to get the last word in, I don't care.
After reading this part I wanted to not say anything further, but I've already typed all this and it would be a waste to delete it.
>>52114
>All of /hgg/ revamp xianxia and so on is non-canon already
The mod's canon is canon for the mod. I'm not playing vanilla, so vanilla's canon is irrelevant.
>If you wanna argue canon
I'd rather not.
>show me in vanilla where it says Jojo will never feel anything toward the PC
That would be difficult, because I'm pretty sure it never says that.
>I'm dead serious, I won't acknowledge anything you say further
Thank you, that helps a fair bit.
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>>52115
>turned by sex
>because of sex
>Here's the forecast and today we have anon bringing you "List of things that never happened."
You didn't play the game. Demons do not equal sex. Corruption does not equal sex. Jojo never once thinks sex is what ruined his life. He recognizes that it was the demons and corruption. If he thought it was sex, he wouldn't hang around and be so dedicated to someone who fucks anything that moves no matter how pure they seemed.
Stop talking about a game you haven't played, you're embarrassing yourself.
Before you hyper-focus and double down on the "defiled" part, no shit you can't fuck and commit debauchery inside of the equivalent to a church.
Oh, and before you start sperging out further by thinking I'm the guy you're replying to, I'm not. Not everyone is the same person.
So is it too late to join Jojo/Joy romantic times, yay or nay?

>>52115
Why in the name of Marae and the Celestial Lotus would he be in a campground where sex happens nearly every hour if he was so against it? He only gives a fuck if your corruption is high or if you have certain corrupted NPCs because of course he would care. I'm sure he recognizes sex also isn't a bad thing since it's restoring his god damn race, you total and absolute retard.
Also fun fact, he actually doesn't give a shit if Amily is corrupted.
>>52072
That's a tall order.
Honestly it'd be best to consider it one pase at a time and see where that goes rather than mapping out the blueprints. Writing is tough and draining, and having all of that laid out would cause burnout unless someone was really passionate. Ember's actually a good example because we were supposed to have pure, corrupt, and middle Ember. What we got was just middle because god damn that's a lot of writing for one character and plenty of possibilities. At least what we got was great and I appreciate the loli/shota additions made, even if I don't like tunderes.
SO it'd be best to flesh out one path rather than having a bunch of smaller ones. I agree with >>52085 though it really would satisfy everyone if it all came to be.
>>52115
>hurr durr here's extreme reduction of a point I don't like to make myself look smarter
Low quality post. Back to 4cuck with you.
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>>52115
>read the room
Oh the irony... that did NOT age well at all
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>>51993
I say go for it
The question is would she stay angry or would she "mellow out" as a yandere? 
>might not be the bestest of ideas to have 2 yanderes
It's a miracle all your followers don't tear each other's throats out while you're gone. It won't be so bad if one gets more possessive. Or a yandere path could be had with her staying in the swamp instead of joining you? or maybe she doesn't take rejection well, who knows
>>52115
Anon, I...
>>52089
I imagine a relationship with him would start out with only romance and gradually there's intimate contact introduced.
He seems the type to be awkward and clumsy with this sort of things, so it'd make for a cute dynamic between him and a more confident/experienced champion.
I wouldn't mind a new Joy either, but I imagine that only happens on a corrupted path or when you've maxed out some new romance stat where he's willing to change to make you happy.
Reminds me of zombie girl where she says she feels a deeper affection for a male champion, sure, but really really really doesn't want any sex unless they turn female and obviously hates it when you insist.

>>52115
Unless /hgg/ changed something I'm unaware of, Jojo says they were lost to the demons and that he could smell the corruption or whatever that means.
He doesn't talk about sex. I think you're likely confusing him for another character and-
>talks about sperging out
>says hurr durr
Nevermind, I'm wasting my breath.
You're the only one sperging out here, have some self-awareness.
The whole room is laughing at you.
>>52115
>I made this up
>I made this up
>I made this up
>I made this up
<here's me pretending to be retarded
Why are you lying? We all have it downloaded and can easily fact check you. Hell, it's already been done
>>52122
Kek I think anti-femmeJoy anon was in the wrong room from the start.

Que"It seems my superiority has led to some controversy" Meme for FemmeJoy
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>>52140
FemmeJojo
 I'm a little bit of a retard somtimes
Anyone have a checklist of every love interest for a non-corrupt mc?
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>>52143
TOYMY
>>52113
>Teladre
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>>52145
Urta's gone, don't worry
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>>52143
Everyone is corrupt but Amily and Ember are the least corrupt. Also you can completely purify Minerva the dickgirl.
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>>52146
The gym isn't gone yet though
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>>52148
In due time, general
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>>52149
I think someone criticized Dominika at some point, not understanding why anyone likes her.
I just want to throw out there that I want more Dominika on the sole basis that her goal is to destroy Tel'adre in her escape from Mareth (which would fail when she discovers portals don't work the same out of Mareth as they do into it, then finds she's either to face disaster with Tel'adre, or go into hiding with you)

No matter whether you like or hate her, she'd make the game better by purging that god awful city.
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>>52150
i thought she understood portals perfectly which is why she had to nuke tel'adre to create enough power instead of the cut and dry portal method used by demons
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>>52154
The demons have access to a lot more power than that and have been researching the problem for generations (since before they became demons), but they're still trapped and unable to leave because portals only let you into Mareth, not out.
It's fine if she thinks she can do it (whether it's because of arrogance, a lack of understanding/experience, desperation, whatever), but having her actually succeed would be bad, in my opinion. She shouldn't be able to so trivially accomplish in a short time what an army of superpowered mages couldn't manage even after decades of trying.
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>>52154
>>52155
I've always chosen to interpret it as she was an expert on portals in her homeland, being adept at creating gateways between points inside that world, and so she just assumes with enough power she can cross the gap  to escape Mareth with the very same knowledge
And then the end of her story is the downfall of that arrogant assumption, where you either let her succumb to the fate of Tel'adre, or you take her with you to your camp, where she must resign to her place trapped in this world, with no real hope to escape anymore
Do you think Kiha's horns would be sensitive? I imagine they wouldn't.
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>>52158
Maybe not, but they should be
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https://mega.nz/folder/xjhWxRyJ#1HcmCiDeIR-KP2yK74lcrQ/folder/F740RBpb - I tried writing up a short Kiha headpatting scene where you touch her horns a little too.
>>52160
Her horns aren't mentioned often it seems. They're not pointed out in her appearance menu for some reason either.
>>52161
Nice
>>52161
thank you for some actual content in the midst of this pissing contest. and not even the fun kind of pissing contest.
>>52147
I'm fine with the other person being corrupt, I just want to keep my character's corruption level at 0.
>>52161
Would be even better if she was a loli.
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>>52164
You really just couldn't let it go huh
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>>52164
switching on your tripcode for a comment like that makes you look like an attention whore

>>52168
Oooh I get it
because he's into piss
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>>52161
Good stuff, anon. It's short, sweet, and fun. I'm not really a fan of Kiha or headpats myself, but I always appreciate these little things added that flesh the mod out more.

>>52164
Midst? It was over until you brought it up again, come on man.
And to be fair, it was just two guys throwing fits over femJojo and ruining the fun for everyone
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>>52180
Almost seemed like it was one vs. eight. Kek
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We need more building.
>>52189
Sorry, building things for sake of fluff is not allowed
For example building library would be too pointless to be added due to lack of the books in the game, ignore the fact that there aren't many books due to lack of reason to add them
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>>52189
Hmmmm what if we made a library it could be used as event playback room for all the events you have already been through.
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>>52191
How about.......
Planting the all natural dildo/onahole
Desu, this game needs a journal system, not some questlog but actual journal player can keep
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>>52195
I have a notepad, why don't you?
>>52189
>>52191
>>52192
https://pastebin.com/utYUY1hb
unfinished but it exists
although he will probably never finish it
>>52169
I didn't realize it gets cached in the cookie here pls no bully
What are the Marae scenes written/adjusted by Satan and how do I trigger them?
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>>52256
Just the normal ones with fixes to grammar and stuff about appearance to be consistent and not disagree about hair or eye colors.
And I think defeating corrupt marae was also touched up, but not sure how much changed. That was Revamp originally, so it might be a lot. No clue without checking git history
>>52167
We already have Ember for that. I think she could use more basic scenes too.
>>52189
Like a store?
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>>52260
Getting that one bird that I'm not sure was ever implemented or Alice to set up her own store in the camp after we hit certain population would be nice so we wouldn't need to visit a city to offload our crap
Maybe an option to build huts for other camp members
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>>52263
>Build room for yourself
>Everyone else is still living in fucking tents
It bothers me so much
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>>52267
Reminds me of people discussing upgrading cabin with new rooms and shit before eventually upgrading to a giant floating castle in the sky, shit was fun to brainstorm
>>52263
Snuggles is done right? Is she just waiting on a proof reader?
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>>52270
Just like the vampires she is locked in proofreader hell
>>52267
I guess it makes sense for izma
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>>52275
I thought Izma used to live in a house of some kind, at least I remember her having a bookshelf and there is no way you'd store books near water.  Then again that's probably expecting too much from the writers of furry fanfiction.
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>>52277
>Then again that's probably expecting too much from the writers of furry fanfiction.
It's seemingly easier to expect more from their writing than it is from your reading comprehension.
>>52277
She wasn't always a shark. And she has her iconic chest.
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>>52286
I thought she was always a shark, her race is an inconsistency where they were transformed from humans and then the change was inherited
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>>52291
she's got memories from before the change. While sharks are now born sharks, she was not.
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>>52293
Do you know what scene that is in? Do you have an excerpt?
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>>52298
It's just when she's telling you her past and shit. She also talks about how her dad becoming a tigershark made things a bit weird
>>52291
>her race is an inconsistency where they were transformed from humans and then the change was inherited
Changes from transformative food and such aren't inherited, but that's not how they transformed so there's not necessarily any inconsistency. They transformed themselves through magic, presumably with the intention of making it heritable.
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>>52304
I thought they tranformed from the polluted lake water? Guess I'll need to recheck
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>>52305
>"I... well, it's hard to say. The lake waters have had some effect on my mind. It's why I work so hard to keep my brain cells active through reading. But I digress... I was born before the demon invasion. I was a kid living at a lakeside fishing village," she explains. She rubs her temple in thought. "And then... oh, yes, when I was around 7 the village elders started experimenting with magic, allowing the people to become amphibious predators, physically resembling the shark people of today."
>"I must've been in my teens when the full on demon invasion happened. We retreated into the waters to avoid detection and, for a time, things were fine... then something happened when I was 18. A strange purple muck appeared in the waters near where our people had migrated to. The people closest to it changed the most drastically, leading to the creation of the tigersharks. The fluids gradually spread, polluting my peoples' minds and bodies, turning almost all of them into lust-crazed beasts."
They transformed themselves into sharks on purpose, the pollution just created tigersharks and made the males go crazy.
>>52304
>Changes from transformative food and such aren't inherited
But weren't the creepy spider people humans who changed after eating the gossamer from the swamp.
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>>52311
They were changed by corrupted red widow venom.
>>52311
Those spider boys are really trappy sluts.
Is there a point to using medium armours? Don't perks give boosts to only heavy or light armours?
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>>52323
Style points like most of equipment, still wish tailor was selling gi pants for monk runs
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Hmmm how do i remove the Obsidian Vines?
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>>52328
pay more attention, newfag
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>>52328
Talk to characters and monsters that might know
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>>52323
>Don't perks give boosts to only heavy or light armours?
Juggernaut gives boosts only to heavy armor, yes. Agility applies to both light and medium (medium gets less benefit) though, and Unhindered depends on the defense stat and not the type (there's even heavy armor that can potentially benefit from Unhindered).
>Is there a point to using medium armours?
Like >>52324 said the main point is aesthetics, but there can be mechanical reasons to go with a medium armor. It depends on what perks you have and what your armor options are. There are very few medium armors in the game, so I'll just go over all of them.
>Skimpy Armor
>Chainmail
Probably the first medium armors you'll find, and they should be compared with the other choices in Tel'Adre's shops, because all the armors for sale in Tel'Adre are inferior to the stuff you can craft.
The point of skimpy armor is the tease bonus, and the main alternative for that is the chain bikini (light). Both of them should have no problem activating Unhindered, skimpy armor has better tease bonuses (though the difference is tiny) and better defense (unless you have the Agility perk and 80+ speed). Since this is just a temporary armor until you can get something better, there's a good chance you don't have the speed/perk to make the chain bikini stronger, making skimpy armor the better choice. If you do have the perk/speed, they're still pretty close, and it's a choice between a tiny bit better defense or a tiny bit better tease.
Chainmail is just bad. There's no mechanical reason to ever use chainmail.
>Dragonscale Armor
Dragonscale and spidersilk is avilable at around the same time, and probably a while before ebonweave, so your choice in this case is basically between the scale/silk options. Both types offer robes (light) with spell cost reduction and you can get inquisitor's stuff around this time too, so those are the obvious choices for mages. If you have Juggernaut, dragonscale armor doesn't offer any advantage over spider-silk armor (heavy) or store-bought platemail. But if you have Agility and normally go with light armor, then dragonscale will likely be the strongest defensive choice. With 100 speed it has the best defense of all the scale/silk options, and better than anything in stores. So even though it's medium, for a portion of the game it's likely to be the best choice for light armor users who aren't mages (unless you go for a dodge build, because dragonscale armor can't activate Unhindered).
>Ebonweave Jacket
>Ebonweave Robes
Ebonweave has four choices, one light, two medium, and one heavy. The robes (medium) and indecent robes (light) have a higher spellcost reduction, and the indecent robes have tease bonuses. If you have the Agility perk then the indecent robes also have better armor. The normal robes are only (mechanically) worth choosing over indecent if you don't have any armor perks and don't use tease.
The jacket (medium) and ebonweave platemail (heavy) both have the same spellcost reduction. The jacket has the same defense as dragonscale armor, but the platemail's defense is slightly better than spidersilk armor, so it's not quite the same choice as before. Obviously if you have Juggernaut you go with heavy. If you have Agility, jacket matches platemail at 115 speed, and surpasses it at 125. So it's hard to get enough speed for medium to be the better choice, but not hard to get enough speed to make them identical. And even with the higher Agility bonus for light, the ebonweave robes won't match up to the jacket until 175 speed, which isn't very realistic.

In short: If you have Agility and not Juggernaut, and you aren't going for dodge/lust/mage builds, medium generally ends up being a better choice than light. But in that case you're using armor mainly for the defense stat, and that's heavy armor's strength, so taking Juggernaut and wearing heavy armor would probably be better (if you already took Agility earlier though, you might have better things to spend perk points on than Juggernaut).
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>>52339
Thanks for the comprehensive infodump anon. Stuff makes more sense now that I'm better aware of the details on how the perks work.
>>52330
>>52332
damn i love running around the lake 30 times to get the rng enemies to get me the right rng drop, and do it all over again
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>>52345
You don't need to be a slime yknow?
>>52339
I've said it before, but medium armur is generally pointless and ought to have a niche of carrying the most useful item perks instead of light/dodge and heavy/resist also having them. The scout armour seems like a particular offender here.
Yoo. Wats all the Circe knowledge subjects. Completely stumped
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>>52362
Well, what do you have so far?
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>>52373
Vines stuck on my body
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>>52374
have you tried taking them off?
>>52374
Have you tried restarting steam?
https://pst.moe/paste/mbtrjz

You know how at one specific hour you can [watch sky] and receive a meaningless fluff message? Now you can do it any time to receive your meaningless fluff.
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>>52373
Marae
Inquisitor
Manor
Teladre
Gargoyle
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>>52147
But you still can't find and fuck her shark-daughter her inbred spawn
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>>52401
*and her inbred spawn
damn keyboard eating up words again
>>52387
There's Kitsune
Dullahan
and Dominika or something iirc
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>>52403
Thanks yo. But how do you get the kitsune one? 
Is it aiko or the mansion sisters or...
>>52382
Neat.
visit the Kitsune mansion and talk to Aiko about it to learn more about them
Then report back to circe

Getting 9 tails transformation is also another way
Oh and I forgot to mention there's also talk about the Sandwitch dungeon
Apparently getting married to Ceraph and her dominating the player was a thing at some point, but got removed later while being somewhat unfinished. Pretty sad.
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>>52424
>Being a sub

Unrelated Fresh Coc Meme
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>>52382
sweet
>>52425
i mean what can i do
it's just the way things are
>>52260
Ember does indeed needs more basic scenes
>>52387
IIRC the knowledge points are what you listed plus
>having one of Fera's perks
>Kitsune perk
>fought the Nameless Horror
>fought Laurentius
>something to do with Dominika 
>talked to the sandwich queen
To be honest the clockwork shield, terrestrial fire, and Jojo's perks should also be something you can tell her about. But I think the final reward onky requires 7 different points.
>>52424
Was this in vanilla?
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The PC vagina requirement for Hel and Valeria's threesome is commented out, meaning that PC's without vaginas get their non-existent vaginas fucked.
Embers that lactate should fill PC hunger in the lustyfuck scene.
Shouldra's scene for faeries doesn't use her sleep timer like her scenes for witches, etc.
In the initial scene with Holli, trying to make her guard the camp resulted in her threatening the PC with her mother, whether or not said mother is still alive. Entering her scene from the camp menu and trying again there worked properly.
Is there a reason Amily's affection doesn't cap like everyone else's?
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>>52460
>Is there a reason Amily's affection doesn't cap like everyone else's?
Her love for you is endless. That's why she's best girl and always will be the best girl out of all the fenco games.
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>>52460
Valeria is a fucking shit character.
Damn futa tranny lovers.
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>>52485
I could never get over her "partner" pet name making her sound like a goofy cowboy.
>>52480
I personally like Helspawn. It's nice having a kid you can have a hand in raising and doesn't want to immediately rape you on sight.
Best girls don't need to be waifus.
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>>52487
She requires you to waste your seed on Hel to get her.
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What ways are there to increase cum production infinitely other than the kitsune mansion?
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>>52491
Yeah, the cum lake isn't going to spurt on itself you know!
>>52492
Doesn't some of the seasonal events give you cum production perks, I think the thanksgiving one ensures you always blast out max volume.
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>>52493
I have all the seasonal perks, though the thanksgiving one seems to be bugged as my production still increases over time.
>>52492
Kitsune mansion is capped, although its caps are pretty high.
If you're looking purely to increase your base multiplier, I think the corrupted glades work. Otherwise, one of the seasonal perks stack infinitely, iirc.
Sharks.
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>>52501
Gobbos.
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>>52504
Moos.
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>>52506
Vamps.
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>>52513
Sharks.
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>>52515
Seals.
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>>52516
Moths.
>>52517
This, so much this.
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>>52522
So, more Facebook memes?
>>52517
I want to impregnate Sylvia more.
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>>52526
Izma
>>52526
Dolores needs to carry her daddy's babies first.
And an anal scene.
>find CoC, have some fun playing
>see /hgg/ mod, have fun fapping
>run out of good content
>want more content
>check latest mod thread
>see fucks whining about proofreading
>decide to do something about it

>hour later, still haven't got a clue
Can anyone point my retarded ass in the direction to where I need to offer my reading ability for proofreading? Just advertise here like this, bombard the code repo owner, sacrifice skinned fursuits in front of a loli thone, or what?
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>>52536
Pick a scene that hasn't been proofread yet and start picking through it. 
>point to a quote in the scene itself like this
and then explain what's wrong below it
>next quote
and your explained issue with it
>next
and so on. 
Then the writer responds and applies fixes based on your proofreading, changing it from "Quality Control" to "Finished"

I'll quickly grab a list of stuff to give you some options besides what's posted in this thread itself
Hellhound Marking Scene: https://pastebin.com/raw/aih8UQce
Satyr Piss Enema: https://pastebin.com/raw/VSSVduRw
Izma Pissing Scene: https://pastebin.com/raw/86zMbkzH
Imp Multi-Combat Encounter+Sex: https://pst.moe/paste/iyuovo
Isabella Fixes: https://pst.moe/paste/kcwkbp
Black Velvet Alraune Oral Sex: https://pst.moe/paste/vekkhd
Black Velvet Alraune Aural Sex: https://pst.moe/paste/hjanrp
Telly Valentines: https://pastebin.com/raw/BEQdD8FR
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>>52536
It's best if all the proofreading is done here in the thread. Quote the text from the doc and point out the problem. See >>49172 for example.

2hu's vampire sisters and Snuggles should probably be high priority because they're complete characters and sizable chunks of content that people have been waiting a long time for. They're also a lot to proofread though, kind of a daunting task.
>2hu's vampire sisters and Snuggles should probably be high priority

Alright, I'm guessing it's the text files buried in the drive folder, since their Pastebin links are dead?
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>>52539
ah no, was a blind dumbass, didn't see the mega folder link
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I see cuck getting thrown around here frequently, and I wanna get some definitions clarified on what people here consider cucking.
To start I want to bring up types of relationships and get people opinions on which fall into the category.
monogamy: you only want to have one partner at a time, and want it to be romantic
open relationship: you only want one partner at a time, but are fine with fucking other people as long as they aren't romantic.
polyamory: you want all the partners you love and are ok with having more than one.
fuckbuddy/FWB: you want to fuck this person but aren't romantic.
Harem: polyamory, but you don't let your partners fuck/date outside of your harem.

now in my head if any of the first 4 are symmetrical that ain't cucking, but if only one person is playing by these rules that's cucking especially monogamy. 

I'm also curious where people place some characters relation to the npc in this regard. 
Hel strikes me as a good example of open relationship where she fucks who she wants and invites the pc to join, but the pc is the only one she loves enough to have a child with, everyone else is just for fun. 
Any of the slaves are an example of the harem where its a onesided dynamic, except ceraph. Amily seems the monogamous type which explains her popularity, and people seeing her with Urta feeling it was cucking. Most unamed npcs encounters fall under fuckbuddy i think. The closest I can think of for a polyamorous character is Kath since she takes hearing about your other partners pretty well, and seems like unfinished content in that direction, but im not sure how much love she actually has for Urta or Vala rather than just lust.
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>>52537
I don't get piss fetishists.
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>>52517
I want to sell my autistic moth daughter on the black market to suspiciously lesbian fringe elements of the lethicite mafia.
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>>52543
>Not taking your daughter for yourself
shit taste.
>Not having her research a way to increase fertility and test it on her to impregnate her
>>52537
>>52542
going back a few threads it looks like the watersports stuff got looked at already https://pst.moe/paste/cizqrf
First time trying this out; when I open the swf from the mega I can't get past character creation. It just leaves an empty textbox.
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>>52547
Are you trying to play it in a browser?
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>>52548
Got it fixed. I was running an older flash player, then I used the one from the mega and it worked.
Is the cheatsheet backed up anywhere? OP bins are dead.
Does this mod let me transform Kelt without locking out the rest of the farm?
>>52540
Alright, starting off my proofreading from the ginormous wall of text that is the Vampire sisters.

>the only light you have comes from the bloodred moon hanging above you.
Need to change "bloodred" to "blood-red"

>almost slip into murky muck
Feels weird using super similar words in pairs. Maybe "murky swamp water" or just "muck". But maybe that's just a personal preference.

>dark red paint coating its siding
Why "siding"? Just call them walls or facade instead.

>continues to admirably protect the home. It admirably halts
Repeated word in neighboring sentence. Maybe replace the 1st one with "staunchly" or a similar synonym. Or just combine the 2 sentences into one, something along the lines of "Despite being rusty, a tall fence built from sturdy iron continues to admirably protect the home, halting most would-be plunderers from invading this mysterious mansion."
Also a tiny fix in this 2nd sentence:
>halts most would plunderers
"would" should be turned to "would-be" here

>arrive at an iron gate in a similar state. Gently touching the gate
You've already established the player is at the gate; replace the second mention with "it", e.g., "Gently touching it"

>the old gate has no intentions of doing its job
"Intentions" here should be singular, not plural

>manor's massive looking
"Massive-looking" should probably be used instead. But I see equal amounts of the versions being used on the web, so who knows which is more correct.

>mansion's innerworkings
"inner workings"

>Curious, you spot one door is slightly ajar.
Comma should be replaced with a colon, if you're intending to describe what is the curious thing. If not, instead maybe say "Tugging at the door, you feel it is left unlocked" or something to that effect.

>someone... or perhaps [i:thing]
"someone... or perhaps some'thing" makes more sense.

>drawing you to back its
"drawing you back to its"

>Instinctively, you reach for the door's handle. 
Since you're giving the impression that the champion has once again arrived here not quite of their own free will, it would make more sense to replace "Instinctively" with "As though you're bewitched" or the like. Instinct would have a person nope out of there immediately, I would say

>You decide to avoid this forsaken home for good.
Tiny nitpick, but forsaken by whom? Maybe say "god-forsaken" to specify, or just ignore me here.

>you decide exploring it is not worth the risks and resolve to avoid this place
Oxford comma before the "and", I believe.

>you glance back at it one last time to watch as its slightly ajar door seems to slowly shut.
Watching implies intention to observe from the start; with how it's presented, "watch" should be replaced with "see". Also, I'm presuming the champion is some ways away from the entrance - how could they see the door moving?? Replace it with an audible locking or swinging sound or something.

>You decide to explore the manor and gently push open the worn, wooden door.
"You decide to explore the manor, gently pushing open the worn wooden door."

>lets out a creepy [i: creak]
"lets out a disturbing creak", though it's just my preference
>>52564 Here's the mansion exploration chapter stuff

>wallpaper is peeling away in long strips that reveal musty mold growing on the wood
"wallpaper is peeling away in long strips, revealing musty mold growing on the wood"

>A mostly glass chandelier
Would be better to say "A chandelier made out of glass" instead, imo

>sway around
"around" feels redundant; skip it

>You believe it would be wise to avoid walking under it; just in case it finally falls.
"You believe it would be wise to avoid walking under it, just in case.", since falling is already implied by the rusty chain. Or just ignore me here

>staircase lined with a red carpet
"lined" would mean it is covered on its sides n whatnot; you probably mean "covered" instead.

>under your added weight
"added" feels pointless here; skip it

>Failing to catch any spiders
"Failing to spot any spiders"

>ponder to yourself
champion is already alone, the "to yourself" is redundant

>finds comfortable clothes?
a maid/servant outfit would make more sense

>dust caked windowsill
"dust-caked window sill"

>patiently waiting here
"here" feels redundant; could skip it

>A few oil lamps adorn the walls with thick cobwebs coating their insides.
"A few oil lamps adorn the walls, thick cobwebs coating their insides."

>wood burning stove
"wood-burning stove"

>counter tops
"countertops"

>dirty, silver platter
comma is unnecessarry here

>seems as though they could have once had objects
"seems as though once they could have had objects"

>mystery you will probably never have answered.
"mystery you will probably never solve." or "question you will probably never have an answer to."

>due to how little it actually contains.
"actually" feels redundant here

>The final piece of furniture the room has is a wardrobe which has tragically fallen onto its front.
feels like a comma is required before "which"

>assaulted by any demons or twisted beasts, not yet at least.
"assaulted by any demons or twisted beasts (or not yet, at least)." reads better, imo

>book shelves
"bookshelves"

>dust covered
"dust-covered"

>piano sheltered by a white cloth sits
"piano, sheltered by a white cloth, sits"

>see it is to in a fair enough condition
"''see it is in a fair enough condition'""

>comfortable looking
"comfortable-looking"

>pile of old books resting on it.
could be interesting for the player if you name-dropped some fairytale titles. Either lesser-known ones, or just imaginary ones. Can also leave it as is, considering the already massive amount you've done here.

>worry inducing groan
"worry-inducing" feels a bit better

>collapse beneath you. A painting hangs on the right wall.
Since there's a massive attention-shift, splitting this into separate paragraphs would maybe make a bit more sense. Or, if you're interested into keeping it all together, a joining sentence would be required. Say, something like "Deciding to hope for the best at the moment, you instead shift your attention to the rest of the hall."

>ill maintained
"ill-maintained"

>carelessly knocked over...
What's the point of the trailing here? If something followed it, it would make sense, but since this is the last sentence in the area, it feels pointlessly foreboding

>fenced in
"fenced-in"
>comfy looking
again, "comfy-looking"

>tucked into table
"tucked into the table"

>They are so clean that
for some reason, I feel like there should be a comma before "that" here

>worn looking door
"worn door" would make more sense

>a simpler door coated countless, tiny scratches and marks. 
"simpler door coated in countless tiny scratches and marks. "

>stains that makes you think
"stains that make you think"

>sleep on it
you sleep in a bed, not on it
>>52565 meeting the vamps now. so first off - the Fran meeting

>spacious to say the least.
a comma should be placed after "spacious"

>Taking a closer look at the fireplace
Again, the attention is already directed towards it. This time you could skip mentioning it: "Taking a closer look, you see the pile of ash in it"

>start to consider it'd be wise to halt your explorations here.
"start to consider halting your exploration here."

>someone, or even thing
Again: "someone, or something"

>get the opportunity to try attacking you
"get the opportunity of attacking you". The "however" could also be thrown away here.

>there is any monsters
"there are any monsters". You used the correct plural form in the child option; how did you miss this?

>disappointing dust bunnies
some people might want to RP out being glad for the dust bunnies, so drop the "disappointing" here.

>mirror was shattered so it can no longer return any reflections
foreshadowing much? Could just leave it at "mirror was shattered"

>barely manage to its doors slightly move.
"barely notice its doors slightly move." Though this would require the following sentence to be rewritten somewhat, so that "notice" doesn't repeat itself

>inside is simply afraid
"simply afraid"? drop the "simply" here

>an-and
there's the extended dash after this, which in the writing guide is said to be replaced with double dashes (--) instead. Also, the and following it should start with a capital letter, since I'm guessing that's meant to be a full sentence.

>big sis's
apparently, better form would be "big sis' "

>shoulder length
"shoulder-length"
>non-sense
"nonsense"

>Her robe's oversized hood
since you've mentioned the robe before, could rewrite this as "Its oversized hood"

>the age of some ten-year-old girls from back home
really? come on. just "ten years old" would be more sensible.

>You didn't mean to scare the girl; so you apologize before attempting to introduce yourself.
well... I'll whine about the intention bs and grammar at once: "Hoping to calm the girl down, you apologize before attempting to introduce yourself." Since who knows - maybe someone wanting to open the wardrobe up hoped to terrify its occupant before they could terrify the champion in turn

>It wasn't your intention to scare the small girl.
Again, assuming what the PC wants. More likely, they'd want to unfuck the screethcing banshee they unleashed.

>able to see the lower portion of her face looks
"able to see that the lower portion of her face looks"

>with her having soft looking pink lips
...it just reads super weird. As if those lips are a necklace or poorly grafted onto her face. Maybe replace the entire part of sentence with this ": soft-looking lips on a skin so pale"?

>you'e
"you're"

also, just random chatter more aligned with coding than writing for this part: since the only difference between the calling out and terrifying Fran seems to be the ability to ask questions, the repeated introduction of Emily seems pointless, since no actual changes there occur based on how you 'introduced' yourself initially.
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>>52566 and here Emily joins in on the introduction front

>If you did anything to my little sister I'll
again with the extended dash thing - it needs to be replaced with a double dash instead

>the girl who is still glaring at you
"the girl still glaring at you"

>I told you it's
>found my hiding pla
Once more - double dash instead of the extended dash

>Emily lets out a relieved sigh before she glances at you and explains,
"Emily lets out a relieved sigh before glancing at you."

>While maybe polite for her to offer
"maybe" polite? MAYBE?! It's cannon how hard it is to find and protect a safe, demon-free space in Mareth! Drop the "maybe"! Replace it with "extremely" even!

>snakes are poor taste
"snakes are in poor taste"

>They look a little odd?
Why the framing as a question? A full stop or an ellipsis (the triple dot thing) would make more sense here

>I won't hesitate in fighting back
"I won't hesitate to fight back" would make more sense. But also - Emily is attempting to be more threatening here, right? Maybe "I won't hesitate to kill you" would make more sense? Or since Fran is there, maybe "I won't hesitate to do what's necessary" to keep stuff ambiguous for the pure one's ears

>leaving the two girls alone for now at least.
"leaving the two girls alone, for now." might sound a bit more threatening that one could like, but also makes a bit more sense in my eyes

>say goodbye to the sisters for now at least
same thing here as before. Or, if you're keeping this, then "say goodbye to the sisters, for now at least"

>exclaims, [say: Come visit us again soon! Maybe we can play together next time? I hope we can!] She offers you an enthusiastic wave goodbye as you leave the mansion behind so you can return to your camp.
"exclaims [say: Come visit us again soon! Maybe we can play together next time? I hope we can!], offering you an enthusiastic wave goodbye as you leave the mansion behind." reads better. And yes, you can put commas after exclamation points and the like, if they are included in speech.
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>>52567 yeah I'm separating the combat shit, you can't tell me what to do

>Emily's childlike body is fully covered by a hooded black robe which is clearly too big on her
Wasn't the robe/dress too big for Fran specifically?

>Vampire kiss
"Vampire's kiss" would make a bit more sense

>dodge out of the way of the small girl
>fail to avoid the girl's grasp
You already reffered to her as a girl in the previous line. A different descriptor would be better. Beast? Creature? Emily, if your imagination is worse here than mine?

>You watch her tumbles forward
"You watch her tumble forward"

>sinks them into your neck's soft flesh
"sink them into your soft flesh", though the neck could remain included there

>slightly pinch
"slight pinch"

>your growing even weaker
"you growing even weaker"

>A blush flushes
uuh... "A blush colours" or "A flush spreads on" makes a lot more sense
Also dang, Emily a necro

Completely removed from the proofreading, but fuck anyone who chooses and enjoys what happens after this point. Call me whatever you want, but these lolis need to be protected.

>the other girl run away
You've constantly referred to them as 'other girl' - would be better if you maybe used "younger girl" here instead when referring to Fran. Doubt the champion would be that forgetful of their presumed ages.

>and she doesn't move
"but she doesn't move", losing the comma before this

>your disk is about to burst
Last I checked there isn't a disk option for the champion to take as a dick

>pours into her waiting womb
"pours into her awaiting womb"

>shivering in your grip. [say: W-Why
Again - double dash required

>red looking slit
"red-looking slit" seems better

I am actually surprised that the rape scenes had so little errors. Or I hated them so much I just couldn't see them. Who tf knows.
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Oh shit someones actually doing proofreading?
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>>52568
>You already reffered to her as a girl in the previous line. A different descriptor would be better
Cunny-wielder
>>52569
since nobody wanted to but everyone whined for someone else to. Decided to be the shitstain on the world that everyone desired
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>>52571
What a hero
>>52571
Thank you. 
I wish i could proof read but i am ESL and my english isnt the best.
So a big thank you.
>>52564
>Feels weird using super similar words in pairs. Maybe "murky swamp water" or just "muck". But maybe that's just a personal preference.
It's alliteration, but maybe it is a bit silly. I'm going to keep it for now.
>Why "siding"? Just call them walls or facade instead.
How about "exterior?" And now that I'm thinking about it, perhaps siding is too modern.
>Repeated word in neighboring sentence. Maybe replace the 1st one with "staunchly" or a similar synonym.
how about "commendably?" "It commendably halts most would-be plunderers from invading this mysterious mansion."
>Comma should be replaced with a colon, if you're intending to describe what is the curious thing. If not, instead maybe say "Tugging at the door, you feel it is left unlocked" or something to that effect.
So like this? "Curious: you spot one door is slightly ajar." or can this "You notice one door is already ajar for you." work?
>Since you're giving the impression that the champion has once again arrived here not quite of their own free will, it would make more sense to replace "Instinctively" with "As though you're bewitched" or the like. Instinct would have a person nope out of there immediately, I would say
So, "As though you're bewitched, you reach for the door's handle."
>Tiny nitpick, but forsaken by whom? Maybe say "god-forsaken" to specify, or just ignore me here.
I'm not sure forsaken requires by whom.
>Watching implies intention to observe from the start; with how it's presented, "watch" should be replaced with "see". Also, I'm presuming the champion is some ways away from the entrance - how could they see the door moving?? Replace it with an audible locking or swinging sound or something.
I imagined the champion stopped around the gate and looked back. "Stopping at the gate, you find yourself looking back at the manor just in time to spot the previously ajar door slowly shutting."  - How about this? 
>"lets out a disturbing creak", though it's just my preference
But doesn't creepy creak just roll off the tongue?

Thanks for going through this, and I'll check the next chunk in a bit.
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>>52583
>"It commendably halts most would-be plunderers from invading this mysterious mansion."
That reads weird
>>52565
>"seems as though once they could have had objects"
The sentence still reads weird to me when I say it out loud. "It seems like they might've displayed objects in the past." - maybe this?
>"mystery you will probably never solve." or "question you will probably never have an answer to."
Should there be commas there too? "Whether they had any real value, or were merely for some artistic merit, is a mystery you will probably never solve." - I feel like they fit here.
>"simpler door coated in countless tiny scratches and marks. "
Should there be a comma there too? "To your right, is a simpler door coated countless tiny scratches and marks."
>you sleep in a bed, not on it 
I suppose.
>>52566
>"there are any monsters". You used the correct plural form in the child option; how did you miss this?
I have no idea.
>some people might want to RP out being glad for the dust bunnies, so drop the "disappointing" here.
Is anyone glad for dust? But fair enough.
>foreshadowing much? Could just leave it at "mirror was shattered"
[spoiler]I wonder if past me did that on purpose? I can't remember, honestly.[spoiler]
>"barely notice its doors slightly move." Though this would require the following sentence to be rewritten somewhat, so that "notice" doesn't repeat itself
How about "spy" or "see?" 
>there's the extended dash after this, which in the writing guide is said to be replaced with double dashes (--) instead. Also, the and following it should start with a capital letter, since I'm guessing that's meant to be a full sentence.
Is it? I remember just being told to use an em dash —. I'm going to leave them as is for now.
>really? come on. just "ten years old" would be more sensible.
Fair enough.
>well... I'll whine about the intention bs and grammar at once: "Hoping to calm the girl down, you apologize before attempting to introduce yourself." Since who knows - maybe someone wanting to open the wardrobe up hoped to terrify its occupant before they could terrify the champion in turn
It's better to be the one who scares, I guess.
>Again, assuming what the PC wants. More likely, they'd want to unfuck the screethcing banshee they unleashed.
In that case, I'll just purge that sentence to leave pc's reasoning more open.
>also, just random chatter more aligned with coding than writing for this part: since the only difference between the calling out and terrifying Fran seems to be the ability to ask questions, the repeated introduction of Emily seems pointless, since no actual changes there occur based on how you 'introduced' yourself initially.
Alright, I've edited it to hopefully work without needing the two separate Emily introductions.
>"the girl still glaring at you"
Are you sure? "Fran cheerily exclaims and tightly hugs the girl still glaring at you" I think it sounds a little weird? Would this work, "the girl who is glaring at you."?
>"maybe" polite? MAYBE?! It's cannon how hard it is to find and protect a safe, demon-free space in Mareth! Drop the "maybe"! Replace it with "extremely" even!
To be fair, Emily doesn't actually want you to stay.
>"I won't hesitate to fight back" would make more sense. But also - Emily is attempting to be more threatening here, right? Maybe "I won't hesitate to kill you" would make more sense? Or since Fran is there, maybe "I won't hesitate to do what's necessary" to keep stuff ambiguous for the pure one's ears
I think "I won't hesitate to do what's necessary" works well.
>"leaving the two girls alone, for now." might sound a bit more threatening that one could like, but also makes a bit more sense in my eyes
"You apologize for asking something that made her uneasy before leaving the two girls alone." maybe just this?
>"exclaims [say: Come visit us again soon! Maybe we can play together next time? I hope we can!], offering you an enthusiastic wave goodbye as you leave the mansion behind." reads better. And yes, you can put commas after exclamation points and the like, if they are included in speech.
I don't think the game does the commas after sentences, so i'm not s
>>52590
>I don't think the game does the commas after sentences, so i'm not s
sure we should do that. Sorry, I deleted more than I thought when I was trying to get the post to go through.
>>52585
I wonder if I should just trash the sentence entirely then, or combine it, as was suggested before, "Despite being rusty, a tall fence built from sturdy iron continues to admirably protect the mansion from would-be plunderers."
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Just rereading the comments left here now, gonna recheck the entire file soon

>>52583
>How about "exterior?"
Yeah, that reads a fair bit better
>"It commendably halts most would-be plunderers from invading this mysterious mansion."
I agree with >>52585 anon, commendably just feels weird in the context. Staunchly probably as well. So another 3rd option will probably be required here :D
>"You notice one door is already ajar for you."
Yeah, that reads a lot better
>"Stopping at the gate, you find yourself looking back at the manor just in time to spot the previously ajar door slowly shutting."
Yeah, the clarification helps with the ambiguity.

>>52590
>"It seems like they might've displayed objects in the past."
Yeah, that definitely reads a lot better
>"Whether they had any real value, or were merely for some artistic merit, is a mystery you will probably never solve."
They kind of feel unnecessary there (or at least the one before "or" does), but I keeping them there doesn't ruin the flow of reading, so I guess they can stay there.
>"To your right, is a simpler door coated countless tiny scratches and marks."
The comma here is unnecessary though, since there's nothing to separate.
>Is anyone glad for dust?
Well, more like they're glad that only dust is there and no monsters
>"Fran cheerily exclaims and tightly hugs the girl who is glaring at you"
Yeah, that sounds better
>To be fair, Emily doesn't actually want you to stay.
Yes, and? Offering stuff when they clearly want you to reject it, is the epitome of politeness.

>>52591
>"Despite being rusty, a tall fence built from sturdy iron continues to admirably protect the mansion from would-be plunderers."
The combination certainly is a lot better
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>>52590
>Should there be commas there too? "Whether they had any real value, or were merely for some artistic merit, is a mystery you will probably never solve." - I feel like they fit here.
>Should there be a comma there too? "To your right, is a simpler door coated countless tiny scratches and marks."
I'm pretty sure commas would be wrong in both those cases. More sure about the second than the first though.
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>>52594
For the first one, they're fine, although not needed. The second is just wrong. Would need to be a "right, there is".
>>52568
>Wasn't the robe/dress too big for Fran specifically?
I think the robes would be too big on them both. I figured it'd be hard for most them to get well-fitting clothes.
>You already reffered to her as a girl in the previous line. A different descriptor would be better. Beast? Creature? Emily, if your imagination is worse here than mine?
How about lass and her? "You manage to dodge out of the way of the small lass which has her tumbling across the floor." and "You fail to avoid her grasp, and she successfully leaps onto your back!"
>"sink them into your soft flesh", though the neck could remain included there
Wouldn't this work? "You can only watch in horror as the young girl opens her mouth to reveal her monstrous fangs, and then bites your neck without any hesitation."
>uuh... "A blush colours" or "A flush spreads on" makes a lot more sense
"A blush spreads across her pale cheeks as she keeps drinking as much as she pleases." - how about this? 
>Also dang, Emily a necro
Compared to snakes, rats, or chameleon-girls, the champ is likely the tastiest snack she's had in months.
>Completely removed from the proofreading, but fuck anyone who chooses and enjoys what happens after this point. Call me whatever you want, but these lolis need to be protected.
Monsters don't belong in this world. 
>You've constantly referred to them as 'other girl' - would be better if you maybe used "younger girl" here instead when referring to Fran. Doubt the champion would be that forgetful of their presumed ages.
I'll just go with younger.
>I am actually surprised that the rape scenes had so little errors. Or I hated them so much I just couldn't see them. Who tf knows.
I'm sure there are more in there.
>>52592
>Just rereading the comments left here now, gonna recheck the entire file soon
I've posted a version with the changes, so there should, hopefully, be less errors in it.
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>>52597
>I've posted a version with the changes, so there should, hopefully, be less errors in it
Well, there certainly seem to be. Though there are a few new ones, and some I didn't notice before, it seems.

>almost slip into murky muck that would certainly swallow you up and drag you down into a possibly bottomless abyss.
One problem is still the murky muck. I understand it's alliteration (now), but here it just makes the text harder to digest (for me, at least).
The other, slightly more serious one - the massive sentence this fragment is a part of. This part at least could be shortened down a bit, excluding the swallowing bit. So "You often stumble over tree roots you fail to spot and almost slip into murky muck that would certainly drag you down into a possibly bottomless abyss." would be the full sentence. Though I still think the "murky muck" should be replaced with something else. 

>The sight has you wonder whether the vines are what's keeping this old mansion together.
The previous sentence already mentions the vines; call them something else here. Probably not "green tentacles" though, which was the only thing I could come up with.

>Gently touching it causes it to sluggishly open
Okay, this made it worse. A (slight) rewrite of this part is required: "A gentle touch causes it to sluggishly open"

>spot the previously ajar door slowly shutting
"Slowly shut" reads a lot better; didn't need to change that.

A slight note about the exploration part - wouldn't it make more sense to talk about the halls n whatnot using "north" and "west", instead of "right" and "left"?

>Servant's Quarters
Checked, and it is actually written as "Servants' Quarters", since multiple servants occupied them at once, I guess.

>There are two old wooden doors to your left and right.
It feels rather disjointed from the painting description. Maybe "A step after the painting, there are two old wooden doors to your left and right." or something to that effect?

>a simpler door coated countless tiny scratches and marks.
"a simpler door coated in countless tiny scratch marks." or just "scratches"

>Looking inside reveals the only object the vanity currently contains is a single, shiny silver ring.
It realy feels like it needs "reveals that" there.

>You would say she appears to be human, but her two crimson eyes, that have vertically shaped pupils, are rather strange looking for that to be the case.
"You would say she appears to be human, but her two crimson eyes with their vertically shaped pupils are too strange-looking for that to be the case." would be better

>non-sense
"nonsense". One of us missed it.

>blood covered poker
"blood-covered poker"

>Sinking the tool completely into the monster, forces it to let out a pained gasp.
The comma here is unneccessary

>light in abomination's
"light in the abomination's"

>Plea-Please th-this really...
comma is needed after "please"

>Emily however, winces and shivering in your grip.
"Emily, however, winces and shivers in your grip."

>Approaching the girl, you explain how she'll please you or else you'll go find her little sister instead!
comma before the "or", and that exclamation at the end feels overbearing here.
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>>52622
"You often stumble over tree roots you fail to spot and almost end up slipping into the marsh's bottomless abyss." - What about this? Might make the sentence a bit less wordy.
>The previous sentence already mentions the vines; call them something else here. Probably not "green tentacles" though, which was the only thing I could come up with."
Can "they're" work?
"Countless vines climb all over the building in a way that makes it appear as though they are coiling around it. The sight has you wonder whether they're the only things keeping this old mansion together." 
>A slight note about the exploration part - wouldn't it make more sense to talk about the halls n whatnot using "north" and "west", instead of "right" and "left"?
I'll change that up.
>"nonsense". One of us missed it.
I also missed shoulder-length a few times as well, my bad.

And that should be everything fixed.
>>52585
It can be fixed pretty simply.
>Commendably, it halts most...etc.
Changelod dead
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>>52693
There's actually a working changelog, but OP put the old, defunct one in for no reason
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holy shit proofreading
>>52697
Eventually, someone will do it correctly. That's been the case for at least a few previous threads.
>>51994
>that's mice.
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Does this work on android, and can the lolishit be disabled?
>>52717
Yes, it works on android, but you'll need an swf player (there should be some on the play store) and loli content is toggle-able.
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>>52718
>you'll need an swf player
No you won't.
>>52541
"Cuck" is like "Fag", it means whatever they want at the moment.
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Can the character viewer be used in this version?
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>>52767
I believe we have a character viewer built in, but i'm not sure how to access it. Maybe debug?
>>52764
I'd disagree if you were wrong,  but I do in fact use cuck and fag as general insults
Usually to describe someone in a whiny or passive way, but I don't think much about it
>>52764
Cuck is a guy like you that likes having his girl railed by other men
>>52717
You can't escape the lolis.
>>52717
stupid nigger there is a literal .apk in the downloads folder
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>>52717
Lolified NPCs is a toggle but you still have Alice encounters even with it off, there's no full toggle option for gays.
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Alright - vamp file 2 proofreading that took me way too long. Starting off at greetings and such

>you aside the lush foliage
"you push aside"

>She has a humble flame going which faintly illuminates
"She has a humble flame going, which faintly illuminates"
>dirty looking
"dirty-looking"
>heartwarming to say the least
"heartwarming, to say the least"

Small coding warning at Emily's and Fran's greeting stuff: since there are 3 levels of affection, you're going to want to set those tags as <30, <60 and >=60/else. Otherwise, if left as it is, it will post both the 2nd and 3rd relationship level texts (though the coders would fix that mistake, probably).

>Emily dryly questions
Honestly, a fair bit of these speech-introducing or -describing posts are unnecessary and bothersome. If you go over the texts, you should be able to see a number of places where you can drop them off. A later comment might list every one to help out.

>The girl takes sits down
drop the "takes"
>keeping you in her sights.
"keeping you in her sight."
>try picking a fight with me
"try picking fights" sounds better

>groggy looking eyes
I don't think eyes look groggy. "sleepy eyes" or "drowsy eyes" would be a better choice.
>tightly wrapped in
"tightly wrapped-up in"
>she is basically flat aside from two cute pink nipples
"she is basically flat, aside from two cute pink nipples"
>Hello, [name]!] Fran cutely mumbles
same ellipsis here as before, to indicate her sleepiness
>snuggly
"snugly"
>hurriedly glances around
Fran just woke up, and you've said she's still sleepy. Ergo, this sudden bout of energy described by "hurriedly" feels super out of place, especially as you're pulling that energy out of her again in the next sentence. Maybe use "worriedly" instead? Though that might require a rewrite of the entire sentence then.

>bends over to give you an unintentional view
"bends over, giving you an unintentional view", since the "to" there adds some degree of intention
>and you can't help but notice the cheerful smile
Noticing would mean more accidental, "out of the corner of your eye" kind of thing. It should probably be replaced with something saying "you can't ignore the bright smile" or similar.
>Fran pouts in response to her sister's tone, but when she looks at you, her eyes noticeably widen. A blush gradually spreads across Fran's freckled face.
Should merge these two together, like so: "Fran pouts in response to her sister's tone, but when she looks at you, her eyes noticeably widen, a blush gradually spreading across Fran's freckled face."
>panty clad rump
"panty-clad rump"
>little blonde girl
Just "little blonde" would be fine, if not better, IMO
>She turns around to face you once upon getting her robe on
lose the "once"
>You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you and she appears to hesitate getting dressed.
"You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you, appearing to hesitate getting dressed."


>You decide to visit the sisters and venture into the mansion's dark confines. 
"You decide to visit the sisters, and venture into the mansion's dark confines.", since the two parts have different intentions

>sits in a spot that enables her keep her eyes on you
"enables"? "lets" would be a better choice
>Entering the room has Emily quickly turn her gaze towards you. She lets out a soft sigh upon seeing it is you paying them a visit
Two "you"s here. Need to merge & rewrite them
>Emily gently pats a spot next to her.
Merge the speech descriptor with this, like so:
[say: It's nice to see you again, [name].] She sweetly says, gently patting a spot next to her.
>>52833
Dinner scenes now

>You politely advise Emily to take her time
Feels too stuffy and formal for me

>The blonde girl licks her lip
"lips", not "lip"


Fang comparisons
I would say the scenes can occur multiple times (since people grow, after all), though there might need to be several visits in-between. Dunno how to code that tho
Also, when showing off the champion's fangs, you're missing regular teeth description.

>puffing out insignificant chest
No chest is insignificant! Both large and small are great! But anyways, you missed "her" here.

>takes a seat by near the fireplace
Pick one: "by" or "near", not both.

>itsy bitsy fangs~!
The second one needs to be capitalized


Pretend battle

>queen of darkness
Would make a bit more sense to capitalize this mock title, like "Queen of Darkness"

>[say: I'll do my best!] Fran happily declares.
You used "happily" already; perhaps "merrily" instead?

>You lunge at Emily who nimbly dodges to the side as you to end up embarrassingly tumbling across the wooden floor.
Add a comma after "Emily" and lose the 2nd "to"

>pure white panties
"pure-white panties"

>[name] and me
While this technically is correct, Fran would probably use the more intuitive "[name] and I" instead, since she's more childish

>Lunging at Emily makes her attempt to nimbly dodge to the side, you're rather agile yourself however
Split it into two separate sentences instead

>lithe little arm
drop the "little"

>You caught her so easily, I was never able do that!
split again

>remember who hunts for food Fran.
"remember who hunts for food, Fran"

>explain for her to continue following your lead.
"tell her" would be better instead

>Telling the blonde girl to continue to wait
"continue waiting" instead

>turning up into a certainly playful grin
drop the "certainly"
>willowy looking girl
drop the "willowy" here

>wearily nod in agreement that you two will surely best Emily the next time you play.
No need to repeat yourself here - just leave the "wearily nod in agreement" part

>two girl's frown for a moment
should be plural, not possessive

>You two win it seems though...
"You two win, it seems..."

>Now make sure you're holding her down nice and tight.
Add a comma after "now" and a teasing tilde at the end

>wide in surprise
"widen in surprise"

>loudly laugh
maybe swap their order?

>N-No Fran stop it!
"N-No, Fran, stop it!"

>Only when Emily is left utterly breathless and tears run down her cheeks does the little blonde girl cease the childish assault.
add a comma before "does" here

>Emily please don't only catch rats...
"Emily, please, don't only catch rats..."

>The humble flame she has burning leaves the room dimly lit. You glance around the room
Double mention of room (triple, if you count the bedroom as a room in the previous sentence); needs rewording. Maybe "The humble flame she has burning leaves the place dimly lit. You glance around, failing to see Fran anywhere."

>Emily turns to you as curiously asks,
I understand what you meant here ("and" instead of "as"), but it still requires a rewording. Maybe "Emily turns to you, an eyebrow raised at your arrival", though that feels too inquisitive for the following question.  

>You attempt to discover what might be bothering Fran.
>Curious, you request she provide more details to you.
They feel too formal and stuffy.
"You try to figure out what bothered the younger girl, and the older sister explains"
and 
"Curious, you ask more about what happened"
feel a bit more natural, though they could still use a fair bit of work.

>Emily stretches her arms high above her head and begins to tell you, 
Again, poorly worded. "''Emily goes for a stretch with her arms above while explaining the situation.

>You figure Fran would at least be thankful for it.
"You figure at least Fran would be thankful for it."
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>>52834
Well... some unprompted Loli porn

>hardcovered book
"hardcover book"
>grind her privates against the its sturdy spine
lose the "the"

>the tomes spine
"tome's"

>switching between licking, and then lewdly sucking
"switching between lewd licking and sucking", since "then" is unnecessary
>skill licks
"skillful licks"
>use your face
"uses your face"
>keep up right
"keep upright"

>little [if (pc learned they're vamps) vampire] girl
Honestly, in every place this shows up, it would make a bit more sense to use either or, instead of "vampire girl" or "girl".


The v-bomb drop

>if anyone ever discovered we were vampires they would try and hurt us.
"if anyone ever discovered we were vampires, they would try and hurt us."
>nearly sparkling like diamonds
"almost" fits better

>become}] too for you
missed a "much" here
>she doesn't finish her sentence
But she does? I think something is missing here
>You can't find yourself unable to hear
"able", not "unable"
>arriving back at your camp so that you can properly recover
comma before "so"

>does attempt to attack or even look you
"doesn't", not "does"
>wails begin die down.
"dying" instead


And from that horrific death scene - a bath.

>not some other [i:lewder] substance
comma after "other"
>A childish giggling
drop the "a"
>laughter's source
"source of the laughter" instead
>arriving at a wooden door where the water droplet trail also happens to end
comma before "where"
>liquid being poured as Emily's familiar voice commands, [say: Quit splashing around Fran!
Might want to reword this. Otherwise there's a contradiction - water is being poured, but also splashed at the same time?

>nu-uh!
capitalize
>meaty looking
really? Anyways, use "rather meaty" or "rather juicy" instead.
>regard upon her nude body
lose the "upon"

>The water isn't really that cold anymore!
Lose the "really", or reword this
>her siblings long blonde tresses
use the possessive "sibling's" instead
>so you inform the sisters you will join them.
"accept their offer to join" sounds more natural
>oddly long fangs
Maybe remove the "oddly" part if the player knows they're vampires?
>Fran doesn't hesitant in turning her back to Emily
"doesn't hesitate" instead

>water is clear enough for you to see bottom
lost a "the" here
>your body unwillingly quivering from it be a bit chilly.
"it being", or "quivering from its coolness"

Also, the scene is missing specific Naga and drider/spider body descriptions. Could probably just add additional rewording to the sponge bath version.


>You were just in the area and thought you'd stop by so you could say hello to them really quick.
Needs rewording. Feels like a fast jumble of words


Actual interactions now! First off cums Emily
Giving blood for both her and Fran should be hidden from view initially, not just greyed-out. Maybe mention that here, instead of the occurrences themselves?

>complexion is so pale that you'd say
comma before "that"
>village aside from her crimson irises
comma before "aside"

>slightly moves away enough so that you
comma before "enough"
>try restricting your movement
"try and restrict" sounds better
>seemingly not caring
"appearing to not care" instead
>convey you will have to be on your way.
drop the "will"
>Try and be careful out there.
"to" instead of "and"

>before explains
"explaining"
>disinterestedly waving her hand in a careless manner
you're doubly describing what's happening here. I would suggest dropping "disinterestedly"

>Fran slightly moves away
"moves away slightly"

>lived deep in the forest so I didn't exactly
comma before "so". But you also might want to remove the mention of the woods, since that tidbit is only revealed if your relationship with Emily is >60

>new found strength
"newfound"

>Normally our bodies are able to heal
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>>52835
weird, it clipped. Anyways:
>Normally our bodies are able to heal wounds
comma after "normally"


Moving on:Emily skinship!

>//hug; Emily affection > 30
same programming warning here as before

>Minotaur are those
"minotaurs"

>but, fine
drop the comma
>Confirming that you can truly pat her head
"Confirming that you truly can pet her"
>in an annoyed fashion
drop this

>//headpat Emily; Emily's affection => 60 and has pet her before.
programming warning again. Also, edge case - what happens if champion hasn't pet them yet? Currently, seems like it'll go to
>//headpat Emily; Emily's affection => 30; first time;
which is fine, if that is your intention


Fran interactions now!

>its length ending at around her waist
just "ending at around her waist" is better

>You wanna pat
"pet" again
>oddly bounce to touch
the heck does this mean?
>head patting
"headpatting"
>so you do so knowing she is enjoying it
comma before "knowing"

>Don't you think you thank [him]?
missing a "should"

>Tear the toy
You are brutal. But it would be kind of nice if you added a playing scene here or something similar, not just an immediate "bye"

Seeing how Fran drinks the champion's blood while Emily refuses... is kind of weird. Maybe add a check to see if Fran already fed from them, and if yes, Emily can be offered to drink too? Since her main argument seems to be "I don't want Fran to"

>one of the minotaur
"minotaurs"
>I never tried
"I've never tried"
>appears to thoroughly have coated it
"appears to have thoroughly coated it"
>assume she likes it since you watch
comma before "since"

Also, a tiny nitpick, but it's weird how minotaur blood doesn't affect them. I was pretty sure that lorewise every "newcomer" to Mareth was very susceptible to transformatives. And vampires would probably count as newcomers, not "natural inhabitants" or whatever.


Fran playtime!

>you question what games she might have in mind.
too formal. "you ask what games she has in mind" instead
>you inform her you two can do that.
Again - too formal. "you agree to her suggestion"
>Emily watches in interest
"with interest" instead
>you inform the girl
This formality is really becoming a problem. "You tell her that"

>still beautifully shine
"still shine beautifully"
>take seat
"take a seat"
>you understand you have to get back to your duties
"you know" instead

>Whoever is it has to slowly count to up ten and they can't peek either!
"Whoever is 'it' has to slowly count to up ten, and they can't peek either!"
Since the scenes here seem to be the same ones from the 1st file, I'll skip commenting on the same text. I'll just check over the added ifs and hiding/seeking scenarios. Should probably add a note for the coders to mostly reuse the room descriptions from there as well.
>Three comfy looking chairs are [if (Fran hiding here) {untucked}|{neatly tucked}] into table
The if should probably be instead "[if (Fran hiding here) {untucked from}|{neatly tucked into}] the table"
>Fran cutely sitting beneath the table. The young vampire cutely smiles
Since duplicates are here - drop the "cute" at sitting. How can one even sit cutely?
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>>52836
Hmmm... such interesting requests

>Explaining she heard you correctly
"affirming" would be better
>I did wash but please don't smell me...
comma after "wash"
>She uncomfortable fidgets
"uncomfortably"
>underwear covered backside
"underwear-covered"
>appreciate her warm covering your face
"warmth"
>shake your waist even faster
should be "thrust" instead

>The tiny blonde girl bites her lower lip, barely stifling her delighted gasps. She fidgets in your grip, whimpering cutely in response to the sensations of your lips pecking at her very pale skin.
This feels like repeating stuff
>quietly offering up an apology
"offer"
>feel up her
"feel her up"
>you cup her gently childish rump
"you cup her childish rump gently"
>finger tips
"fingertips"
>approaching at her peak
drop the "at"
>Hot gasps escape from little
missed a "the"
>loudly originates from between her childish thighs
"sounds loudly between"
>surely completely exhausted
drop "surely"
>done anything weird to me little sister
"my", not "me"
>gently smiles and quietly ask
"asks", not "ask"


Toy retrieval now

>return to your camp empty handed
"empty-handed"


Think that's it for the time being
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>>52807
Checking before asking? Who does that?
What is this, 1812?
>>52810
Wrong
>>52810
>Lolified NPCs is a toggle but you still have Alice encounters even with it off
That's technically true, but meaningless. You're correct that toggling whether or not certain characters are children (which is multiple toggles) does not have anything to do with Alices, which should be 100% obvious to literally everyone, those two things are just unrelated.
If you turn off underage content though, you can't encounter Alices. Telly will still exist, but there's nothing sexual there anyways.
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>>52846
>Telly will still exist, but there's nothing sexual there anyways.
Not yet, at least. Someone just needs to say they proofread some of her lewds
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>>52833
>"You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you, appearing to hesitate getting dressed."
Ackshually should be either:
"You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you, appearing to hesitate about getting dressed."
Or:
"You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you, appearing hesitant about getting dressed."
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>>52847
There are Telly lewds beyond the Ceraph rp?
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>>52833
>Small coding warning at Emily's and Fran's greeting stuff: since there are 3 levels of affection, you're going to want to set those tags as <30, <60 and >=60/else. Otherwise, if left as it is, it will post both the 2nd and 3rd relationship level texts (though the coders would fix that mistake, probably).
Whoops, should be fixed.
>I don't think eyes look groggy. "sleepy eyes" or "drowsy eyes" would be a better choice.
Sleepy works.
>Fran just woke up, and you've said she's still sleepy. Ergo, this sudden bout of energy described by "hurriedly" feels super out of place, especially as you're pulling that energy out of her again in the next sentence. Maybe use "worriedly" instead? Though that might require a rewrite of the entire sentence then.
Can't I also add a "then" to the next sentence too? Might fix it without needing to rewrite it.
>"You notice her peek over her shoulder to curiously stare at you, appearing to hesitate getting dressed."
I feel like a word is missing in between "hesitate" and "getting." Not sure which word. Maybe "in" or "with"?
>Two "you"s here. Need to merge & rewrite them
"Entering the room has Emily quickly shift her gaze in your direction. She lets out a soft sigh upon seeing it is you paying them a visit and not some vile creature that was lurking out in bog." Can I fix it like this?
>[say: It's nice to see you again, [name].] She sweetly says, gently patting a spot next to her.
[say: It's nice to see you again, [name].] she sweetly says, gently patting a spot next to her, [say: Why don't you come and relax by the fire?] - shouldn't it look like this? At least, I think a few other scenes in the game do something similar.

That should be this section for part 2 done, onto the next chunk.
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>>52834
>Feels too stuffy and formal for me
Maybe "suggest"? "You suggest Emily take her time, explaining that you're not in a rush"
>I would say the scenes can occur multiple times (since people grow, after all), though there might need to be several visits in-between. Dunno how to code that tho
Also, when showing off the champion's fangs, you're missing regular teeth description.
Truth be told, I have no idea how fast fangs for the champion or a vampire would grow. Don't some animals need to wear their teeth down too? Wonder if vampires or the fangs the champ can get would be the same.
>Would make a bit more sense to capitalize this mock title, like "Queen of Darkness"
I suppose even made up titles should be properly capitalized.
>You used "happily" already; perhaps "merrily" instead?
How about "gleefully"?
>maybe swap their order?
I can just drop the loudly. "Fran's fingers instantly begin roaming Emily's exposed skin without a care for her feelings, making the older sister squirm about and laugh from being maliciously tickled." 

And that should be this section done.
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>>52835
>But she does? I think something is missing here
"I should've found a new place for us to stay the moment you discovered us or just—" - Maybe this can fix it? I think I wanted to imply she believes she should've just killed you from the start, but I can't remember. 
>"able", not "unable"
"You find yourself unable to hear a single sound now, your body feeling chilly and weak." - Should be this I think. I might just need to redo this sentence, not fully sure.
>And from that horrific death scene - a bath.
Baths are nice.
>Might want to reword this. Otherwise there's a contradiction - water is being poured, but also splashed at the same time?
I was trying to convey that Emily was washing her sister who is busy splashing around. Not sure how I should change it.
>really? Anyways, use "rather meaty" or "rather juicy" instead.
That works.
>Also, the scene is missing specific Naga and drider/spider body descriptions. Could probably just add additional rewording to the sponge bath version.
I don't like spiders and snakes. They scare me.
>Needs rewording. Feels like a fast jumble of words
"You just thought you'd stop by and say hello to them really quick." - how about this?
>Giving blood for both her and Fran should be hidden from view initially, not just greyed-out. Maybe mention that here, instead of the occurrences themselves?
That's a good idea.
>try and restrict" sounds better
What about this? "They seem to use roots and muck to restrict your movement, but what I found truly odd is their ability to change shape." 

And that should be this part, just a few more to go, hopefully.
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>>52836
>programming warning again. Also, edge case - what happens if champion hasn't pet them yet? Currently, seems like it'll go to
I think it's probably fine to have it use the same first time.
>the heck does this mean?
A good question for past me. Likely meant to say bouncy? Doesn't make much sense.  Maybe i'll just go with "soft and silky to touch." 
>You are brutal.
I just thought it'd be a fun option.
>Seeing how Fran drinks the champion's blood while Emily refuses... is kind of weird. Maybe add a check to see if Fran already fed from them, and if yes, Emily can be offered to drink too? Since her main argument seems to be "I don't want Fran to"
Emily tells fran they're not supposed to drink blood from average people, but she doesn't really care per se. It's more she doesn't want fran to start thinking it's okay to attack anyone whenever she's hungry. The champ is willingly offering though, which is a strange exception to the rule.
>Also, a tiny nitpick, but it's weird how minotaur blood doesn't affect them. I was pretty sure that lorewise every "newcomer" to Mareth was very susceptible to transformatives. And vampires would probably count as newcomers, not "natural inhabitants" or whatever.
I thought it was just humans her were the ones who ended up getting tf'd easily. Admittedly, I made it so they change when they drink succubus milk and other items, so perhaps that's me being inconsistent. On the other hand, I think it'd be annoying to need to grab 6+ items to make a change to a character. It's something to discuss.
>>52837
>should be "thrust" instead
Wouldn't either work? I'll change it anyway.
>This feels like repeating stuff
"The tiny blonde girl bites her lower lip, fidgeting and whimpering cutely in response to the sensations of you placing smooches on her skin." - What if I merge the sentences?  

And that's it.
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Is there any kind of wiki for this mod? 
If there isn't, would it be taken down by Miraheze because of all the loli? One could be made on the Gitgud otherwise.

How do I make the lumberjack demon scene appear? Are there any prerequisites or is it random?
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>>52857
>Is there any kind of wiki for this mod? 
No.
>How do I make the lumberjack demon scene appear? Are there any prerequisites or is it random?
Have a need for tools.
wonder what the viper poster is up to
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>>52850
For instance, there's this, though it needs proofreading: https://pastebin.com/raw/LPugX5LQ
Then there's also other Satan stuff:
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https://pst.moe/paste/lvbwey
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With apologies to 2hu, his admirable fence gave me an idea for one of those one time explore scenes. So, yeah,  it's a kind of silly scene about a fence, that's pretty much it.
>>52872
Those last two are already in.
>>52851
>Can't I also add a "then" to the next sentence too? Might fix it without needing to rewrite it.
I'm not sure it would read any better:
"'[say: Mmmm...? Hello, [name]!] Fran cutely mumbles with a sleepy smile before letting out another yawn. The little girl stands up, showing she is wearing only a pair of plain white panties that hug her narrow hips. 'She hurriedly glances around as though she is searching for something, and frowns when she can't seem to find whatever she is looking for. Fran then sluggishly rubs her weary eyes some more as she mumbles to her sister, [say: ...Emily, I'm hungry.]''"
>I feel like a word is missing in between "hesitate" and "getting."
The anon from >>52849 has pretty decent suggestions
>Can I fix it like this?
Yeah, it seems fine
>shouldn't it look like this?
Yeah, just char count had me clip the rest of it off

>>52852
>You suggest Emily take her time, explaining that you're not in a rush
I think (slightly) better would be "You tell Emily that she can take her time; you're not in a rush, after all". Though maybe that reads a bit too sarcastic
>Truth be told, I have no idea how fast fangs for the champion or a vampire would grow.
tbh, that's just handwaving to explain the scene's reoccurance. Teeth don't actually grow once they come out, but the vampires might not know that, or believe they are different.
>"Fran's fingers instantly begin roaming Emily's exposed skin without a care for her feelings, making the older sister squirm about and laugh from being maliciously tickled."
Yeah, seems good

>>52855
>"I should've found a new place for us to stay the moment you discovered us or just—"
Yeah, that's a lot better
>"You find yourself unable to hear a single sound now, your body feeling chilly and weak."
Yes to this too
>I don't like spiders and snakes. They scare me.
Dude, it's one scene. Plus, they're not actual creepy crawlies or slitheries. They have human forms on top! Unless they have fur, wings, or 3 rows of breasts...
>"You just thought you'd stop by and say hello to them really quick."
Maybe switch "and" with "to"
>"They seem to use roots and muck to restrict your movement, but what I found truly odd is their ability to change shape."
Yeah, that's good

>>52856
>Emily tells Fran they're not supposed to drink blood from average people, but she doesn't really care per se.
Even more of a reason for Emily to be willing to accept the Champion's blood when offered
>"The tiny blonde girl bites her lower lip, fidgeting and whimpering cutely in response to the sensations of you placing smooches on her skin."
"The tiny blonde girl bites her lower lip, fidgeting and whimpering cutely in response to you placing smooches on her skin.", cuz "the sensations" feels redundant.
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>>52864
I miss him so much it hurts.
I think Fera's Akbal quest stuff is added by this mod, so I'll ask here. Anyone know what to do after you save the kitsunes from Akbal and then he crashes the party next time you follow them home? I can't find him in the deep forest, the kitsunes don't say anything about him, and none of the scenes trigger him showing up anymore. I even tried asking Aiko and she doesn't really say anything important. So what am I missing here?
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>>52882
Time.
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>>52883
So it's just an issue of time. Will he show back up in the deep forest or will I need to comb through the kitsune scenes again to find him? And about how long are we talking? Pretty sure it's been about an in-game week.
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>>52884
>Pretty sure it's been about an in-game week.
Then it's been more than enough time and you've probably just been unlucky.
There's a delay of 1 day between the "fuck with Akbal" events (and they happen in a random order). After you finish all of them, there's a delay of 3 days before the conclusion. Once the delay is passed, it's an ordinary encounter in the deep woods with the usual encounter chance, no other requirements.
The kitsune followup where he appears if you're visiting them is just an extra thing, not required for anything and doesn't affect anything.
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>>52885
This is some extreme bad luck then. Though to be fair the Deep Forest is a very crowded area.
>>52874
Not bad
>>52874
I support the fences.
>>52878
>I think (slightly) better would be "You tell Emily that she can take her time; you're not in a rush, after all". Though maybe that reads a bit too sarcastic
Maybe just having it as "You tell Emily you won't mind waiting."  
>Dude, it's one scene. Plus, they're not actual creepy crawlies or slitheries. They have human forms on top! Unless they have fur, wings, or 3 rows of breasts...
I've added small variations for driders by mentioning the "spider-like" lower body. Nagas probably don't need anything special, since they wouldn't get the centaur version for the bath scene, and I don't think I mention the player's legs in the normal one either.
>Even more of a reason for Emily to be willing to accept the Champion's blood when offered
I think it's fine that she doesn't for now. She agrees to after moving into the the champ's camp.

Also, thanks for the continued proofreading.
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Hey. Hey proofreader. Hey.
I owe you a beer.
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A couple of sprites I made for fun, don't know what the standards are to accept submissions.
The lost kittens (Lara and Lynn) and the incubus woodsman / lumberjack demon.
Based on existing sprites.
>>52908
Neat
Finally got Akbal done, but now I have a question about another quest. I remember meeting that fairy goddess and her clockwork knight in the High Mountains, and she told me something about losing his heart under the mountain or something like that. I've searched both the High Mountain and the Mountain at least 100 times each since then without finding anything related to this quest, so I'm wondering what I have to do there to continue it?
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>>52908
Hey these are actually fucking great, good job
>>52908
The fist on the right makes him kind of look like Popeye, so I'd tone that down just a little bit. Other than that these look alright.
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>>52908
nice
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Doing some Alice sprites and found some inconsistencies in the description of the one from the encounter described as innocent Alice.
She's described at least twice as having mahogany skin, which according to every Google search would be dark skin, but she's also described as having milky-white hands. Her eyes are also described as dazzling blue in her introduction but as green during combat.

Based on her description I gave her a catholic schoolgirl vibe. I prefer the more elegant design with the light blue dress, but this is how she's described.
Not super happy with her face, I don't know if I should remove the mouth outright. when I tried to make her smile it looked like a smirk.

>>52915
The arms were taken from Kelt. I already tried to tone down the Popeye arms by making the biceps a little bigger, but I think I will make the forearms smaller too.
>>52911
Originally I think it was a secret 7 day time limit, but this mod changed it to not be so restrictive. That's all I remember.
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>>52917
They are always referred to as "an Alice", "the Alice" and so on
I'm not seeing any inconsistency myself
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>>52917
>She's described at least twice as having mahogany skin, which according to every Google search would be dark skin, but she's also described as having milky-white hands.
Well, if I understand correctly, most people with dark skin have lighter palms (niggers, indians, whathaveyou). So it's not that inconsistent.
Trash reddit post, I know, but a decent wiki article about why: https://reddit.invak.id/r/TooAfraidToAsk/comments/wgjpl3/why_do_people_with_dark_skin_have_lightcolored/
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>>52917
>The arms were taken from Kelt. I already tried to tone down the Popeye arms by making the biceps a little bigger, but I think I will make the forearms smaller too.
There is also the mechanic incubus at the demon factory & Lethice's stronghold whose arms you could rip off. Maybe those could fit better?
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>>52920
As in, I needed to complete it within seven days or I'm locked out of it? Even if the mod did loosen that, if there's still any kind of time limit then I'm fucked, I took like a 50 day break bto do other things because I just could not get anything to happen. What was even the reward for finishing it?
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>>52924
Reward was making christmas events active all year round so the game is actively worse
>>52921

The Alice from the same scene is described as having both mahogany (dark) and milky-white skin. Unless I'm an idiot and mahogany skin is white.

>>52923
It actually started as a modification of the mechanic incubus, but I liked the overall shape of Kelt's upper body more. I could also just rip off Zetaz.
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>>52922

I mean, if you want a black Alice, I can make her black if that was the actual intention of the author of that scene.
>>52924
>Even if the mod did loosen that, if there's still any kind of time limit then I'm fucked
There is a time limit, but you're not fucked, you have a bit of time left still. You'll fail if you take more than 100 in-game years.
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>>52917
>Doing some Alice sprites and found some inconsistencies in the description of the one from the encounter described as innocent Alice.
>She's described at least twice as having mahogany skin, which according to every Google search would be dark skin, but she's also described as having milky-white hands. Her eyes are also described as dazzling blue in her introduction but as green during combat.
>>52928
>The Alice from the same scene is described as having both mahogany (dark) and milky-white skin.
If you mean that you get different skin/eye colors when seeing the same scene multiple times, that's normal, it's random. If you mean you encounter an Alice one time and get changing skin/eye colors within that one encounter, that would be a bug, and I'm not sure how it could happen.
The appearance is generated randomly each time you encounter an Alice. There are only two things that should cause it to be rerolled: when you're first initiating a new encounter, or when an appearance variable is called but an Alice has never been generated before (this should only happen in the debug menu, either when you go to a scene directly without going through execEncounter or when you're using Alice parser tags in the scene builder). Everything else (including initiating combat) just references the Alice that's already been generated.
>>52903
rechecking the edited file now, and spotted a few new and missed things: 
>[say: It's you again?] Emily questions
could have left the "dryly" there
>sleepy looking eyes
drop the "sleepy"
>The sheets she was tightly wrapped-up in
I can understand the intent, but for some reason it reads uncomfortable.

>[if (Emily affection < 30) Entering the room
>[if (Emily affection > 60) Entering the room
>[if (Emily affection >=60) Emily gives you a heartwarming smile
coding error
>she sweetly says, gently patting a spot next to her,
Could have left this as the end of a sentence. Replace the last comma with a full stop

>tell Emily you won't mind waiting
"don't" instead of "won't"

>Fran teases you in a sing-song tone. She rocks back and forth while repeating this singing tune over and over.
This should be merged together. Maybe "Fran rocks back and forth while repeating the teasing song over and over."
>You explain it’s the venom
The fancy apostrophe here should be replaced with a regular unicode one.

>You two win, it seems though...
drop the "though"
>Lemme go already, [name] a-and stop looking
comma after "[name]"

>Emily stretches her arms above her head while she begins to tell you,
feels weird. maybe "Emily stretches her arms above her head while explaining what happened."?
>a bright blush standing out on her freckled face's pale complexion
the "against" you replaced with "on" fit better
>Watch as young girl masturbates
missed a "the"

>You're going to get the water all over the place again.
"You're going to get water all over the bathroom again." instead. Or maybe "mansion", since water has already escaped into the hallway?
>find it rather meaty looking
drop the "looking"
>//join; an alt version for if pc is a centaur; 
missed adding drider flag
>[say: Man... being a [if (pc drider lower)spider-like
since Emily is regarding the champion in general, not just their legs n whatnot, maybe have the "spider-like" replaced with "spider[boy]"?

>I've come across some surprisingly unpleasant faerie-like creatures while I was out hunting a while ago.
"I've come across some surprisingly unpleasant faerie-like creatures while out hunting.", since she's talking about her experiences in general, not something that happened in a described timespan.

>she doesn't ask her sister to stop or bother to try moving away.
"bothers to move away" or "tries moving away" instead
>It's... talking about our family
capitalize "talking"
Kinda disappointing their ages aren't mentioned here anymore though.

>before she answers,
full stop instead of comma
>I did come across a strange girl once while I was hunting
comma after "once"

>//Hug; Emily affection <  30;
>//hug; Emily affection > 60
>//hug; Emily affection =>60;
coding error

>//headpat Emily; Emily's affection < 30;
>//headpat Emily; Emily's affection > 30;
what happens if affection is 30?

>the girl gets stuck for on what comes after six.
cute. but also, lose the "for"
>What one came after that?
drop the "one"

>around her slender waist, you return the affectionate gesture. The warmth coming from her slender body
"slender" used twice. maybe use "small body"?
>A lewd squishing sound comesfrom
missed a space
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>>52717
Lolis cannot and will not be removed
If you don't like it then just fuck off back to the vanilla shit
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>>52717
It even works on a VR headset.
>>52932
Well that's not a problem at all then. In that case, what am I doing wrong, do I just need to keep exploring the High Mountains and the chance is simply really low?
>>52942
I mean, it can't be that low. I've gotten the event to go on consistently whenever I start it. Just keep exploring
>>52939
writing loli ntr to own the libs and make their heads explode with LOGIC when
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>>52937
>I can understand the intent, but for some reason it reads uncomfortable.
"The bedding she was wrapping herself in slowly slips off her narrow shoulders, revealing her body to your gaze." - does this read better?
>coding error
How is it supposed to go? I think I'm too dumb to get it.
>since Emily is regarding the champion in general, not just their legs n whatnot, maybe have the "spider-like" replaced with "spider[boy]"?
Why not a spider[MAN]?
>Kinda disappointing their ages aren't mentioned here anymore though.
I decided to change it in case I ever want to write more that vampire town and forget the time frames for when events might have happened. Easier to just future proof it for myself so I don't make things too inconsistent later on.
>hug coding error
Same issue as the first one, right? Maybe I'm mixing up what sign is what.
>what happens if affection is 30?
I'm not fully sure. Maybe it should just use the higher affection version? Also, should that one be "=>30" then?
>"slender" used twice. maybe use "small body"?
How about tiny? That should work.
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>>52950
Monogamous missionary handholding with the loli is what will do it
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>>52953
peak normalfaggotry. someone get baalbuddy on the phone, y'all folks!
>>52952
>"The bedding she was wrapping herself in slowly slips off her narrow shoulders, revealing her body to your gaze."
Maybe "The bedding she was wrapped in slowly slips off her narrow shoulders, revealing her body to your gaze.", since the champion wouldn't have a clue if Fran or Emily cocooned her in it.

As for the coding errors: basically pretend you're counting from one, and check which "if" statement happens. If all is fine, go to the next one. For the ones I've named, the relationship values between 30 and 60 (say, 45) don't get shown any text, since there are only registered occurrences if the value is below 30 (affection<30) or above 60 (affection>60).
It should go like this:
     [if (Emily affection < 30), do stuff
     [if (Emily affection < 60 and > 30), do stuff
     [if (Emily affection >=60), do stuff
Probably should recheck and rewrite the other ifs too, since I only realized that myself

>Why not a spider[MAN]?
Well, I don't know how CoC coding and variable calling works, but I'm guessing my version called the child variant, right? If yes, then it would make more sense for Emily to call the champion a "spiderboy" or "spidergirl", since they can only be a kid in that scene.

>Also, should that one be "=>30" then?
yep, was just drawing your attention to it missing the equals sign

>How about tiny? 
yeah, that should be fine
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>>52942
>do I just need to keep exploring the High Mountains
Not high.
>>52956
I'm not sure I fully fixed the coding issues, but I did my best.
>>52908
These are nice. Could you do a nonbimbo Joy?
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>>52967

Sure, how would you differentiate between regular Joy and Bimbo Joy?
I'm touching up some of the characters like Marble (to make her taller and with bigger boobs) and deciding which character without sprites to make.
I don't know if people will like any of them enough to include them in the game, but it's fun to do.   
If I could actually draw I would like to make bigger sprites similar to those of the character viewer, it was good work.
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>a good sprite artist with ambition drops by
>possible respectable overhaul of the poor item management/shop system in progress
So this is what hope feels like
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>>52973
>a good sprite artist
Isn't it someone just frankensteining sprites?
>>52978
Hey, at least someone is doing stuff that is good. Does it matter how they made it?
>>52978
Yes, I'm just editing old stuff, although there are already a lot of sprites in the game that are just slight variations of each other.   
Doing them from scratch makes them too different. 
I'm testing making bigger sprites based on the paper doll from the character viewer, but they look so different they wouldn't fit at all with the rest of the sprites.
>>52978
As opposed to what, churning out a bunch of new ones that look nothing like the sprites that CoC has had for ten fucking years? The best sprites are "frankensteined", stuff like the hellmouths are pieces of shit
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>>52996
I like the hellmouth sprite...
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>>52997
Revisionist scum
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>>52999
I'll admit, it's not the same, but how could you dislike this cutie?
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>>52972
Idk if you should make a bimbo joy (due to the hate) but a joy in a nun out fit would be cool. I know I'm uncreative as fuck. 

Loli Joy too
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>>53001
What Japanese ren'py is this from?
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>>53006
I don't know how to answer you.
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So, I like how Amily turned out using the character viewer sprites as a base. Alice and Marble kind of suck because I can't draw hair at all and the case look terrible. At least they're in scale (2 pixels per inch).

I also updated my Woodsman sprite so it doesn't have popeye arms and made the old Marble sprite taller and with bigger boobs so she looks more to scale.


>>53004
>Idk if you should make a bimbo joy (due to the hate) but a joy in a nun out fit would be cool.

fuck it, I'll make her.
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>>53014
Amily's boobs are pretty exaggerated there. They should be A-cups by default.
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>>53004
everyone should get robes and wizard hats. Especially Dolores. She'd look adorable with a big floppy hat that she has to hold onto while flying or readjust constantly because she hasn't grown into it yet.
Her mother could get the sexy witch outfit.
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>>53017

Hmn, I tried to make them as small as possible without making her flat. I found that the xianxia mod has a bunch more sprites I can use to edit.

>>53019
Well, I'll make sure to include them when I make Dolores and her mom.
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>>52973
>respectable overhaul of the poor item management/shop system
My free time has been lacking, but here is something from that which I've not displayed yet. Seeing people talk about my work does help to motivate, though.
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(The friend who pointed these out to me also said that they had their tease mastery maxed to 5 the first time they teased. I don't know what that's about but I really don't want to struggle through trying to get them to send me their save)
>>52872
>There are Telly lewds beyond the Ceraph rp?
>Posts more ceraph rp.
>>52874
>and as you turn your back on the runs
Apart from that, s'good.
>>52911
https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod/-/blob/master/classes/classes/Scenes/Seasonal/XmasSnowAngel.as
It was supposedly an xmas thing, but that's just comments and I don't see a call for the date.
>>53028
i am begging
Alright, reading over the 3rd file

>You nod, understanding how it'd be difficult to hike up a mountain while facing various monsters [b:and] trying to protect another person to boot.
Why do you repeat yourself here? Would be better to instead simply say "You nod, able to imagine her plight in the mountains vividly." or something similar.

>drain your blood while you were sleeping
Well, that probably is a dream for some folk. But use "while you slept" instead.
>Nodding, you agree she should discuss this with Fran and understand her wanting to reflect on it before agreeing.
Again, you're repeating yourself. Maybe "Nodding, you agree on giving time to the vampire sisters to mull over your offer." instead. Though it also seems like pure regurgitating of what Emily said...
>request she let you in
"ask" instead
>squeezed in a tight hug
"by" instead of "in" should make it more natural
>devastated by the idea she might never see you again.
Again, retelling the same thing. People aren't that stupid... probably. "devastated by the possible future." instead, maybe?
>relaying that Emily wanted to think about it and also wanted to talk to her first.
Maybe say instead "saying that Emily wanted to talk to her first." Since she doesn't need to know the older sister is on the fence. Probably.

>[say: [name]?] she uncertainly mutters.
could do the first letter stutter here, to add the uncertainty effect. No clue how that's coded though
>drink your blood as you slept?
"while", not "as"
>supposing you understand Emily wanting to think about it first
"supposing" isn't meant to be used in this context, I believe. maybe use "understanding Emily's caution" instead of the pulled-out reference

>wrapping her arms snugly around your waist and sweetly smiles
"smiling sweetly in response" would be better.
>tripping in her hast
missed an 'e'


Goin on the sister checkup

>been awhile
"a while"

>relaxing sensation your digits running through her blonde locks provides
"provide" instead
>as silky and soft as its look
"as it looks"

>R-Really, you promise?
replace the comma here with a question mark
>you'll do your best to find Emily and won't rat her out either.
"won't snitch on her either." instead.
>requesting to know where Fran's old home was in the forest,
"Asking Fran about where their old home in the forest was". Drop the comma too.


Cuddlefest stuff

>She hesitantly questions your offer
Why? Feels kind of stupid to me. Just drop this part.
>eagerly starting to straighten out the sheets
"eagerly straightening out the sheets"
>stroke her middle back
drop the "middle"
>you slept at least alright
drop the "at least"
>you state it was your pleasure
"say" instead of "state"
>Clearing away your groggy vision
Is that an actual thing?

>you declare that you wish to kiss her
"say" instead of "declare"
>tongue kiss
I think this should be connected with a dash?

>if (pc deck big)
Hm, yes, champion has a nice, large wooden deck.
>fail to completely cover your massive member, though the soft fabric's sensation making it twitch in anticipation.
Broke it apart to reveal the resulting sentence; it doesn't work. Need to rewrite this, either adding another if on "makes" and "making"
>Your sense your
"You sense your"
>her warmth hand
"warm"
>Your seeds charge up
"seed charges"
>>53042
Champion goes feeding
Might want to add a comment, saying that if a snake is found immediately, add an hour, if the PC fought with the chameleon - two. Don't have them waste 3 hours on fighting
>is a taxing task to say the least
comma after "task"

>//Minoblood; requires pc have minotaur blood; first time; 
probably should clarify "first time for Fran drinking Mino blood"
>loudly gulping down the crimson fluid its body contains. You see some leftover crimson fluid
just use "blood" in the second sentence
>some blood from the minotaur
"a minotaur", since those are a dime a dozen there
>[b: pop]
I believe sound effects are in italic, not bold
>She first gives
Drop the "first".
>you elect to ask
just "you ask"
>//minoblood; second time;
again, clarify with "Fran has drunk mino blood already"

>//yours; first time;
again, clarify that it's the 1st time drinking the champion's blood, not the 1st time this option is chosen
>Curious, you request an explanation.
"Curious, you ask why"
>//if blood and pc hasn't kissed her yet;
need to decide approximately how much HP champion would lose. I would suggest 20, or 10% of max HP as a minimum, dropping them to 1 when they don't have enough blood
>I really enjoy how it tasted last time
"enjoyed"


>//Bath; maybe let this raise the pc's strength slightly; 
Uhh... no? That just makes absolutely no sense. Maybe a temporary Toughness boost at most.
>you just sought to take one
"wanted", not "sought"
>She seems relieved to learn you don't believe she stinks
No need to reiterate stuff; leave only "She seems relieved" from this

>sweat you built up from the bog
"in the bog" instead
>You finishing drying off
"finish"
>relaying to the girl
"telling the girl"

>likely rising herself off
"rinsing", not "rising"

>That's naughty [if (did before) {and it'll get the bath water dirty too}.]
probably need to pull that full stop outside the brackets

>itty-bitty clit
Honestly, I'm surprised you didn't go full "itty bitty clitty" here. Maybe add that for silly mode?
>you skillfully massage it and listen to Fran lustful whine
either "lustfully whine" or "Fran's lustful whines"
>lewd noises emanate from her mouth above and below
in this context, "mouths" would make more sense
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>>53042
>Why do you repeat yourself here?
I just thought it sounded good at the time.
>Though it also seems like pure regurgitating of what Emily said...
Maybe I should drop the sentence. Maybe just combing the first and last sentence like this: "You nod and turn to leave, but feel Emily gently grab your hand."
>"by" instead of "in" should make it more natural
"Upon entering, you're instantly hugged by the room's only other occupant." how about this?
>Again, retelling the same thing. People aren't that stupid... probably. "devastated by the possible future." instead, maybe?
Will this work? "She sobs and sniffles even more, appearing devastated over the matter." 
>could do the first letter stutter here, to add the uncertainty effect. No clue how that's coded though
Might just be "[n-name]," but i'm sure the coders can figure out how to do it.
>Is that an actual thing?
Yes. At least, that's what I think having blurry vision when you first wake up is.
>I think this should be connected with a dash?
I'm not sure, but I guess we'll do it for now.
>Hm, yes, champion has a nice, large wooden deck.
A fine addition to our cabin.

Now for the next chunk.
Is there some kind of reference file for CoCEd to use on /hgg/ mod's save files? I know there's a revamp ref, but that doesn't quite cover dryad transformations, for instance.
>>53043
>I believe sound effects are in italic, not bold
But aren't loud noises meant to be bolded? I'm going to leave it for now.
>need to decide approximately how much HP champion would lose. I would suggest 20, or 10% of max HP as a minimum, dropping them to 1 when they don't have enough blood
I'm just going to let who ever codes it in decide how much damage is taken from blood drinking.
>Uhh... no? That just makes absolutely no sense. Maybe a temporary Toughness boost at most.
It's a lot of work to move a wooden tub and the water buckets to fill it.
>Honestly, I'm surprised you didn't go full "itty bitty clitty" here. Maybe add that for silly mode?
I've added that now.
>in this context, "mouths" would make more sense
I kind of just want to change it to this: "with lewd noises emanating from both her mouth and the spot hidden between her thighs."

Good work on getting through this part.
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Just went through the proofreading notes, and they're fairly good, although some parts feel like nitpicking.
Couple of stuff I particularly felt like nitpicking about myself.

>>52564
>>52565
>>the old gate has no intentions of doing its job
>"Intentions" here should be singular, not plural
Pretty sure "intentions" is plural by default in these sort of contexts.
>>staircase lined with a red carpet
>"lined" would mean it is covered on its sides n whatnot; you probably mean "covered" instead.
Fairly sure "lined" is an appropriate descriptor in this context, referring to the sort of staircases where carpets are draped across the middle.
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>>53046
Fine, I smirked.
How difficult is it to write a whole new encounter? 
I'm really tempted to make a (female) pigmen/pig-orc encounter.
>>53054
Depends on what you want to do with the encounter. Is it an enemy? You don't need too much: pc encountering them, lines for fighting and attacks (like them teasing the pc), win/loss scenes for fem, male, and genderless pcs, and maybe something else i'm forgetting. 
You can just look at imps or other in game enemies for an example on what to do.
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>>53054
Depends. Do you intend them to be nothing more than enemies? That's an initial encounter, repeat encounters, a codex entry, a paragraph for appearance, custom fight blurbs where applicable, any new items they may drop, one or two sex scenes for dicks and pussies each, and another one each for getting raped.
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>>53055
>>53056
Alright, might be worth taking a stab at.
I'm thinking abut making it an enemy, but just making an event where you stumble upon a pig-orc tribe could work as well. I feel like the sex scenes would be the think that takes up the most, I need to make 6 just to get started. Dick/pussy/genderless and both win/loss.

Any recommendations or things you guys like to see?
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>>53058
It's not really restricted to pigs, but I'm always down for facefucks/cock worship (in terms of player dominating)
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>>53059
Cock worship would probably fit perfectly with what I already had planed. So yeah, probably gonna add that.
>>53042
>"You nod and turn to leave, but feel Emily gently grab your hand."
Better not, that gives off the impression the champion is in a rush to leave or something.
>"Upon entering, you're instantly hugged by the room's only other occupant."
>"She sobs and sniffles even more, appearing devastated over the matter."
Yeah, these sound good

>>53049
>It's a lot of work to move a wooden tub and the water buckets to fill it.
Okay, yeah, now I see it.
>"with lewd noises emanating from both her mouth and the spot hidden between her thighs."
I suppose that's fine as well. Might at least stop some idiots from wondering why she has two mouths.

As for you, >>53050 anon:
>Pretty sure "intentions" is plural by default
Merriam-Webster says otherwise: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/have%20no%20intention%20of

>Fairly sure "lined" is an appropriate descriptor in this context
Although I'm not quite as certain about this, asking Merriam-Webster once more https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/line, the closest thing we get (from the noun version) is definition 3a, which, while close, I doubt is accurate:
>something (such as a ridge or seam) that is distinct, elongated, and narrow
>>growth lines in a tree trunk
The verb(2) definitions 1 and 2 completely discount this idea:
>to cover the inner surface of
>to put something in the inside of : fill
Definition 3 that uses "lining" literally just refers to definition 1 here.
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>>53054
Do keep in mind That we have pig people already existing (Lottie)
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>>53063
I completely forgot that was even a character. Fuck.
Either I'm gonna have to work around that or pick something else.
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>>53062
>Better not, that gives off the impression the champion is in a rush to leave or something.
How about this instead then? "You nod and tell her that's a good idea. As you turn to leave, you feel Emily gently grab your hand."
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>>53064
Eh. She doesn't really have a background to begin with. Could always be a "civilised vs wild" thing
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>>53066
It would be a boar then tho
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>>53066
I guess, but then I probably would have to spend some times explaining that, not very fitting for a enemy. Though I'm leaning slightly more towards doing a non-combat encounter instead. It gives me a few more options regardless.
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>>53068
He did say pig-orc too, afterall
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>>53069
If it's a case of not wanting the character limited by established stuff from Lottie, it's worth noting that pigs are notorious for how rapidly they can regress in the wild.
A pig that escapes irl will, in about a month, revert back into full on wild animal mode, and are generally unsuitable for being kept domestically even if recaptured.
For your purposes, there can be a SHARP line between how city pigs and tribal pigs or whatever act.
Hell, give yourself, and other writers wiggle room and say it affects some more than others.
>>53071
we have pig and we have orc
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>>53074
We have orc?
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>>53075
Oh, right. Rogar. Not a character I think about too much.
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>>53076
That's good.
He's all dirt, grime, sweat, pits, anus smell fetish garbage. Standard gay writing
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you start the nephila transformation with the eel parasites from the bog right? I haven't played this in a while so I don't know if I'm remembering this right
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>>53083
That should be the case. The worms definitely don't do that
>>53065
Okay, rechecking the edited vamp3 file now

>[say: This is a lot to consider,] Emily tells you,
Should've ended this part with a full stop, since it's a fully-fledged sentence. No need to pull in the next speech part.
>She asks, [say: C-Can we?
could've left the "hesitantly" here

Thankfully, only these two edits need to be undone.
>>53083
No, it starts with the nephila parasites.
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>>53088
Not him, but I'm curious where you get those then.
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>>53089
I believe there were infected chameleons in the bog, and you needed to lose to them. Think you needed a pussy for that too.
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>>53089
Losing to nephila slimes.
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>>53090
Those are eels.
>>53091
yup gotta lose to nephila slimes. Though I do remember seeing a changelog stating nephila content was removed or at least made impossible to start? Don't super remember though. IIRC there were a lot of plans for it with a whole storyline written out for going to the nephila coven. But believe the coven was the furthest content that was written.
>>53093
I haven't seen anything stating that they were removed.
>>53091
you could find them in the mountains, wasn't it?
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>>53093
They weren't removed entirely, you just have to go through the debug menu to enable them.
>>53093
>>53095
Nephila content existing as it currently does is one of the many reasons why proofreading and code review became as important as they are now. Nephila content was coded and written by a single person who just submitted a PR one day that was accepted as is with the promise of it getting finished down the line. Of course, the quality was terrible and it was really buggy and also inconsistent with the rest of the game in many regards, but it was just left like that with no further additions or intent to finish it.

So, eventually, the decisions was made to move it to being disabled by default through the debug menu because it's that bad but still it was original to this mod or whatever reasons there were.
>>53075
>>53076
 Actually, there's also the orcs in Shouldra's (the ghost girl's) memories, but they don't exist in the game. Could look them over for some additional appearance or speech patterns
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>>53102
Have you actually read the scenes? Is it really better to make orcs feeder/inflation fetishists instead of Ro'gar-esque?
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>>53106
>Is it really better to make orcs feeder/inflation fetishists instead of Ro'gar-esque?
I haven't seen the Rogar scenes, but guessing from what was said by >>53079 - yes.
Plus, they mainly fed her their cum and potions and whatnot to corrupt her and break her mind. So yes - I'd prefer corruptors and mind-breakers instead of filth-lovers (even though there are already the demons for that)
>>53054
After doing some writing I think I'm gonna go with tribal hog girls. I don't think coc got anything like that in it.
One thing I'm not sure about is if I should just make them talk like normal or have them talk in a "simple/tribal" manner. Basically if they talk like "hey, you want to fuck?" or "Want fakka-fakka?". The second one feel like it would be more fun to write but might be a bit annoying to read.
>>53108
Only do the second if you're intentionally going for comedy as a primary element.
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>>53109
I was planning on it being very light hearted, but not full on comedic. I mean, the main focus is the lewd parts after all.
The basic idea is that you stumble on a hog tribe with the chieftain being able to speak normally while everyone else is very primal and doesn't care about much beyond fucking, fighting and feasting. Possibly all at the same time.
Also a way to scratch my impregnation fetish by making it so that they have a thing where "the strong breed the weak" so if you can beat one of them you get to knock them up.
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>>53108
Why not a "Want fuck?" compromise?
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>>53111
Sure, but that's just a slightly toned down version of the second option, which might just be better in general but doesn't solve the issue of some people being annoyed at it.
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>>53112
slap it that kind of silly dialog on silly mode and call it a day. that's what it is for
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>>53112
Making something that everyone kinda sorta likes is a good way to touhou yourself. I still think making them talk like the bakery minotaur is better than nothing. The "Yoo stinkin yumie we iz gonna fakka fakka til the sun cum over the hill" stuff can still be put in Silly Mode
Does Mystic Learnings, the perk you get from one of the books in the Old Manor, actually do anything? It says it lets you learn stronger magic, but I've been everywhere and done just about everything other than beat some level 30 bosses and explore the crag, and I sure haven't seen any sources for stronger spells. Is it just an unlisted spellpower boost?
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>>53123
It's very much listed.
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>>53125
Oh, I've been looking in the perk menu for that information.
Is there any trick to surviving cuddling with the Dullahan or is that absolute? Also, is it possible to  goad Marielle into putting up with a penis on a futa? Bitch won't even kiss me with her hot dead mouth.
>>53131
The creator is a hateful lezbo you have to dykebreak the creator first.
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>>53131
iirc you can survive with very high toughness and libido but she vanishes afterward so there's no reason to do this beyond seeing a rare scene
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>>53133
Shame. I could egg off the dick temporarily, but it's kind of a pain.
>>53134
Must be the libido fucking me then, since I've tried to keep that low. Well if she's gone afterwards I guess I shouldn't try and see it. That said, who wants this Abyssal Shard anyway?
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>>53136
Telly
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>>53131
>is it possible
No. Quit being a disgusting freak of magic-enabled greed and vanity.
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>>53137
Well that was random.
>>53138
Scene access is king.
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>>53139
Okay now perform the ritual the necromancer did with it
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>>53140
That's neat. Is it possible to actually plink it to death or no?
>>51661 (OP) 
How do you get terrestrial fire magic?
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>>53142
I believe it was constantly subbing to Akbal in the dark forest. You can't deny or fight him once, otherwise no demon kitty boons for you
>>53144
Wrong terrestrial fire.
>>53116
I'm kind of tempted to go full silly mode and just make them talk like 40k orks.
>>53144
>dark forest
that's not its NAAAAAME
HELLOOOO-OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>53131
>Is there any trick to surviving cuddling with the Dullahan or is that absolute?
You can but she vanishes. Just complete her questline and you can have some nice dream/pocket dimension(?) sex with her.
> is it possible to  goad Marielle into putting up with a penis on a futa
No, it's not possible to make Marielle willingly take dick regardless of appearance. You can force it in her by bathing with her but eventually she'll stop letting you because the creator is a faggot.
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>>53161
Getting her scythe isn't the end of her questline?
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So how do you get rid of that last eel parasite when you're down to one? I could offload the rest into a valkyrie but this one won't fuck off that way.
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>>53110
Can we have the babies added to the daughteru collection at camp instead of not even being a number on the statistics?
A blurb about what they're doing at camp, possibly some interactions like you can some other generic kids.
Call it founding a new tribe to the other pigs.
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>>53182
Like Phylla?
>>53182
I'd love to do that, but that would also be way down the road.
>>53144
If you don't deny and fight him every time, I disrespect you too much to tell you how to get the other 14 spells. 
Fag
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>>53189
What's an ugly dyke got to do with this?
>>53142
Beat Akbal at the end of his quest for Fera. The real question is how you unlock that last spell at Mastery 5.
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>>53198
Having a high int lets you see the combo. Cast inflame or plate, then molten plate, quake, scorch, then terra star, then you get supernova. It takes 3 turns to charge and instantly defeats you and does massive damage to enemy so you lose if it doesn't also defeat them.
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>>53201
>Having a high int lets you see the combo
It doesn't, getting the achievement does.
>Cast inflame or plate, then molten plate, quake, scorch
To be clear, you need inflame and plate (molten plate), and the order doesn't matter, you simply need every ongoing effect going at once.
>>53202
>To be clear, you need inflame and plate
Which you said, but I misread because I'm blind.
>>53202
You're right about the achievement, which is defeating an higher level enemy with supernova, revealing the combo. You do need enough str, int, and spellmod to even see the terra star spell though.
I put them in that order because quake and scorch have limited duration but molten plate doesn't.
>>53201
>>53202
I managed to get Terra Star but for some reason I didn't think to check my spell list again after casting it. Shame it's still not enough to nuke this fucking golem.
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>>53205
To clarify, yes, I did get Supernova, thank you.
>>53205
>golem ever being hard to nuke
He just has spell resistance. The real one-shot tech would be the novaing the giant desert scorpion.
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>>53211
Already killed him with Terra Cores before I got around to figuring out the whole Star/Nova thing, sadly.
CoC2 is fuckin' 10 bucks on steam? Jesus
>>53198
So then do you have to initiate a sexual relationship with him first?
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>>53215
Why would you?
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>>53216
Anon associates beating a person with having a sexual relationship. 
It's actually a very tragic admission for how normal it is to him. I hope that anon finds his way out of that relationship that normalized this way of thinking.
>>53216
What prerequisites do you need then for this quest line?
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>>53218
Meet Akbal. Meet Fera for the first time. Find her for the second time, try to leave the glade. She'll tell you what to do.
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>>53220
Meeting Akbal first isn't required, but it's very unlikely that you get to that point without running into him.
It also requires level 15+ or day 90+ (unless you're encountering Fera again after falling for her trap, in which case it's only level 12+/day 72+).
Alright, the quest for Emily starts here! Interrogating the bog inhabitants first.

>wading into some waist high water
"wading through some waist-high water"
>Aside from you though; there have been a lot more imps
replace the semicolon with a comma
>You merely ignore the furious look
drop the "merely"

>so you simply start to apply pressure
think you could drop the "simply"
>even if I wanted too
"to", not "too"

>boldly stride on through the bog
would be a bit better to drop "on" here, imo
>mother nature is trying to attack you it seems.
comma after "you"
>wading into some waist high water
here "into" makes sense, but "waist-high" is still required
>What is alarming however, is what you end up finding.
Sentence might need to be reworded to drop "however", but if not, a "there" should definitely be shoved at the end
>standing around the entry way
"entryway"


Exploring the demon mansion

>built from similar gray-stone
dash not required here.
>Some moss clings to the one of the walls
drop the first "the"
>and to also keep you steady too
"and to keep you steady as well"
>[if (pc removed grate){a rusted grate}|{a wide opening}]
>[if (pc removed grate){remove the grate}|{enter in through the hole}]
should probably switch the displayed texts around, since in an if the first part would be displayed if the statement is true. Basically, if champion has already removed the grate, they would find the grate still blocking their way.
>prepared for the revolting stink
"stench", not "stink"

>//Room 5b; corpse disposal;
I had fully expected this to be a toilet, but nice job on not taking the obvious.
>You could likely remove the it
drop "the"
>[North] [West] [South] [East]
Why give options to west and south? As far as I see from the map, there should only be a [north] and [upstairs] option, no?

>//Room 12b;
Okay, I am officially lost here. The map file doesn't make it any clearer where this is supposed to be located. Cuz, like, 12 is succubi room that's on floor 2, but we're supposed to be in room 5b, or at least near it? In any case, the provided bog map proves useless. I'll just make a new one from the text's contextual clues
>It's heavy as you strain [if (pc str < 50){even your powerful}] muscles in an attempt to push it open.
"It's heavy, [if (pc str > 50){even your powerful}|{your}] muscles straining to push it open."
>Upon forcing it
missed "open"
>find the key in here or at least discover
comma before "or"
For the normal 12b scene, you might need a requirement to have the key, not use it. As for as I remember, all doors were locked if champion doesn't have the key, but they unlock when champion goes the way the door is when they do. For that, you might want to say where the door is located (preferably using the compass directions)
>There is a satisfying [b:click]
>pull on the door and find it opening with a [i:screech]
I would think the "click" being more silent, while the "screech" loud.

>They're so full the blood
comma after "full"
>It's heavy as you grip it by both the leather handle that surrounds it and the other one sticking out the back.
"Grabbing it by both of its leather handles, one hand above the square box, while the other at its back, you find it is heavy." Or something of that nature
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>>53233
The Definitely-not-Emily interactions

>Holding it just out of her reach, you take the moment to see she has a face as cute as any other little girl from back home. Although, it is covered in a few scars here and there.
These should be somehow merged and re-split.
>Two little horns also part her bangs, sticking out from her forehead.
"Two little horns are sticking out from her forehead, parting her bangs."
>She nods, finally pulling her hand from between her thighs and sits over your crotch.

"She nods, finally pulling her hand from between her thighs, moving her hips to hover over your crotch."
>The girl, turns out to be
drop the comma
>Pleasureful jolts
"Jolts of pleasure" instead
>You squeeze the girl's hips harder, forcing your hips upwards
"forcing your own upwards"
>Her insides tighten and as she pants
drop the "and"
>throbbing, [if (pc has balls){ as your [balls] tingle}],
move a comma into the if result
>Her hands firmly grab your cheeks, spreading your ass enough
You used [ass] in the previous sentence, which could possibly include some form of "ass" in the description, so use "spreading them apart enough"

>fail to find isn't anything else
drop "isn't"

>This twisted child stands at roughly the same size as some ten-year-old girls from back home
Pretty sure in combat scenes you need to give specific height measurements
>you can faintly even see her ribs
drop the "even"
>tires to heft
"tries" instead
>brushing against [if (pc has legs){your [leg]}|{lower body}]
"brushing against your [if (pc has legs){[leg]}|{lower body}]"
>You [if (pc armed) {raise your [weapon] again}|{ready your fists}]. Staring down the girl as she gets back to her feet too.
replace the full stop with a comma

>stare up at the bodies dangling from the ceiling and the loud buzzing continues to impair your hearing
", the loud buzzing continuing"
>You find yourself opening your eyes
use this as a separate sentence
>Sweat trickles drips down your brow
use either "trickles" or "drips"
>[i:she]
since you're going for horror here, it would make a bit more sense for this to be in bold, no?

>//PC selects a teddy bear in the pack; 
...dude. Really? A teddy gonna be Deus ex Machina?

>appreciating the humid air on your now exposed [skin]
yes, appreciate the heavy air of evaporated water from blood and whatever else
>Getting down next to the girl, you find she doesn't resist you rolling her onto her back.
I can understand this, but still - it's a bit convoluted.
>sending pleasureful jolts coursing to your brain
again, "jolts of pleasure". drop "coursing" here too
>feeling your finally jizz work up your shaft
"jizz finally work up"
>With one last final thrust
either "last" or "final", not both
>girl immature womb
"girl's"

>That isn't a [say:no] however
italic would be better, no?
>Letting her Popping nipple pop free
uuuh... drop "Popping"
>she adorable gasps
"adorably"
>Her honey drenches your fingers as well as her inner thighs so that they glisten.
"Her honey drenches your fingers as well as her inner thighs, making them glisten"
>preform
"perform"
>each gasping to catch your respective breath
"breaths"

>unhesitatingly spreads her legs
while this is correct (which is surprising), "spreads her legs without hesitation" reads better, imo
>even already a tad damp
"even" or "already"
>Surely you can fit inside her without a problem, that's what your lust addled mind is telling you, at least.
", or that's what your lust-addled mind"
>As you're her gentle grasp
missed "in" here
>buying more and more of your length
champion getting some fleshy real estate, huh?
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>>53234
Leaving the slaughterhouse to look at a different slaughterhouse.

>clad in only raggedy loincloths
"clad only in raggedy loincloths"
>not wasting anytime
"any time"
>sends the birds flying
drop "the"
>last sounds you ever hear is that of the two imps' twisted laughter
need to switch "sounds" to singular, or "is" to plural
>Ignoring his cries
damn, you're brutal here.

>pleasure racked brain
"pleasure-racked"
>your precum dripping dick
"precum-dripping"
>pearly white cum
"pearly-white"
>circling [clit]
should add "your", but it would make stuff repeat
>for a split second
"split-second"
>an almost back breaking angle
"back-breaking"

>You are fighting multiple imp horde: 
So several imp hordes, like the ones from Zetaz's cave? If that's the case, then switch the "horde" to plural.
>each one appearing nearly identical based on the vile grins they wear
Why would their grins make them identical? If you mean their grins are identical, then "each one displaying a nearly identical grin on their vile faces" or something of that nature.
>Each of the little demons wield a weapon
"wields". Would suggest replacing the comma after this with a colon, since you're listing the items they carry
>Some are already even reaching
drop the "already" here

>imps combined might
"imps'", since plural possessive
>excited him further even
"even further"
>the chameleon-girl who are in the same boat
"chameleon-girls", since there are 2 of them
>Your maleness soon vanishes too,
there's the possibility of the champion being sexless; might want to add a check to see if they have a dick first
>and new cunt
missed an "a"

>one that just honestly begs
think you should drop "honestly" here
>drop onto the mud earth
"muddy"
>one happens to satisfyingly [b:click]
I would think a lock's "click" is more silent than loud
>//Free; pc has thief background; 
This is probably the first time I've seen a background choice impacting a scene
>lick your lips when you hear them wonderfully [b:click]
okay, tumblers are definitely silent
Reading over all of this, you could probably compress this together, reducing the reuse of chameleon-girl reactions
Their sex scenes need more content though - people might still want the blue chameleon to eat them out if they have a dick, or, for instance, eat out the pregnant brown one without a cock. Or, just combine them into one choice, directing the scene depending on the champion's genitals. 
>That thought is quickly pushed aside by you still groping her juicy ass
If you insist on wording it this way, then "continuing to grope" would make more sense
>you humping into the deep crevice
"hump into"
>races up your shaft and finally paint
"paints"
>gripping your arms
when the champion is leaning over to display their ass, it would make more sense to grip their knees. while showing off their pussy, they could instead hold onto the stocks.
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>>53235
Finally entering the fortress proper. Explorin the left wing now

>light they provide since the spacious chamber
comma before "since"
>some do contain a few
drop the "do"
>drops of some darker liquids
drop the "some" here
>rusty stove while an open fireplace
comma before "while"

>ashen-gray, and curved black horns
drop the comma here
>she stands at around the average height for women back home who of marrying age.
Again, pretty sure these should be accurate measurements
>waist length hair
"waist-length"
>brandish her meat cleaver
"brandishing"
>Your efforts are for not however
"Your efforts are moot however"
>upon the middle of your back
just "on your back"
>Now just where do you think you're trying to go?
comma after "now", or italicize "where"
>[b:pretty please]
italicize instead
>shown you any mercy; you're not like them
replace the semicolon with a comma
>You ask if she understands, the tainted nervously nodding in response.
"Asking if she understands, you get nervous nodding in response."
>struggle to get back on her feet
drop "to get"
>Her body lifeless lays still
"lifeless body"
>nostalgic tasting fluid
this feels weird. maybe drop "tasting"?
>You [if (pc has pussy) {grind your cunny against her lips}|{ass against her}]
pull out "grind" from the if
>dances around [if (pc has pussy) {[clit]}|{pucker}]
missed "your"
>happily tasing every inch
the demon has electric powers?

>The stench coming from it is nauseating to put it mildly!
"The stench coming from it is, to put it mildly, nauseating!", or just put a comma after "nauseating"

>Unlike other rooms
missed "the"
>All things considered; you'd say
replace the semicolon with a comma

>the imps didn't do much in here
"don't" instead of "didn't"
>source of the noise are countless imps
"is" not "are"
>back away from the door to the next room
just "back away from the door"
>The demon horde lick their lips
"The horde of demons" instead
>you worry whether enough there will be enough
the first "enough" is unneeded
>let a low groan
missed an "out"
>more imps begin gripping their stomach
"stomachs"

>Your work here is not done yet however, and you quickly collect yourself as you prepare to continue searching through this old fortress.
feels too long for some reason
>sensing the imp callously bury himself deep inside your depths and the demon zealously pounds into your body.
"bury himself deep inside your depths before zealously pounding"
>A loud smacking
drop the "a"
>pleasure drunk expression
"pleasure-drunk"
>A groan unwillingly escaping your throat
"escapes"
>[if (pc vag virgin){just broken in}] backdoor
check anal virginity instead
>growing impatient since they take
comma before "since"
>Unlike that last, he doesn't take his time at all. He pounds away at a zealous pace.
combine these
>the imp's pelvis pounds
since the champion is laying on their back, the imp's sack should batter their nose instead, no?
>The dick in your mouth and [pussyorass]
"dicks"
>smelly dick
replace this with a "corrupt cock", since, you already used "dick" earlier.
>every hole you have gets stuffed
"getting stuffed"
>meattoilet
"meat-toilet"
>blackout
"black out"

>horizontality
"horizontally"
>while others had their shafts broken in two
comma before "while" n "have had"
>you see the all weapons
"that" instead of "the"
>look like they'd merely shatter
drop "merely"
>back most wall
"back-most"
>eyelevel with the lock
"eye-level"
>you closely until a satisfying [b:click]
missed a "listen", and change the "click" to italic
>still throbbing wrist
"still-throbbing"
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>>53236
going right from the entrance

>//Confess; only an option if Emily affection 100 => & pc didn't embrace Emily in part 3;
really should be an additional option for champion to affirm their feelings again
>would just be a memory
"would be just a memory"
>keep your promise, I mean it!
replace the comma with an exclamation mark
>making any moving around hard
"making any movement hard"
>Fran and me have decided
"had decided"
>live with you; it's important
replace the semicolon with comma
>monstrous wings, and horns
drop the comma here
>cast some weird spell
capitalize
>Ignoring the imps
"besides", not "ignoring"
>into the chair in there
"into a chair there"
>She's had a few fox tails
"she has"

>satisfying [b:click]
once more - clicking is silent, not thunderous
>chained up vampire girl
"chained-up"
>[My back]
should really be "your back" instead
>You place one under her legs
lost a "hand"
>and given how strong you are
drop the "given", since you already used it
>You try reassuring Emily
"You reassure Emily"
>ran into some trouble but [name] came saved me.
"ran into some trouble, but [name] came and saved me."
>ger elder sister
"her"

>middle of the room, is a wooden chair
drop the comma
>chains hanging off it securely bolted
comma before "securely"


Finally exploring the 2nd floor now

>straw stuffed bed
"straw-stuffed"
>blankets are messily bunched up
"bunched-up"
>any more room in your pack and place
"pack, so you place"

>and a mortar and pestle too
"alongside a mortar and pestle"
>Smokes rises up
"smoke"
>fair skinned cat-boy
"fair-skinned"
>I heard rumors the next generation of demon soldiers did manage to escape too however, and that they also had some rather
"soldiers managed to escape, and"
>hardly seems like you'd fit in
"seem"
>ask who [b:he] is
should be italic
>[b:Theo the great]
snrk. But also capitalize the "great"
>were wasted there and,
comma before "and"
>preforming
"performing"
>interesting recently and I was tasked
comma before "and"
>try dissecting it or at least some amputation
",or at least attempt amputation"
>few fingers nails
"fingernails"
>Unlike you perhaps
enclose "perhaps" in commas

>roughly as tall as some boys in their late teens were back in Ingram
once more - precise measurements
>white horns poking out
weren't they described as gray when entering the room?
"black cat-ears"
>wearing baggy gray robe
lost an "a"
>Suffer you wretch!
comma after "suffer"
>//Keys; PC found Emily in the cells;
should also include having asked where Emily is
>you comment he's not that impressive.
maybe add an if, checking if he insulted the champion's size here. for instance, "''that impressive [if (pc dick size => 12) either]."
>pull raise his rounded ass
use "pull" or "raise", not both
>tail thump into you
"thumps"
>humping him
more correct would be to say "hotdogging him"
>your precum leaking from your tip
drop the first "your"
>barbs on the his dick
drop the "the" here
>shocks go racing throughout
drop "go"
>you rocking your hips faster
"rock"
>hard cat cock
"cat-cock"
>begin to pinching your nipples
drop "to" here
>ignore his pleases
"pleas"

>[b:*click*]
remove the asterisks, sine you're already bolding this
>//Room 13; upper hallway;
>[South] [East]
As far as my hand-drawn map can tell, the "[south]" here should be replaced with "[north]" instead
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>>53237
Meeting up with the BBEG of the fortress

>with a gold trim and matching dragon emblazoned
"trims" and "dragons"
>twin broad swords
"broadswords"
>comfy looking armchair
"comfy-looking"
>she looks to be an average height for a woman in her early twenties
since we're not in combat, I guess this can slide. still should replace "an" with "of" 
>And you are who exactly?
comma before "exactly"
>a soon to be corpse
"soon-to-be"
>effortlessly she gives the conjured blade
"effortlessly giving the conjured blade"
>Scoff all you like, mortal,
split this away into its own sentence
>payed
"paid"
>Well too bad!
comma after "well"

>Those same color scales
This is wrong, but I can't quite put my finger on why
>soft looking ass
"soft-looking"
>She opens mouth wide
missed a "her" here
>electrical charge that cackles loudly
"crackles", not "cackles"
>most mighty demons
"''mightiest of demons"
>slowly creates two black balls of pure lust
the champion probably doesn't know what these are. plus, this is a charge-up stage, so instead say "creates two small balls of dark energy that slowly grow in size"
>She takes the lust orbs she's created
again, champion probably doesn't know what they are; instead say "the dark energy orbs" or something
>Here's your present you fuckhead!
comma before "you"
>And hurls the massive lust ball
", before hurling the massive ball of energy"
>[b: Why the fuck did you just dodge it!? You're supposed to get hit by it you fool!]
bold only the "fuck" and maybe "hit", not the entire sentence. also, comma before "you fool"
>the black lust orb
again, champion probably doesn't know what it is, so reword it
>Should the pc's blinds and stuns always succeed during this attack?
def no. at most, increase the attack chance during this

>her foot long dragon cock
"foot-long"
>Seeing the demon now lies dead
"Seeing the demon lie dead"
>[Fuck her] .tooltip = Pound her from behind.
>[Service] .tooltip = Have her service you.
kinda disappointed there isn't a "[Ride her]" scene option here
>you brush against it along her toned middle
drop "against"
>her naughty juice makes
"juices make"
>useless dragon cock firing off
"fires"
>force your growing [knot] past her pussy lips and she looks over her shoulder at you, wincing as it swells up fully inside her.
since you've made the scene using both of the champion's cocks, you need to add a check to see which hole (or if both) get the knot
>seed spills from
need a "her" after this
>Pushing on woman's flat chest
missed a "the"
>quickly buries her dexterous tongue
"bury"
>You practically bouncing
I would add "begin" before "practically" 
>although, she does lick her lips again too.
drop the comma and the ending "too"
>Hopefully, one of them will end up unlocking Emily's cell!
should first check if player has found/knows where Emily is located
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>>53238
And here's the bs fortress map I have made, since the ASCII file bs you gave is not representative, like, at all.

As for what tile represents what room (in the order of their appearance in the file):
1b-4b: Drainage tunnels in the basement level
5b-13b: corpse disposal rooms on the basement level that are connected god knows how; literally every one of them has the full North, South, East West movement functionality.

1: Front entrance; fight with 2 guard imps
2: courtyard; stockaded chameleons, possible 3 imp horde fight
3: main/entrance hall of fortress
4: mess hall; fight with cook demon
16: larder of the mess hall; champion can find rat poison here
9: barracks; possible 3 imp horde fight
10: imp armory; champion can find an axe
5: hallway;
6: prison cells, champion finds Emily here
7: torture chamber; has a downstairs option that leads to the disposal rooms
8: stairway up to the 2nd floor

11: stairway down to the 1st floor
12: Succubi's room; I'm guessing the cook's bedroom?
14: Researcher's room; corrupt catboi mage's room
13: hallway; blocks off the way to the boss battle
15: commander's quarters
>>53169
It technically is but there's a bonus scene. Find Circe in the Volcanic Crag to unlock it.
Where do you find Hard Biscuits? I haven't see anything drop it.
>>53244
Did you talk to the Gingerbread Man in the desert yet?
>>53233
>Sentence might need to be reworded to drop "however", but if not, a "there" should definitely be shoved at the end
I think just dropping the sentence should be fine.
>I had fully expected this to be a toilet, but nice job on not taking the obvious.
Might've been better to do that since we have the grossness toggle now.
>Why give options to west and south? As far as I see from the map, there should only be a [north] and [upstairs] option, no?
I had put all the options there since they show up in game even when you can't go in those directions.
>>53234
>These should be somehow merged and re-split.
Like this?: "Holding it just out of her reach, you find she has a few scars on her otherwise adorable face."
>", the loud buzzing continuing"
I think I need to redo that sentence: "A loud buzzing still impairs your hearing while the final thing to grace your vision are the bodies dangling from the ceiling..."
>...dude. Really? A teddy gonna be Deus ex Machina?
I wanted to have a few ways to avoid combat in the dungeon and it seemed like a fun idea. Most people probably won't have one anyway.
>yes, appreciate the heavy air of evaporated water from blood and whatever else
Guess I should drop that part.
"You remove your [clothes] and drop your attire into a small pile on the ground." maybe just this?
>I can understand this, but still - it's a bit convoluted.
"She doesn't resist you as you roll her over onto her back. " maybe this?
>italic would be better, no?
italics should be fine.

Now for the next chunk.
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>>53245
I've been up and down the place and haven't had such a man pop up.
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>>53235
>should add "your", but it would make stuff repeat
I'll just drop the circling.
>So several imp hordes, like the ones from Zetaz's cave? If that's the case, then switch the "horde" to plural.
How many imps make up a horde anyway, 6? 
>there's the possibility of the champion being sexless; might want to add a check to see if they have a dick first
Maybe this then?: ". [if (pc has no vag or genderless) One day, the imps force you to drink a strange white fluid. It tastes delicious, but grows your breasts into massive udders that heavily hang from your chest. [if (pc has penis)Your maleness soon vanishes too, leaving you with}|(pc genderless){you even grow}] a tiny clit and a new cunt that is soon agonizingly torn apart by the demons' massive cocks.}]"
>okay, tumblers are definitely silent
Are they? They seem to always click in games and what not. I'm just going to leave it for now.
>their sex scenes need more content though
One for each is enough; they're really just meant to be lust reducers for the pc.
>when the champion is leaning over to display their ass, it would make more sense to grip their knees. while showing off their pussy, they could instead hold onto the stocks.
I guess that makes sense.
>>53236
>italicize [b:pretty please] instead
It's better to bold in this case because sentences already use italics.
>feels too long for some reason
"You know your work here is not done yet. After a short breather, you prepare to continue searching through this old fortress." maybe this?
>since the champion is laying on their back, the imp's sack should batter their nose instead, no?
Couldn't both work? I'll change it to sack anyway.

And onto the next ones.
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holy shit, how do I get rid of the mind kitsunes? I'm kitsuneing my fluffy tailing mind trying to kitsune this.
>>53258
just give it time
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>>53259
how kitsune? I'm really kitsune to fluffy myself out my fluffy tail
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>>53245
Is there a level or time requirement? I'm level 33 on day 213 so I doubt it, but that's worth a shot.
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>>53262
pretty sure he's pulling your leg
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>>53244
You simply buy them, the same place you buy trail mix. Only when hunger is enabled though.
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>>53263
Sounded like it, but I couldn't be sure. I don't know shit. 
>>53264
Ah, I see. I don't so that explains it. I was curious because the kitsune shrine had it as an option and I wanted to see if anything would happen if I gave it everything. The place being near-useless for anything but getting nine tails plus the nature of the offerings made me wonder if handing them all in would make a loli fox pop out or something. Would make sense when it's asking for presents, candy, and a teddy bear.
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>>53237
>weren't they described as gray when entering the room?
Whoops.
>>53238
>This is wrong, but I can't quite put my finger on why
Maybe this can work?: "Perhaps the light gray scales covering her milky-white cheeks would put some off her looks though. They also fully coat her arms and legs" Might be a better way to do it.
>the champion probably doesn't know what these are. plus, this is a charge-up stage, so instead say "creates two small balls of dark energy that slowly grow in size"
I suppose that's true.
>kinda disappointed there isn't a "[Ride her]" scene option here
You wouldn't want to take a demon dragon dong, would you? 
>since you've made the scene using both of the champion's cocks, you need to add a check to see which hole (or if both) get the knot
This good? "With one last thrust, you [if (pc has knot) force your growing [knot] past her pussy lips and [if (pc has second cock knot){the other one into her asshole as}] she looks over her shoulder at you, wincing as it swells up fully inside her. You}]" 
>should first check if player has found/knows where Emily is located
I guess the player doesn't have to ask anyone where she is, huh? I hadn't thought about that. 
"[if (pc knows where Emily is){Hopefully, one of them will end up unlocking Emily's cell!}|{Now you just need to find where Emily is and free her.}] " Does this work?

That should be everything.
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>>53244
>>53245
>>53250
>>53262
/hgg/ 2022
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>>53269
This game has fat midget turkey women who lactate gravy, frost giants that cum snow so hard they blanket your entire camp in it, and an annoyingly frequent futa rabbit with giant expanding nuts that cums chocolate easter eggs. And that's before you fuckers modded it. A random gingerbread man who sells baked goods wouldn't stand out at all.
>>53260
Why contain it?
>>53108
>Want fakka-fakka
Why not go with the classic "snu-snu"?
>>53266
>loli fox for donating all the things
Sounds like an idea
Does that Old Eldritch Tome you get from Dolores after you save her from that Hound of Tindalos or whatever do anything? None of the usual NPCs seem to do respond to it.
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been a while since I've played this, have the vampire girls been added yet?
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>>53282
They're being proofread now, but no idea when they'll be added in.
>>53281
Why the hell is there lovecraft in here now of all times?
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>>51661 (OP) 
I'm surprised the MEGA still works considering how pozzed it has become over the years
>>53286
There's like three.
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>>53286
not a fan of tentacles, I assume?
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Anyone know how to reset achievements so I can get them all again from scratch?
it's kinda of interfering with the achievements from other mods and its getting hella confusing which achievement is from which
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>>53291
No I'm fine with tentacles but why Hounds of Tindalos of all things?
I've had enough of Jabberwock in Black Souls 2 as is
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Alright, looking over your comments in here now

>>53248
>"Holding it just out of her reach, you find she has a few scars on her otherwise adorable face."
Yeah, that's good
>"A loud buzzing still impairs your hearing while the final thing to grace your vision are the bodies dangling from the ceiling..."
Would be better in full if you used "The loud buzzing continues to pierce your ears, the bodies hanging from the ceiling the last thing you see..."
>"You remove your [clothes] and drop your attire into a small pile on the ground."
Sure, that way it sounds less nonsensical
>"She doesn't resist you as you roll her over onto her back."
Definitely better

>>53253
>How many imps make up a horde anyway, 6? 
At least 6, from what I can see in the code.
>"[if (pc has no vag or genderless) One day, the imps force you to drink a strange white fluid. It tastes delicious, but grows your breasts into massive udders that heavily hang from your chest. [if (pc has penis)Your maleness soon vanishes too, leaving you with}|(pc genderless){you even grow}] a tiny clit and a new cunt that is soon agonizingly torn apart by the demons' massive cocks.}]"
might need to add a hymen tearing there, but yeah, this def is better
>"You know your work here is not done yet. After a short breather, you prepare to continue searching through this old fortress."
Yeah, this reads a lot better

>>53267
>"Perhaps the light gray scales covering her milky-white cheeks would put some off her looks though. They also fully coat her arms and legs"
No, it still reads a bit too clunky.
>You wouldn't want to take a demon dragon dong, would you?
I mean... there's Ember for a pure dragon dong. Why not have a corrupt dragon dong here?
>"With one last thrust, you [if (pc has knot) force your growing [knot] past her pussy lips and [if (pc has second cock knot){the other one into her asshole as}] she looks over her shoulder at you, wincing as it swells up fully inside her. You}]"
Well, I suppose it makes more sense for the knotted cock to go into the pussy either way
>"[if (pc knows where Emily is){Hopefully, one of them will end up unlocking Emily's cell!}|{Now you just need to find where Emily is and free her.}]"
yeah, that's good

Gonna recheck the file with its full edits in the MEGA folder later too.
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>>53292
I believe you need to edit/delete the file located at the macromedia folder. Usually found over here:
C:\Users\{your username}\AppData\Roaming\Macromedia\Flash Player\#SharedObjects\{jumble of characters}\localhost\CoC_main.sol
>>53293
Anon named some random lovecraftian thing because the thing in the game is vaguely lovecraftian, there's no resemblance or relation to Hounds of Tindalos in particular.
>>53293
Oh, it's not anything in particular, it's a weird sphere that explodes into tentacles and moves oddly across angles and ignores intervening spaces, which made me think of the Hounds. Still haven't found a use for the Tome though.
Option to make mind kitsunes permanent if you ascend with them in effect when?
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>>53299
bruh. Just cheeze kitsune gifts if you really want the game to be completely unreadable
Anyone got image packs for the latest version of the game ? kinda new to this too, so a short guide on how to use them would be appreciated
>>53299
Mind kitsunes are an actual thing?
Can you mentally fuck them inside your head?
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>>53305
Yeah they exist. Sadly you can't quite interact with them.
>>53294
>Would be better in full if you used "The loud buzzing continues to pierce your ears, the bodies hanging from the ceiling the last thing you see..."
"The bodies hanging from the ceiling are the last thing you see as the loud buzzing continues to pierce your ears..." how about this instead?
>might need to add a hymen tearing there, but yeah, this def is better
I think the "agonizingly torn apart" should be a fair enough description for that. 
>No, it still reads a bit too clunky.
What if the sentences are combined? "Perhaps the light gray scales covering her milky-white cheeks would put some off her looks, since they also fully coat her arms and legs." Not too sure.
>I mean... there's Ember for a pure dragon dong. Why not have a corrupt dragon dong here?
Maybe i'll write an expansion for her if the pc spared her in the dungeon someday.
>Gonna recheck the file with its full edits in the MEGA folder later too.
I'm moving things off mega, but I'm not sure what best place is for them now. Satan used this site, so it might be fine.
Here are current links for the Vamps:
https://pst.moe/paste/rrktgw - Vampire sisters part 1
https://pst.moe/paste/wxiaso - Vampire sisters part 2 
https://pst.moe/paste/tttqxf - Vampire sisters part 3
https://pst.moe/paste/pnhrmq - Vampire sisters part 4
https://pst.moe/paste/gbrjaz - Vampire sisters part 5
https://pst.moe/paste/jvbvwp - Vampire sisters part 6
https://pst.moe/paste/crkagy - Vampire sisters part 7
https://pst.moe/paste/dxkcnv - Vampire sisters part 8
https://pst.moe/paste/iunehj - Vampire sisters Part 9
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Any plans for common enemies at and over level 30? In objective terms I know using Ember or Helia for grinding would probably better because of no rng, but man if it's not tedious having to do like 100 matches for her to level up to 30.
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>>53316
If there's ever content for level 30+, there will be enemies to get you there. As it is you can clear the entire game just fine at level 20.
If you just want higher numbers for the sake of higher numbers, there's regular training or old-style ascension.
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>>53317
level 20? Christ, I usually finish a run between 50-70
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>>53323
With regular training? If so that's normal, it inflates your levels like crazy. If not that's an insane amount of grinding and completely pointless.
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>>53317
I didn't even know that training with the dummy was supposed to do anything.
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>>53338
Regular training as in the setting that lets every monster keep up with your levels once you start surpassing them. The dummy is just to test how much damage you're doing on a controlled setting.
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>>53338
>>53345
You can actually gain mastery with weapons, skills, tease while fighting with it. Takes forever though, even with an auto keypresser
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>>53347
You can only get to mastery 2 or 3 against the dummy though.
1.6.17
hm

>Changelog
https://mega.nz/file/n802zRZS#GA8I4inccegVVXPgBu-JZaiGZOcvJQ4Rnc9cU25nM8o

>Download
https://mega.nz/#F!St0HiaTC!oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA

>Source
https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod
>>53372
>Added a BNWO tattooing scene with Helia, courtesy of Mothman
The fuck is this?
>>53374
Exactly what it sounds like.
>>53374
I must be blind, cause I didn't see anything like that
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>>53377
Blind... to the truth
>>53372
Thank you for all the fixes and changes Koraeli
I feel like things like this do not get the appreciation they should

oca too
thank you for the continued work
>>53374
The Helia scenes must have been added back again, finally.
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>>53381
>>53374
You wish, cuck
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>>53398
On your knees, h*man
Anyone got stat spread for the various claws and which abilities get influenced by Natural Weapons perk?
Speaking of which, do iron fists work with them?
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>>53402
Nevermind, the claw spread is there, dragons have biggest power and bleed chance, double of next one in power
https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod/-/blob/master/classes/classes/Items/Weapons/Unarmed/UnarmedClaws.as
Perk effect outside of claws seems to be mostly accuracy outside of making spider webbing nearly free and making tail whips last a bit longer
Dunno if iron fists affects claws still tho
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>>53403
>double of next one in power
That's not as big a difference as it sounds in most cases, since damage is weapon attack + strength. With 100 strength for example, dragon claws deal (before other modifiers) less than 5% more damage than the second best. The higher bleed chance (with the perk) is the biggest difference, and there's some armor penetration too.
>Perk effect outside of claws seems to be mostly accuracy outside of making spider webbing nearly free and making tail whips last a bit longer
The main effect of the perk is a 20% damage bonus. It has other effects (usually accuracy as you said) for abilities that aren't for dealing damage. It also improves armor penetration and attack value (separately from the 20% bonus) for claw attacks and allows them to cause bleeding (without the perk they just do damage).
>Dunno if iron fists affects claws still tho
It does.
>>53404
Fucking hell, move over mage kitsune, you are old shit, the new meta is kumiho build where you rip your enemies apart with your bare claws!
>>53405
I tried to make claws a viable option, but not the best. The bleed is powerful but other weapons can do that too, and there are the hooked gauntlets that stun and bleed. And aside from the bleed, magic will still do more damage.
Claws can be pretty powerful though.

Also, I just noticed that I made the bleed chance the same regardless of claw type by mistake.
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>>53404
Speaking of Iron Fists, can we make it not shit? Maybe just conbine all three ranks into one? Right now it's so bad that one rank is significantly weaker than Lightning Strikes is on fists and that perk affects other weapons as well.
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So like, why doesn't visiting kitsunes fill your hunger despite the scene mentioning you getting a damn feast?
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>>53409
all illusory
>>53409
you then came all the calories back out over the course of a day long orgy (also an illusion)
>>53372
No way, no way
>>53258
fluffy tail fluffy tail!
>>53372
>>53374
Hottest shit I ever read. Reigns supreme over all that "uohhh cunnyyyy lollll" Reddit nigger shit with Fran and Emily.
Replies: >>53431
You guys know what this mod could really use?
More fucking tooltips, half the shops in the game don't use them, like Lumi's for example
And polish in general really, like why the fuck does Akbal have leave button available despite him talking directly into your face, does he just accept you ignoring him and just walking away?
By the way, long haul mode stopping adventures when you are at 0 HP or max lust when?
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>>53258
how do I GET mind kitsunes?
>>53258
Don't mind them, they'll fluff off on their own.
>>53422
>the redditor that dislikes loli 
Leave.
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>>53423
>More fucking tooltips, half the shops in the game don't use them
See >>48935 and hope that guy doesn't drop it
>>53431
9gag is calling. Go back.
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>>53431
>>53436
samefag
>>52942
You had to enable the holiday scenes to be accessible year round instead of only during specific dates based on your actual calendar
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>>53452
You're correct about had to, past tense. It was once true, but that hasn't been the case in this mod for several years.
>>53436
a janny is needed to enforce rape correction on this newfag
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>>53372
>>53405
mmmm liver
>>53454
>calling for the moderation staff to get rid of someone you disagree with because they are triggering you with their differing opinions
Oh, you're from Reddit alright.
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>>53467
you don't belong here, go away
You people need to learn to shut the fuck up and stop feeding each other like it's some shitty playground scuffle.
>>53405
All I'm getting from this new update is just another major buff for dragon kitsunes
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>>53406
> bleed chance the same regardless of claw type by mistake
That should be fine
It's Bleed Damage that should be different per claw in the first place
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>>53495
It's a major buff for all nonmagical TF abilities. Kitsune abilities are all magic, as is dragon breath, so those didn't get any buffs. Dragon claws are good, but no better than what was already available, so while that is a major buff it's more of a buff to actual dragon-themed builds rather than those taking dragon for minmaxing.
>>53496
>It's Bleed Damage that should be different per claw in the first place
That's doable too.
wheres fran
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>>53516
Right in the bog with the other freaks.
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>>53314
Well, I totally forgot I promised to recheck the uploaded file, lol

>moving her hips to hover over your crotch, Now that you
Why replace the full stop here with a comma? Was a fine sentence end.
>shove her off and get back up right.
"upright"
>teeth chatter as the contraptions buzzing
"contraption's"
>That isn't a [:no] however
forgot to mark it as italic

>[b:click]
still think key sounds and such should be silent

>Her skin is an ashen-gray and curved black horns
Should put the Oxford comma back

> You grit your teeth, bury himself deep inside your depths before zealously pounding into your body.
Lost a decent chunk of the sentence. Put it back: "You grit your teeth, sensing the imp callously bury himself"
>demons must be growing impatient since, they take your hands
guess I said comma after since; should have been before instead

>I think she how she looks reminds me of you a little...
"I think her appearance reminds me of you a little"

>room in your pack, so place the bottle back
missed a "you"
>dissecting it or at least attempt amputation!
comma before "or"

>[if (Amal hp < 50){wears an ominous smile}|{licks her lips}]
considering the previous charging phase used greater or equal (=>), you probably meant to do the same in this if
>Here's your present you, fuckhead!
>get [b:hit] by it you, fool!
guess I mistyped here again; comma should be before the "you"

>ordering her to just get out of your sight
drop the "just"
>You explain you're not tricking her
"inform her" actually read better and more imposing. especially since the Champion is grandstanding here
>her naughty juice make a wet string
"juices"
>quickly painting the ground white
would make more sense to say "floor", not "ground"
>{smelly cunt}|{nasty asshole}] you
comma before "you"

Hopefully the thirstanons won't have to wait too long for the next proofread
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>>53534
>Hopefully the thirstanons won't have to wait too long for the next proofread
I suspect I'll be waiting a long time for the crow.
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>>53408
But you can have both perks, anon, you don't have to choose.
>>53372
>* Firearms and staff channeling no longer use your physical damage modifier. This is generally a buff, and means that children/elders can use staves and guns without penalty.
What exactly does 'being a child or elder' do?
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>>53545
It means you're either "young" or "old"
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>>53546
In game mechanic terms, anon.
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>>53548
You say that now, but hindsight is 20/20
>>53545
Generally speaking, children are physically weak and squishy and start out with very low stats, but they're highly resistant to lust and they can learn and adapt quickly.
Elders can have very large starting bonuses depending on the life they led prior to becoming champion, which might give them a huge advantage in the early game, but they're slower to learn and change and (again depending on history) are likely to also have a physical disadvantage.
Teenagers aren't that different from adults aside from having more energy and being a bit more adaptable, but they're much more vulnerable to lust.
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>>53551
tl;dr children make good sex mages.
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>>53554
Children make the best everything, regardless of any mechanical considerations. No reason to play anything else.
>>53522
>all best girls are in the bog
Damn...
How come there's only 1 ring slot?
>>53557
You lost nine of your fingers.
>>53557
Magic of the rings cause interferance with each other
>>53557
Well, there's alwys a cocksock.
Replies: >>53579
>>53557
because you only have one cock
>>53562
wrong
>>53562
wear a cock sock as a wristband
>>53534
https://pst.moe/paste/uaimic - Hopefully this fixes most of the errors for this part. And thanks for going though it.
>>53541
I'm trying to figure out if I want to redo the crow daughter or not. So, probably.
>>53561
>>53562
Why not nipplesocks?
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>>53557
Purely gameplay reasons as it is easier to balance the existence of a single extra slot than 10 slots. Sadly this also means that you can't go full jewelry. You know the look.
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>>53584
You could just go what xianxia did and have you get an extra ring slot using a perk

You don't really need 10 ring slots
4 is fine just for the DarkSouls reference
>>53579
Nipple rings already exist
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What do you use to compile this game? I'm thinking of making my own game too. Actually I'm thinking of using flash files as a way to share small bits of text as an alternative to pastebin style sites, but details.

Heard that if it's just a text file, you can rename it into pdf and you can  upload that. Doesn't work with zip files though, unfortunately.
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>>53588
if you have to ask you can't do it
Making flash games can't be that hard.
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>>53591
It's not
But Flash is dead
And ActionScript is ass to work with if you're just starting out and barely know much about programming commands
Flash will only die when Flash Projector will become too much of a pain in the ass to get working. Something tells me that getting people to launch your random swf files will be easier than getting people to launch your random exe files.

You probably use one of those https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adobe_Animate to compile swf, and probably far from the last version of it, considering how old this game is. I think of downloading either Adobe Flash Professional CS5.5, or Macromedia Flash 8.

Everything is easier than winapi, that shit is a nightmare.
Hello, does anyone use imagepack in this version or just play with the sprites in the lower left corner of the screen?
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>>53588
>What do you use to compile this game?
The most common choices are FlashDevelop (free), VS Code (free), or IntelliJ IDEA (not free).
>I'm thinking of making my own game too.
Making it in Flash is a terrible idea, unless you've time traveled to 2010 and can't get back.

>>53600
Nobody whose opinion matters uses image packs, and all existing image packs are garbage.
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>>53600
imagepacks? Never heard of 'em.
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>>53604
>>53605
I'm just starting to play paladin. I can kill an imp, but I can't kill a goblin, only through womb fuck, but that's not the solution.For first try i want complite game without sex, just kill.
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>>53606
Okay.
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>>53608
Camp Tamani when?
>>53621
When you write it.
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>>53622
I'd do a disservice. Why not you?
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>>53623
I'd do it, but the guy that wanted to pay me for it said his family died so he couldn't
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>>53624
Damn. Real shame.
>>53328
Yeah, about that...
>>53621
After we get a black velvet alarune to plant
>>53621
>He doesn't want a pure, goblin tinkerer wife instead.
Shame.
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>>53635
One of the few things that the Xixina added was the ability to find old goblin weapons and restore them to functional use by taking them to a goblin tinkerer.  Mainly it was a way to include more ranged(guns) options for builds to make their class system more viable but it's a good idea that should be shamelessly stolen.
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>>53636
Kinda cool.
gobbo daughters
Izma and Sophie's kids are fuckable
There's lots of talks of Hel's kid to be sexable and corrupted Amily has incest scenes
There's even the thing with Isabella's kids
What about Marble's kids? Are they fuckable?
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>>53682
>What about Marble's kids? Are they fuckable?
Probably not, because that'd force you to deal with Marble, and as fun as cucking the Fen of the past is, there are better ways to do it.
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>>53684
I think you're thinking of Whitney being based on the now-ex wife of Fen.
Marble was written by TheDarkMaster, who Fen wasn't even particularly fond of, though I don't know of any animosity between them. TDM was just a sperg in general.
At any rate, there's no cucking the fen of the past there
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>>53686
>I think you're thinking of Whitney being based on the now-ex wife of Fen.
Damn for the years I played this game/mod I did not actually know that, but at the same time I also never interacted with Whitney if I could help it.  I like a little milky play when I know I knocked a girl up, but the relationship that Marble wants to force the champ in made me not want to touch her with a 12ft pole.  Besides that I also hate the idea of addictive substances, as one of the few teetotaler's left in existence.
>>53687
>never interacted with Whitney if I could help it
Why not? She seems like one of the least off-putting characters to interact with. Very little content to her, but she's just a farmer with a decent moral compass. She's not obnoxious, you don't inner monologue about how great and hot she is, she has no bizarre fetish attached. 
Marble I understand avoiding, but Whitney seems too normal to mind.
What can I do to increase fertility and/or virility?
The only thing I know of is Goblin Ale for fertility and Fox Berries for virility.
>>53695
Other than the fertility perks and the cum witch blessings?
There's the witches from Volcanic Craig that increases your fertility stats if you knock em up/give birth to more of em enough times
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>>53636
I mean, isn't it confirmed they shamelessly stole shit from this mod?
If they have features that aren't pure autism or characters that aren't just cuck shit like the manticore, why not snag 'em?
>>53682
Yes, you can cocknurse your kids with Marble.
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>>53699
Wrong cow.
>>53686
>>53687
People wrongly assumed that Whitney was based on Fen's girlfriend (never wife) because she was unfuckable but it's not true.
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>>53687
>but the relationship that Marble wants to force the champ in made me not want to touch her with a 12ft pole.  
At least she got thrown a bone with the whole purification quest later on down the line. The PC helps her realize that what she was doing was corrupt shit and to knock it off, after that she's pretty mediocre but by no means terrible. Also the only acceptable form of cuckoldry happens there wherein the PC and Marble cucks out her shitty ass sister.
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>>53706
Queanery IS pretty based.
On topic, Lottie should get a chance to earn the right to paypig to take care of some of your other children.
I think there's something fucky with the crit calculations. I've got the cursed dagger, the not-worth-it +5% blademaster perk for empty offhand, and tactician. With the base 5%, that runs to 45%, so with double strike I'd expect one crit per round on average, ish, but the actual rate is more like 1 in 10.

>>53181
Starve it
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>>53695
Collect all the preg speed stuff for a female and you'll end up with x6 speed and over 100% fertility.
>>53709
>I think there's something fucky with the crit calculations.
Yes. Weapon crit bonuses were being applied multiplicatively to your base crit chance instead of added. So instead of 15%+30%=45%, it ends up being 15%*1.3=19% crit chance.
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>>53695
Sm. Pink eggs can increase base female fertility up to 40
Lg. Pink eggs can increase that up to 70
Not sure if Blue eggs do the same for male virility, I don't play male characters.
>>53404
Is war dance enough to make ferrets decent for a claw build? 15% damage boost + 20% accuracy increase sounds pretty nice but their base claw damage is only a 2. Either way claw build should be pretty fun since you can perm Bloodhound and proc bleeds.
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>>53717
actually, seems like dragon claw ferret might be pretty decent all things considered. Losing out on bleed proc from not matching race isn't ideal but their 15% damage multiplier on unarmed is quite nice.
How do I even get claws? Even if I force them with the debug wand it doesnt update my appearance or racial score and I can't get them via transformatives
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>>53731
Claws only show up in your appearance with certain arm types.
I think the only race that checks for claws in its score is imp.
Transformatives mostly set your claw type when changing your arms, but there are a couple that will change your claws separately if you already have the right arms but with different claws. There are also a couple that will change just your arms while leaving your claws alone.
>>53711
Code gods pls fix.
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>>53768
It's fixed, just waiting to be released.
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>>53777
Yes, this is a mod, correct.
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How come there's still no dual wielded weapons?
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>>53794
Much like a foreskin, it offers no tactical advantage
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>>53799
Merchant detected
Heavy armor needs improvement, but is there anything that hasn't been done already? I guess we can always just have defensive buffs but a "+10 defense" is uninspired
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>>53815
Maybe we could make it prevent being constricted or squeezed.
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>>53816
We already have a perk that gets rid of the damage from that though. I guess we could change it to prevent it, but I don't know.
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>>53816
Armor wouldn't prevent the Champion being constricted, but if it's rigid enough it could reduce or negate the damage.
>>53817
Does anyone know the calculation for escaping  Constrict? Using armor to negate the damage might inadvertently cause a soft lock if the Champion can neither escape the constriction
nor succumb to damage from it.
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>>53818
I think all the enemies that can constrict can also do lust damage, which I don't think any of the perks negate. Other than that, I don't know the calculation but I also don't think it's ever a 0% chance.
>>53818
>Does anyone know the calculation for escaping Constrict?
Each constrict is implemented separately with no standard or any particular rules to follow. They can last a set number of turns, they can have a stat roll each turn, they can just be a set chance with no way to influence it. They might have a minimum escape chance, or a maximum duration, or both or neither.
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>>53820
Weird. I've never had the sensation of imminent nosebleed before. Reading about the lack of standard mechanics is bad for my health apparently.
>>53820
This should probably be changed
I have this bug since 1.6.15.
In EVERY battle, there's this:
> "Lethice’s tentacles have a firm grip of your limbs!"
... massage, and I can't do shit.
Lethice was beaten long ago.

How do I fix this?
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>>53826
Obviously you're too tense. Just relax and let the tentacles do their work.
On a more serious note, have you tried a different save file? If you have more than one you might backtrack and figure out when the bug started appearing.
Do we already have damage buff perks for heavy armor? We could have it improve heavy/large weapons? Though I don't actually know what weapons fall into that category.
>>53705
>but it's not true.
How do you know?
>>53815
>Heavy armor needs improvement
No it doesn't. Slapping a hammer and any non-garbage heavy armour on is the most brainless method of creating an effective fighter.
Why does the golem have such an absurdly high hit rate?
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>>53799
It does though
namely more weapon bonuses and multiple weapon effects
>>53836
Because its huge and its attacks covers a large area
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whats the file that defines max character stats?
Why does Helia joke about wearing cow pattern bikinis and having sex with minotaurs in the latest build? I double checked Silly Mode and it's not enabled. Bug?
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>>53826
Fighting Lethice again should fix it, you can use the debug menu to do that if you've already beaten her.
Otherwise you can ascend, start a new character, or wait for the next update.
>>53776
S H A R K S
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A
R
K
S
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sharts
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>>53849
MOOS
O     O
O     O
SOOM
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>>53850
>Helia will never shart on your face after a 5 inch wide BBC (big bull cock) pulls out of her as she's squatting over your head
>>53838
I get the logic but a boss that just has a 50/50 chance to instantly kill you is a little unfun
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>>53853
It shouldn't have a chance to instantly kill you (aside from the heavily telegraphed unblockable instant kill laser) unless you're pretty weak. If you're doing a level 1 run or you're playing a lightly armored child with the cursed dagger, then you're probably going to have a pretty hard time, otherwise it's very manageable.
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Should we just cut medium armor? Reclassify it all as light and heavy?
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>>53854
As a child on hard mode with no HP lowering effects it deals about 400-450 damage which either puts me at instant death to the shockwave range or just outright kills me and it seems like it has a little over 50% hit rate when not enraged (and around 10% when enraged and using the wait command) with 52% evasion.
More importantly though the bone trio fight is gamebreakingly bugged on the newest version. I dont know what attack triggers this but I get a black screen with just the "recover" command. The first time I triggered this it was only the bone guardian alive and pressing recover reduced his HP, so I spammed it until he died and broke the softlock. This time it does nothing except reduce my fatigue and softlocks the game.
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>>53856
The golem doesn't have any accuracy bonus at all, it's the same 95% base that basically everything has, then it gets -20% accuracy when it's enraged. Block is important too, the counter on distancing can't be blocked (only dodged) but the other attacks can.
I normally play as a child on hard mode too, and the golem has always been easy by level 20, and often manageable by level 10 depending on build. It may be hard or impossible to survive two enraged hits without healing, but that's never been a problem, there are plenty of ways to deal with it.
>More importantly though the bone trio fight is gamebreakingly bugged on the newest version
I can't see any problems and it's working fine when I try, I'm not sure what could be causing it. It doesn't look like any changes in recent versions would have anything to do with it either.
If you could share a save that it happens on or give more information about your setup, it would help.
Replies: >>53876
Is there a way to get your speed high besides prioritizing it as a stat increase? I usually find that its the hardest stat to get since you cant just spam stat increase items for it (unless I'm missing something).
>>53862
Jogging increases it, I think. Also just exploring the lake.
>>53862
Explore Lake and Farm a lot increases it for free
>>53853
What armor and accessories are you using?
>>53851
MOTHS
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T         T
H        O   
SHTOM
>>53857
>, but that's never been a problem, 
After about an hour of dying to oneshots or doubletaps in a row I beg to differ. Evasion stacking definitely needs a buff.
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>>53856
Unfortunately I saved after beating them, all I know was that it was triggered by some attack that forces recovery. I can send you the save if you can still use it, but if you want to try and recreate it I was just spamming attack with leech on the flintlock pistol.
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>>53877
I just got the glitch again in the Necromancer fight. It seems to be triggered by the Bone Guardian using a particular attack on the dame turn that you reload.
>>53876
S H A R K S
H H           H
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R        R    R
K           K  K
S H A  R K S
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>>53877
I found it, it was related to having leech active while stunned. Fixed for the next release.
>>53843
Sounds like she wasn't as purified as the removal of the cuck scenes implied.
>>53883
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MOOS
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>>53862
Submitting to Akbal is the go-to method for heavy corruption runs, it mixed with meditating raises it nicely, not as nicely as abusing the tower for int sadly
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>>53890
>submittinng to your pet
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>>53893
He's one of the few characters who can keep going after blowing his load once, considering (You) fall unconscious half the time it's only fitting.
>>53843
Did you forget to tell her to stop fucking taurs when the prompt for it happened?
Are the two lost kittens a one time event or can i meet them again?
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>>53903
One time.
Hellmouths a cute! A cute!!!
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>>53926
she really is
>>53372
Black Niggers White Owners?
>>51661 (OP) 
If I wanted to take a crack at adding content to Phylla would I be able to look up all the current content in the gitgud or any other part of the OP or would I need to figure out how to extract all the game code to a text file?
Replies: >>53942
Bug: if you let Vilkus die to his self damage then it skips the second phase of his fight.
>>53937
I just spent an hour trying to correct this and looking for the offending line before realizing it was a troll complaint. Fuck you, man. I'm so close to the edge. One more random post about Helia sucking minotaur semen through a hose and I'm going to take a shit right here and smear it on the walls!
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>>53938
It's not a troll compaint. Lethice is broken too and softlocks when you enter the second phase. Try using leech.
>>53939
Oh and summoned swords too, for Lethice.
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>>53940
>>53939
Also I meant to say after the second phase.
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>>53935
It's open source anon...
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>>53937
>skips the second phase
>>53941
>after the second phase
fucking kek do you realize how massive a difference that is. It's like saying the sun mechanic is broken because the sun isn't rising, "oh sorry I meant setting." Literally a wild goose chase.

>>53942
I get that but I have no idea what file's to even look for to start, there is no Phylla or "antprincess" file and I figured I would ask before putting in a shitload of effort searching for the wrong things like the poor bastard trying to fix the not troll complaint.
Replies: >>53949
>>53937
>>53939
>>53940
It's the same bug that was causing problems against the bone general. Leech is giving an error when processing an enemy's turn if you didn't use an ability on your turn. That should all be fixed in the next release.
>>53944
There is an ant file. For some reason, unkown to all, she's not in CharacterName inside NPCs, Phylla is in AntsScene inside the Desert folder
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>>53949
Thank you anon
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>>51661 (OP) 
Yo, anyone look into that old CoC.web project? its CoC on HTML. As a certified everyday normal retard, I dont know how to compile shit or any of that stuff, So I like how I can just directly edit the files with a texteditor and reload the page. so I can do stuff like change stats or scene text really easily https://github.com/end5/CoCWeb/releases

I think there was another, more modern version created by adev here https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/experimental-coc-port.18495/ but the file is pretty much all eastern characters, probably how its coded, so you cant directly edit it with a texteditor.
Replies: >>53954
>>53953
>posting furry porn without a trigger warning and spoiler for our resident fat retards
JUST DIE DIE DIE DIE!!!!
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>>53954
oh, sorry about that.
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>>53949
That's fuckin weird
>>53955
nice
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pc coming home to the camp and complimenting kiha on her minotaur skull pile after giving birth to a fresh batch to replace them
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>>53964
Why is she giving birth to them just to rip out their skulls and throw them in a pile
>>53969
It's efficient
>>53969
Don't worry, you read it wrong.
>>53969
My main concern is why Kiha and not Helia?
Replies: >>54009
Reminder that Whitney and Kelt are in constant warfare against gnolls
Replies: >>54014
gnoll, satyr and minotaur genocide when
>>53988
You are mistaken. Helia takes minotaur semen to the skull through her nose, she doesn't collect minotaur skulls
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This mod could be so much greater...
>>53990
I thought it was gobbos and imps?
the farm is too far from the plains for them to meet
Replies: >>54016
>>54012
>doesn't have bondrewd armor or helmet
It's shit
>>54014
Whitney herself goes through the plains to... somewhere. But yeah, Kelt has to stay at the farm.
>>54012
Well, I do enjoy big number.
>>54012
>On that huge mess there is dragon kitsune mixed in
Kek
>>54027
new thread since we're passed bump limit
>>54012
Jesus christ this shit looks even worse than i thought.

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