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This is the Corruption of Champions mod being developed by the anons of /hgg/.
Corruption of Champions is a text-based flash game overhauled with new dungeons, new mechanics, new characters, and a lot of lolis.
The mod is open to content submissions, anons can and are writing new content to be implemented all the time.

Downloads
Latest Version (1.6.17) +Changelog in link
https://mega.nz/#F!St0HiaTC!oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA

Use a standalone flash player (projector), this shit is no longer supported by any web browser.
Remember to save to file to prevent possible save loss.
https://www.adobe.com/support/flashplayer/debug_downloads.html

Information
>Game Related
Source Code: https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod

>Thread Related
Previous thread: >>51661
Thread Archives: https://gitgud.io/Blank/CoCAnon_mod/raw/OPT/Archives
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>Writing Related
Content Submissions (Chronicles): >>44060 >>44061 >>44062
Submission & Misc. Archive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LGK4sPuWH69iEZ9ZmX2fnfDRrhj7h4hQ
Writing Guide: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PGysInt0S0VHYvPv0b__4xpHqrfbE-zikQiRonsnUsU
If you can't write, read. Get what you want in game by engaging in the creative process as a critic or proofreader.
I love bimbo Sophie!
Anyone know what flag the cerulean potion queue is?
>>54012
what the fuck is wrong with asians
>>54036
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Bimbo skirt broken ? It doesn't transform my character and has no bonus to tease
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>>54039
That's a Revamp thing. It's just ordinary clothing here.
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Suggestion
Tel'Adre
Tailor 
Add upper lingerie bra fitting stockings and garter
Alternative to latex
Adjust the prices
I'm tired
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>>54041
Bro, your
immortal bog wife
and her collection
of four pieces
of upper lingerie
that fit
those stockings and garters

But what do you mean by an alternative to latex? More leather fetish gear?
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This game kinda sucks when it comes to cosmetics, there's bunch of cool shit but it also misses tons of important stuff, like seriously, no miko outfit or school swimsuit?
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>>54048
>he doesn't know
checking in after a few years. So has there been no new content at all since zombie dyke and moth autism?
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>>54052
A few new encounters/enemies, a lot of new scenes, no new recruitable or romanceable characters since then.
You could also read the changelog yourself.
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>>54054
I had been just trying to play the game and find the new stuff on my own, but it seems like this mod is going the route of increasingly niche updates. A shame. I had been into this mod because the new dungeons were honestly just way too good for CoC but the focus on stuff like that isn't there anymore. Still no reason to ever go to the Glacial Rift
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>>54056
>increasingly niche
>focus on stuff like that isn't there anymore
That's not really the case, it's more that not much is being done at all for the past couple years. The only shift in focus is towards minor things that don't take much effort.
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>>54057
The two kind of go hand in hand
But speaking of which, here's some small stuff that probably should be ironed out:
>The first encounter PC has with Amily may end with the text saying she gives the PC a bow, but no bow is ever actually received
>Retaining the Incorporeality perk on ascension automatically gives the PC transparent legs in the new game (but for some reason no other ghost features)
>>54058
>The first encounter PC has with Amily may end with the text saying she gives the PC a bow, but no bow is ever actually received
Probably a typo honestly, it'd make a lot more sense if she gave the PC a bow(gesture) then a bow which wasn't added until much later.  That or you just misread the context, which can happen.
>>54058
Is it literally giving a bow or does she perform a bow?
>>54058
The first is just her bowing to you.
The second is intentional, and I don't see anything wrong with it. Hummus can change your legs back to normal if you want (though it's likely to remove the perk at the same time if it's not permed).
Why does counter stance not go through ascending? Or has hat recently changed?
>>54027 (OP) 
been skimming the Phylla content on and off, things coming to mind.
>the ant progeny you have with Phylla can become as strong as the guards at least so why are they not forming parties to hunt imps and demons or helping with camp defense from imp raids
>remembered that the last time I played the ant arena is a forced encounter in the desert with no option to decline
>Phylla applies some healing taste to you after the arena fights that I don't ever remember coming back up
I'll be mulling all the Phylla content over for a while but it feels like it really needs a heavy rework
>>54072
sorry to double post but if I or someone works it out would it be possible to just change the ant colony into an area instead of a forced desert percentage chance encounter?
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>>54073
I would say "please do" but there's not really any reason to go back afterwards. I guess content could be made, but still it feels like there wouldn't be much anyways
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>>54074
it always rubbed me the wrong way how often I would waste a trip there when I wasn't ready for a fight and I was specifically looking for something in the desert
>>54072
If you're offering to do rewrites and additions, can we look forward to them being properly remade almost all female like actual ants?
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>>54081
To be fair, fantasy world
>>54072
As it stands, ants are human-sized people with some chitin scattered around. In a couple places, Phylla has bare midriff that turns out to be skin-colored chitin that is softer than the black chitin. Some spots, it's actually bare skin. Some places, tan, some places, light. 
Just off-the-top-of-my-head notes I recall that you may want to look out for.
>Arena as a place
I think a compromise to not have a useless [Place] hanging around is to still make it a chance desert encounter, but you end up in the tunnels with a few options, including something to restore your health and fatigue a bit, and some other filler like interacting with other ants. There's potential to lightly NTR phylla, if that's to anyone's interest.
>guards
Also in nature, ants are 99% female. Males are only small, winged ones born solely to mate a virgin queen. Soldiers are also considerably bigger than workers.
Best way to add realism, to me, is to make all workers pseudo lolis. I say soldiers, too, should be smaller than the average human. Just giving my two cents, I don't care deeply about the myrmi
Suggestion for bodyType function.
>thickness < 10
>>tone < 10
"an incredibly thin, frail-looking body"
Currently the lowest tone it accounts for at that thickness is 25. I think at no fat and no muscle, the player doesn't mind being described as frail in appearance
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Either it slipped my mind or I somehow wasn't aware you could have Helspawn without loving Helia.
You can just tell her when the pale flame event happens that you don't love her and she's be sad, but at least you're honest, and it doesn't really change how she feels.
And it comes up in a few places after that.
>>54087
Sounds good to me.
>>54036
git gud filthy gaijin
I miss franguy
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>Ember Appearance
> Her neck starts at the backside of her head and is about two and a half feet long, roughly six inches longer than her arm length.
I have literally never pictured Ember this way before what the fuck
Furry is disabled.
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>>54093
"If Ember was given no blood, he/she will be a 7'3" humanoid dragon; with reptilian head, sharp teeth, dragon ears, horns and so on." From wiki
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>>54094
Nothing about that says 30 inch long neck
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>>54044
>wife
>can't even kiss her
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Is defurring Amily broken again?
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>>54098
It never has been (in this mod).
>>54093
You forgot to give her your blood, which turns her from scalie to monstergirl. Nofur mode doesn't override that.
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>>54095
long as fuck necks are standard for dragons dude
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>>54100
Not for humanoids
>>54097
>having a cock
lmao
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>>54101
you brought this on yourself
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>>54101
You didn't make humanoid Ember though, you made scalie Ember, enjoy your non-humanoid dragon wife.
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>>54101
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>>54099
>It never has been
I have a golden seed, a purified succubus milk, and both a large black egg and regular black egg and the option doesn't work.
Sharks.
>>54108
>the option doesn't work
You'll have to be more specific, that isn't much to go on.
Is a button grayed out that you think should be clickable? If so, what's the button, and what does the tooltip say?
Is a button missing that you think should be present? If so, where or in what menu are you expecting to find it?
Are you clicking some clickable button that you think should defur her but doesn't? If so, what's the button?
Do you have furries disabled in the fetish menu?
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>>54105
It says right there though, on >>54094
"humanoid"
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>>54111
>"humanoid dragon"
>selectively seeing what you want to support your arguments
Shalom
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>>54108
having both types of black egg might be fucking it up for some godforsaken reason, you only need the small one.
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>>54027 (OP) 
people were distracted by my image last time, so thought id post again:

Yo, anyone look into that old CoC.web project? its CoC on HTML. As a certified everyday normal retard, I dont know how to compile shit or any of that stuff, So I like how I can just directly edit the files with a texteditor and reload the page. so I can do stuff like change stats or scene text really easily https://github.com/end5/CoCWeb/releases

I think there was another, more modern version created by adev here https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/experimental-coc-port.18495/ but the file is pretty much all eastern characters, probably how its coded, so you cant directly edit it with a texteditor.
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>>54113
>having both types of black egg might be fucking it up
It wouldn't, and either one will work. If you have both, it will take the small one.
>>54114
Both are unfinished and abandoned, and it would be a whole lot of effort to port the mod's content to them.
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>>54116
More thoughts then "Do this pls".
I can kind of surmised it would take a lot of not so worth it energy to do a full port. 

I think a lot of the actual scenes integration arent too complex for the CoCWeb one, so I was thinking about playing around with adding something and might report back.
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>>54107
did that guy who constantly flipped his shit at the mention of anything furry and especially when furry images were posted die or something
>>54112
>pretending "humanoid dragon" means "non-humanoid"
Why would it say humanoid if it's explicitly non-humanoid?
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>>54119
Sigh
>>54092
Who?
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>>54123
maybe he means 2hu?
>>54114
>>54116
>>54117
doing that and maintaining update parity would require writing a script that interprets the open source code and converts it to html properly. I had something set up like that for Rogue Like Evolution using batch scripts and sed and that was a bitch but would pale in comparison to the difficulty of writing a conversion script from the open source code to html.
>>54110
The option is available but selecting it always gives the same result as if it's the first time you've tried it and it tells you what items you need etc. It does this every time even when I have all the required items.
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>>54130
You haven't really answered the questions. What option doesn't work? What is the name of the button, and in what scene?
I think I know what scene you're talking about now, but there are three different ways to get to it.
You also didn't say whether or not you have furries disabled.
Also, just to make sure, the items are all in your inventory and not in storage, right?
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Ember is a mess. Can't even get the pronouns right
Also I remember it saying Ember did have hair in the hatching scene even though I never applied hair serum
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>>54103
I too have been enjoying the second series of Made in Abyss.
>>54138
>Also I remember it saying Ember did have hair in the hatching scene even though I never applied hair serum
Scalie (didn't give blood) or non-scalie (did give blood) Ember?
The text in your screenshot shows up when you didn't give blood or hair serum, and I don't see anything in the hatching scene or appearance about hair in that case.
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>>54140
The screenshots are for no blood/serum Ember
When I got the text about the hair, I had given blood once, but no serum
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>>54142
Giving blood gives hair, serum just makes it longer.
>>54107
Why are you letting your centaur slut and scorpion slut fuck each other?
>>54135
It's the "no furry" button when she begs you to impregnate her after raising affection as a futa. Yes I have all the items in ny inventory. Furries are not disabled since doing so prevents some claw TFs. You don't get the option with furries disabled since Amily is already not furry in that case.
Wen Marble?
>>54154
Furry toggle doesn't affect the player you retard.
>>54154
You can't defur her from that menu, and the "no furry" scene makes no sense at all in that context anyways, it's a complete non sequitur. It looks like it's been the same since vanilla, maybe it was added by mistake or it's part of an alternate route that was never actually implemented.
I'd probably simply remove the option there. Looking at the scenes again, it also makes no sense on your first meeting, for that matter. At the very least a bit of rewriting would be needed to handle that case.
>Furries are not disabled since doing so prevents some claw TFs
It can never prevent any TF, it only (indirectly) makes some claw TFs take longer, by making certain face/skin TFs less likely while certain arm TFs require getting those first.
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Can you finally fuck the kids you have with Edryn?
Can you finally fuck Marble's sister after locking her up?
Can you visit Liaka to fuck her so hard that she relaxes her ass so the stick she shove could be removed?
Nvm, i realized that the difference between .11 that i downloaded last year and .17 is just like 11kb.
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>>54162
can we finally lock anon in a room and have children with him
>>54158
Getting dragon claws requires having a scaly body, so you can't get the arm TF without the furry option.
Replies: >>54175
Every time I try to do some writing I remember the surprising amount of writing you need to do even just to add something rather simple. 
Guess I actually have to do some writing if I wanna get this shit done.
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>>54165
Again, it can never prevent any TF.
>>54162
>Nvm, i realized that the difference between .11 that i downloaded last year and .17 is just like 11kb.
Text compresses really well. 11kb compiled could be tens of thousands of words.
The size of the contents also isn't the only thing that influences the size of the swf. The swf could get smaller while adding content or bigger while removing content.
A more meaningful comparison would be the size of the repo. 1.6.17's source is about 0.5MB bigger than 1.6.11's. For reference, Amily's file (I think the second most content of any character, after Urta) is about 0.8MB.
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>>54180
>11kb compiled could be tens of thousands of words
Could be. Or it could be hundreds of autistic tweaks to abilities and weapons. Time to load up the game and see i- oh good heavens
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>>54174
Remember, less is often more
>>54182
Having obviously never frenched anyone, yes, he probably did. Is that the Urta cucking scene?
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>>54196
It's the Amily/Izma threesome
Even putting aside the hilarious, boner killing word choices, it's way too much verbage to say "they both started trying to kiss you at the same time"
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I like tigersharks
>>54182
>>54198
Fenoxo was paid $50 to write that scene. You can tell he was racing towards the 1000-word finish line.
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>Look up source code
>Kiha can only get pregnant on days divisible by 15
why
>>54206
Simulating her having a period, I guess?
>>54027 (OP) 
Any android anons have any experience running this on android go?
>>54206
Numerology?
>>54206
Kiha can get pregnant?
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>>54215
There are even scenes with the kids, which come out in clutches of eggs.
>>54206
Something about her body making eggs regularly, and needing to be fertilized when the eggs are ready in order for them to develop, otherwise you wait until the next clutch. 
Fem Arian works similarly, except lays the eggs regardless of them not being fertilized. And no one has written the alternative, where the eggs are fertilized, since Arian is a trash heap not worth adding to
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>>54217
>since Arian is a trash heap not worth adding to
too true
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>>54119
Do you not know what humanoid means?
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>>54225
It definitely doesn't mean "non-humanoid"
>>54221
Is there anything left in the original game that is worth adding to? We got more inquisitor stuff, we got more kitsunes. Only thing I can think of is Dominika. I guess Izumi has potential too, but I wouldn't lose any sleep if it never happened
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>>54227
Didn't people used to get up in arms that Ember was never finished, since Savin is Savin?
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>>54217
>Arian is a trash heap not worth adding to
He's kind of interesting? A mage prodigy who discovered a way to boost spells to the point they ruin his health. Problem is, he just moves a little too fast. You meet him at the park about maybe twice? Help him once by giving him an easy to get medicine, then he decides he loves you enough to just cut his donger off. I assume he was left unfinished too, since there are notes on possibly turning him into a naga in the code. I'm not sure what happened to the guy writing him. 
Anyway, there should've been a mini quest to gather materials that can make a medicine that cures him. That'd make more sense in my option. Otherwise, surely his attendants could just buy the vitality tinctures from somewhere themselves? Us needing to make special medicine would be neat. The champ could even add in other items into the meds that'd turn Arian into a girl, a naga, give him boobs, or whatever else. Maybe after he'd teach the pc how to use the boosted magic he made, now trusting us to use it wisely. And more importantly, you could get a lizard wizard husband/wife too. Maybe there could even be another quest after were you two go to his old magic school to gather special magic books and you beat up demons that are still infesting in the place.
Ah, well, what could've been.
>>54229
Ember was never finished because Fenoxo moved on to TiTS and the character's authors knew there was no way in hell that Ember's expansion would get added after they fought tooth and nail for four months to get Arian added. Nothing to do with Savin this time, unless you count the "Stop talking about CoC, move on" mindset that he shared with Fen.
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>>54229
Ember really doesn't need anything. I know about the planned pure and corrupt routes, but I can't see how those would have been meaningful additions
>>54232
From the sound of it, they mostly would have just been personality changes that would offer different sets of sex scenes. Nothing groundbreaking, but I wouldn't mind more Ember content.
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>>54154
>It's the "no furry" button when she begs you to impregnate her after raising affection as a futa
You can raise it too even as a guy just by refusing her and just choosing the Talk option
Did you forget that you need PURIFIED Succubus milk for the defur option to work?
>>54231
>>54232
Does Ember's kids even have a scene other than just existing and tucking them in at night?
I don't even remember if Ember's eggs even hatch at some point when you impregnate her when you've given her an ovielixir before hatching her from her egg
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>>54249
I don't recall the eggs ever hatching, and the only thing with her kids is them existing and  tucking them in.
which is a shame because a play-fighting scene with them could be cute.
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>>54252
I think I remember seeing a scene with Ember's eggs hatching? Not 100% on that though, could be a false memory
The eggs do hatch.
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>>54241
Pure Ember would just be the Ember we already have but without the tsundere
Corrupt Ember would be exactly the same as every other corrupt character (granted Koraeli et all have done good work with mod original corrupt characters like the necromancer and Circe, but I can't see how those types of characters could be translated to a camp follower)
>>54261
>granted Koraeli et all have done good work with mod original corrupt characters like the necromancer and Circe
Yes, all those things that I definitely wrote are pretty good.
>>54261
Pure Ember is a devoted waifu that makes Amily look like a demoness in comparison.
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>>54261
>pure Ember is deredere lover who loves you for being her race's last hope and is a pure waifu who wants to make more babies with you to repopulate her race
>corrupt Ember is a sadistic but still loving femdom sex lover that wants to fuck you pregnant/be fucked pregnant nonstop to repopulate her race
Would this work?
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>>54261
wasn't the original idea for corrupt ember to go full yandere?
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Why did anne marie get commented out?
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>>54275
The thing is, the moth already fills the role of yandere
>>54272
It is a bit weird that despite being a virgin, she got her ass fucked a lot.  But I'm sure Ember would be sucking off Urta if she wasn't being made when Fen was already done making the game.
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>>54277
She never got written in the first place.
>>54232
More interactions with the children would be good.
Also more romance, maybe dates or something similar.
>>54273
Honestly i just wish the current ember was consistent in how much tsun or dere she is.
It seems to change scene by scene.
My cute bipolar dragon wife...
>>54283
In amily's defense, her taking bee eggs up her bum for honey was written before countless whiskerfruit existed around the lake.
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>>54294
There's a weird inconsistency with things like that. Reminds me of how Dominika tells you she's still human because "you don't have to put everything in your mouth" when several other characters tell you they had no choice but to eat the things that transformed them
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>>54254
How long does it take for them to hatch?
>>54297
>"you don't have to put everything in your mouth"
Doesn't that mean she put it into her ass instead and just absorbed non-semen nutrients through her rectum?
>>54283
Ember's author adored Urta and credited her for starting his interest in futa
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>Ember's author adored Urta and credited her for starting his interest in futa
>>54315
So basically we dodged a bullet
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>Ember's author adored Urta and credited her for starting his interest in futa
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>>54315
>you now realize that the corrupt ember path would have had her be a dommy futa turbobitch
>you now realize that, by remaining unfinished, we dodged the bullet of both pure and mixed ember joining the urta harem
never have I been so glad that something was dropped before completion.
What fetish of yours is lacking in this game?
Except loli, that's a given
>>54341
My fetish is romance. It hardly exists in the game at all.
>>54341
There's a lot, though something I can't recall any of is socks.
>>54341
Locking dommy futa turbobitches up in chastity and having nice vanilla rape with them.
>>54341
Virgins, Marriage/Monogamous relationships in general, and Transforming NPCs in general.

Virgins are pretty simple, sure it's a little weird in a world where the most common punishment and reward are sex, but the only proper virgin is a genderbending lizard or your dragon(daughter?) that you hatch, the rest of them have certainly used other parts of their bodies for the sexual pleasure of others.  I just think there should be more, but furries get really weird about virgins for some reason, defloration is also another niche fetish of mine.

Marriage/Mongamous is pretty much not supported at all, outside of certain challenge runs you're going to fuck and get fucked constantly by everyone.  Outside of some fluff about giving someone a ring or fucking Amily with a wedding dress(Or was that a fever dream?) I'm not too big into monogamy myself, but when you're playing a character(because self inserting is not the only way to roleplay) sometimes it just makes sense with them to want a proper relationship.  You can have that kinda, but you also lose the ability to interact with 90% of the game's content.

Transformation is the name of the game, yet outside of the Champ it's rarely used with NPCs.  Like sure you can remove the dicks of most Futas(now anyway) and make them lactate but that's not it, I'd like it if characters had ranges of transformation states you could achieve with them, like a subspecies.

Bonus fetish, turning everyone the Champ meets into a woman BONUS points if they're some dommy alpha chad, Nothing like breaking in a fresh vaginal virgin when they threated to fuck your ass minutes prior.
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>>54345
>rest of them have certainly used other parts of their bodies for the sexual pleasure of others
Amily may have had anal, but it was to incubate eggs, so you can argue either way on that.
>daughter
There's also your other daughters—the sharks, Dolores, Helspawn, Kid A, harpies.
Also, Phylla is a virgin, with bolded text directly remarking about you taking her virginity. And you, if you go fuck yourself (Doppelganger and Urta Quest)
I may be missing one.
>nothing like breaking a vaginal virgin that wanted to fuck your ass minutes prior
Sounds pretty faggy to me. You're right that TFs are a major feature of the game, but genderbending is definitely gay shit
Why is virginity a thing in a universe where you can lose or grow multiple sexual organs by eating magic fruit?
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>>54347
You can make a new hole that hasn't been fucked, but there's still the first experience regardless of the parts
Virginity is a thing so long as linear time is.
>>54182
Return the french, or suffer my curse
>>54341
Submissive women. The game doesn't really have any unless you count shit like Arian or Kelly. There is stuff like the obligatory victory rape scenes, but I don't think there's a named female character without multiple femdom scenes (again, excepting characters that can be either sex). Practically speaking you can barely even interact with Marble or Helia without it being femdom. Bimbo Sophie kinda works, I guess, but I'd prefer a more vanilla "innocent, vulnerable girl devotes herself to you in exchange for protection" style dynamic
>>54358
I guess Izma is submissive once you break her in
>>54358
What about exercise pig girl and ant girl
>>54345
You sure have a lot of "in generals"
Aren't your kids technically virgins until you have sex with them?
Some of them have "marriage" scenes too
sure its only pretend, but you pretend to be the one fucking them in real life so it might as well count as real too
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>>54358
What about Ceraph?
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>>54341
Putting girls in orgasm denial. Especially long term or permanent.
The only instances I recall are Rubi, which really does nothing, and Izma if you refuse to fuck her after beating her, and that goes away as soon as she moves in.
>>54358
Some more femsubs are the slaves
>Latex goo girl
>Bathslut
>Vapula
>Holli
Turns out giving women freedom was a mistake.
>>54404
>technically
Why "technically"?
scrambled eggs
Replies: >>54480
So, was some way to get Kid A without having a vagina ever added?
Who the fuck took out the lesbi sharkdauthers scene for male MC? I want my family bounding time back!
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>>54411
>So, was some way to get Kid A without having a vagina ever added?
No, that would be dumb.
>>54412
>Who the fuck took out the lesbi sharkdauthers scene for male MC?
Nobody.
>>54412
I want the threesome male action with those two.
>>54411
Only way to have her for male MCs is to save edit
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>>54415
Or to have a druken bender and wake up with a kid you don't recognize, I do wish there was some way to get Kid A without one, like you stumble across a little baby that is attached to you and eventually you figure out it's your kid.
>>54411
Save edit
Who the hell is Kid A?
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>>54425
He's the older brother of Kid B.
<he's a kid that you can have with an anemone enemy and becomes a pseudo follower at camp
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>>54427
IIRC This one specifically you have to be the mother of, and can not sire them. I only learned about them on wiki cause i never play fertile characters.
Did they ever change it so that Kid A stops removing anemone penises now that we can do it ourselves? I remember this being mentioned, but can't recall if it made it in game.
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>>54341
Sticky bondage (is there even a proper name for it?) Pretty much bondage but instead of rope and the like it is stuff like slime glue or whatever. Dunno why but the struggle against that stuff where you seem to be getting through but it only pulls you back in again is pretty hot to me desu. Regular bondage doesn't do it for me because it is kinda too rigid.
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>>54341
>foot kink
There isn't a lot of foot stuff in CoC. Definitely a lot less than you would expect from a perverted game. I don't like the humiliation aspect of foot fetishism, but I like it, when it's forced on you. Like actually forced, not "you are the submissive weak beta male voluntarily letting a woman dominate you".
>real rape
Everyone is always fucking consenting. Even monsters that are supposed to be your arch nemesis. I want real rape. Not "I said no, but then it started feeling good and I liked it". You should be able to humiliate the enemy and have them absolutely hate it.
Not really a "fetish", but
>stat-based sex
You should only get good at Sex with a high strength/endurance score and a high enough sex skill. Kind of like Kaiserinreich. That game is unfinished as fuck, but featured different sex scenes based on how good you were. If you didn't take the piss fetish for example, which would give a certain bonus to your "getting pissed on skill" you would always fuck up the scene with the vendor woman, when you begged her for food.
>reluctant sex
Similar to the lack of real rape. I don't want fucking consent. I want to have sex scenes, where you force a girl to give you a blowjob and she hates it the entire time and is staring daggers at you.
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>>54433
>real rape
rebecc, marble, jojo, akbal
>reluctant sex
Older kitten sister in Tel Adre, Hel's sister in Phoenix Tower?  There is a lot of "not there" or "too big", but it usually ends with both sides enjoying themselves.
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>>54434
>rebecc
who was that again?
>marble
I guess there is that single scene that feels like an objectively bad choice.
>jojo
he gets corrupted into enjoying it though
and I am not gay
>akbal
this feels more like a mutual game for dominance instead of real rape

>There is a lot of "not there" or "too big", but it usually ends with both sides enjoying themselves.
Yeah, that is what I don't like. I want the dark aspects of rape being portrayed. Humiliation, Abuse and Trauma.
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>>54427
>he
>>54430
Only if you're a man
>>54435
>who was that again?
Sheep village
>>54432
Genuinely surprised to hear the game lacks that. With the slime stuff, the webbing, I would figure there's much.
>>54433
I agree there's drastically too much consent in a game superficially filled with rape
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Can you guys mod CoC2 so that I can kill shitty characters like Ninian? Fuck that faggot ass fairy fucking just die already
>>54446
A bunch of effort for a shit game nobody here plays or likes
But unlike CoC, that game gets updates that will require further upkeep to make any modifications stick around.
Ask again when CoC2 is finished so any modification can be one-and-done
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>>54446
>CoC2
unsalvageable.
>>54341
NTR
Phylla needs to get cucked as I go and fuck workers in the colony between arena matches, and her kids while she just watches and continues to manage the mining
Also need to fuck Helspawn in front of the spider boyfriend
>>54447
To add onto that isn't savin a faggot and obfuscated the code to make modding harder?
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>>54451
Yeah, that's what happened.
>>54446
Don't play that shit.
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>>54452
There's less faggot shit in CoC1?
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>>54450
>Champ netori
Based and bullpilled
>>54450
>NTR
Listen here you litt-
>Player is the bull
Acceptable.
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>>54450
<Fucking Hellsawn in front of the spider boyfriend
>Not making her boyfriend your cock sleeve slowly by stealthly fucking him every. single. time. he thinks he have a chance to get lucky with hellspawn
The only way to get rid of the sissy menace permanently is to turn them into faggots even if it's one by one.
>>54227
I guess there are the fetish cult and beehive groups.
>>54445
Yeah i was sadly surprised about it being not that much to go with.
>>54410
more salad tossing scenes when
>>54445
I remember when CoC was still being developed by Fen, I briefly tried to write something for it (didn't get in, don't ask), and I was looking over the documentation and style guides for user submissions, one of the items therein was a prohibition against brutal/painful rape scenes. I think it's true that such scenes are kind of broadly at odds with the tone of the game, but better that than futa and furshit
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>>54481
fen=fag
So how do I beat the bone fuckers at the old manor? Fighting one of them is doable, but all three at once is painful. Am I supposed to just grind my strength?
>>54490
If you can do one dungeon, you can do them all. Your stats should be fine
Try stunning, that's a good trick
Alternatively, somehow there's a way to get a ring that lets you bleed non-bleeding targets, that'll melt those bones.
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>>54490
Alternatively get more AoE attacks and spam them
Thanks, will do. I spent most of the game focusing on the tease skill, so 3 strong enemies with no libido is a bit of a roadbump.
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>>54493
Remember to target the jester or healer, kill the bone guardian last
>>54490
To engage in the newer content you have to focus on 5 things, def reduction perks, being able to blind your opponents, buffing yourself Charge Weapon+Might  speed/evasion and defense but it is very doable considering that my character's build is elder which caps my strength at 95
>>54491
The harpy nest is the only difficulty spike aside from Lethice's dungeon of the vanilla game, the rest are glorified slap fights that i can't instantly 100 lust because the game got rebalanced.
>>54474
First i'll fuck Helspawn in front of him then fuck that bitch spider sissy.
Then turn him into a proper girl with a womb to impregnate along with my daughter.
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>>54474
Nice try, faggot.
>>54474
Making a girl watch you turn her brother or boyfriend into your cock sleeve is the ultimate flex, very based.
When I get a girlfriend, I too will fuck all her relatives to assert dominance on our first night.
>>54481
Moof?
>>54447
>that will require further upkeep to make any modifications stick around
or maintain a patcher which is still 3 times the work of maintaining this mod

>>54474
could gender swap her spider bf
>"ONLY RUG MUNCHERS ALLOWED UNDER MY ROOF!"
or something
>>54496
>Then turn him into a proper girl with a womb to impregnate along with my daughter.
yeah like that

>>54490
I used Terrestrial Fire and robes to do a lot of multi nuke AOE shit, also target order matters
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>200 years later of waiting for more incest scenes
I don't give a shit about combat, balance or new spells man
>>54570
basd and incestpilled
>>54570
Coders are not writers, so coders don't write. Coders can and do, however, tweak things in the code. Strange how that works, is it not? Perhaps you should try your hand at it, I'm sure there are many more like you who'd want that sort of content.
Sharks?
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>>54604
We need to be able to find and fuck Minerva's shark daughter and inbred grand daughter to add to our shark harem
>>54570
bee the change you wanna see in the world
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>>54570
That's interesting. Because I pretty much only care about combat, balance, spells, etc. It's the only reason why I am playing this game and not reading erotic stories on Literotica or AO3.

Btw someone suggest me a challenge run please. Like "let yourself get pierced enough times to disable your normal attack" or "use dragon transformation items, until you are a full dragon, never use a weapon or heavy armor"
>>54630
no equipment, magic only
>>54630
Use only Transformation related stuff for combat (Claws horns etc)
>>54630
End Lethice as a virgin girl without savescumming
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>>54633
Does anal count?
Survival mode too?
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>>54643
If you ask me
Yes it counts
Yes
>>54630
Abilities only with ability cooldowns enabled
>>54630
have sex with alices only.
>>54630
Nudist kitsune loli monk
how does Akbal's quest work, do I have to keep buttfucking him? i tried skimming through the code on github but i couldn't find what makes it progress
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>>54674
It's really more of a Fera thing than it is about Akbal so make sure you trigger the halloween events I guess
does kitsune score go down with furfag fox tfs in this mod
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>>54693
Probably. Kitsunes have high int, and being a furry lowers your IQ
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No, it doesn't. I just tested it with my nine tails character and despite eating dozens of berries she kept 7 kitsune score and gained 6 fox score. 
Fox ears and tail(s) give you both fox and kitsune score, so even fully transformed kitsune will still have 2 fox score. I can only assume the same is true for fully transformed fox. You can increase either of those scores by using transformative item (fox berry or kitsune jewel) and rolling fox ears or tail transformation.
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>>54703
>>54693
Is anyone else having issues with the mega link not functioning?
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>>54706
It's working fine for me.
>>54706
Just refresh
It's probably just a cache issue on your end
holy shit, been a hell of a long while (years) since I last touched this /hgg/-modded game, im surprised it's still running

the version I got is 1.6.10, what changed since then (added/removed)?
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>>54713
1.6.10 was only a year and a half ago, pretty easy to just skim through the changelog for that.
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Where can I get the flash debugger thing at? The link in the op doesnt work anymore. Just takes me to this page.
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>>54716
Check the mega for spare binaries.
>>54713
Read the changelog in the mega
Helia. Minotaurs. A candlelit dinner.
Damn you Savin!
thread's dead, baby. thread's dead
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>>54820
xianxiachads..... i kneel.........
how do i destroy that fat nigga golem
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>>54828
hit and run until he ded
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>>54828
Go big or go home
NUKE everything into oblivion
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>>54830
>>54829
I managed to cheese him with leech + the dullahan scythe :D
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>>54832
Should've used ring of tearing and light rail avenger
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>>54834
I haven't found either of those yet I haven't been playing the game for too long
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>>54835
You need to have silly mode on and explore the boat a few times for avenger
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>>54850
I see thanks for telling me I'll do my next character with silly mode on
>>54027 (OP) 
whoever wrote the force fluff option needs to get head immediately
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>>54880
the what
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>>54881
Kitsune only victory scene
>>54027 (OP) 
who do i kill to full power the beautiful sword? all the main storyline demons, the dullahan and who else?
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>>54884
Kelt, Marae, Ceraph, that marauder one.. The one attacking Owca. I forget her name.
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>>54886
that seems kind of shitty corrupting marae just to power up the sword but thanks for letting me know about those characters
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>>54889
You can get an upgrade from her with either path.
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>>54894
excuse me for being retarded in that case
>>54834
where's the silly little ring :3
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>>54910
one of the circe rewards
>>54027 (OP) 
So does this mainly focus only on loli, or are there a fair few shota additions as well?
>>54919
fapping to little girls does not make you a pedo, but fapping to little boys makes you a fag and a pedo
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>>54920
Fapping to little girls means you're not attracted to the female form, which makes you a fag by default.
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>>54919
I think loli is only a third of it, at best.
But I lack the brain power to crunch those numbers and really know.
As for shota, though... I can't think of any. Maybe there's some, but I'm unaware of it off hand.
Replies: >>54925
how do you do the NTR option for Lottie that pops up in the Weights excercise menu?
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>>54923
That's real? I thought it was just an idea that didn't go through back in the days of fen forum stuff
I vaguely recall hearing about it though. It's fitness and confidence. If there's a scene for NTRing Lottie, it's her having a bad figure and confidence. In the opposite direction, you have to be fat and unfit while she's super confident and fit.
Maybe only NTRing her got in. I'm sure I don't need to tell you not to take my information as gospel about this.
Good luck with that
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>>54922
>I think loli is only a third of it, at best.
It's closer to 1/30 than 1/3. I'm also too lazy to really tally it all up, but I would very roughly estimate that it's 5-10% of the mod-added content, and I think probably at the lower end of that range.
>>54924
well the button is greyed out, though I do have the option of fucking that spider infront of her unlocked in the normal sex menu
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>>54919
There's a tiny bit of content for shota champions, and a couple of customizable NPCs (Ember and Nieve) had shota options added. That's pretty much it. You can have sons but there's almost no interaction with them.
I could be forgetting something though, I really only pay attention to the lolis.
Little boys are cute. Small dick, kissable face, clear spermless cum-squirt
I'd dig it if someone added one for me to love.
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>>54930
It'd be way easier to turn an existing character like Jojo into a teen/shota.
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>>54931
Definitely easier, but much lower quality. A character who is written as a child in the first place is far better than a reskinned adult.
>>54884
Kill every named corrputed character possible basically, then also 2 upgrades from cleansing the corrupted glades.
Do you guys use the clockwork shield I use it because the prospect of stopping time is cool
>>54935
Die, Facebook moth
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>>54923
>>54924
Low Confidence High Fat
then select the fuck her friend option(requires cock)
>>54927
>fucking that spider infront of her unlocked in the normal sex menu
That IS the NTR option
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>>54935
I use it so I don't have to waste perk points on dumbass strong back
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>>54941
what are the implications of this message
>>54935
it's a fitting off-hand tool for a mage
>>54943
there was an option called NTRLift in the excercise menu under weights but it was greye dout which is what I meant
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>>54951
Requires having fucked Ifris, being fit, and having high cum production.
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>>54952
ok thank you :D
>>54952
is there a corruption requirement on that one too?
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>>54954
There's not.
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>>54955
sorry for asking so many questions but any morale/body requirements? Because the option is just completely gone for me right now
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>>54956
Requirement to reach the menu where it can be available:
>if (lottieTone() <= 70)
Requirement for the button:
>if (lottieMorale() <= 30 && flags[kFLAGS.TIMES_FUCKED_IFRIS_BLOWJOB] > 0 && player.str >= 75 && player.tone >= 60 && player.cumQ() >= 1000)
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>>54959
alright thanks for the help :)
>>54921
But anon, I beat it to oppai loli. And that one fat assed dragon.
>>54036
big number maek big pp

>>54108
From what I remember you have to defur her before ever talking to her which is a little annoying since getting a black egg can take a while.

>>54894
Speaking of which is there any plans to make the factory operational again as implied if you don't blow it? Like Letchite sends some elite demons to get it up and running and you have to find someone to help you figure out how to safely shut it down for good then fight through it again with much tougher enemies.
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>>54971
>From what I remember
You remember wrong.
>>54027 (OP) 
should i give dolores her book back guys!!
Replies: >>54997
why did she summon a tentacle monster
>>54944
Strong Smarter, not Harder
>>54971
>Letchite
for 10 years I have put up with people calling her Lethicite but never this
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>>54978
Should you?
>>54996
Leech city
>>54944
>Not minmaxing your inventory
lol 
lmao
Replies: >>55013
does the divine bark serve any purpose besides being made into armor
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>>54027 (OP) 
Am I evil for fucking the loli moth
>>54935
It's really good if you don't want to two hand a weapon or are playing a mage.
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>>55006
Two handing a weapon is mediocre. It can work, and be good, but a shield is just better, especially if you up the difficulty or fight enemies tougher than you're ready for stat-wise.
The clockwork shield is absurdly good to the point that you really should struggle to justify going two-handed. You can make anything work, but the shield is just really damn good
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I like to believe this thread is just me and 2 other people :)
>>55001
That's what I've been doing before getting the backpack and the shield
>>55003
It literally serves no other purpose than to make you look gay with that shitty looking armor
>>55011
You're probably not wrong, I usually check the thread at least once a day but I don't post because I don't really have anything to say. Hell I haven't even played the game in close to a year at this point coming here more a bad habit than anything else.
>>55011
Don't forget about me, the guy who has yet to touch this game because they've been waiting for the vamp lolis for 3 years, *cough* I'll fuck the moths one day.
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>>55011
Come to think of it, how come this site doesn't have a unique posters counter like other imageboards?
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>>55035
I've never been a fan of those, or any other features that reduce anonymity.
>>55035
CoC generals have an extremely long and cherished history of aggressive samefagging against the forbidden fetishes, leaving poster counts out of it entirely saves us the embarrassment of seeing someone airplane moding constantly to call everything NTR
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>>55046
The lack of a poster counter NTRs us out of being able to see that
I want to try writing content for this but I am simultaneously ESL, retarded, creatively bankrupt and a virgin :|
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>>55059
>simultaneously ESL, retarded, creatively bankrupt and a virgin
That describes a few writers we've had, give it a try anyways.
>>55031
I have been waiting for magical girl content for a length of time so long i have forgotten when i started waiting
recently played CoC2. 
my thoughts: 1 is better
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>>55069
Natural conclusion
>>55059
How did you forget the vampires you already wrote?
>>55069
I find myself playing the one that gets updated more frequently.
Also I feel like 2 has more in the way of breeding your harem, but the mod here has all the loli/incest(except sisters, idk why they have such a hard no for incest *unless* it's sisters)
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>>55087
you mean your harem getting bred
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>>55087
Sisters are somewhat more socially acceptable for whatever reason. Especially if twins.
>>55091
Characters you can impregnate that don't fuck others afterwards; 
kiyoko, rindo, catgirl harem, gwyn, vari, ragnild, and zo.
now if you don't want to count the kitsune wife, and concubine I'd understand since their lore implies they fuck to sustain their souls(even though kohaku is an adult virgin so clearly some exceptions), but 7 is actually pretty good for a game with as much focus on poly-amorous relationships as this.(im not counting centaurs or marefolk cause i'm not a horsefucker) So I'm going to assume you let yourself get cucked early on trying it by cait after she told you she isn't monogamous, got mad, and concluded the entire game is ntr or something.

Honestly where the fuck are you looking with your NTR microscope to find your girl getting impregnated??
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>>55099
To add to this list of breedable characters that don't cheat
>Lyric
>Hretha
>Infirth
>Nihara
>Brienne
>Gwyn
>Zo
>Noire
>*Eubicha and Elthara
*You have to initiate the cucking with these 2. Their characters wouldn't normally do this.
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>>55100
shit i didn't even know you could knock up some of these like lyric, I mentioned gwyn, and zo. Hretha I didn't include cause I just assume the fertility priestess at least passes out handies like when she puts you in a rut. btw speaking of rut can we get an item that just toggles it on until you cure it with something? I like rut content but stocking up to stay in rut is bothersome.
Who, and where is Noire?
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>>55101
>btw speaking of rut can we get an item that just toggles it on until you cure it with something? I like rut content but stocking up to stay in rut is bothersome.
Blank Powder sterilizes you and removes rut. Pink Draught restores fertility.
>Who, and where is Noire?
She is a new sheep woman written by Tobs and found in Khor'Minos' bath house.
>>55101
>Hretha I didn't include cause I just assume the fertility priestess at least passes out handies like when she puts you in a rut. 
They probably do heh
i remember the late 2010s when even mentioning CuCk2 would get you a swift disemboweling by the resident anti ntrfags. this thread is dead, we have killed it, and we will never have enough water to wash away the blood
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>>55108
pause the theater for a moment friend, and maybe say what exactly it is you dislike in coc2? if we can atleast frame our criticism constructively it helps target things to remove or improve. But what it looks like you are doing is just saying "coc2 bad savin is a fag, game is for cucks!" without like even a shred of rationale for your stance. And if the reason you arent arguing a point of any kind is you don't wanna interact with people who don't share your hivemind it begs the question of the point of your post being anything more than whining?
>>55108
now hold on a minute. CuCk2 existed in 2010?
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>>55119
>Browsing a text thread for a text game while being unable to read
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>>55109
Not that anon, but I miss parent/child incest and being able to save edit.
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>>55120
Reading is for nerds anon. I plug cables directly into my eye sockets so i can skip reading and get the data directly into my brain.
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>>55126
This. For over ten years I have been posing as a professional dairy farmer so that I can purchase fresh bull semen from the local farms and rub it over my Helia sex doll while I make love to her in order to make the experience more realistic. I have only come close to being caught once, when I accidentally got too immersed in the fantasy and asked the stud farmer for minotaur cum instead of bull semen
>>55125
I save edit currently. it just gives me a little pop-up when i load the save that changes nothing. 
Also valid on the loss of p/c incest. I was just hoping these people that say it is full of ntr would direct me to what rock they found ntr under that didn't have a no thanks fuck off button. 
Like I opt out of interacting with that content when presented with the option to do so and haven't seen anything forced on me.
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>>55109
>maybe say what exactly it is you dislike in coc2? if we can atleast frame our criticism constructively it helps target things to remove or improve
My criticism is that this is not the thread for that.
It's weird how furry went from a reviled and despised fetish across the board into something that was generally accepted by the mid '10s, and then NTR/((( "voyeurism" ))) took its place during the years when "cuck" was a politically-charged term with severe associations attached to it and everyone was screaming about it for weeks on end. Is there a current fetish that's taken their place or were they the only two of their kind?
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>>55132
I thought Savin set the game up to not work properly if you save edit? Are you using a specific editor like coced? Or do you just use minerva or something?
>>55141
used this i'm pretty sure https://end5.github.io/CoC2-Save-Editor/CoC2SaveEditor.html
My game works fine it just has a little warning pop-up on load saying my save is edited. It seems less like save editing doesn't work, and more like "we will refuse to help with anything involving save editing". This was literally the first result on googling coc2 save editor btw.
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>>55139
Probably only two of their kind.
Otherwise guro or lolis would get into mainstream by now.
>>55011
Sharks.
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>>55141
>>55143
>tfw I just edit it in notepad
it's a fucking mess to look at but it works
>>55149
Man I'd love an expansion to the shark and harpy daughters. Like give them their own button, and scene selection. Also add group sex for harpy daughters, pains me that you got a roost squabbling over who's turn it is without an option to treat more than one at a time.
I just want more lolidom
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>>55163
>TFW no barefoot lolis that step on you
>>55141
>>55143
You also could just cheat via the browser console if you open the html file from the resources folder
>>54341
More trap-related stuff because I'm a fucking fag
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>>55186
>We still can't bring Princess Gwynn home to save her from the deepwoods.
>No trap companions at all
I don't count Jojo and Arian since I'd always considered them to be twinks (though I've always let Arian tf into a woman).
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>>55109
Different anon but I dislike CoC2 because it has nothing to do with CoC besides sharing a name and a few writers. I also dislike how the PC feels like a side character to make room for a bunch of super cool OCs, and how Savin goes out of his way to prevent the game from feeling like a power fantasy like he's writing a fantasy novel instead of a porn game where your supposed to have fun running around, meeting new people, fighting, and fucking anyone who looks at you funny. The fact that Savin is also a cunt and a cuck is just the cherry on the shit cake.
>>55206
Well, rewrite joy then
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>>55209
Joy isn't a trap. Unless you're suggesting Joy be rewritten as a trappy Jojo? I'm not doing that. Turning futas into traps is super gay bro.
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>>55211
That is what I was suggesting, yes. But also did Joy have a vag? Does the item do that?
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>>55213
The bimbo liquer Jojo uses that turns him into Joy will immediately remove cock, add vagina, and grant a very curvy, busty feminine figure.
Joy does have a cock and vag though, since the writer didn't care about established mechanics and just wanted dick
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>>55216
Ah. My bad.
>>55139
> Is there a current fetish that's taken their place or were they the only two of their kind?
autogynephilia. where have you been?
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>>55222
You're absolutely right. I'm ashamed I didn't think of it.
>>55008
Not really. When I turn on level scaling the game becomes practically unplayable without using the Dullahan Scythe. Everything just takes too long to die otherwise. Without level scaling on, and with the right bonuses stacked, the Scythe oneshots practically anything that isn't a mod original boss on a crit. Even without a crit, it does 800 minimum. A shield is completely superfluous at that point
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>>55229
Even when solely considering raw direct damage, two-handed weapons lose out in most cases, and that's before taking the shield or other 1H/double-attack advantages into account.
Two-handed basically only does more damage in NG+ with good str-boosting TFs. Even then, in longer fights or against high HP, 1H still usually wins due to the extra bleed stacking (which is percentage-based), or the extra Brutal Blows and Sever Tendons when you need those.
The massive defensive bonuses of 1H weapons are just an extra bonus on top of their generally-better offense.
Reminder to the coders who have already done such a great job making the game's code so intuitive and easy to add to and understand even if nobody is doing it much these days: implementing the achievement popup/sprite system from Revamp would make us superior to every other version of CoC in every way please and thank you for your time
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>>55232
I remember seeing a very really fucking fancy UI mockup some threads ago that would be amazing to see finished
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>>55242
Here you go anon >>48935
I wonder if more people are still interested in it enough so to get the coders to make this
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>>55253
I'd imagine most of us are at least a bit interested
I guess the fervor of the game not being dead fizzled out.
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>>54027 (OP) 
Quick Amily Pixel art.
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>>55287
doesn't feel like something i would tap needs more work
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>>55288
¯\_(ツ)_/¯  just wanted to pump out a representation quickly thats slightly more readable then the in game pixel art, but still easy to do. also big enough to make noticeable changes to the model.
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>>55290
Personally I think what we currently have is fine
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>>55291
thats cool, mostly doing this for myself. JUst thought I might as well post it since its content.
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>>55293
Fair enough
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dog morph, horse morph, and urta
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>trying to remake the game's sprites instead of just editing and mashing together different bodies, heads, limbs and poses from the original ones to create new characters that match every other sprite in the game
NGMI + cringepilled + you won't finish them + what the fuck is that human + where is Urta's 20 inch Amily breaker + reported to oca
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>>55298
Originals are like 30 pixels high, very hard to see anything. Also, I prefer my women dedicked personally. I actually have a selection of penises made for mix and matching, just trying out the canine one on model.
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>>55299
bro using black as a border color is basic shit, putting mottled pink on the outside of the horse cock instead of the inside makes it look like it has worms crawling on it
Why in gods name is mino blood so difficult to get. You either get it off Edryn, who you need to have a small cock for and who might just give you an incubus draft, or fucking imp lords of all things. Meanwhile, killing minotaurs will just give you their cum or, if you're lucky, a shitty weapon.
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>>55297
>>55299
better than coc2 art already
>>55309
>imp lords
Sounds like you're playing the wrong mod, this one's for hgg edition
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NEED....AIKO....ARMPIT...FUCK....
*dies
>>55309
>or fucking imp lords of all things
No such thing.
>Meanwhile, killing minotaurs will just give you their cum or, if you're lucky, a shitty weapon.
Minotaurs have a 40-50% chance to drop blood (50% if they have an axe, 40% if not).
Oswald and Benoit can also sell as much as you can afford (and it's dirt cheap so that should be all you need), 10% chance per day.
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>>55309
I'm imagining your champion jerking off dying minos, getting frustrated that they won't cum blood and just leaving,
>>55317
>>55323
Well fuck me, you're right. I've been stuck on the base game from Fen's site the entire time. That's a bit embarrassing.
On a side note, is there a list of drop rates and items that can drop from enemies for this mod?
Time Traveler Achievement is unobtainable; Not in that it requires save editing to get that far, but in that there is no code in the game to award it.
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>>55330
Oh, Ditto for "Smashed".
No references outside of the achievement list.
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>>55330
>>55332
2 down, 160 to go.
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>>55232
>implementing the achievement popup/sprite system from Revamp would make us superior to every other version of CoC in every way please and thank you for your time
Keeping it out of this mod is what makes it superior. It looks extremely low-effort and comes bundled with le ebin Minecraft references. It would need to be implemented from scratch and get a makeover from >>48935
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Meet your master true is also broken (no refs)
>>55339
as expected of the kitteh mod but you can't deny the popup system works better at catching the eye that you've achieved something notable instead one line of bold text
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>>55356
>you can't deny the popup system works better at catching the eye
I can't. But moving parts don't belong in this game either. The stat bars being animated is already skirting the border of acceptable.
>that you've achieved something notable
Almost none of the achievements are notable and they're more filler. A lot of them are drivel like "do this incredibly mundane and simplistic task and be congratulated!" which is borderline insulting. If anything, the existing achievements should be reconsidered and culled accordingly to make them actual achievements to mark accomplishments.
I like xianxia more because big damage numbers make me go :)
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Achievements were a mistake to begin with, they're for kids and autists who can't set goals for themselves and can't feel a sense of accomplishment unless the game tells them they've been a good boy.
The fact that almost none of them can even be considered achievements makes it even worse.
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>>55373
>The fact that almost none of them can even be considered achievements makes it even worse.
this
is there anyone who has worked on this who can make achievements into actual achievements for once?
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>>55374
Only thing I could think of are completing boss battles and dungeons within certain level limits

If you overlevel you become disqualified and those "achievements" get locked out forever unless you start a new game
Completing one forces you to level up so if you get too many at once you get locked out of the others anyway

Unlocking them gives semi-permanent buffs for that "run" but will be reset if you start a new game so "achievements" only count for that one save file but not in others
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>>55372
I had a good laugh. Thank you.
>>55374
People were discussing shit like game supported challenge runs and shit but they never got added
>>55376
Challenge run rewards that automatically break the challenge partway through seems like an odd direction to go in.
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>>55386
would be neat to have more challenges that give something like a unique TF, scene, or non-challenge-breaking thing, like the sex scene and followup if you nuke the nameless horror, or deal a total of 1776 damage to the sky
>>55386
Thing is those "achievements" are tied to some perks so if you can't get those achievements you can't get those perks anymore
So I felt an impulse to write a handful of scenes for Marielle, and the linked guide suggested that I should ask first - something that seemed like a pretty good idea, since I could easily see it ticking some people off. The concept is as follows:

It would start with a female PC infecting Marielle with the eel parasite during the washing scene. Being undead, its effects on her are toned down, and it will die pretty quickly if not fed (she'll explain as much, having once had a run-in with a chameleon herself), but it DOES still have an effect.

If a sufficiently feminine-looking PC then comes back within three days with a dick that matches her craving (revealed by talking to her) and bathes with her, this overcomes her distaste enough for her to willingly have sex with the PC; between finding you attractive and actually wanting your ejaculate, it's enough for her to say yes. She will NOT have sex with a masculine PC or one without a vagina, however; in the first case, because she's not attracted to you, and in the second, because she'll be angry that you apparently only ever had a vagina to infect her. That said, if you meet her conditions, the parasite makes the resulting sex extremely good, something that she wasn't aware the parasite did.

After repeating this a few times, she works through her own conflicting feelings, and comes to a conclusion; she hates your penis, but she now has enough experience ignoring it while getting off and focusing on the things she DOES like that she's willing to have sex with you normally. It might not be something she'd normally consider, but she likes you, and there's nobody else she'd trust enough to open up to regardless. At this point, you can safely let the parasite die instead of continuing to play the morph-the-dick-to-her-cravings game... Unless you're into that.

After making her decision, Marielle will NOT agree to give your dick any more handjobs or footjobs, ironically. She's worked through what she wants, and your penis doesn't figure into that - not to mention that she's perfectly aware of how you took advantage of her condition. While she accepts it, she still low-key resents it. Likewise, outside of penetrative sex, she'll focus on most any part of you BUT your dick, which she continues to regard with distaste when she has to look at it. But unlike before, she'll be willing to have relations with a feminine futanari PC.

The deals off if you go masculine or lose the vagina, though. She'll politely tell you that she's no longer attracted to you, and if you get pushy about it, she'll get angry since she's already compromised a lot to make this work.

...So, do you think it breaks the character concept/appeal too much to consider? I do like the fact that there's a character who's actually turned off by futanari - but it also kind of gives me a "Corrupt Whitney's Farm" kind of impulse. I hope that by writing it as "She views this as a compromise and would still prefer you were a pure woman" type of deal that it can reconcile those two viewpoints...

(I do have some other events related to this in mind, like having her confront you about how your dick JUST SO HAPPENS to keep matching what she told you she wanted, but... I figured I should keep it simple for the summary.)
>see massive post
>begins with "So I felt an impulse to write"
>it's for modshit
take me jesus
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>>55401
Ignoring how well it fits the character:
Marielle is probably the hardest character in the game to write correctly, so right from the start you're most likely going to have a hard time.
Your idea is extremely niche (being entirely parasite content that most people will be grossed out by), so I expect you'd be getting little in the way of enthusiasm or interest regardless of anything else.
Some players will think it breaks her concept too much (I'm leaning that way personally, though it doesn't matter much because the parasite thing is a bigger issue), some will think it's pointless because it doesn't go far enough. So you'll mainly be appealing to people in the middle ground between those opinions, who are also fine with parasites, which I imagine is going to be a pretty small niche.

Another thing to note is that you won't be able to actually satisfy the parasites no matter what you do. Your cum will still be human cum regardless of your transformations. So while she might give in once, I don't imagine she'd be willing to continue after she realizes that it won't help.
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>>55401
It'd honestly probably go better if you just tried to dick the gay out of her.  I don't see why you need to make a weirdly obtuse way to get her to like dick when the best option is literally stockholming her into liking it, which would probably be a corruption thing but you could have a "soft" path that has the same result without the extra depravity that corruption tends to entail.
>>55401
Not the first to express the wish to make her crave cock. Probably the most wished-for addition to her, though it's mostly been through just dicking her straight, a garbage trope I'm equally bored and frustrated by. I'm glad it died some time in the 2010's. But this is a novel approach.
My own discontent with how parasites are done in this game aside, Marielle would be freaked out of her mind if you were to infect her. You could still do it, either in the heat of things while she's too far gone to react fast enough, or forcefully. Though if you don't do the former and mask it as a "whoopsie, teehee, smileyface", don't expect her to ever want to touch you again, and it'll take some of work to calm her down in any scenario before you can think of pushing her into the direction you want. That's one of the reasons why barely anyone's bothered to write parasite content. Not only are the majority of players not fans of it, but neither are most NPCs. The few times your infection is acknowledged by another character, they then refuse to have sex with you, as common sense dictates. Can't remember who that was that, though, most of the game simply pretends you're not some repugnant monstrosity.
But anyway, in addition to the cum issue the other anon mentioned, she'd sooner do everything in her power to be rid of the eels than try to appease them. Doubly so when it involves dicks.
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>>55408

Just to be clear, I've written this primarily for my own personal interest; if everyone else's response is simply "whatever" or "meh", it doesn't really bother me that perhaps three people might actually want to jump through the hoops to read this content.

But I personally consider Marielle one of the better written characters in the game, and I DON'T want to offer anything that would undermine that or irritate the writers who created her. That's more my concern here.

>>55419

Yeah, "dicking her straight" is just... Well, stupid and ick to me. It's more likely that she'd find a way to strangle you to death than to get into it, and I want to avoid falling into that trope.

As for my own personal thought process as to why she'd go along with this... Well, for context, she's been portrayed as pretty passive in response to gross transgressions, and she seems very starved for friendly faces to talk to. The PC can get away with raping her multiple times before she firmly says no, and she's still willing to give the PC handjobs that she's very obviously not interested in giving. That kind of passive mindset combined with vaguely plausible deniability from a face she wants to trust is something I'm leaning on as for why she doesn't just bolt immediately.

"In the heat of the moment" was how I pictured it happening, with a PC claiming she had no idea that the eels would still be interested in the undead; Marielle would be quietly irritated with the PC, but let the matter drop believing it would end there.

As far as the eels themselves go, the way I'm imagining things, she knows they'll die within a couple of days since her body can't properly support them; she's disgusted by them and their effect on her, but she's not desperate since knows it will pass quickly on her own... Except for the PC's ongoing interference.

If the PC is too blatant with their intentions, though, she'll firmly take matters into her own hands with (offscreen) self-surgery to remove the offenders and outright ban the PC afterwards. She's too willing to let the PC cross her boundaries with promises to improve in the future, but she's not so stupid as to ignore the PC blatantly ignoring her wishes.

As far as the mechanics of cum go, though... Sincere not sarcastic question, is that really so big a problem to players? I honestly didn't expect that anyone would care since I wasn't aware of much eel content and this is explicitly an abnormal situation, but since two people mentioned the issue so promptly I guess it matters more than I thought... I can justify it a bit better than I have, though.
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>>55422
Quit the Reddit spacing, you retard.
>The PC can get away with raping her multiple times
She disdains every second of it, progressively more with every time, yet takes a bit to see it necessary to resist or deny you. Does that make it rape?
>Marielle would be quietly irritated with the PC, but let the matter drop believing it would end there
I doubt she'd just drop it so easily. With a creepy eel slithering and sliding around inside her womb, you'd think it'd be her first priority to get that thing the fuck out of there.
>she knows they'll die within a couple of days since her body can't properly support them
How would she know? She'll find out in a few days' time unless you push her into something drastic, maybe can take a good guess, but ultimately will have to trust your word until then. Which could be an opening for the PC, even if I don't know how you would convince her
>(offscreen)
How disappointing.
>is that really so big a problem to players?
To most, no. But this mod somewhat prides itself on not pissing all over the game's consistency. I'd prefer to keep it that way. Seems to be nowhere explicitly stated, though we do know how the eels function when infecting the player. No reason to believe it would be different for Marielle.

The issue is, she may indeed be quite a passive little lady most of the time, preferring the paths of least resistance, but even she has her red lines and limits to the bullshittery she'll tolerate. Getting herself dicked down to prolong the life of parasites that she wants nothing more than to rip out with her own bare hands doesn't sound like something she'd be raring to let happen.
And then, assume you do somehow cajole her into it, why would she want to keep fucking you without the eel-provided gratification afterwards? Unless you think a bit of dicking she quietly hates despite the added pleasure will condition that fossilised mind of hers. You even surmised it yourself, that she'll not end up loving cock. What in this whole excursion would make her settle for a "compromise" and be any more happy than before with it?
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>>55432
>Quit the Reddit spacing, you retard.
My apologies, it's been quite a few years since I felt I'd had anything worth saying on a chan.
>She disdains every second of it, progressively more with every time, yet takes a bit to see it necessary to resist or deny you. Does that make it rape?
Well, the point I was making was that she's already willing to endure a lot of things she hates. If you kept pushing things against her will in these events, she would also end up putting her foot down, but the idea is that it doesn't get to that point unless the player screws up.
>How would she know? 
As I said in the original summary, she will have had a past experience with the eels.
>To most, no. But this mod somewhat prides itself on not pissing all over the game's consistency. I'd prefer to keep it that way. Seems to be nowhere explicitly stated, though we do know how the eels function when infecting the player. No reason to believe it would be different for Marielle.
Is it necessarily different, though? You satisfy your cravings by having sex with the relevant creatures, but none of them are taking transformatives willy-nilly to keep changing their cocks. If the player thinks they've just gulped down mouse cum when it's actually a heavily transformed drider, would we know the difference? The player's just responding to fantasies, after all. And it's already rather different for the PC and the NPCs, based on how the Infected Chameleon Girl acts; she's way less in control of her cravings than the PC, and she clearly doesn't distinguish between a transformed cock and a baseline one.
That said, the simplest justification without complicating the mechanics would probably be to just say that getting the "wrong" cum is enough to keep the eels alive and settle them down for a time, but not to reproduce. Getting the "right" cum is part of their reproductive cycle based on the mechanics, but I have to assume they're eating cum.
>The issue is, she may indeed be quite a passive little lady most of the time, preferring the paths of least resistance, but even she has her red lines and limits to the bullshittery she'll tolerate. Getting herself dicked down to prolong the life of parasites that she wants nothing more than to rip out with her own bare hands doesn't sound like something she'd be raring to let happen.
I already said that she'd be the instigator of all the sex, not the PC (aside from proposing you take a bath together, as happens in many entirely innocent interactions with her). It's fine to say that's a stupid idea that belongs in the trash, and that's the kind of reaction that I'd like to hear as to whether I should present my writing - but I'd rather that critique be directed at what I suggested instead of a completely different scenario.
>What in this whole excursion would make her settle for a "compromise" and be any more happy than before with it?
Experience in learning to focus on the parts of the PC she does like while ignoring the parts she doesn't, combined with how desperately lonely she is that she's willing to fuck demons and have sex with the PC before she's known her for a day. Perhaps some lingering side-effects from having hosted the parasites previously; I can't imagine those things are safe.
If she was living in a town where there are other women she could imagine dating, I'd call the idea absurd, fiction or not. But the PC is presented as being literally her only choice, and she's attracted to a feminine PC so long as the clothes stay on; she's extremely starved for options, and she could convince herself that this is a solution. You're free to disagree that that's plausible, and I respect that opinion; you're also free to say that you hate the idea of it enough that you don't even want it as an option, and if a couple of people say that, I'll be happy to leave it on my hard drive instead of putting it up here.
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>>55433
>Is it necessarily different, though? You satisfy your cravings by having sex with the relevant creatures, but none of them are taking transformatives willy-nilly to keep changing their cocks.
Pablo (transformed into an imp) can't satisfy the imp cravings. Minerva (has anemome cock) can't satisfy anemone cravings. There are a whole lot of horse cocks that can't satisfy minotaur cravings (minotaurs have horse cocks instead of bull cocks for whatever reason).
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how many circe topics are there?
Is Touhoufag's stuff still just stuck in proofreader hell or has it been abandoned? Haven't seen anyone or even Touhoufag himself post about them in a while.
>>55441
Last I knew, he's still got a few hundred pages to write for his Barbie dressup/dating sim. I'm not aware of any proofing having been done.
>>55441
His stuff is finished for now, someone started proofreading it but stopped partway through. I'm not sure how much is left to go.
>>55441
there was some proofreading a while ago but can't remember what came out of it
>>55433
>she will have had a past experience with the eels
Shaky, she's not been to the bog prior to making it to the temple, and doesn't mention anything about parasites in her short talk about it. Doubtful she was travelling long enough to stumble on an infected chameleon, get pumped with eels, and get rid of them again before you found her lying on the ground.
>The player's just responding to fantasies, after all
It's the eels craving it and projecting that craving onto the player. I would assume they can tell the difference. They still wither away even if you get yourself stuffed 24/7, if it's not the right flavour of cum. That's also how pregnancies work. Your stallion cock can be as long and thick and juicy as it wants, but you'll never have horse children unless you fuck a genuine horse. Your cum stays human.
As for the chameleon:
<This smell... semen, and just the right kind. I’ve been so hungry for it lately, it’s maddening! 
>I already said that she'd be the instigator of all the sex, not the PC
Right, I read that as still you coming onto her with a ((( solution ))), and her simply agreeing to it.
The reverse would be out of character. She'd rather bottle it all up and keep hammering it back down than climb onto someone's cock to scratch that itch, doubly so if she knows or at least suspects it'll all pass in a week. Triply so if she knows it'll keep the creatures alive, worst case even let them reproduce inside of her. That's quite a horror scenario, after all.
Takes us back to the previous points. Her already knowing how the eels work would take away what I currently see as the most reasonable way to make this work, which is by tricking her.
>combined with how desperately lonely she is that she's willing to fuck demons
To be fair, succubi are hot. It's their whole shtick. The epitome of femininity, which she happens to be rather into, and they can be a bit pushful, which you know she's weak to. It's also not much of a moral issue to her, bedding the more sensible demons of lust, even if she's stated to be wary of their corrupting effects and ulterior motives.
>and have sex with the PC before she's known her for a day
One of the considerations that went into her nonstandard time tally and the temple not being selectable was to soft-timegate her content. To space it out so that you probably won't be able to fuck her within the day unless the stars align and you know which conversations advance you towards her crotch. Didn't turn out to be perfect, but the thought was there.
>she's extremely starved for options, and she could convince herself that this is a solution
She could perhaps, under particularly stressing circumstances, but would it remain a good solution in her mind for long? You're right, she's starved for touch, she reacts to that quite strongly in bed, and she is happy to have someone not clinically insane to talk to. But your interactions also tire her out. As glad as she is for your company, she's just as glad to be all by her lonesome again. I think you overestimate how desperate and thus willing to make long-term compromises she is. You being the only option at present shouldn't mean she'll take it.
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>>55437
Honestly, I had just assumed that non-generic NPCs were as likely to be an oversight rather than a deliberate choice. I mean, Minerva's cock is literally an anemome parasite that attached to her instead of actually being hers, right? Shouldn't it be producing its own cum rather than Minerva's? And since minotaur cum has special properties of its own that a normal person would notice without parasites being involved, I don't know that that's the same thing, really...
But, well, whatever. If there's in-universe evidence for how eel cravings work, there's in-universe evidence, and the parasites are more fleshed out than I realized.
>>55445
>Shaky, she's not been to the bog prior to making it to the temple, and doesn't mention anything about parasites in her short talk about it. Doubtful she was travelling long enough to stumble on an infected chameleon, get pumped with eels, and get rid of them again before you found her lying on the ground.
She doesn't mention it, but, well, who would? It's something that she'd find intensely unpleasant and which you decidedly did not need to know until eels come up again. As far as the timeline goes, this would also seem like the kind of event that would be more likely to throw off an experienced traveler's idea of how much water they needed, beyond "Oops, misjudged how much I'd sweat in the bog".
I don't know that it's worth mentioning, but the fact that the eels and Marielle are found in the same region was one of the big reasons that put this in my mind to begin with.
>Right, I read that as still you coming onto her with a ((( solution ))), and her simply agreeing to it.
It still matters for her reactions that SHE'S the one who started it. If the PC's just sitting there until she can't take the cravings anymore, her reaction is clearly going to be different from the PC picking her up and railing her.
>Her already knowing how the eels work would take away what I currently see as the most reasonable way to make this work, which is by tricking her.
People who are trying to quit smoking or shoot up heroin will often fall back into their addictions, even knowing that it will kill them. The behavior is irrational because addictions themselves are an irrational urge. I see the behavior the parasites encourage in a similar light.
The Infected Chameleon Girl zealously attacks random strangers after a mere whiff of what she wants; Marielle's only feeling a small fraction of that and firmly rejects cravings that are thoroughly alien to her - but it's still THERE. If you offer a junky a serving of her heroin on a sufficiently nice platter, a lot of them will take it even if they're trying to quit.
>Demons
In fairness, it's only because she's wary about it and doing it anyway that makes me think she's too lonely. If she was just blasé about the dangers of demons, well... As you say, they're hot, and she's into them.
>Timegating
Fair, that was a cheap shot on my part... And this is a sex game at the end of the day. Why isn't the temple selectable, by the way? It feels a bit odd since she's a shopkeeper, and the temple's a distinctive landmark. Avoiding menu clutter, I'm guessing?
>She could perhaps, under particularly stressing circumstances, but would it remain a good solution in her mind for long?
Mmm... I think the "long" part might be us picturing things a bit differently. She's not going to be moving into the PC's camp, and she's not going to be joining the PC's journey; heck, she doesn't even intend to stay in the bog long-term, this is more like a prolonged rest for her. Realistically, this isn't going to last more than a couple of in-game months for her before the PC finishes her quest, in which she'll probably see the PC a handful of times.
People have talked themselves into loveless marriages for less, convincing themselves that they should settle rather than risk having nothing. Spending a couple of months in a casual relationship with the wrong person because you're still enjoying some things and haven't yet realized you're less willing to put up with their issues than you thought doesn't feel like an unnatural development to me.
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>>55454
>the kind of event that would be more likely to throw off an experienced traveler
I do admit that her whole "I didn't pack enough clean water, lmao" is on the weaker side of excuses. It's the kind of thing where you hope nobody thinks too hard on it, even if you can handwave it with her getting lost in Mareth's weird landscape, getting her cart stuck, and generally being inexperienced in traversing temperate swamps.
Getting fucked up by eels would certainly do the job better, though I'd imagine that would scar her a bit more than the mild annoyance she displays.
>If you offer a junky a serving of her heroin on a sufficiently nice platter, a lot of them will take it even if they're trying to quit
The thing that irks me in that reasoning is that in the case of the chameleon and presumably the PC, they're both already sufficiently slutty and hungry enough for cock. So the barrier for going with the flow isn't nearly as high. But here, you have a firm lesbian of God knows how many years. I think it's fair to assume she's got herself figured out, and from the very moment the eels suggest otherwise, she'll despise the very thought. So there's quite a bit of self-possession working against the addiction even before you consider how her undead nature might interact with it.
Secondly, the craving might be there, but contrary to a junkie, Marielle has never felt the shot itself, the payoff. She doesn't know what she's missing out on by not giving in. She sees only the stick, not the carrot, and that's on top of her already less than favourable disposition towards dicks. I don't think the situations are quite comparable.
But maybe the parasites are more potent than I think, and you, a lovely futa that would be right up her alley, were it not for the extra bit, caught her in the bath, in the right place at the right time, and managed to score. She gave herself to you in desperation, and you brought her to new parasite-induced heights for it. Did I get the scenario roughly right? If so, then how do you think she'll take it afterwards? When the eels calm down and allow her a moment of clarity again, when realisation hits her of what she's just done and been made to enjoy. She'll surely know her pleasure was all the parasites' work. Would she eventually accept that, perhaps nudged along by the PC's input, and might she be swayed to do it again in the future? Or would she reach for the knife at worst, lock herself up for a few weeks at best?
>because she's wary about it and doing it anyway that makes me think she's too lonely
How lonely is too lonely?
>Why isn't the temple selectable, by the way?
Retarded headcanon? Something about its residual divine magic interfering with spatial memorisation. Actual main reason? The bog's bloody empty without that thing around.
>Realistically, this isn't going to last more than a couple of in-game months
Depends. She seems to quite like it there. It's quiet, picturesque, and surprisingly safe. And she doesn't have anywhere else to be, anyway. I could see her setting up a more permanent shop in the temple.
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>>55457
>Something about its residual divine magic interfering with spatial memorisation
Having to read much of the bog content's also damaged my frontal cortex and motor skills after prolonged exposure so I can sympathise
>>55457
>though I'd imagine that would scar her a bit more than the mild annoyance she displays.
Reading through her backstory, I do get the impression that she's holding back a LOT of trauma. Killed at a young age, burdened with multiple secrets that could get her killed by anyone, stranded in a strange land filled with stranger people who she still can't open up to, whatever happened in the bazaar to push her away from civilization... I get the feeling she represses a lot, since anyone else probably would have broken down by now.
I mean, when you find her, she's dead in front of the temple; if you'd been any later, she'd have been vulture food. Coming that close to true death would be deeply scarring for most, but she pretty much brushes it aside.
>Did I get the scenario roughly right?
Yes.
>If so, then how do you think she'll take it afterwards?
Honestly? Poorly. After some extended cuddling, when the parasite-induced haze wears off and she realizes what she just did, she hurriedly asks the PC to leave, with very closed-off body language. While it's not in the text I've written (since it's purely from her perspective with no way for the PC to see), she does consider the experience deeply violating in a way that she's not used to, and she needs time to work through what just happened. As a consequence, she refuses to see the player for a couple of days.
>Would she eventually accept that, perhaps nudged along by the PC's input, and might she be swayed to do it again in the future?
Well, my first draft attributed future interactions to the parasites continuing to multiply, increasing the strength of the cravings, with this stage taking place over the course of roughly five feedings as she struggled to work through what to do and kept finding the wrong answers. But since people feel that's too inconsistent with how the parasites currently work, that arc would need to be reconsidered.
But no, at no point do I really have her "accepting" that. Rather, I have her sublimating her cravings into focusing her attention on the PC's breasts and vagina, telling her body that she wants the parts that she does sincerely want, and that it's simply confused as to what's motivating her interest.
Presumably, she'd eventually either resort to drastic measures to get rid of the parasites or go completely mad... But I kind of assume that players would lose interest before it got to that point and just let the parasites finally die.
For reference, I'm assuming this takes place over the course of roughly a week and a half in-game.
>How lonely is too lonely?
Basically? Once you start engaging in risky behavior just to have someone to talk to/sleep with. But I meant that more philosophically than anything game-related.
>The bog's bloody empty without that thing around.
I see... That's true, though it's a bit frustrating to hit the same three events a dozen times before getting to the temple again.
Well, it's probably for the best anyway - things like the -corruption interaction there would probably have to be rebalanced if it was easier to reach.
>I could see her setting up a more permanent shop in the temple.
Ah, I meant more how the PC's supposed to be off finishing the main quest or maybe getting bad-ended. Maybe running off and settling down with one of the NPCs who actually want to date her. Marielle knows about the PC's quest too, so she also knows this is on a pretty firm time limit.
Though that said, she seemed pretty invested in exploring the world - she's certainly attached to the temple at the moment, and looks like she's badly in need of a breather for whatever reason, but... I don't know that she's interested in staying for more than a few months either. Especially once she no longer has anyone sane to talk to there.
Then again, there's definitely something special about that temple... Maybe she'll awaken some strange power that will give her life a true direction. That's definitely outside of scope of this game, though.
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>>55463
>whatever happened in the bazaar to push her away from civilization
She's a recluse by nature anyway, her leaving the bazaar doesn't need to imply anything all too terrible happened there.
>if you'd been any later, she'd have been vulture food
It's left ambiguous. She herself says she fainted, so she could've maybe come to and dragged herself inside in time, but she also laments what an idiotic way to die it would've been. If she really had been so close to death, than that could be a possible out-of-character moment there.
>the parasites continuing to multiply
That sounds utterly harrowing. Some Alien-tier body horror. I always found it strange how the PC is just fine with it.
>struggled to work through what to do and kept finding the wrong answers
Whereas I struggle to work through how she would find those wrong answers. What you describe her doing reeks to me of a desperation that I don't think has a good basis.
>telling her body that she wants the parts that she does sincerely want, and that it's simply confused as to what's motivating her interest
But the cock is still there, and to satisfy the addiction, it's mandatory that she takes it. At that point, while she's not all that deep in yet, why would her mind jump through such hoops to justify the invader and not come to the conclusion that none of this is worth it? And I don't mean anyone's mind, but hers specifically.
If you want to compare it to her allowing the PC to dick her five whole times before she puts a stop to it: one has her simply endure and shut herself away from the world for the few minutes it takes. While it sucks and threatens to drag her thoughts into the abyss the more often you do it, it's still quick, relatively painless, and for her without any lasting consequences. The other keeps her fully engaged in the act. An act that she finds repulsive, yet is forced to enjoy in that moment, denied the ability to block it out, all the while the creature that she knows is the cause of her false craving writhes around inside of her. And when the PC has long since fucked off back to camp, it will still keep writhing, perhaps even multiply and maintain a steady battery against her sexual autonomy. It won't leave her alone, neither physically nor mentally, nor day nor night.
Of course, these aren't really the light- and bottomless chasms a furry porn game will ever want to explore. And that's likely why the whole infestation's horror aspect is so ridiculously non-existent. Something about the chief cuckold's inability to pop a stiffy.
>I kind of assume that players would lose interest before it got to that point
Keep in mind that people play very differently. Some race through content once and never look back, others stick around for several ingame months or come back to certain characters even 500 days later. The main quest doesn't have a timer to it either, so that mileage too varies greatly.
And there are absolutely players here for whom this won't go far enough, and will want to kick her down into the depths of madness.
>Marielle knows about the PC's quest too, so she also knows this is on a pretty firm time limit
She couldn't be sure of that, could she? A PC that would go to such lengths to fuck with her could hardly be trusted to then not go further.
>Maybe she'll awaken some strange power that will give her life a true direction
Don't give that one remaining mahou shoujo fag any hope.
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>>55402
>complaining about modshit in a modshit thread
Really?
>>55401
The only problem I have with this is that you have to start off as female in the first place

Since you've pre-established that she's had run-ins with infected chameleons already why don't it be a small % chance for her to be infected without any player interactions offscreen?
You can even have her already infected when you meet her the first time
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>>55478
>Since you've pre-established that she's had run-ins with infected chameleons already why don't it be a small % chance for her to be infected without any player interactions offscreen?
Hm. You know, that might actually be better in a lot of ways for simplifying the relationship between the PC and Marielle. But I think that requiring Marielle and the PC having been in a sexual relationship before the PC went futa also has advantages... It's a good suggestion, though, I'll need to consider it.
As to why it's written this way now, though - since I usually play without a cock and only considered going futa to see how she reacted, it just kind of started from that base. And having the player need to get involved in such a specific way seemed like an easy way to gate off people who don't want her getting eel'd or seeing that possibility, though I can think of a couple of other ways to handle that.
>>55476
>Bazaar
It's how I interpreted her reaction, at least. But even if she was just driven off by all the depravity there, it's another reminder to her of how she's painfully different from anyone who might talk to her.
>I always found it strange how the PC is just fine with it.
In my head, the PC probably doesn't know exactly how many eels they have or when they grow; they just know they need to guzzle increasingly large amounts of cum.
Though yeah, having eels at all is going to be Alien-tier body horror for the vast majority of people. Just the idea of having a tapeworm makes me shudder, and those don't fuck with your behavior...
>Whereas I struggle to work through how she would find those wrong answers.
First she thinks that she can handle the cravings if she knows she should be on guard now, only to find that the compulsion has strengthened; then she tries a de-wormer that doesn't work; then she tries just not bathing with the PC; then she tries lust suppressants to no effect; then she's quietly at a loss before giving up.
Each of those sounded like reasonable solutions for a person to consider to me, at least.
>At that point, while she's not all that deep in yet, why would her mind jump through such hoops to justify the invader and not come to the conclusion that none of this is worth it? And I don't mean anyone's mind, but hers specifically.
A desperate need to assert control over reactions, to insist that her body is HER'S and not just a host to something that is distinctly not her. The idea of losing control of yourself is horrifying, after all, and reinterpreting things in a way that creates the feeling of control is a common method of rationalization. Especially when she keeps losing when attempting other solutions, and doesn't want to keep going through the harrowing experience of not feeling like she's herself.
>Keep in mind that people play very differently. Some race through content once and never look back, others stick around for several ingame months or come back to certain characters even 500 days later.
This is true, but... Keeping the parasite alive requires changing your cock every three days and going back to Marielle. Maybe they won't quit immediately, but I also don't think many people would be willing to stick with it for a month. That said...
>And there are absolutely players here for whom this won't go far enough, and will want to kick her down into the depths of madness.
I can also see people who would want to see the kind of bad end they could push for, especially in the original idea where the parasites kept getting stronger. It's just... I like Marielle's character, and I don't know that I'd like writing out what would happen if she became someone fundamentally different after the parasites won. I could write that if people feel it's necessary for the idea to be complete, but it's a fair bit distant from what I find appealing about the concept.
>She couldn't be sure of that, could she?
Since she isn't asking for a long-term relationship with the PC, and isn't being asked for one, the veracity of the PC's quest isn't really relevant in this context, is it? And since the parasite issue is resolved by that point, she could just tell the PC to fuck off if she felt like it.
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>>55483
>then she tries just not bathing with the PC
How would that fail?
>then she's quietly at a loss before giving up
There are always more options. She could try to catch them and pull them out. They take occasional peeks outside according to the appearance screen, so that's worth a shot. A likely failure, buggers are too slippery, and they might be tied to your brain. Can probably see it coming. She could simply self-isolate. She has the unique luxury of only needing water for sustenance, so taking that measure to the extreme by finding a cave to bury herself in for a whole week wouldn't be much of a challenge. Risky perhaps, but she's getting desperate. She might know other merchants she could seek for counsel. Buy a chastity belt. Or maybe ask a succubus customer of hers, though that's likely to backfire. And if all fails, sharp blades she does own aplenty.
>she keeps losing when attempting other solutions
I just don't see her giving up and resorting to self-delusion so quickly. Not when she has so many options at her disposal, and such a compelling drive to do anything in her power to restore her physical and mental integrity.
>I also don't think many people would be willing to stick with it for a month
Probably not, no. it's already a very niche scenario mostly aimed at people who want to dick down a dyke, despite them unlikely to be playing the right character to stumble upon that option in the first place.
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>>55485
By the time she tried that one, the parasites had grown enough that the cravings pushed her to make advances on a fully clothed PC. She had thought that since she was able to restrain herself previously that it wouldn't be an issue, but she underestimated the pace of their growth and its implications.
>There are always more options.
There are indeed - but each failure is draining and shakes your own self-confidence as you dwell more and more on the implications of failure. And the one thing that is certain to work (cutting herself open and scraping out her womb) is such a drastic step, traumatizing in its own right, that she's only willing to leap to it when she cares more about winning against the jackass who told her they did it deliberately than her own self-preservation.
>I just don't see her giving up and resorting to self-delusion so quickly.
That's partly because of the limitations of the medium, honestly. I could certainly show more of her attempts, how they didn't work out, and their effects on her... But I'd have to write a new sex scene each time, the player would have to go through the dick-changing game each time, and the PC would have to fight through a dozen encounters to reach the temple each time. Decompressing the timeline into something that would be more appropriate would just make it drag too much for the game, compared to showing the most important beats.
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>>55486
>the cravings pushed her to make advances on a fully clothed PC
See, that's a point where I think her subconscious would strongly recommend self-surgery. But I also doubt it would come to that point in the first place. After the first time you satisfy her eels' desires, she'll realise things are more fucked up than she thought. If she knows how they function, it's probably off to self-isolation for her, holing herself up somewhere and waiting it out. If she doesn't know, there's more room for shenanigans, though with more desperation come more desperate measures.
>winning against the jackass who told her they did it deliberately
Not winning against the nightmare that lives inside her belly, is taking control over her libido, and forces her to get off on sexual acts that she despises?
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>>55489
She DOES try other methods, though - an anti-parasitic medication that was supposed to be effective for bog parasites (which failed because it was actually meant for the anal parasites, unbeknownst to her), and the lust suppressants. Leaping to extreme self-mutilation isn't just taking things to eleven when you think five will probably work; it's more like taking things to twenty, in my eyes.
By the time she realizes that self-control and potions aren't enough to get her through this, she's already reliant on the PC for emotional support as the one person she can talk to about how terrifying this ordeal is for her. Especially because.... Well, what if it DOESN'T work? She thought she had enough control over herself that she could be around you, and she was wrong. What if she's wrong about being able to stand the isolation as well? What if she ends up going berserk from the cravings, running out like some chameleon girl to hunt down things she wants even less than you?
Those kind of thoughts, that loss of self-confidence, is part of why she acts increasingly less rationally from an outside point of view.
>Not winning against the nightmare that lives inside her belly, is taking control over her libido, and forces her to get off on sexual acts that she despises?
For the vast majority of the time she's suffering from the parasites, she DOES believe that she can win against them, and that her latest attempt will be successful - and if she'd tried certain solutions earlier, or had been more clear about what she was asking for with the medicines, she would have been right.
By contrast, an external forced standing there, saying that they're going to sabotage every effort you make to take control of your body back, someone you can clearly rail against because THEY'RE not in your body fucking up your feelings... That's a nice, easy foe to spite, in as grand a gesture as she can manage.
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>>55490
>it's more like taking things to twenty, in my eyes.
A little bit of harakiri has never hurt anyone.
You assume that you'll get to fuck her after every attempt to tie her closer to your cock, but why would that be the case? Why would she let that happen after the first time only made things worse for her? That first round of exploitation should be a bit of an eye-opener. Giving in is a bad idea, the PC isn't here to help her, and those creatures possess suggestive powers on a level that mustn't be underestimated. The player can maybe weasel their way out of number two, but the other two should be crystal-clear to her right there and then.
>anti-parasitic medication
You presumed yourself that the parasites' effect wouldn't be as powerful as usual, what with her undead nature and all. So why do you think medicine would be a tool that she would actively seek out and have high hopes for?
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>>55491
>You assume that you'll get to fuck her after every attempt to tie her closer to your cock, but why would that be the case? Why would she let that happen after the first time only made things worse for her?
Because in the heat of the moment, she's a junky looking to get her fix, and each time she gets a hit, that addiction is reinforced in her system. And after each time, she's convinced that her new plan has solved the problem, that she's done what she needs to to stop it from happening again - only to find that she's mistaken. We like to think that self-control is a magic bullet, but I think we all know someone who destroyed their own lives who we wouldn't have expected it from.
At least, in the original draft; like I said, I'll have to rethink those exact mechanics if they can't reproduce, since that would undermine the escalating nature of the cravings.
As for why the PC goes along with this despite what Marielle tells her while composed, though... I've written a couple of different variations, including "weak-willed friend" and "evil fuck".
>You presumed yourself that the parasites' effect wouldn't be as powerful as usual, what with her undead nature and all. So why do you think medicine would be a tool that she would actively seek out and have high hopes for?
...A failure of thought on my part, actually. That seemed like a pretty normal response to a disease in my head and I liked the reason for it failing, but it really doesn't make much sense for an undead, does it? I guess it could be magic or something like a lot of the stuff you find, but right now I have the anti-parasitics as something she brewed herself...
I suppose instead, I could go with a failed manual extraction; she thinks she got it, but like a tapeworm or tick, she only got the head and the rest of it broke off and regrew. The fragments regrowing as new eels could also cover how it "reproduced" when it shouldn't have met the qualifications to do so.
Or perhaps she tried a more primitive form of medication; she put something toxic in there since it's harmless to her and thought it would kill the eels, only for it to be something the eels could actually tolerate. It would be a uniquely undead approach to the problem, but that might seem too haphazard even compared to having gotten her hands on a magic potion in the middle of a bog.
I'll mull over how this step could be reworked, but you're right - I didn't give her unique physiology enough weight on this attempt despite having referenced it previously.
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>>55493
Are you sure we're talking about the same eel parasites? You make them sound like a full-on heroin addiction with a near-insurmountable cold turkey, should you ever dare think of quitting. But the language used in the game itself is much softer, and you lose something like three points of strength, speed, and toughness for waiting it out.
Now Minotaur cum, that's a fitting equivalent. Takes a bit to build, but uses much more forceful language, and the withdrawal stage may straight-up tear the player's control of their character away and throw them into a mindless rut if they step too close to bull cock.
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>>55530
coal
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>>55534
It's not Christmas yet.
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>>55538
coal
>>55530
I'm using the Infected Chameleon Girl as a reference for how someone acts once the infection starts to really take hold; I'm not aware of any other eel-infected NPCs to judge by, and I think that's a better yardstick to judge by than the player's character.
Though that said, the eventual withdrawal for her is pretty painless, once the PC leaves her alone for a bit. It's only the temptation of having the object of her cravings right in front of her that she has a problem with.
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>>54027 (OP) 
nas coal kys
>>55562
But even she seems reasonably in control of her faculties, all things considered. And do keep in mind the victim's starting state and her disposition. The regular chameleon girl seems like a fairly weak-willed little bitch, a bit timid yet hungry for cock all the same. That's more than enough to work with for the parasites, but a veteran dyke that should've spent the last centuries six feet under will need a little more than some insistent coaxing and an extra shot of endorphins to make her think of listening to the eldritch horror in her womb.
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>>55567
>But even she seems reasonably in control of her faculties, all things considered. 
Er, she does? She keeps stopping mid-battle to masturbate, attacks women for no other reason than to put eels in them (from which she gets no personal benefit, including sexually - she immediately goes off to hunt for men), and at multiple points is described as "maddened" and "lust-crazed", as I recall it.
From my reading, the parasite is very much the one guiding the ship there.
>And do keep in mind the victim's starting state and her disposition.
And this is why I have it written with her only responding to a futa, and not a man - if she didn't find you attractive beforehand, the parasite isn't enough to overcome that on its own. It's only when the parasite's effects can blend with something there in a different from that it can push her to do something she otherwise wouldn't do.
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who decided raphael should go from sexy ass nigga to mega faggot in coc2
>>55571
Some turbo faggot, I guess.
Which one exactly it was, that's another question.
>>55571
An author who hates CoC because it still somehow mogs the two games that came later despite being objectively worse in almost every way
Does the parry perk even work I swear I haven't seen anything in regards to it in combat
>>55571
he was always a megafaggot, retard
and almost certainly a self-insert besides.
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>>55576
I liked him in the first one
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>>55578
He was incredibly retarded and the writing was even worse. He's also played up as a mindblowingly amazing thief, but he's possibly one of the worst thieves in the history of fiction and only gets away with anything because of how bad the writing is.
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>>55578
Most egregiously, his flaw is the player character's writing. It's too directed, with not enough choices to mold the interaction to suit your own character.
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>>55579
I understand what you are saying I'm not trying to argue against it. Still though they made him exponentially more retarded.
>>55580
I agree, a lot is forced on the player throughout his content.
>"Orphanage?" you finally manage to utter and blink.
>Raphael grins and tries hard to fake a look of innocence with those rich green eyes. "Ah yes, that. We were having a children's party."
>"Children's party?" You blink once more.
>"They're the parents you see. And the dancing girls? Well, boys grow up so quickly these days. How am I to refuse them their badly scrawled birthday lists?"
>"Parents?" you stammer.
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>>55571
How do you even interact with him after the first encounter if you're a guy?
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>>55584
you don't because he's straight :>
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>>55568
>is described as "maddened" and "lust-crazed"
Sounds like the average NPC. How far down the rabbit hole is she? She's got quite a number of eels inside her, so my guess is "very". And still, she can intelligibly communicate and sounds about as sane as most enemies you encounter. Even hooked in this many parasites, there's still the chameleon girl somewhere beneath that.
>if she didn't find you attractive beforehand
Attractive with your clothes on. The dick does ruin the picture for her quite thoroughly.
I'm not convinced she wouldn't just fuck off to get herself fixed after the first time, if not right away. And to do so, wouldn't do absolutely everything it takes. She's a seasoned traveller, proudly self-sufficient, likely a tad ancient, and as set in her ways as only very few other NPCs are.
>>55585
But I want to beat him up and steal his stuff and turn his orphanage into my own brothel to make money out of
>>55571
CoC2's team is very incompetent
>>55589
No I feel like a jaded viet cong war vet
Haven't played in four years I think, has Essrayle had any new content? I really like her and always thought she was a bit neglected.
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>>55589
yeh
>>55591
Who? The four titted plant? Gross taste
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>>55582
>"Orphanage?"
>"Children's party?"
>>55608
if memory serves well she is only four nippled?
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>>55615
I think she gains more tits when the sand witches take her in
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anyone do the riddles with the old demon? I just smack him to shit for hurting Dolores :DDD
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>>55617
If I remember correctly, it was
Allocer
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>>55621
>>55617
first three are
Name, Bifrucated, Oldest
>>55621
I wasn't looking for a answer just wanted to know if people chose the riddle over beating his stupid ass :D
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>>55616
Eh, extra tits aren't that much of a big deal (heh)
why the fuck is the UI scaling for the mobile versions so terrible for all fenoxo games but hgg's is fine
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>>55623
I answered his riddles THEN beat his stupid ass
>>55628
Fenoxo and his "team" are hyper incompetent homosexual sick-fucks
It's only natural that they be horribly incapable of doing ANYTHING correctly because they were raised without paternal figures during their whole childhood
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>>55401
Marielle has always been the odd-one in the game, even TiTS which have charcters like Riya's sister makes sense, she won't fuck anyone who's aren't at least twice as tall as her or that aren't her sister
But Marielle just refuses to acknowledge the male MC as anything outside of a close acquaintance even after giving her the desert rose even though tellling her that you were thinking of impregnating her have her rub her belly as if she's actually intrested, the writefag who came up the idea should've just made her a butch man-hating lesbian who refuses to interact with male MC instead of this flipflopping "I love women but i don't mind bathing with you, gettig intimately close to you, i can even forgive you for raping me and i'm also intrested in having kids" 
>>55647
They're earning like 30k monthy for doing jack shit and they released a novel, so they at least did something right.
>>55649
>30k
nvm i love fenoxo now how do i join
>>55649
right place right time, that's it
>>55649
>her have her rub her belly as if she's actually intrested
<“I see,” she says, unconsciously folding all four arms over her middle.
Is that a children-yearning caress to you?
>I love women but i don't mind bathing with you, gettig intimately close to you
Do you only bathe with people you want to fuck? And where does she get intimately close to you on her own volition?
>should've just made her a butch man-hating lesbian
That probably would've pissed off more people than she already has. Also wouldn't be nearly as fun to write.
>>55649
>novel
Excuse me, what? This I gotta read.
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>>55649
I like Marielle just fine as she is. I think getting to have an "intimate" friendship but no sex with her is pretty cute. I also really don't like the idea of substantially changing a character from what the author intended her to be like. If I wanted to make a lesbian learn to love my dick I'd just write her myself.

>30k monthy
There's no way you could make anywhere near this much writing smut if you don't pander to furries, right?
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>>55662
>There's no way you could make anywhere near this much writing smut if you don't pander to furries, right?
I think it's more having a decade-long fanbase and starting back when western porn games were much more rare. CoC2 still makes a ton and has much less furry than fen's games.
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>>55649
There's plenty of non-sexual content for Marielle overall, and the minor differences between how she reacts to a male PC and female PC seem to convey quite clearly how she distinguishes between the two... My own idea aside, I'm really quite happy with the character as she stands currently. The idea that she can be friends with someone without wanting to fuck them is something the game could have used a bit more of. That said...
>even though tellling her that you were thinking of impregnating her have her rub her belly as if she's actually intrested
I don't remember that at all? Did I miss something? I seem to remember her reacting somewhat horrified at at the idea...
>>55664
>I think it's more having a decade-long fanbase and starting back when western porn games were much more rare.
Yeah, this. CoC was one of the first western ero games I remember seeing any meaningful effort put into (slavemaker being the only other one that even came close), even if it had a penchant for half-abandoned characters and dubious coding. Plus it had a forum where you could suggest your own stuff, and talk about other games. That kind of early install base counts for a lot; I can't really think of any other furry game projects that have gotten a fraction of CoC's attention.
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On the one hand Marielle is definitely one of the more compelling and consistent characters in the game, so I wouldn't want to fuck that up. But on the other hand the fact is that she is, and likely always will be, the only accessible undead loli. My argument for letting her get "dicked straight" - or at least making her open to futas and femboys with enough affection - is simply that there will never be another character to fulfill the fetishes fulfilled by that. The list of unique fetishes includes, but is not limited to, cumming in a zombie, eternal loli, dicking a lesbian, and proper loli romance. In particular letting her acclimate to penises in light of seeing them attached to otherwise beautiful and lovely ladies/traps doesn't seem too impossible an ask.

I know that this isn't an appeal that will likely change anything, and I know this horse is long dead, but in the spirit of horny fucks I had to beat it again.
>>55681
>loli
She's not.
>>55681
2hu vamp lolis
Where the fuck are they
>>55684
where the fuck is 2hu
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where the fuck is
>>54027 (OP) 
Is there a working save editor for latest version of this mod? 
It's been years since I played CoC, need some way to fix things, in case I go some indesirable route.
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>>55684
>>55685
Dude shut up he might come back if you keep talking
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>>55706
2hu vamp lolis
>>55697
You can just use the debug menu
>>55706
I desire my vamp lolis, anon.
>>55665
I hate to be that guy, but you just said you like the fact that a character in a porn game doesn't want to be fucked.
I get that some people here view this as a game first and a porn game second, but it's really disappointing to people to play an H game, do a lengthy questline for a character, and then not be rewarded with sex. It sours the rest of her content regardless of quality.
>>55726
>a character in a porn game doesn't want to be fucked.
I think there's a vast difference between "doesn't want to" and "can't be". She has sex scenes for dicks, she just doesn't enjoy it, and personally I find that appealing. Non-violent rape (that doesn't turn into corruption fueled cocklusting happy sex halfway through) is a niche that no other character really touches on.

The only change I'd want is a quality of life change for her dicking limit, to either make it decay over time so you can avoid it by not raping her constantly, or have it be something like her just getting pissed off and not talking to you for a week instead of a permanent lockout. Anyone fucking her enough to hit that limit is just loading saves to do it infinitely anyway.
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>>55726
She's still fuckable, no? Just not permanently, unless you're a girl.
Personally, I prefer when characters, even in porn games, are characters. Having their own lives, stories, and preferences helps create more engaging interactions, and a sexual orientation is just another possible piece in that puzzle. Easy whores with one-dimensional personalities have their place, though if that's all a game has to offer, especially a large adventure like CoC, it just gets stale. I guess that's putting the game before the porn, but it feels empty when everyone and their mother wants to eat my character's ass and scissor her timbers. If there's a gay dude I can only have sex with by jumping through hoops like getting him drunk, dressing up as a boy, and taking it up the ass, then that's fantastic. That's finally a departure from the tired routine. And if he's available to me as nothing more than a platonic friend, then that's fine as well. Still a healthy break from the usual.
>>55726
I'd rather still kill her after making her think I'm her friend
Maybe convince her kill her own pet crow first as a weird custom of friendship from my hometown(which is obviously a lie but she doesn't know that)
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>>55734
There's something off about you, Anon.
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>>55697
I've been using the old editor and it works fine for pretty much everything.
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>>55737
Missing some stuff there, like perks (or maybe I am blind)
Marielle is my favorite character and I like her exactly as she is
and I hate niggers
I did toy with the idea of a lez couple/character  who is into dom/rapeplay. Not all sexual satisfaction is direct and I like bdsm stuff in general.
>>55734
It seems illogical. Who would kill their own pet to indulge a stranger. And if not a stranger why would your friend ask you to kill your own pet?
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>>55743
I knew two bipolar girls that would do that. 
Only one of them did, though. She also killed stray cats a lot, liked to dissect them and take them apart, throwing away the pieces when she felt satisfied with how disassembled the body was
The one that didn't do it was really into serial killers. The kind that probably would have begged to fuck a high profile one and be removed from the courtroom for the outburst. If she did end up being asked to kill her pet to appease a friend, though, I'd wager she'd snap to her senses (only afterward) and swear off that kind of stuff forever.
>>55736
Corrupt her
Make her FALL
When she reaches rock bottom make her fall even lower
When she realizes this or better yet when you make her realize this end her life while letting it be known to her that it was (you)
it was (you) all along that caused this

and through time travel fuckery make it so that it was also you that caused her dad's fall to madness and death
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>>55746
I like this guy. No personal interest in her, but I do enjoy a good character breaking.
So is there ever gonna be more content for Ember?
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>>55753
If written i guess.
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>>55756
If written and there's somebody to code it in.
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>>55757
Coder friends are around.
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>>55732
That argument falls flat because if you're playing a female character she still instantly falls for you the same as everyone else. I'm saying it's annoying that, other than talking in purple prose and being generally better written, the only difference between her and a normal CoC character is that she's only willing to fug females.
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>>55758
Maybe.
>>55760
Being attracted != falling for someone, but true, doesn't take any longer to get under her skirt than Amily's or Sheila's or Ruby's. Given, those are already among the longest you have to woo, in a sea of otherwise instant sluts.
>the only difference between her and a normal CoC character is that she's only willing to fug females
Yet despite the lack of willingness on her part, she still consents to various lewd acts if you've got a cock. It's not like a dicked player is locked out of her content, not even the sexual side of it, so I fail to see what exactly you're unhappy with. That she doesn't like it? That she'll stop you from sticking it in after a handful of times? Is that what you would change about her?
Because I don't view those as issues at all. I think it's perfectly fine for a game to give you different experiences depending on what you play as, though I personally appreciate writers throwing at least a bit of a bone to everyone. Doesn't have to be sexual, it simply feels nice to not be left out entirely. Then, as another anon pointed out, dicking a lesbian, dubious consent, and emotionless sex are all reasonably popular fetishes in their own right, which are barely, if at all, touched upon by the game. All of which female PCs still have no access to whatsoever with Marielle's addition.
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Write a new zombie instead of trying to "fix" the bad one.
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>>55765
No one's talking about fixing evelyn
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>>55770
Literally who?
I'd rather someone make a new dungeon about that lab those demons keep talking about in the bazaar
>>55765
Kitteh's final update to the Revamp Mod removed most of the things he wrote for the mod in the name of quality control. It's not too late to do this for le lampe broother mothe, time travel shield, Darkest Dungeon, T3H H4RB1NG3R OF T3H D00MZ, le anachronism corpse, etcetera
>>55756
If I were to try and do some writing for Ember, what would you guys like to see in it? 
More content for the whole "corrupted/pure paths"?
Random interactions and fluff?
Pure degeneracy and incest?
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>>55782
More content for and interaction with your children with Ember.
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>>55783
I honestly keep forgetting they even exist.
>>55782
Personally I'd like some degenerate inbreeding. It dissapoints me we can fuck the harpy daughters, and there is talk of impregnation but then no pregnant daughters. I think A big point of embers purpose is repopulating the dragons, and I'd like to contribute to the cause.
If you got aspirations for corrupt/pure that's welcome enough, can't say I'm not a little tired of the constant tsundere tropes, and how Ember never actually breaks past that shell no matter how many times you have kids. Also as a convienance for rut content, could we get some item that toggles rut on or off permanently? Like just never leave rut, even after knocking someone up. Or do people just stock pile fuckdraft or something?
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>>55785
>Also as a convienance for rut content, could we get some item that toggles rut on or off permanently?
I can't code for shit, but writing the fluff for that would probably be something I could do.
Doing some dragon kids consent wouldn't be too hard as well..
>>55786
It's fine if they don't consent too.
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>>55787
I swear that was just a typo and totally not a Freudian slip about I'm about to write.
>>55786
Random idea/question about dragon kids content as well if I do make it.
How does the idea of giving ember a potion that makes it so all her kids are female but so they also all "breed true" like minotaurs?
>>55789
>makes it so all her kids are female
Seems reasonable to me. It's entirely plausible that such a potion would exist or could be made, and you could probably convince Ember to go for it (more females = more breeding = easier repopulation).
>but so they also all "breed true" like minotaurs
As a potion effect, this part is more questionable. Sounds like a very extreme change that would be difficult to accomplish, and such a potion would have huge implications for the entire world if it existed.
I'm not sure what the purpose of this would be, though. If it's to justify the lack of males, it seems unnecessary. Mareth's pre-established breeding mechanics allow that just fine; as long as dragons' "breeding priority" isn't especially low like the mice, there's no shortage of fathers that could breed more dragons.
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>>55790
You're probably right about that one.
Though a potion for all females is probably something I'm gonna make since that's just something I find really hot.
>>55786
Appreciate ya. Also as far as incest content goes there is nothing involving group sex to my knowledge. Would be hot to have corrupt/mixed Ember teaching daughters how to best mate with you, or having scenes featuring your other offspring, like the harpies, or sharks, or even just introducing Helspawn to her half siblings(but thats an expansion all it's own i'd like to see).
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>>55793
as I posted this I remembered corrupt amily group incest. So there is *some*, but I'd still like more
>>55783
I thought the eggs never hatched
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>>55795
They hatch.
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>>55796
nice
>>55786
>I can't code for shit, but writing the fluff for that would probably be something I could do.
That's what the coders are for. Check the writing guide in the OP for more information on how to make it easier for coders to implement and some other helpful stuff. It's an old document, but everything in it is still relevant.
And godspeed to you if you breathe some new life into the writing scene here or even inspire others to take up the pen again.
>>55789
Try to start with something on a smaller scale first to get into the groove of it instead of introducing completely new concepts.
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Sharks.
>>55665
>>55681
>>55728
>>55732
>>55764
Marielle is the second character that acts as dry as a desert at least sexually in a world where corruption is so rampant that even the Tel Aldre citizens are shamelessly walking half-naked, she acts like that towads male MC's without any leeway and that doesn't seem to have any any external way to supress libido  Jojo can meditate, Izma tends to read books to not be a nympho 24/7, etc. 
Her body doesn't even react when the MC rapes her
The first one is the farm girl yes even the mind-control arc still falls short so i hardly recall her name
>>55818
Rathazul, Rebecca.
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Is there any way to get info on mod specific things? I tried to read chronicles, but it got a lot of 404s and doesn't exactly have everything.
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>>55823
The chronicles are for documenting writing that isn't in the game yet, mostly because it's not finished (and never will be).
The best source of information on the game is the source code.
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>>55824
Yeah.. Sadly I am too stupid to even find actual source code on GitGud. 
Been bashing my head with dullahan in deepwoods and items I got from her quest, feeling like I am missing something. Her encounter being rare isn't helping either.
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>>55799
Well, I feel like it wouldn't need that much writing anyhow. It could more or less consist of 
>One interaction where you bring up the idea. She dismisses it at first but then thinks about it for a while before simply concluding that it might be a good idea but demands that you make the potion that case
>Bring a few items to Rathazul and get a potion
>Write a scene where she drinks it
>Write some minor fluff about the kids all being female
Though, the more I think about it, the more I feel it would make sense to make them all futas. How do you guys feel about it? All female potion or all futa potion?
>>55827
>you make the potion in* that case
Ignore the typos, I'm just very tired.
Can someone help me figure out how to give Kitsune Gift to Telly? Do I have to encounter some kitsune scene or something?
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>>55829
And am I just locked out of Circe if I am an insect-morhp??? Kinda sucky
>>55827
Conjuring up a potion that is never brought up ever again and that would fix breeding problems for several races is not a small addition and carries a lot of lore implications and weight with it.
>>55818
She's also not native to Mareth unlike everything else you're thinking of.
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>>55818
When it comes to corruption, it's not much a stretch to assume she's at least somewhat religious, so I could see her praying or meditating in her own way. She even lives in a temple. And similar to how Izma has her books, Marielle has her dressmaking to immerse herself in, mind and body. And then there's always the issue of her being an antique fucking corpse held together at the seams by magic.
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>>55831
Fair point I guess.
I just think that stuff is kinda hot but you're probably right about it fucking with the lore a bit too much.
I suppose I could make it so all the males become femboys instead? Idk, might be better just to skip it and do some regular kid fluff instead.
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I wish there was a sex scene if you beat Ember enough times.
I should write that
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>>55838
Gambatte
>>55820
Sheeps seem to be there as the designated pure race considering that the sheepmorph milk removes corruption, even then Rebecca seems very willing to drain the MC after Vupula is gone, like really willing and Rathazul is an old alchemist who seems to join you if you're a mostly pure champion, he also comes with the ideas to purify at least the bath slave and Marble so he knows how to fight it
>>55832
Neither is the MC and seems to be suceptible to least lust/libido alterations from most encounters
>>55833
Magic in Mareth has been twisted to the point of white magic being cast from fatigue or just HP and black magic being cast from lust, note that this magic seems to be very compatible with a lot, A LOT of entities in Mareth, i'm surprised that Marielle's magic hasn't mixed with Mareth's
And that's a stretch, yeah Izma reads a lot because she's quite corrupted, but Marielle seems to get almost no customers and unlike Jojo, Marielle doesn't seem to be as religious as a nun
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>>55831
>Conjuring up a potion that is never brought up ever again and that would fix breeding problems for several races is not a small addition and carries a lot of lore implications and weight with it.
A very easy fix would be making it also only produce STERILE children, thus rendering it largely useless.  or just make it affect dragons but they were too proud to use it or something.
>>55831
>would fix breeding problems for several races
What problems would it fix? All I can think of are the basilisks, but you can simply say that the potion only works if you're actually able to birth females in the first place (which would be the natural assumption anyways), so it wouldn't help them.
We can already turn anyone we want into whatever gender we want, doing at before birth instead of after doesn't change much of anything.
>>55790
>(more females = more breeding = easier repopulation).
But in the time it takes one female to carry a clutch or a fetus, a male can keep running around causing more pregnancies. Exponentially more if it were boys.
No one will complain about more girls, but the logic is flawed
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>>55826
Dullahan has a literal 100% encounter rate, the polar opposite of rare.
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>>55831
Just make it increase the chance of female children, then it has no lore problems at all for races were the chance was zero. Then have it work especially well for dragons.
>>55827
Could make it a player choice. Maybe the potion for futa requires an additional ingredient, and if the player "can't" find it they settle for female only.
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>>55848
>Just make it increase the chance of female children, then it has no lore problems at all for races were the chance was zero
To make it as simple as possible without having to waste words on an explanation, just say "it prevents having male children". All problems avoided, everything explained tidily in a few words. Having other alternatives besides males is up to the race in question.
>>55846
If the choice is only between male and female, I'd say it still makes sense. Most cultures in Mareth seem to have the females raising children moreso than the males, so if you want the dragons to be raised as dragons (preserving more than just their genes), you would want dragons giving birth. Males would be spreading dragons throughout the world to (often) be raised by other races.
Futa makes way more sense than either though, since they have all the advantages of both male and female.
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>>55841
>Marielle seems to get almost no customers
Reminds me that I wanted to do something about that a long long time ago.
Seems rather silly to conjure up a method to have only female children, when they're just as generic as all the other lolis that have been stuffed in. Make some actual content for the kids first, male & female, then worry about removing the males.
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>>55857
>Make some actual content for the kids first, male & female, then worry about removing the males.
That's currently my plan.
I think it's a good idea to start off small, so I'll probably just start with some random interactions with your kids and maybe one of two sex scenes with them.
With that base done, I could start changing the genders and so on of the kids you have with her.
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>>55849
You lot DO realize Ember's sex can be influenced, right? And that his children could therefore be influenced in the exact same way?
>>55858
Godspeed, anon.
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>>55834
>Idk, might be better just to skip it and do some regular kid fluff instead.
If you've never written anything before for the mod, that's what I'd do if I were you. Smaller additions like that would also be more palatable for any potential proofreader (something which we severely lack) so a much higher chance of implementation afterwards. If you turn out to be good enough then I wouldn't be surprised if this all happened more quickly over time if you were to try and tackle something bigger.

And I now realize after scrolling down you already acknowledged in >>55858 most of what I wrote up. No promises, but maybe if I can scrape some motivation together in a few weeks time I could look your stuff over for lore consistency and minor proofreading.
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>>55860
I flunked my college english classes, and english was some of my worse grades through school. I'm well spoken, and verbose but the written word is just weak with me, doubly for grammar. I've read some of the unimplemented stuff and liked it. Are we at the point were we will take shit proofreaders over nothing? Cause if so I'll do some proofreading and post it here, if you need someone like me that's just interested enough to do it qualifications be damned.
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>>55861
Read up on a few conventions and things in the writing guide if nothing else. It's also never too late to learn new things if you really do want to help and contribute in this manner.

The most important thing is not so much to catch every error in someone's writing but rather to not give bad or wrong proofreading. As long as you don't make corrections or notes that result in more problems it's fair game.
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>>55863
Alright you signed up for a fishing net as a sieve, but I'll give it a fair shot since i'm better than nothing getting done I suppose.
I already hate this lmao. I have read the quotations part of the writing guide at least 7 fucking times before I finally got it, and had to google wtf a dialogue tag is cause the glossary wasn't clear enough for me. I get it now, but I really wish I had some methylphenidate for this.
Alright I feel confidant I can use the writing guide as reference. I'm going to give a go at proofreading Yuribot's slutty Helspawn coming onto her parent tomorrow when I'm less tired.
>>55789
>her kids are female but so they also all "breed true" like minotaurs
What if Ember is male tho?
>>55838
>collar
>not just using her braids as the handlebars instead of using that lame chain
ngmi
>>55847
Dunno about that fam. More than once, I had to spend multiple days trying to get her encounter, and that's with long haul On.
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>>55870
She only shows up at night.
>>55859
>You lot DO realize Ember's sex can be influenced, right? And that his children could therefore be influenced in the exact same way?
The egg you found Ember in was not a natural egg, it was explicitly designed to alter Ember's body into a suitable mate for whoever finds it.
The same would not apply to eggs that Ember lays/fertilizes, especially in the case of live birth where there are no eggs.
>>55831
Just make bosses that justify the potion and handwave it by stating that part of the reason for the dragon's extinction was trying to get those materials, if dragons couldn't get them, then it's almost impossible that other races could
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>>55873
The potion would have done nothing whatsoever to prevent the dragons from being wiped out by the kobolds.
Is Anne Marie in the game? Saw her in the code for Bog, but haven't met her yet? Do I need to progress through the main quest or something?
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>>55732
Dicking a lesbian is only satisfying if she can eventually fall for the dick, which this game completely lacks. If you could dick her bi I would have no issue, but in fact if you dick her too much you get locked out completely, and then can't even force her. It's pointless to have a lesbian character who can't be dickbroken since yuri "sex" is just foreplay woth no payoff, not to mention unrealistic since lesbians aren't real, they're just bisexuals in denial - all women crave cock to some extent.
>>55881
Man that's a fucking take and a half lol. If you think lesbians can't get what they crave out of fingers tongues, silicon, and motors you'd be mistaken, and probably jealous. If you want your fetish in the game I ain't here to judge, I think there is some merit to adding a corruption route to Marielle. But I think that's some incel talk that lesbians don't exist. And I might be a man, but that don't mean it ain't sex if it doesn't include me lol.
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>>55882
>I don't want dick I just want a phallic object inside me
Like I said. Bisexuals in denial.
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>>55884
It is possible to dislike the men attached to phallic objects as possible partners, and instead only view other women as valid potential partners cause that's how your orientations is. Anyways this ain't a topic for this thread so I'm dropping it, but we got self-stated lesbian authors that actually contribute to this game, and it ain't in our best interest to treat the content creators as invalid people. So at a minimum contextualize your stance as a kink you want to see, hell write it yourself even if you can convincingly write someone being mind-broken into a cock-lusting corrupted slut to join the masses of Mareths fallen. Just don't make it as easy as raping them when there's already precedent for that not being enough to turn the character. Probably introduce some forced TFs, or corrupt them in some way first. Anyway i;m gonna start something productive, proofreading on content I want in the game to work at getting it implemented.
>55881
So what you're saying is that Gay people are the only "correct" orientation?  Weirdly progressive of you.
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>>55884
>It is possible to dislike the men attached to phallic objects as possible partners, and instead only view other women as valid potential partners cause that's how your orientations is.
It is possible to do that. It just makes you a bisexual in denial. Same as men who prefer femboys to real women because they hate women.
>>55887
No I'm saying lesbians aren't real because women inherently crave cock. If it matters I think most gays are also prison gay or asexual as well.
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Alright proofreading This scene by Yuribot. I'm new to this so a second look would be appreciated if anyone has constructive criticism for how I do. also let me know if in the future if i should include the whole thing in post, or just quote the parts I have something to add.
>[say: [Dad],] it whispers, and that voice--it's [helspawn], isn't it? [say: You're killing me. I can't stop thinking about what you said. Us together, fucking.]
I think the writing guide says a — em dash should be used here instead of hyphens. The second quote seems like the clauses are related, and might warrant a semicolon after "Your'e killing me".

>//pretend
>While you may have your doubts that anything could fluster your daughter, knowing that her [father] heard all of her drunken, incestuous ramblings might be the exception. And besides, you're certainly interested in what she has to say, as [if (hascock) your growing erection|the wetness between your thighs] can attest].
The "and" here sounds natural to me, but it's starting a sentence with a contraction in the current grammar. There's exceptions to that so idk, but it seems like my job is picking nits so this is one, but this would probably be a run on sentence with a comma as is. It probably woks by just dropping and, and starting the sentences with besides. I'm honestly grasping here, and could use a second opinion or some advice.

>//don't
>[Helspawn] momentarily stiffens when you run your fingers through her hair, but it doesn't take long for her to relax against you, her warmth--and arousal--palpable even through your blanket. [say: I've been thinking about your touch all night.] Her hand finds your own, leading you along her curves all the way down to her slick >folds. >[say: And imagining your [if (hascock) cock|fingers] inside of me did this, [Daddy].]
Same thing about hyphens and dashes as last time, probably should use "—" instead of "--". Unless I am dense and missed somewhere that the parser turns -- into — in which case correct me please. I won't be commenting on further uses of double hyphens past this point, but if I'm not an idiot find and replace them.

1/2
2/2
>//no
>It takes all your willpower to resist when she leans in, her alcohol-laced breath washing over your ear as she whispers, [say: In case you forgot, [Dad], that's [if (hascock) your cock inside me|filling me with as many fingers as I can take].]
"She whispers 'in case you forgot, [Dad], that's your cock inside me'." I don't follow whats being said here. Is this saying her fantasy of that is why she is wet? this bit is kind of confusing, and I need some elaboration on it's context.

>She doesn't even flinch [if (lots of cum) for a while] at your load, eagerly drinking it all down and still trying to coax out more. Even when you finally run dry, her fingers flutter along your sensitive shaft as she slides away [if (lots of cum), gasping for air|and kisses the tip].
This is good, but i'd like to see support for excessive cum that is too much to drink. Like her stomach swelling before having to let go and getting covered in cum. I ain't much of a writer, but it's possible to cum more than she could take. Consider this a request/suggestion more than a correction.
 
>[if (child) [say: You're...] She pauses and lets out a breath before managing to continue. [say: You... you do things to me, [Dad].]|[say: Do you know how long I've wanted to have my hands on you, [Dad]?]]

>Before you can respond, she leans down and places a gentle kiss on your hip. [say: [if (child) You|I] always have, okay?] Another one arrives on your stomach, your [skinshort] tingling beneath her touch. [say: Let me feel every part of [Daddy].]
I might just be retarded, but I'm not sure what you are doing with the child condition here, it doesn't make sense to me, and I need it explained.

>Your daughter drifts lower, her breath hot against you as she follows along your body and blazes a trail with the lightest peck of her lips. Even further down, her hands stroke [if (isnaga) your tail|if (isgoo) your slimy base|your legs], and you can't help but wrap [if (singleleg) it|them] tighter around her. The smile that flashes >across her face as you cling to her doesn't escape your notice, but it does distract you enough that you're left looking into her [helspawneyes] eyes, poised hungrily above your aching [clit].
This is cute. Suggestion check if pc has tail for some tail play with her to make it cuter.

Alright fuck. Done. Let me know how I did, or what I still need to do. If this goes well, I'll try and proof read some other stuff.
Oh and of course, everything I didn't mentioned looked good to go.
>>55894
>Unless I am dense and missed somewhere that the parser turns -- into — in which case correct me please
It does do that.
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>>55897
Alright glad I got my doubts before I cited each one. Noted for the future. Thanks for letting me know.
>555 posts
OPEN YOUR EYES
karate bugwomen gf when 
>>55877
Nope
not yet apparently

you can get her gun using the debug menu tho
>>55894
>proofreading
bless you
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>>55881
>foreplay with no payoff
Tell me you have no fucking clue what you're doing in bed without telling me you have no fucking clue what you're doing in bed. Getting cum pumped into you isn't the only way for sex to pay off, dipshit. Maybe you'd lose your virginity if you actually bothered to learn how to treat a woman instead of thinking you cumming in her is every woman's end goal.
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>>55925
bait
Is it just me or are a bunch of the pastebin links 404 on the chronicles doc? Like pretty much everything from 2hufag under quality control, and a fair bit more than that. Also I take it anything in the abandoned folders isn't worth proofreading since it won't be implemented unless someone else adopts it I guess? I'm really not sure what kinda protocols are used here.
>>55921
I'll do it again if this goes well, but I wanna know I didn't waste my time before chasing more broken pastebin links. Also fuck my adhd man, proofreading sucks, but I'll fucking do it to see the shit I want added.
>>55932
>We took so long to proofread shit that the written content was fucking lost to time
I am platinum mad right now.
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>>55934
Chill. I can't get the pastebin links, but the google docs are there. The issue is I can't tell if they are the same version, and also the doc folders are not such a nice consolidated list of "shit worth proofreading" unlike the chronicles. If I can get some validation on the google docs worth proofreading I can continue. Also if there is not a version discrepancy you can literally copy paste the google docs into pastebin to remake the links, but that takes some management from whoever is running the chronicles.
>>55881
>>55890
I don't care that lesbians aren't real, they are my favorite mythological creatures and I don't think having a few in the game stretches verisimilitude too much.
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>>55937
I just wish they struggled more when I kill them
>>55932
2hu's stuff migrated over to his MEGA that he keeps linking with everything. Search for "MEGA" in previous threads.
>>55894
>let me know if in the future if i should include the whole thing in post, or just quote the parts
Just quoting the part and whatever might be relevant for clarity is enough.
>might warrant a semicolon after "Your'e killing me"
You could put one there, though it's fine to me either way.
>it's starting a sentence with a contraction in the current grammar
Conjunction, not contraction. It's not uncommon, so unless you see it done too frequently or in an otherwise disagreeable manner, I wouldn't nag at it. You are however indeed free to nitpick and offer your own opinions and preferences, as long as you don't state them as facts. Changed the whole thing anyway, see below.
>I need some elaboration on it's context
The context should be her previous line, "Won't you give your little girl what she needs?"
>Like her stomach swelling before having to let go
The rope shall come for all inflationfags. Tried my hand at a short variant.
>I'm not sure what you are doing with the child condition here
Neither am I, entirely. I suppose it's a more fitting way to express your lust for a child.
>tail play with her to make it cuter
Added half a line, I don't think this is the place to dive full-on into a round of tail-tism.

All in all not terribly thorough, but there's never been very much to complain about in Yuribot's writing. Always liked her stuff a lot. Shame she died some time while we were dashing through trenches.
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>>55894
>>55944
Here's also some shit I found in my own crawl-through:
>the intruder's [if (black scales) inky-black camouflage|brilliant red scales] as it lurches [if (tent) into view|into your bedroom], watching you with its [helspawneyes] eyes.
>[say: [Dad],] it whispers
I'm inclined to make all those "it"s "they"s instead, as the silhouette of a sapient being should be immediately discernible.
>While you may have your doubts that anything could fluster your daughter, knowing that her [father] heard all of her drunken, incestuous ramblings might be the exception.
Weak reasoning, considering how little she holds back as slutspawn and how readily she jumps at the opportunity to fuck her parent. I'd cut the sentence and amend the next to fit.
>[if (situation 0 through 2) her|his]
Situation 0, 2, and 5 should have "their".
>you can only wonder why you ever resisted.
But you never straight-up resisted. You just waited.
>when you ease your fingers inside makes you wonder if you could ever
Repetitions of "wonder" and "ever" with previous sentence.
>milk you for seed that won't [if (hascock) yet|ever] come
A promise never to be fulfilled, at least not in this scene.
>[say: And to think [he] loves me the same...]
Potentially confusing to the reader. Who is he/she? The PC is meant, but the player won't see the clarifying parser brackets. Is she still together with her spider fucktoy, or found herself some dyke by the road? A "you" probably works better.
>your daughter growing ever closer to your length
Unfortunate choice of words. Either she's a midget on a growth spurt, or was hiding a cock of her own.
>her [helspawneyes] eyes dark with lust 
No need to add the colour every time you mention her eyes.
>as you empty [if (balls) your balls|yourself] down her throat.
No need to mention your balls yet another time. Just scratch that variance.
>blazes a trail with the lightest peck of her lips
Hard to do with just one peck. Plural.
>reach out for your throbbing [clit]
Not a big fan of preceding a parser that may spit out a bunch of adjectives with another adjective. Too much potential for awkwardness, and you already used [clit] several times, so I'll un-parse this one. Also, your clit isn't very far from your own body, so reaching "out" for it makes little sense.
>thrum and tingle as you shudder
>races through you as she brushes
>as you recover
Far too many "as" in a row for my liking there. The first and third are "while"s, the second a "when" now.
>a whispered [say: Good night, [Dad],] lingering
Either fully comma short interjections like proper dialogue or don't comma them at all.

Fixed what parsers I remembered off the top of my head, as well as punctuation errors around them. And as it's unlikely Yuribot will rise from the dead, here an edited version with our proofreading applied.
https://pst.moe/paste/kckbor
Thank you, pastebin, for not letting me post despite the original version being judged fine and kosher by your smartest of filters. Fucking Christ, I despise what that site has become. How is there still no decent alternative?
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>>55945
>All in all not terribly thorough, but there's never been very much to complain about in Yuribot's writing. Always liked her stuff a lot. Shame she died some time while we were dashing through trenches.
Unfortunate, but thanks for informing me. Also Yeah I suck at proofreading, if you look at the earlier posts where I asked about it I said I flunked college english, and would be like a fishing net as a sieve. Even still I was encouraged since people to get this done are in just that short of a supply.
Glad someone that knows what their doing checked me, and thank you for writing up a version, and giving me the feedback I asked for. I know jack about filters on them, but is hastebin any better/worse? 
>Added half a line, I don't think this is the place to dive full-on into a round of tail-tism.
A single line for tail stuff was what I meant, more of the wrapping/twining wholesome variety than the lewd variety sorry for not being clear.
>The rope shall come for all inflationfags. Tried my hand at a short variant.
This is good, and covers hyper characters fine, thank you. I wonder though, were you going to proofread this anyway if I hadn't? I don't imagine my own proofing helped you much, so it's a bit disheartening to see how much I missed, but I guess it's new skills and all that.
>The context should be her previous line, "Won't you give your little girl what she needs?"
Man this just shows how shit my reading comprehension is. I read that line, and it just went straight through my head without being processed. So many times I gotta re-read the same stuff just to get it to stick it's frustrating. This was just me being dumb, and not processing what I read, thanks for pointing it out.
Should I do more proofreading, or nah? I wanna be helpful in getting the stuff I want added in implemented, but I'm sort of disabled for this work cause of my adhd(not that I'm unwilling to give a genuine effort anyways).
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>>55946
>hastebin 
Same issue as all the other clones: lack of user registration, even an optional one, robs you of a nice list where a writer can consolidate everything he's written, and each edit will create a new URL, needing external lists and links to be constantly updated for every little thing.
>were you going to proofread this anyway if I hadn't?
Somewhere down the line, probably. I did want to at least get Yuribot's stuff put into the game, it deserves it. But as much as I still check on the thread, most of the drive to actively contribute has fizzled away. Someone like you coming along and showing interest in what's been catching mould on the back burner helps quite a bit, so don't worry too much about being shit at proofreading. And a lot of it is practice. Do you think I have an English degree? Someone here did, but it sure wasn't me, and the guy in question doesn't even post here any longer. The only things I have to show are a fondness for writing and reading amateurish porn, and having crawled through many a grammatical blog to make sure I don't fuck up too hard whilst still failing to remember most of the proper vernacular.
>it's a bit disheartening to see how much I missed
For something just short of 3k words, this is a pretty good turnout, complaint-wise. Were it 2ho's stuff, I'd have a thing or three to say about every single paragraph.
>I read that line, and it just went straight through my head without being processed
There's a scene break in between, and proofreading is always a lot slower, so these gaps appear larger than they are, brain damage or no. Should be fine as an actual in-game experience, though.
So in the other games(tits/coc2) you can get a knot, on any penis type. Think we could get a knotty canine pepper outcome that adds a knot without transforming your cock into a dog type? I always hated dog cocks, but liked scenes where you tie someone, and I'm pretty sure we already use a knot tag instead of having it tied to a specific penis type.
How hard would that be to add?
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>>55932
>404 on the chronicles doc? Like pretty much everything from 2hufag 
There is a Santa Claus!
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>>55890
>asexual 
gays are deep degenerate fags, they're about as far as you can get from an asexual. That's why they are the first to spread around new STDs
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>>55963
under quality control most of satans stuff is also 404. I just gave 2hu as an example, but it's far from just them. And again, everything in the google docs is still readily available if you wanna take the 10 seconds to investigate. There just isn't a google folder for "please proofread these things"
Also I read some of the goblin daughter stuff, moving them into camp. Anyone got a to-do list on how far away that is from being added? I really like the concept.
>>55970
t. closet Ro'gar enjoyer
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>>55986
is there a reason ro'gar doesn't even want to be friends with non-men? or was the writer just too lazy?
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>>55990
laziness perhaps
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There is a Helspawn sceene when you have her set to sleep with you, happens in the morning and you get the choices to cycle through vaginal,anal,oral, tail and cumming.
It happened once and I cannot for the life of me get it to repeat. Is there a special trigger for that?
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>>55956
Or you could just save edit
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>>55997
Nothing to do with sleeping together, one-time event.
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>>56002
Did you even make an attempt before suggesting this, or are you using a diff save editor? Also features locked to save editing could be better classified as hacks, than features, and I was requesting a feature, not a hack.
>>55990
>>55994
Ro'gar's author was a 100% homosexual muscles-and-hairy-asses bara fan. It wasn't laziness, he just wanted a really gay NPC.
I regret fucking the moth girl's daughter. I regret fucking the zombie. Some things should not be fucked. Especially not decaying lesbian zombies, who stink, leak gooey discharge and lose bodyparts.
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>>56015
>You regret fucking your daughter
Shit taste.
>>56015
The zombie, understandable. The moth, understandable. Moth daughter? Something ain't right with ya.
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alabaster cum
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I love Jojo so much
>>56021
cat
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Imagine eating dicks lmao
>>56032
>page 263
How has this not come up prior?
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>>56032
hold on a minute the peppers are supposed to look like dicks?
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>>55684
Someone should probably keep track of them.
https://pst.moe/paste/rrktgw - Vampire sisters part 1
https://pst.moe/paste/wxiaso - Vampire sisters part 2 
https://pst.moe/paste/tttqxf - Vampire sisters part 3
https://pst.moe/paste/uaimic - Vampire sisters part 4 
https://pst.moe/paste/gbrjaz - Vampire sisters part 5
https://pst.moe/paste/jvbvwp - Vampire sisters part 6
https://pst.moe/paste/crkagy - Vampire sisters part 7
https://pst.moe/paste/dxkcnv - Vampire sisters part 8
https://pst.moe/paste/iunehj - Vampire sisters Part 9
>>56035
>>56034
It's a unofficial fan comic. For example they de-fur most furries. Not anymore "canon" than anyone else's head-canon, more like artist interpretation, but then again were out here writing our own canon, so whatever floats your boat.
>>56032
>doesn't even have a knot
>>56035
The peppers are supposed to look like dog dicks, as that is the whole joke about them making you a dog and some having knots.
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>>56041
i mean yeah but not a 100% reproduction of a dick
>>56032
>retarded lore raping artist who can't into noses has to trace a dildo just to portray canine peppers
>"canine peppers are named that for a reason"
>canine peppers
>canine
>human penis
this poor soul needs to be put out of his misery asap
why is my strength capped at 80?
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>>56064
cap changes based on TFs and stuff. You could probably get a higher cap with some minotaur/dragon/other strong thing transformations.Also increases in ng+, and based on age with children having the lowest cap.
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>>56065
Thanks. I guess I should have paid more attention when creating a child PC. Is it only for strength though? Because it looks like my other stats go up to 100.
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>>56067
children level faster, but have lower caps, while elder levels slower but has higher caps. idk which ones it affects.
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>>56067
i think they have better speed?
>>56068
That's mostly wrong.
After accepting the deal with the loli prostitute, where you need to go fo advertise her services? Or is that just flavor text?
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>>56085
(that wasn't a prostitute)
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>>56094
I know it is a Alice, I'm just asking of her request in exchange for free cunny is a actually implemented quest in-game or just filler text
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One of the talks with an alice has her offer to team up with you. I'm just wishfully thinking, cause I ain't no writer, but adopting an alice as a camp recruit does sound pretty good. We can already get one pet succubus(Vapula), so I don't see issue with feeding an alice. Even if it did come with similar drawbacks like building up lust whenever you interacted with her(can they turn that off if they want to? maybe after they are recently fed?), or corruption. But that's no small project, and there are already a pile of unfinished projects, still if that got to proofreading stage, I'd be willing to try at that.
>>56095
Just her desperation peeking through the facade. She'd make a terrible prostitute.
I'm sure if she visited the bazaar and attempted to actually work that job, she'd be mocked, and if she actually got any clients she'd be beaten and left alone in the fields as the caravan continues on its way without her.
Maybe someone should write the option to mention her at the bazaar though, with some followup by that one bear guy asking where to find her, to which... you have no answer. 
Oh, uh, you know... around. Saw her on the road once. What road, you ask? Uh.. the road. You'll know it when you see it.
GIVE ME AN ALICE SLAVE FOR THE CAMP! LET ME COLLECT DEMONS LIKE POKEMON!
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>alicefags getting psychologically cucked by 50 year old blown out succubi with a four-figure body count masquerading as chaste lolis
lmaoing @ your lives
Is anyone interessed in more sub PC content of some kind?
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>>56103
The only reason I'm not writting a virgin Alice NPC is because I'm shitty at writting and don't have much free time to do it anyways
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>>56115
The first part fixes itself the more you learn from your mistakes. Same thing for most skills like music, or cutting hair. There's a certaint amount of trash you have to put out before you get good at something, The second point is an entirely valid reason, you just have other things you want more than virgin alices in an erotic text game.
>>56103
Personally I don't give a shit, if they've done 50 years of slutting prior, that's just experience they could put to use. I stopped caring about virginity, after I lost mine and that was a fucking while ago. What i'd care about is if STD's existed which here they don't.(unless you wanna stretch being a demon to sexually transmissible, but there are ways of removing corruption anyways.)
>>56099
I'm with you friend but asking for it louder ain't gonna get anything done, you want it? Write it or commission someone else to. Shit at writing? Do it anyways, and you will get feedback on what to fix. Personally I might write something, but only if I can get some methylphenidate, so i can focus on it for more than 5 seconds at a time.
>>56114
If you mean bdsm, or getting railed by cock then not me. If you mean stuff like Sylvia, or the hellhound from coc2 I'm interested. Women riled up enough pin you down, and fuck the shit out of you till they are pregnant is a interest of mine.(pic related)
>>56115
Fucking same, man, but for some reason reading my own personal thoughts from someone else filled me with spite so I wrote it anyway
https://pst.moe/paste/jfzcyn
No I'm not finishing it, fuck you. Nothing but spite.
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>>56147
I like you, I don't trust myself with writing characters, or smut(it would probably be cringe). If you want a small piece I'd be happy to contribute though if you got ideas. It would be my first time writing anything for this game. Maybe I could try writing a short TF with skin oil or hair dye, or maybe try a scene where you give her a new outfit or something. Whatever I do would probably be trash at first, but fuck it were getting shit done bad writing or not.
There isnt any kind of wiki or archive listing all mod changes and content in a organized manner?
>>56156
best you can do is ctrl+f in the changelog as far as I know.
>>56156
Button in-game with detail and organization for all changes, actually, on the menu
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>>56103
>actually giving a fuck who she's slept with before you
Don't worry, buddy. Someday, your balls will drop and you'll have some confidence.
>>56156
There's the changelog.txt in the mega
>>56158
Thanks, guess I'm blind lol
Does Pumpkin Seed serve any purpose?
>>56179
food
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>>56179
Triggers
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>>56180
>>56181
I thought it was related with Fera or something but eating seems to do nothing, speaking of her, whats the purpose of messing with Akbal, does she want us to test him or is Fera just messing around?
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>>56182
If you get to the end of it, it seems clear enough to me, at least.
>>56182
She want's to see which of you is the better predator. So she promises Akbal what he wants in exchange for acquiring some mcguffins if he is strong, and cunning enough to do so. Fera want's this to actually test him though, and using you as a wrench in his plans both makes his trials harder, and I imagine entertains her. Fera has a broad view on what predation is, and things like might are just a part of that, sexual dominance is a recent-ish addition to that portfolio, and I imagine things like a spider setting it's web to lure in flies also fits that. So that's why he has a bunch of different tasks you can fuck up in a few ways that aren't just go kill this thing. I enjoyed Fera-quest personally, though getting events to trigger was hard to do. Maybe they have a minimum timer between them or something.
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>>56187
2 day timer between akbal encounters iirc
>>56179
Sells for 100 gems.
Sharks.

But also goblins.
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>>56231
I  want more Alices and more content about the moth daughter Dolores.
>>56147
Finish it.
Be the hero of the loli.
Replies: >>56239
is it looked down upon here to write but not code? I don't want to create new scenarios, I'd just like to improve some of the original base-game scenes to reflect alternative age and apparel options. I thought it was cool you could set your characters age and even remove clothing but it seems not many scenes recognize it.

I don't know how to code, but I looked at the source code and some of it seemed pretty straightforward and I could probably figure out simple if/else statements but I wouldn't trust myself to do anything more complicated than that.
>>56236
No one wants to read already code-riddled work to check your writing, and the more experienced coders just sit around waiting for stuff to be proofread so they can code it. No real lack of coders
>>56236
Go for it, there are apparently coders around, atleast more than proofreaders. Also I think it's the norm to not know more than psuedo-code for writers. Read the writing guide, and that's all you should need to know to submit stuff for proofreading, and coding.
>>56235
He said he won't and I respect him for getting anything done at all. Why don't you write a scene with the camp!alice? Even if you are shit at writing it's better than nothing. Could try and write a description of where in the camp she lives, or setting up her new home. If you are more of an editor, you could try making variations for the alice scenes to take place in camp.
>>56236
improving upon stuff is neat go for it my guy
>>56236
ime as long as your format is understandable the coders are good at getting what you want to work
>>56231
>Goblin sharks
>Aquatic shortstacks
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A few errors I noticed while playing. 

1.
>master/classes/classes/Scenes/Camp.as
>709
There’s a growing pile of stones built up at the fringes of your camp. It’s big enough to be considered a small hill by this point, dotted with a couple small harpy nests just barely big enough for two.
Should be with a couple of small harpy

2.
> classes/classes/Scenes/NPCs/IsabellaFollowerScene.as 
> 1717
(Placeholder) You give a bottle of Ovi Elixir to Isabella. She ingests the contents inside.
Remove (Placeholder) 

3.
If you are in camp after 02:00 it says "Your camp is silent as your companions are sleeping right now." but some are awake.
By 05:00 nobody is asleep.

4.
I got obsidian vines armor early in the game, met Rathazul at the lake, woke up one morning and he took me to "his living space" when I live alone.
>classes/classes/Scenes/Areas/Swamp/AlrauneScene.as
>800
As you stroll through camp, the old alchemist calls you over.
“I believe I have found the remedy you were seeking, [name]," he explains, ushering you over to his living space. 

5.
Lots of Marielle scenes have "Invalid IF condition".

These past minutes, Marielle has been looking increasingly distracted—tired, even—Invalid IF condition (insultedfather) to hide it. It seems your prolonged company is taking its toll on the pallid seamstress, so you bring up the possibility of you leaving her be for now.
“Hmm? Ah.” It takes her another moment to consider and reply. “...Invalid IF condition (insultedfather), I suppose 'twould be wisest... Thank you,

She seems quite fine withInvalid IF condition (metdolores) you, you remark.
“Well... I was... laid bare unto you, sans all volition, when first we met, and yet have you not Invalid IF condition (insultedfather) for what I amInvalid IF condition (metdolores). Thus need I not veil myself, for you already know me wholly.” But does she really need a disguise, you ask.

She then tenses as your palm cups the top of her head mid-motion, though otherwise doesn’t seemInvalid IF condition (insultedfather) disturbed by your action, instead holding still as you gently start to stroke her.

t.Invalid IF condition (!insultedfather) Continuing that motion with one hand, you run the .... no protest to your ruffling of her hair. Indeed, she seems to Invalid IF condition (insultedfather) 

though this one is life-sizedInvalid IF condition (insultedfather). It’s... delightful,


6.
Spider-kin are a relatively new addition to Mareth. They were originally humans who came through a newly opened portal

Not necessarily wrong and a change to the lore but I don't think they should have been human. Drider is drow (dark elf) and spider and both spider consumables give you elfin ears. If the first humans to come to Mareth were mages it would not be crazy to think elves exist in the world they came from.



For improvements

More repeatable content in Mountain and Glacial Rift. I went to Forest many times for wood, the Desert for nails, Bog and Plains for the NPC. I think it would be easy to copy the code for Desert nails and change to Mountain stone this would give me a reason to go there.
Valkyrie giving an angel morph item would help Glacial Rift.

An Oni morph item from Izumi would be nice too.

The game needs more Height+ items, I can shrink with Lolipops but find it hard to grow, especially past 9 foot

Starting a new game it says "Every year for as long as you can remember...". I waited 1 year to meet the next year's champion but nobody came out the portal. It would be nice if a new follower came out each year, even if its just a line on the stats page, like most children, below Camp Population, every 365 days Champion from Ingnam count goes up by 1. For example text of " suddenly you notice the portal swirls into life and realize it has been one year since you arrived.... you meet the new year's champion and quickly realize they are not fit to survive here let alone help you... they find an unused area of the camp and make themselves home."

Isabella’s Talk option is very short, I get
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Minotaur skulls when?
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>>56260
>Should be with a couple of small harpy
My instincts say "no"
You can have a couple things, you can have a couple of things. 
A couple small harpy nests sounds best, to me. 
>Remove (Placeholder) 
A non-placeholder one was already written, not sure where that's gone off to.
>Rathazul helping without living with you
A good catch, easy oversight to miss I imagine
>Make the mountain more relevant
I disagree. Mino items, Ceraph, many one-time things, the mountain has a ton going for it until you've visited it a bunch and seen it all. I don't think it needs more.
Rift, you're right, needs much more, and one transformative wouldn't cut it if you ask me. 
>new follower from Ingnam every year, even as just a stat page detail
I think making it so underwhelming is worse than doing nothing.
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>>56262
>A non-placeholder one was already written
I checked the chronicles, it's still there
https://pst.moe/paste/kcwkbp
Would you prefer the TF mechanics of this game being less random? I honestly just resort to save-scuming until satisfied with the results
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>>56261
Wouldn't this take like 3 paragraphs to write? Make a write up yourself. Collecting the skull, putting the skull in camp, line detailing it in camp description.
>>56260
Are those Phylla lines in the image from revamp? They're really bad
>>56264
Would I like it? Yes. Is it worth the effort to do so? Probably not compared to similarly scaled projects. Save editing is a poor solution, but if I'm willing to save scum, I'm willing to save edit. If anything I would prefer an expansion on existing TFs, or adding new ones.
off the top of my head: something for a permanent rut(could maybe toggle it off by taking it again), knotty peppers allowing for a knot on penis types that wouldn't normally have one, cum type/flavor changes(this one is probably not worth it for how many scenes you'd need to write new parts for the parser). a more dedicated TF for gaining additional penises without needing to meet requirements for incubi draft, as someone else mentioned more +height TFs, and I'm sure more.
>>56260
>Lots of Marielle scenes have "Invalid IF condition".
Haven't seen those errors in a while, strange that they still keep popping up, and strange that I can never reproduce them. They're always gone next time you load the game. Are you on some horribly outdated version? It used to be far more common.
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I have no interest in doing it, but I'm making a general note that there should probably be Helia/Helspawn threeway stuff. Aside from potentially both being sluts, everyone wanting to fuck daughters, and the mild need for more Helspawn sex in general, threesomes are also kind of Helia's shtick.
Short of being paid to, I don't think I'll do it.
I think the thread briefly was updating a bounty board of things that should be done that no one was really interested in doing yet.
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>>56300
Have you SEEN what tanuki do with their balls?
>>56303
I've had thoughts about Helspawn scenes starting with stealthfucking her while cucking the spider boyfriend, leading into further scenes. Problem is I work six days/week and don't have the energy on my day off to even ideafag, let alone actually write.
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>>56317
Screw stealth. I say burst in, rail the twink, creampie your daughter in front of him after, then have him drink your cum out of her cunt.
>>56303
A particular kink of mine is mother and daughter, and it is a shame that the moths are the only source of that considering the camp recruits you can make mothers. Also wold like for some fucked up family trees with actually impregnating harpy daughters, and get some multi-generational degeneracy.

How hard would it be to write something for recruiting princess Gwyn into your camp? I find the harem lacking sufficient twinks, and fuckboys.
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>>56318
>Screw stealth. I say burst in, rail the twink, creampie your daughter in front of him after, then have him drink your cum out of her cunt.
That sounds super hot. If I could write sex scenes I would totally do that.
Might actually be a good place to start learning.
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>>56262
>My instincts say "no"
>You can have a couple things, you can have a couple of things. 
>A couple small harpy nests sounds best, to me.

Sounds very 'bastardised American English' to me.
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>>56317
>Problem is I work six days/week and don't have the energy on my day off to even ideafag
I relate. For a while there, I was working 50 hours a week. 
That's eased up, but I've mostly spent my renewed free time playing more video games instead of writing lately.
But I'll see what I can do now that I've the time.
>>56320
It seems to be much more commonly American than otherwise (though still common outside of America in recent decades) but I'm finding it in 19th century European texts too, even some 18th century.
>>56319
I'll write a rough draft, if someone is willing to make a second draft out of it after proofreading it. My quality is garbage, and I've never done any erotic writing. But if someone likes the idea enough to adopt it they can do whatever they want with my first draft, and I'll proofread their second draft. I just don't wanna do it before I know my work won't end up in purgatory.
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>>56327
If you're interested, here's what I have for cucking him in his first appearance (the last growing up event for Helspawn)
https://pst.moe/paste/dqkozl
His hair is never mentioned anywhere, anyone want to suggest a hair color for Alex, Helspawn's potential spider-boyfriend? He's very girly, has 4 arms, is a "pure born" spiderkin, whatever that means.
You're welcome to draft a followup for after the scene of accepting her having a boyfriend, if you want. Doubt I'll personally do anything with it, but it's something.
>>56328
I should say, "what I have so far"
Still need to finish
>>56328
Read halfway through this, it's quality is def better than mine I think. I think if I write my idea it would best be a option within your framework. I'm gonna finish reading it now, but you got my attention.
>>56328
Alright I read it, and this would be my first time writing anything for this game, so I'm gonna ask for some advice. In the original you can hear her tail-pegging Alex, and that is where I would have the player given a choice to walk in, and dom both of them, or let it play out like normal. Another way I could do it is to write an option for the [join] option you wrote where the player is asked how they want to teach the pair, with the first option being the scene so far written as is, and another option for an alternate scene where you fuck both of them dominantly.
That all said, I don't even know where to easily find the original scene for the tail-pegging, and the writing guide seemed to mostly be unsurprisingly, about writing.
So how do I find the unparsed version of a scene? Also any advice on how to implement this would be appreciated.
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>>56333
Also, I would want this to be a repeatable scene with variations on if you've done it before. Probably accessed after the first time through Helspawns sex menu, and add a [Threesome] button putting [Alex] there.
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>>56333
>where raw scenes?
In the git, the source code in the OP. Within classes>classes>scenes you will find nearly all text in the game organized very clearly.
There are also search functions on git, if you don't know where to find something specific.
>>56334
>I want to add to after the tail pegging, or an alternative at the start
>repeatable, from Helspawn's sex menu
In my opinion, you should instead just make it from helspawn's menu in the first place, rather than tacking it on her growing up scene. That event scene should be limited to the event alone, not repeatable
And, I'll add, I think Alex is best as a virgin to start with, so if you take the road of railing him, it's best make special variation for his first time.
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>>56335
Alright thanks for the advice I'll just write it as a threesome from Helspawns sex menu, and not worry about integration with the first time scene for now. I expect this to be sub-par quality, but I'm counting on interest in more Helspawn, threesomes, and femboy scenes to motivate others to improve it. Fair warning I'm probably going to butcher the syntax/parser tags, but I'm gonna give it a real shot anyways.
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>>56336
>butcher the syntax/parser tags
If what you mean is obvious, it's good enough. 
Good luck, have fun with it
>>56328
>>56336
My day off's tomorrow, I'll (try to remeber to) take a look then. What I had in mind was: when HS brings Alex home and you've the option of leaving them to it or interrupting, give the option to sneak in. If HS is riding Alex, then sneaking up behind her would leave her unaware, while he sees you and can't really do anything. Cue forcing his dick out the way and fucking her yourself. Fucking him option for multicock players. Later scenes can have HS either have been aware from the start or figuring it out, or whatever else people want. I'd imagine Alex would want nothing to do with her after that, but that's for someone else to decide on.
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>>56338
My angle's been Alex as a submissive, inhibited sort of person that isn't stopping you from "showing him how to please her" after you've stopped them, and Helspawn getting swept up in it. Chastespawn likely only letting it continue because Alex isn't speaking up, and slutspawn finding it exciting
Your idea only has a minor hitch in it that in vanilla, she just pegs him, and the option to take chastespawn's virginity that was written a couple years ago is relying on the assumption that pegging was the only thing they did (if she isn't a slut)
Many ways to work around that, be it changing your idea to a later scene, changing the chastespawn virginity scene to require you didn't let them continue, making your scene require slutspawn, so on.

What I had in mind was: You could start putting Alex in the cuck corner from the start, or leave them be/stop them, and in the talk where you can accept her having a boyfriend, accepting would open up the path to further cucking Alex, or fucking him, or threesome stuff. 
I don't really care that much though, I have no particular plan to expand on it. Also would be nice to have Slutspawn develop a kink for putting you over other people, and rubbing it in the face of Helia. It's a fun twist. Her having some smug arrogance about getting more of you than her mother gets. Drive it in even harder if, when Helia asked if you love her, you told her you didn't (shortly before Helspawn was born). 
It's funny.
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https://pst.moe/paste/bfxeip
Did you know? If Helia gets knocked up by a spider instead of by you, Helspawn is automatically +10 chaste, for some reason.
Also edited subsequent incest talk stuff to account for her personality. 
Should go rework an old helspawn scene that's been sitting around for years too.
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>>56339
I will be writing Alex in the threesome as very submissive to other people, and turned on by the players dominant nature. It just makes sense in my head the spiderboy mistaken as a girl, that gets tail-pegged by your daughter is definitely a bottom. I imagine as long as you are giving him attention, and not trying to abuse him more than a bit of bedroom humiliation, and letting him still spend time with HS he is fine participating in this perverse taboo that excites him.
Back to writing I go.
could someone write up an appearance for the spider-boi Alex? I want to be consistent across our spider cucking projects. for now I'll just write stuff like [AlexSkinDesc].
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>>56342
Well he's pale, has black chitin, mostly looks like a typical spiderkin, but he has 4 arms. 
And he's very girly with a feminine voice
Nothing else is indicated in vanilla. I've, for now, given him black hair, but I have no objection to changing it.
This took way too fucking long. I present to you having a threesome with helspawn, and her subby boyfriend Alex, in which you dom them both.
 https://pst.moe/paste/ktfizl
I'll finish the last scene later. Someone please proofread it.
Also I am not that comfortable with writing dialogue so there isn't much of it, if someone is better at it, and wants to add it that would be nice. This is indeed the first time I have ever written smut, so I expect that to be fairly cringe as well. Overall this is a rough draft that will probably need a lot of work, but hey I got on my ass focused on it, and got something done. Maybe with help we can get this in as helspawns first threesome content.
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>>56352
>expect cringe
Gotta start somewhere
>addNextButton
Odd choice to go about it that way. Most writers just do a quick ///[Scene name] for [character]'s sex menu
I think you did it wrong—openThreesomeMenu and helSpawnThreesomeMenu don't match. I'm not a coder though. 
Also I wouldn't bother adding a threesome submenu until there are enough sex scenes to warrant splitting it up. Even if there were several threesomes, there are hardly any non-threesomes, it all fits on one menu neatly enough.
>scene itself
Many expected errors: commas, general grammar stuff, run-on sentences, wrong pseudo code, word repetition
I'll set that aside for now
>under her dress to [helspawn]'s thighs
It varies a little, but I believe she has a blouse and skirt or a scalemail bikini like Hel's depending on how you raised her. Either way, not really a dress, and since it's slutspawn you have in mind... I should check what slutspawn wears.
<slutspawn
"a slutty scale bikini like her mother's, barely concealing anything"
<chastespawn
"a short skirt, thigh-high boots, and a sky-blue blouse, in stark contrast to her mother's sluttier attire"
>[helspawnbreastdesc], [helspawnpussydesc]
"a pair of perky, palmable C-cup breasts, each with a sensitive half-inch nipple at its tip."
And her pussy doesn't have anything special about it near as I can tell. 
>You pull Alex's head back as he finally breaths in, gasping in air permeated with the scent of [helspawn]'s arousal, and your own rich [if (player has balls){[ball]|[cock]}] musk
hm gross
no idea how popular that kind of thing is
>He shudders at the sudden forceful treatment dick twitching

>[helspawn] watches with excitement as you thrust into her boyfriend fiercely sinking [minimum {[Alex's anal capacity]|[cock length]}
This threw me off for a moment. While the pseudocode stuff is generally wrong, the important thing is the intention being clear. I wasn't sure for a moment what you were thinking here, and the lack of commas is part of it. 
I think I get the jist now though.
>[echoing a clap of conquest as your hips meet]
I just want to highlight the phrase "clap of conquest"
It's really silly, and I like it. 
>You saw right back into the twinks butt
...Slam? I don't think you're meaning a sawing motion. 
>helspawnCuntDesc
Hey wait a minute, you were using pussydesc last time.
>Ohh~
Oh god  a tilde
>[dad]'s
You made it all this way without parsing the player's gender, why start now?
>earning a loud moan, and sympathetic clench in her pussy
A sympathetic clench in her pussy?
>Her last words punctuated with an ungodly contraction
I'm going to save that line for a horror storyline. Perfect for when the pregnant woman carrying the harbinger of death is finally killed, only for it to be too little too late as the damnable baby starts coming. 
Sorry, tangent. 
>>overall
Well, pretty bad, but if I just think about it a series of bullet points for what the final scene is aiming for it's
not my kind of thing, but... Maybe after a few drafts it's not bad. 
I think I may be a bad proofreader.
>///I am so fucking sorry
I appreciate the apology
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>>56353
thanks for the timely proofread. I'll try and change most of this in my second draft, which will also include the last scene.
Yeah first time writing porn of any kind so I definitely appreciate the feedback on questionable choices, since I got no clue how to write porn. I've also cleaned up the monstrous if statement slightly.
>A sympathetic clench in her pussy?
My goal here was to say she clenches in response to your treatment of her breasts.
>This threw me off for a moment. While the pseudocode stuff is generally wrong, the important thing is the intention being clear. I wasn't sure for a moment what you were thinking here, and the lack of commas is part of it. 
I think I will try and write out my pseudocode as [thing i want] instead of trying to mimic code. Cause I clearly don't know what I'm doing.
tbh some of my use of [thingDesc] is just me being too lazy to think of a good way of saying the thing that isn't repetitive.
>hm gross
>no idea how popular that kind of thing is
It was something I read somewhere I kinda liked, but I could easily write something more palatable instead.
>>56354
You've got a good attitude about it, it keeps me optimistic
Try a little refresher on commas and stuff though.
I've mostly got a second draft, but to be honest this much took me pretty much all day getting to this point. Unless I get some ADHD meds I don't think I can focus on each sentence long enough to figure out the proper grammar. It would probably take me an hour to do what someone else could in 15 minutes. That said I'm gonna resort to begging someone else to fix my grammar, and also for someone else to add dialogue where appropriate cause I have no faith in whatever cringe I could turn out.

>>56353
I think I covered everything you specifically called out other than the general mistakes you glossed over(I don't blame you I don't even know how many there are).
Here's my second draft.
https://pst.moe/paste/viydqi
If anyone wants to add onto it. I think I'll put off any more work on this until tomorrow. I haven't even fucking eaten I just had a cup of chai, and wrote smut for 10 hours. I really wish I was more efficient at writing without medication.
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>>56357
tell me what drugs I need to take to write for 10 hours
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>>56358
Just be that fucking bad at writing, and losing focus every 5 minutes. A back injury that makes walking hurt, also helps. If you read what I wrote I think you'd agree they were not very productive 10 hours. I'm sure what I turned out could have been done in atleast half the time. on a more serious note, you would want a time release methylphenidate like concerta, and maybe some caffeine, or just pop a non time release version like adderal as needed. But if I had any of that I wouldn't have *needed* 10 hours to turnout that garbage.
>>56354
>My goal here was to say she clenches in response to your treatment of her breasts.
I think you meant involuntary
sympathetic implies that it was consciously controlled
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Saw some alice sprites someone bashed together from vanilla ones. Look good enough to use. 
Reposting for everyone's sake.
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>>56358
100% pure weapons-grade autism
>>56354
>tbh some of my use of [thingDesc] is just me being too lazy to think of a good way of saying the thing that isn't repetitive.
Generally npcs don't have these kind of parsers unless they're customizable in some way (e.g. how you can feed Amily items to grow/shrink parts). Gotta describe that spider cock on your own.
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Actual second draft done. https://pst.moe/paste/gemiuc
I used a bot to help me sort grammar, cause honestly that is beyond the scope of what I can reasonably accomplish with my mental deficiencies. 
To-Do:
Add double dicking support for Alex Assists scene.
Replace the few [alexDesc] tags.
Things I need others To-Do:(who are better than me at writing)
more proofreading( a lot of the writing should be cleaned up after running it through quillbot)
Writing a mock-up "Appearance" for the character so I can keep consistent with other matters of spider-cucking.
Write dialogue for a subby spider-twink getting cucked by his future father-in-law and loving it. Also writing a wholesome after-care scene after the very unwholesome deeds.
Write some Slutspawn dialogue for the scene, and replace whatever cringe/placeholder I put there. 
>>56374
Damn it. Thing is I don't know a "canon" of Alex, and don't want to invent the character myself since someone else is also writing content with him. If I don't see anyone else make a canon description of Alex tomorrow I'm just going to fill in the blanks with some generic spider boy from the swamp.
>>56319
I hope you're fucking happy I wrote it despite not being able to write sex scenes for shit.
Thinking about it my sex scene is actually dependent on incest being enabled without breaking the two up. Maybe a option to choose incest after asking her about her boyfriend is needed? Should mostly be a code thing. Maybe a 4th option to cuck her boyfriend(would need more character writing than I am willing to do), or have it tied up with
>>56340
>>56328
It would be nice to not need both projects done to implement though. Speaking of if you wanna use any of my threesome scene for spider cucking content feel free, or to make a first time version of the Alex Threesome scene.
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>>56377
>Thinking about it my sex scene is actually dependent on incest being enabled without breaking the two up
I just figured that'd be bundled into the first time threesome scene, or after further build-up depending on whoever writes it and how they want to approach that.
>would be nice to not need both project done
Well, Satan's is already done, and doesn't depend on your scene existing, so 
no, both projects don't need to be done to implement. 
Unless you meant the not-yet-started first time threesome scene that you require for your scene. No one's volunteered to spearhead that one yet.
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>>56378
Wait like theirs is proofread, and ready to be added? that was fast! I'm just used to seeing so many projects wait in purgatory for proofreading. Alright if that's done then there is no issue in just using that as setup, and making mine dependent on theirs if it's all ready to be added in the next patch. This actually makes it all much easier.
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>>56379
My bad, I guess I misunderstood your meaning. No one's proofread that one, it's just a complete scene is all. 
And it's Satan, so it won't need much revision most likely
In any case, shouldn't be a problem to use as a dependency for yours
>>56379
Actually read through it again. It still doesn't really characterize Alex much, and makes few refferences to his details. But I could have it be you needed to choose the [join them] option to unlock the threesome and that is a pretty clean cut way of adding it. Probably requires a new save to access unfortunately, but that isn't the end of the world I think.
>>56376
>If I don't see anyone else make a canon description of Alex tomorrow I'm just going to fill in the blanks with some generic spider boy from the swamp.
That was my plan at least, just grab the spider encounter from the swamp and use it for him. iirc it's one of the few monsterss that explicitly mentions foreskin so there's that. Assuming I actually finish something anyway.
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>>56382
Spiderkin are I suppose average height. Their arms up to their shoulders and legs up to their thighs are clad in glossy black chitin, almost always have very pale white skin, "dusky" nipples, and onyx-black groins, for both genders.
Alex's only special characteristics are that he has 4 arms instead of 2, and he's very girly. 

Let's say he's a particularly short boy. 5'4". Long-ish hair, to his shoulder blades and his nipples. 
Black hair? I'm fine changing it if anyone wants to suggest another.
His dick, onyx-black unlike most of his skin, as is the way with spiderkin, and has foreskin. A little below average size, maybe 5 inches exactly. Not small enough to push a small size fetish, but unexciting and modest. 
Skinny, not much tone. Soft and slender physique. 
Eyes....
>Codex
Solid yellow, red, black, or purple with small, black pupil in the middle. All spider-kin have a chance of having either four or six such eyes. Typically the extras are located on the forehead, above the primary pair, and are much smaller.
I rolled a random number and got "1" so I pick yellow eyes. 
He's "pure born" and has four arms, so choose the higher number of eyes, 6? That's two normal sized and placed eyes, and four more, smaller ones, on his forehead.


Anyone wanting to impose their preference can weigh in on this.
>>56383
I'm fine with this, and if nobodies got anything to add in the next 16~ hours from this post I'm using it to pad out my [alexDesc] tags, and maybe add in a few more details.
Thanks for giving me something to work with.
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>>56383
>>56384
Should he wear any kind of clothing? I don't believe the swamp spiders do.
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>>56385
Well I'm not sure about his wardrobe, but if I got anything to say about it he is going to be wearing some home-made silk stockings, and panties for the threesome scene now. Thank you for bringing my attention to this. I await further developments with interest.
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>>56385
You bring up a good point
Maybe, if slutspawn, he's naked. 
But if it's chastespawn, he wears something modest and cute. Explain it in whatever first followup scene comes after accepting Helspawn having a boyfriend. 
>chastespawn introduces
"Dad, this is Alex, my..." Helspawn's cheeks redden. "My boyfriend."

Before you now stands a spiderkin a head shorter than you, and tiny beside the tall stature of the salamander. He brushes his dark hair away from his collection of yellow eyes to look at you, and you gaze down the expected slender, feminine physique to see a loose, baggy dark-blue shirt hanging down to his thighs. Despite his nudity the other night, he knows how to be modest.
>slutspawn
"Dad, here's Alex," Helspawn says with a grin, "my boyfriend."

Standing beside the prideful girl is a far shorter person, looking no less girly and nervous than he did the other night. While two of his chitin-clad hands move the black locks from his face, his other two remain stuck to his groin, awkwardly guarding his nudity outside the presence of his similarly bare swamp kin. All six of his pale-gold eyes stare in anxious hope of your approval.
>
Probably something like that. Assuming most spiderkin are nude, he probably wouldn't have the deepest grasp of fashion, just going for some kind of covering to be considerate of his girlfriend.
>>56389
Stockings might be a bit strange on his organically armored legs. Really, he has natural stockings built in.

All this is just spit-balling on the spot, I'm not married to any of it.
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>>56392
>Stockings might be a bit strange on his organically armored legs. Really, he has natural stockings built in.
This one speaks wisdom.
It might just be T-hoodies fault, but I kinda like femboys who aren't trying to crossdress, wearing loose/baggy shirts/hoodies. Hoodie is probably not that setting friendly, but a baggy shirt, or jacket that functions as a miniskirt is a decent compromise between his naked kin, and something simple/practical. I also think having him wear something loose to cover his chest helps sell how we mistook this spidermorph that's flat as a board as a girl.
>Maybe, if slutspawn, he's naked. 
But if it's chastespawn, he wears something modest and cute.
I don't think we need to tie his fashion to how slutty his girlfriend is. Let's settle for the chastespawn version, and call him a particularly shy spidermorph.
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>>56393
>I don't think we need to tie his fashion to how slutty his girlfriend is
As far as I see, he is naked the only time he appears in vanilla. I definitely don't want to argue in favor of having him naked
I'm perfectly willing to have him just inclined toward modesty. Easy to explain. Even slutspawn is clothed, albeit barely.
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>>56395
Agreed. Also he probably has less corruption than the stock spidermorphs of the swamp being a "pure-born". Guess that doesn't stop him from reveling in being treated like a slut any, when he winds up in a situation like that. Not a hard sell he wears a shirt too big for him when he isn't sneaking off with his girlfriend to get pegged. Also I think I'm just going to copy paste your chastespawn description into the scene where HS returns with him wrapped around her arm. Though I will probably make it player height neutral since I don't feel like adding in psuedocode for height checks.
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>>56376
I almost forgot to check back today. Fuck this work schedule. Mostly just looking at grammar here
>Looking down between your bodies, to see Alex rubbing his [alexCockDesc] eyes closed,
You look down between your bodies to see Alex rubbing his [] with his eyes closed,
>You pull Alex's head back as he finally breathes in, gasping for air permeated with the scent of your combined arousal and throwing him further
and he gasps for air that's so permeated with the scent of your combined arousal that it throws him further
>Touching himself?
What?
>but first preparations must be made
This feels a bit clunky, at least to me
>[a log]}
Missing comma
>[helspawn] with a knowing grin
[helspawn], with a knowing grin,
>Aww they really do make a cute couple when they work together like that
The aww makes this feel like silly mode, and needs a comma besides
>in sucking her [father's] cock by bringing his face into your nuts
So is he sucking my dick or licking my nuts, which I may not even have?
>exchanging your pre
Comma
>Fuck, at this rate
Drop the fuck
>making out. before
making out for a moment, before
>hauling him over over the log
Gotta be careful with the if statements
>dick twitching, he must be pretty close by now.
Seems a bit odd that he's almost done already, but hey, one in ten guys, I suppose. Needs a period or dash after twitching.
>Mercifully, you enjoy
Not entirely sure how mercy factors in here.
>[helspawn] with a blush on her face
[helspawn], with a blush on her face,
>She starts rubbing her pussy
This sentence really needs broken in two; it's really hard to read.
>boi
kys
>wasting his seed
There's no mention before this of him leaking, unless I missed it; feels like it ought to be in or after the next sentence (which is missing a space at the start)
>ecstasy moaning
Semicolon
>still flavored
I like what you're going for, but it's really clunky.
>Adorable, maybe
(silly)[Adorable. ]Maybe
>You now deem that he has had his needs met.
I am sexbot. You have orgasmed.
The spider's needs having been met, you move on to his girlfriend,
>gaping
, gaping
>you wonder if Alex's job is truly done?
you consider: is Alex's job is truly done?

Pretty good so far.
>and making sure
No and needed
>>56396
>make it player height neutral since I don't feel like adding in psuedocode for height checks.
Where is your passion, anon?
>
Before you now stands a spiderkin [if (height>67) {[if (height<74) {a head shorter than you, and tiny besides the tall stature of the salamander|a bit shorter than the average human, and [i:puny] beside the statures of you and your daughter}]|[if (height>64) {a smidge short of your height|[if (height>60) {barely taller than you|a bit shorter than the average [if (ischild) {adult|human}]}]}], and tiny beside the tall stature of the salamander}].
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>>56397
>fuck his girlfriend
Way too long a tooltip; end it there.
>Deciding Alex can rest
You decide Alex can rest
>in this state
I think it should be that state, but I could be wrong
>You let her know you appreciated her
While technically not player quoting, I'd still rework it into
<You let her know how much you appreciated her
>as your finally bottom out
The ifs got you again
>lowering your head
Ought to incorporate height; change lower for move
>your mouth and begin
Another overly long sentence; break it there and replace and with You
>against her ass, the first beat
Semicolon or sentence break, not comma
>her asshole still wet with her boyfriend's saliva, causing
her asshole--still wet with her boyfriend's saliva--causing
>with sudden squeezing
with a sudden squeezing
>the cum it has so far
they have
>he watches in amazement, a feat he couldn't even hope to replicate.
he watches a feat he couldn't even hope to replicate in amazement.
>from [helspawn] you up the tempo, and fuck her faster {[balls] slapping
from [helspawn], you up the tempo and fuck her faster{; [balls] slapping
>certainly draws Alex's attention
He wasn't paying attention before?
>she's pleading with her [father]
I thought I was her father?
>fuck her harder as your only response.
Here we have a big slip-up: for mono-cocked players, there's nothing to respond to.
>while screaming
This feels a bit tacked on; maybe something like
<she absolutely explodes; screaming as she drenches your cock in feminine excitement.
>do you thrust firmly into her spasming pussy
Is there supposed to be an option here?
The whole orgasm part gave me a bit of a headache trying to figure out what you were trying to do, and overall feels very unfinished. I'd offer to redo it myself, but again, trash schedule somebody kill me
>>56402
>Deciding Alex can rest
Second verse, same as the first
>from the four-armed twink shaped
Legit thought you rewrote part of the sentence and didn't clean it up properly
<from the spider-twink-shaped
>twitching again, as he
Another sentence struggling under it's length
<twitching again. He
>You want to make me happy, right?
Not a correction, just want to chip in that I really like that line
>from your ass as his submissive
This one not so much; length is everything
<from your ass. His submissive
>grabs on to your ass
Is there a call for butt descriptor? This is a point where it would come in handy
>his tongue, shuddering
semicolon, not comma
>You descend on her
Prior to this, I was operating on the assumption that HS was riding you cowgirl. Going back, I realize it's actually fairly ambiguous. Maybe it's just me being in a near-constant state of exhaustion, or it could do with some clarifying.
>, dragging your [cock] through her pussy, and Alex's tongue across your ass down to your [balls] which he greedily slurps on to the sound of [helspawn]'s pleasured moans
<, dragging your [cock] through her pussy. Alex's tongue laps across your ass down to your [balls], which he greedily slurps on to the sound of [helspawn]'s pleasured moans
>girlfriend your
Comma
>grabs your ass with two arms
I feel like there's a great opportunity here for him to be helping you thrust, but that's just my opinion.
>she loves her [father] fucking her
Really stiff line right here, I'll get more into it later
>you can't last much longer. You then slam
<you can't last much longer before you slam
>nut
See previous post

Overall, the assist scene has a LOT more room for dialogue, such as the stiff line I mentioned above. I understand it's not your area of expertise, but it's definitely something that's sorely missing. I really like what's here so far. Save the if goof in the watch scene and the ejaculating, it shouldn't take much redrafting for it to be ready. One thing I feel should be pointed out is that cocks beyond the second (does anyone here even play with 3+?) ought to have a single line about splaying off to the side or whatever.
All that being said, 7/10, could be an easy 8 when done. Thanks for coming to my Ted Talk, and I'm off to down a couple shots of bleach before work tomorrow.
>>56404
Attempts will be made at addressing most of this, and I guess I will atleast try, to write dialogue since my attempts to solicit guest authors to do so have proven futile. When? Idk depends how long this takes me. Something is better than nothing progress wise so to motivate myself I will have however much of a third draft I made put up here within 24 hours of this post.
Also thanks for the morale boost with some compliments mixed in there. I especially needed that to resolve to make attempts at more dialogue.
>>56399
I was being consistently lazy because not accounting for height is how I wrote EVERYTHING else. That said you have given me no excuse now to not include it in this line, thus setting the precedent of height being accounted for in my porn scene. Thanks...
For now I start my day, and handle some personal stuff. I will begin writing again before the day is through though.
>>56376
>Thing is I don't know a "canon" of Alex, and don't want to invent the character myself 
Savin never elaborated on his plans for Alex the spider-boy beyond "You'll be able to fuck him too someday." He promptly abandoned Helspawn in the midst of a massive scandal so he never went further than that
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>>56411
That's fine. I asked for some canon and >>56383 >>56392
delivered. So I got enough to work with now.
>>56376
>This will need a different version if this is the first time you've done it, but I'm not writing that for now
How's this https://pst.moe/paste/xqpohj
>>56423
Sorry, forgot to fix up the ellipsis before pasting
I present, the third draft. https://pst.moe/paste/qcgrti
With more content inevitably comes more errors. I did however either fix, or comment on everything the proofreader posted.
I didn't want to have to be the one to do it, but I characterized Alex. He is a character now. In the after care I focused on creating a dynamic that wouldn't have him just run away hurt. I want him to stick around so I focused on him being so head over heels for HS that he is just glad to do anything that makes her happy. She in turn has genuine love for the boy, and enjoys watching him having a good time, and squirm as he gets accustomed to his new kinks. I am sorry to anyone who wanted something less wholesome, and more corruption oriented.

Anyways more proofreading please. Also I ask some questions in the comments that I would like answered. I'm actually starting to look forward to working on this project more, rather than dreading that it isn't done.
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>>56423
I like it. I'm shit at proofreading, but I guess I'll give it another go since its something I wanted for my project. I will need to add a check for taking Alex's anal virginity in the next draft.
>>56423
> far more baser,
Seems off. Drop "more" maybe. Unsure, but picking nits, and all that.
><i>um</i>
I believe the parser is [i:um]. I won't point out repeats of this for brevity, and cause they are obvious.
>And that's fine because it's not like she needs to decide now, and really she ought to talk to Alex about it as well.
Someone who can fucking understand commas needs to address this one cause it ain't me. At risk of being wrong however, add a comma after fine. Bot suggests a comma after really. I'm not sure about it.
>The [sun] hasn't yet slipped away so perhaps not as much as it seems, but time runs thick and sticky and anticipation surges like whitefire in your veins and every moment passes both too fast and too slow.
This sentence seems to run on a bit, and needs comma review. At risk of being wrong: "so," "sticky, and" "veins, and". Rather than add these commas I'd probably suggest you just rewrite the sentence, and break it up more. Bot also recommends slow>slowly.
>Yet you do, and so must he with the hint of color blooming forth on those pale cheeks the moment your eyes meet, and though it's only a breath before they slip away on a shy turn of the head, you can't mistake the glimmer of desire within their golden depths.
add comma after he. There is probably more to be said about the sentence structure by people smarter than me.
> looks so nervous both you and your 
< looks so nervous that both you and your
< looks so nervous, both you and your  
one of these two would be better I think.
Sorry I don't think I did a very good job, but I didn't see many mistakes. I've read the writing guide like atleast 5 times now, and the info just won't stick. I think, atleast in regards to grammar, I am retarded.
If you want I can just make the suggested changes, and throw it into the fourth draft. I'll give you a day to decide though.
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>>56433
Also I have no intention of writing out Alex enough to make him a camp recruit. But I'm going to add a check for it for future proofing. We can say if he is, HS fetches him in 2 minutes, and if he isn't like 20 minutes. I assume they are drawn to each other enough that the "distance" between them in Mareth isn't that far. Sort of like how we can go to Tel'Adre Work out at the gym, fuck Brooke, and be back in camp before an hour has passed.
We need to make Alex chug down succubi milk enough for him to turn in a proper breeding slut. 
Helspawn needs actual incest scenes with the taboo emphasis and later pregnancy.
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>>56436
Giving alex succ milk sounds like closet fag behavior
What would be Helspawn-spawn's default name?
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Scene overhauling: https://pst.moe/paste/keospq
Redid introduction stuff, described the religious garb in more detail(consistent with cultist colors). Completely rewritten teacher-student loss fantasy.
TO-DO: Rewrite the religious outfit victory scene(cringe player quoting and bad quality bits all around), write a new religious scene for losing(flagellation penance theme?).
After that, the fetish cult is kind of completely fixed. 
Minor combat file fixes: https://pst.moe/paste/vxfzcu

Fetish Cultist Overhauling: https://pst.moe/paste/utzosj
Tons of work done over all, but very little different from last time.

Also I've completely lost track of the doppelganger edits I did, chime in if anyone happens to have a copy.
>>56436
You best get writing then. Helspawn-spawn sounds like a lot effort though. Then the degenerates(me) will want Helspawn-spawn-spawn. I endorse restoring the salamandar population through these means, but who is going to go through all the effort? Or will it be like shark daughters?
Also you probably need to actually make Alex an actual camp recruit before corrupting/transforming him. As I have written him so far however, I don't foresee issue with gender swapping him like Arian does. He would probably even be willing if the player, and Helspawn encourage him. I also did play around with the idea of teasing Alex in the scene along the line of "You mention maybe one of these days you will start a family of their for them". I don't think I'll add it though.
>Giving alex succ milk sounds like closet fag behavior
While I like Alex as his current gender just fine, I am fascinated by what reasoning might have led you to such a conclusion. I would genuinely like to hear it.
>What would be Helspawn-spawn's default name?
Alabama. Or pick one of the royal's names.
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>>56443
>what reasoning might have led you to such a conclusion
Turning a man into a woman is like fucking a tranny. Call it what you want, that's a man deep down. It really strikes me as the faggiest sort of thing to want to feminize men.
Same reason I find Princess Gwynn to be cringe. 
It's also comparable to futafag stuff.
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>>56444
I must have shit taste then, cause I've kind of wanted to add Gwynn to the camp as a slave. Might just be, cause He occupies some weight on the deepwoods table, and I don't mind him enough to kill him.
Anyways on the matter gender swapping Alex being gay. Fucking him before doing so is also gay(I think my writing shows I'm more bi than straight at a minimum) I think your point is more about being not only gay, but in denial about your orientation. Or to be edgy about it, being a faggot in denial hitting that genderswap copium. Honestly I think there are a lot of people that would be happier if they just admitted they liked both genders. Like I used to consider myself straight, not anymore though. I got no love for burly men, facial hair, or really any masculine features(unless you wanna consider muscular women masculine), but there are plenty of males I have wanted to fuck(mostly crossdressers), so I'm definitely not straight. Still like women, and got a kink for some breeding stuff. The nice thing is though, I haven't fucking cared about "is that gay?" in years. Liberating honestly. Like what you like.
>>56429
>>56404
>>56402
>>56397
https://pst.moe/paste/rszbok
Fixed a few more things I only noticed after posting, and made some format changes. I think the if statements should be easier to follow now. I removed {} from the document entirely. I also condensed some statements that didn't have any nested arguments.
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If anyone expands on Marble's children, I'd love to keep the running theme of her bad parenting. 
When you play with one of them, Marble chiming in to say "You want to play with [random name from children's name list]?" and the player thinking "You're not so sure that was her name."
Could have an arc to it, even, with one of your kids asking you what their name is, and then actually save that answer you give.
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>>56443
>Helspawn-spawn-spawn
>restoring the salamander species by impregnating your daughter's daughters 
Fine taste friend.
I won't allow Alex near my daughter unless he gets rid of that useless cock and gets a nice pussy and huge tits.
>You probably need to make him a camp follower before trasforming him
Not at all, Kelly remains at the farm.
I assume Chastespawn will remain friends with him and encourage him to become a cute spider-girl.
There is no other way can get near my daughter.
We can add "Alex's home" to Places, in the Swamp.
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Is there a way to change my scale color on a specific body parts while maintaining the rest of the skin?
trying to have white skin with black dragon claws
So where can i find Alices, again? Or at least the lollipop. Figured I'd give loli Ember a try
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>>56465
Telly sellls lolipops. You can run into her same as Lumi,or Giacomo(?iforget his name). Alices for me have shown up in the deepwoods most often.
>>56456
Not that I mind it that much, but I won't be adding support for female Alex into my scene. I just don't want to go through the effort. Someone else will have to add that(in addition to the actual transformation writing.
>Kelly remains at the farm
This is also a corrupt focused transformation where you force it on them unlike Arians. Sure you could probably force Alex to change, but that is a whole other dynamic to work with, and would probably be more akin to how you have to repeatedly force Kelly, or Amily to transform them, which is probably more effort to write than just being nice to him, and having HS encourage him to transform at your request.
Now all that said if you don't want him near your daughter with a penis... There are chastity cages as an option. I also think that plays even better into the cucking fetish. It would also be slightly less effort to write support for than changing his gender.
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>>56465
Telly's shop
>>56467
>You can run into her same as Lumi,or Giacomo
Not the easiest way to find her, but you're right, that's definitely the easiest way to get lolipops. 
I forget you can just buy some items really easily instead of hunting down children to murder them for their candy.
>>56456
Some searching brought up solopipb, and I found their comics. Which one do I start with for this? Does it start with him as an adult? Or is there one before that?
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>>56450
>/This feels a bit clunky, at least to me
>//removed it.
>/>[a log]
>/Missing comma
>//Thank you.
You messed up and put your post inside the scene link instead of the posting it directly
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>>56476
Eh. I just pasted the proofreading in to my doc for easy access to everything to address. I wrote my comments after // to address the ones I didn't fix, or for other comments I had in response. I didn't think it a big deal to just have them in the paste instead of in the post. If it is really all that pertinent I can do another paste, and post my comments. I just figure it doesn't really matter.
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>>56477
Not really any set rules about it, but I find it best to exchange discourse about proofreading directly in posts, where everyone sees it right away. They can weigh in on disagreements, or catch things the proofreader was actually wrong about, and so on. Not as many will bother checking the link without further prompting to.
Third draft. https://pst.moe/paste/jzqjjp
>>Touching himself?
>What?
The line is the player musing that he has been masturbating. Before saying he shouldn't need to do that as long as the player is intent 
on fucking him. If you got a better way of writing "Clearly I am not doing my job as his
dom well enough if he needs to touch himself" than I'll add it.
>>but first preparations must be made
>This feels a bit clunky, at least to me
>removed it.
>>[a log]
>Missing comma
Thank you. The bot I used isn't very friendly to the psuedo code, so I skipped it's recommendations on most of the parsers it intended on butchering.
>>dick twitching, he must be pretty close by now.
>Seems a bit odd that he's almost done already, but hey, one in ten guys, I suppose. Needs a period or dash after twitching.
Well he was jacking it while performing cunnilingus, and getting tail-pegged during collaborative fellatio. I didn't include it, but another
kink of mine is subs having hands-free orgasms while performing oral.
>>Mercifully, you enjoy
>Not entirely sure how mercy factors in here.
It's to say you let him catch the breath you forced from his lungs, and let him adjust. 
As opposed to mercilessly fucking him silly straight away. Removed it anyways.
>>boi
>kys
It's the only one, and its silly mode. Fuck you I'm keeping it. If you want it gone badly enough write the fourth draft without it yourself, and 
I won't contest it.(Or just don't use silly mode. Honestly some of the shit in
Kiha's combat is enough for me to turn it off alone. Somebody should clean that up. Or i'm just being a stick in the mud about 
something with silly in its name...)
>>wasting his seed
>There's no mention before this of him leaking, unless I missed it; feels like it ought to be in or after the next sentence (which is missing a space at the start)
I'm not sure what you mean. Can you give me an example? (fixed missing space)
>>still flavored
>I like what you're going for, but it's really clunky.
"still flavored" replaced with "tasting". idk how to write.


>>56397
>>56402
>>56404
>>56429

>>56476
>>56477
There. Comments in post instead of paste. Guess it matters.
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>>You now deem that he has had his needs met.
>I am sexbot. You have orgasmed.
lmao. Ok fine writing *can* be fun. You would have loved some of the silly garbage quillbot suggested. Anyways because I'm not writing Fisto into CoC I'll change this.
I was going for referencing an earlier line "Touching himself? Clearly his needs are not being met." which I was maybe being a bit too humerous with the tone.
>>she's pleading with her [father]
>I thought I was her father?
You know I might be a little too into this dynamic with how often I'm addressing the characters by their relation to one another. 
Changed "her [father]" to "you". Sorry no support here for foster parents(cucks) of helspawn.
>>fuck her harder as your only response.
>Here we have a big slip-up: for mono-cocked players, there's nothing to respond to.
You respond to her unfinished pleading. If there is a more clear way for me to indicate this in the writing let me know. I am big dumb.
>>do you thrust firmly into her spasming pussy
>Is there supposed to be an option here?
As in "Only now, do you thrust". It is meant to convey you strike the final blow before you give in yourself now that you have driven each of them to orgasm, and caused HS to plead for your seed. 
There is probably something less 'formal' I could do here.
>The whole orgasm part gave me a bit of a headache trying to figure out what you were trying to do, and overall feels very unfinished. I'd offer to redo it myself, but again, trash schedule somebody kill me
Is it because of the abomination of nested if statements? I've replaced "|" with "♦" in hopes it improves clarity for the else output. The formatting is probably still awful, but I'm trying to be consistent.
If there is something I can do to make it more approachable let me know. As is idk where to fix it. Appreciate the notion despite your schedule.
Honestly even just the proofreading you've done has been a big help since so much of these nuances of english are invisible to me.
>>You descend on her
>Prior to this, I was operating on the assumption that HS was riding you cowgirl. Going back, I realize it's actually fairly ambiguous. 
>Maybe it's just me being in a near-constant state of exhaustion, or it could do with some clarifying.
The scene is meant to be missionary on the ground. Something more like a mating press I think would make double penetration difficult. 
I added a line before the choice prompt mentioning she is on her back, this should be less vague.
>>grabs your ass with two arms
>I feel like there's a great opportunity here for him to be helping you thrust, but that's just my opinion.
Not what I'm going to do with it, but thanks for the idea on where to put in the double dicking section.
>>she loves her [father] fucking her
>Really stiff line right here, I'll get more into it later
I figure this is one of the places more dialogue is needed, so I made an attempt.
>>56479
https://pst.moe/paste/zvawhf

Did some shiity thing for getting rid of Gwynn as my first attempt.
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>>56483
>You waste no time telling her to leave you alone harshly, tears flow out from her eyes as you let her know just how much you wish to be rid of the former hunter.
I don't really feel any connective tissue between these clauses. Without a "harshly, seeing tears flow out" or something, I think it's better making it two sentences instead of using a comma.
Also "leave you alone harshly" sounds wonky, I feel that harshly should go before telling, or comma'd after her
You waste no time telling her, harshly, to leave you alone.
>By now her face is streaming with tears as you finally give her the order to leave for the last time
This sounds like one complete thought, just fine
>for the last time, she quickly dashes off, wiping her eyes as you see the princess for the last time.
Again, it seems like it should have cut off and been two sentences instead of joined together. 
Also "for the last time" as you see her "for the last time". Repetition
>finishing with a firm 'ever'
Minor, but you can avoid characterizing the player as much by just "punctuating the command firmly" or some such that doesn't say precisely how the player put it.

I think the scene could use a little more dialog from Gwynn, but I don't know the character well at all, so maybe she would just be mostly silent about it
>>56372
Can you link where they were originally posted?
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>>56493
Not without looking for it
So
No.
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>>56439
Diavolo
>>56372
>Alice
>not blonde with a blue dress
That's clearly Lorina
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>desert at level 2
>Phylla gets either raped into an onahole by demons or fucks off forever awhile I get raped into an onahole by demons
>nobody has fucking added a minimum level to this fucking encounter yet
At least make it so you have to be level fucking 4 for it to start popping.
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>>56475

424380 is the full compilation.
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>>56508
>he didn't take the farmpill
puffy anus
I wish there was someone dangerously autistic that would rewrite all the corruption content in the game to be not retarded
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>>56516
When setting large goals like this, it is best to begin with small steps. What irks you most friend? I'm a shit writer, but I might give a go at what you think is the worst of the scenes, while I'm waiting for more proofreading on the Alex threesome scene.
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>>56517
I find it hard to narrow down. If I had to itemize it, I'd split it into characters first. There are tons of corrupt scenes which aren't tied to any larger corruption content, but they're all so forgettable because they're garbage that doesn't stick around. 
A complete rewrite of corrupt jojo, corrupt amily, so on should be done, but by someone more experienced as well. 
I don't expect anyone to do it.
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>>56519
>I wish
>I don't expect anyone to do it.
>Can't name a singular scene to even begin the enormous task.
Why bother posting? You say you want something, then when someone offers help, you lack the ability to even begin setting goals. You won't get anything done in life like this except whining about your own impotence to change the uncaring world you inhabit.
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>>56520
>Can't name a singular scene
True enough, but I named two broader examples because changing a singular scene is perhaps even unhelpful as a corruption arc benefits a lot from a following a complete plan.
And if you disagree, the naming of two corruption arcs does give you a distinct, obvious set of single scenes to work from without having to point to them individually. 
>when someone offers help
Someone very new at writing, who wouldn't do a very sharp job at it. For one thing, their biggest weakness is dialog, and dialog is one of the worst offenses of corruption content (player and NPC). 
>wish
>don't expect anything
That's why it's a wish, not a request or plan. I also wish I was immortal
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>>56521
I might be shit at dialogue, sure, but isn't one of the big issues with corruption content player dialogue that needs to be removed? I'll grant that I probably wouldn't improve the npc's dialogue much, but re-writing player dialogue into more broad statements that is better for immersion, is certainly within even my amateurish ability.
Even novice work will still motivate others to take a look. If nobody tries it won't get attention. If someone like me makes something bad, it is a starting point for a more experienced writer to proofread, and make suggestions for improvement, thus increasing the quality of the re-written content. The cycle continues until it meets quality standards, or is abandoned for someone else to adopt later.
If you want to change entire arcs, the best thing you could do is to write a storyboard of sorts. Where you describe the beats of the story, or change them. If you want to actually contribute to solving the issue you take with the content, I suggest you write out a story board, and write up a detailed critique of what makes it bad, followed by suggestions for possible improvement. If you make compelling points it will gather interest. If your points are viewed as benign, or inaccurate, then the problem you have with it is much more unique to you.
Basically, try nothing, nothing happens.
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>>56523
Don't make fine arguments at me in a ploy to send me bitterly becoming some kind of useful voice in the crowd
I resent that
I will vent my negative impulses in casual passing and I will do nothing about it and I won't take part in personal growth and development as a person that makes things better be it for spite or just to improve the things they appreciate personally
How dare you!
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>>56526
You are in a furry thread discussing furry game, whatever opinions you guys might have are automatically garbage.
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Everyone should chip in next thread. 
Somehow, contribute. Write something, give feedback, code something
Everyone does at least one thing to help. Everyone. 
Come on, with 3 people working at the same time, we'll get loads done.
Before this thread goes, I'd like to thank every single even most braindead poster to ever participate in it for universally being more based than sagecuckold could ever aspire to.
And also thanks to sagecuckold himself for making every other user of this board look good in comparison.
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Enough patting yourselves on the back, get back to work
>>56497
Then you're going to have a harder time to get them added, anon.
>>56532
have fun eating shit, or fooling others into eating shit
Is there anything new about Ember ? Anything I should know before hatching her egg ? I have it sitting in my camp now and it leaves me wondering if any anon got around to giving her a look.
Ask in the new thread https://prolikewoah.com/hgg/last/56533.html

Why moot was so retarded and why all of you copy his retardation, closing thread once it reaches 1000 is a better system.

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