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This is the Corruption of Champions mod being developed by the anons of /hgg/.
Corruption of Champions is a text-based flash game overhauled with new dungeons, new mechanics, new characters, and a lot of lolis.
The mod is open to submissions: anons can write scenes, proof them, or contribute to the code.

Downloads
Latest Version (1.6.19) +Changelog in link
https://mega.nz/folder/St0HiaTC#oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA/folder/n8ti1JjQ
Use a standalone flash player (projector), such as ruffles or an archived Adobe projector:
https://mega.nz/folder/St0HiaTC#oNQs48SWTDvmDBLHWZuHHA/folder/zhEn0CLb

Information
>Game Related
Source Code: HXGG: https://gitgud.io/Oxdeception/cocanon-mod-haxe OLD: https://gitgud.io/BelshazzarII/CoCAnon_mod

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Submission & Misc. Archive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1LGK4sPuWH69iEZ9ZmX2fnfDRrhj7h4hQ
Writing Guide: https://rentry.co/CoCWriting
Bounty Board: https://rentry.co/BountyBoard
If you have no skills, read and discuss as a fan or critic.
>>71051 (OP) 
>>71052
It’s an honor to be the thread name
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>>71053
This thread is 4 months ahead of schedule solely because of you, it only makes sense
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I'll reiterate from before. If Conifer is actually around and replies to this, I'll proofread his scenes.
But only if he's here to apply the corrections.
>>71054
1 year is the goal, so lets get rolling
Here's a bunch of lost 2hufag scenes, since the chronicles only have the crows and vampires.
https://mega.nz/folder/T4FnhLZY#yJVpWIpM3o-AsYWM2o2Kvw

I have no idea of the status of any of them. Best to assume they're unproofread at least, but I'm not sure what's ready for proofreading and what's entirely unfinished. Or some might have actually been implemented already.
Would/is it possible to disable gating of choices per corruption? I really dislike how I cannot do something cruel or act like a pervert when horny only because in some other situations I didn't let myself be tempted by a character I don't care for or didn't do some other perverted thing, appealing to kinks I don't have.
I understand if corruption affects how others approach me, but I don't want the game to guess what turns me on or off just because I am not a complete asshole/saint.
>>71059
There's an ascension perk that does that
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>>71051 (OP) 
>threat title
Demon Banana that turns you into a monkey when?
>>71034
 Sending her to subspace?
 Oh like making her a mega-sub?
>Weaponizing Autism
 Sadly the ADD defuses most of that enthusiasm, I can't sit still for very long doing that stuff and have nowhere to save it.
 >Arian
 Yes, true, he's a Mage! He does everything with magic, and he was always kind of frail to begin with due to his sickly nature.
>Heckel
Making a TF wager is corrupt while having her make a sex wager isn't? I can totally see her making this wager to you, because she's so headstrong. She's far too shortsighted to think of the long-time ramifications.
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>>71059
 I feel you.
 There are tons of Corruption-specific scene variants / events that can be reached with high-enough Corruption (or levels of the Ascension perk that lets you ignore Corruption requirements) but I would rather that the highly-corrupted variants not automatically proc for some scenes.
 I don't want to verbally / sexually / physically assault Phylla, I just want to hang out with her while also spending a little...'quality time' with her and her workers... :(
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>>71072
>Subspace
Its a BDSM term. Subspace is a trance-like state a submissive can experience from being dominated that makes thinking difficult, sometimes described as feeling floaty, tingly etc. I'm very much not a sadist, but putting someone in their happy place can motivate me to do things I wouldn't normally take pleasure in. While I don't really take pleasure in manhandling my partners, if it was someone like Izma I can take pleasure from the end result of doing so.
>>71072
>sex wager
That's a standard business transaction in this world, TFs are taken much more seriously in Tel'Adre than sex. If you bend Heckel over and gape her it will go back to normal in like a week, but a TF can be very difficult to undo without further side effects, assuming there is even a TF for what you want that is reasonably attainable.
>>71073
>corruption
The original scene variants for corruption have inherently been trash because of over-personification of the player. If I were to suggest a band-aid it would be to throw corruption requirements out the window for scenes and let the player select how "mean" they want to be about the scene. This way instead of needing to be corrupt to be an asshole you can become corrupt by being an asshole, since apparently that's what mainly changes with the champs increasing corruption anyways. What is the relation between corruption and empathy supposed to be anyways? As I understand corruption it is the erosion of inhibition, and that would adversely affect consideration but that isn't the same as empathy.
It's not unlike an alignment in ways, and alignments don't determine how someone acts, how someone acts determines their alignment.
So I just figured out that tablets need the armv7 version to install or update...good to know for the future.
>>71059
>>71073
Yeah, that's a mess sometimes.
I'd rather see those corruption requirements/automatic triggering fixed up at this point even more so than see more content using it.
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>>71074
>If I were to suggest a band-aid it would be to throw corruption requirements out the window for scenes and let the player select how "mean" they want to be about the scene
NTA but sounds good to me. I don't really need more than that.
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>>71076
Completely missed the opportunity to have TFs have a darker/alternative path depending on the PC's corruption level.

DH Flower: 
White Dragon - Pure (0%) [FB does more damage to 'corrupt' targets]
Dragon (Random Color) - Tainted (1-49%)
Dark Dragon - Corrupted (50% & Up) [FB also does a decent amount of lust damage]

M Cheese:
Mouse - Pure/Tainted [Increased Speed and Evasiveness]
Rat - Corrupted [Increased Toughness and Crit %]

God Mead:
Jupiter(Zeus)-like - Pure/Tainted [Basic attacks will also strike an enemy at random with lightning for ¼th of your current Strength. Reduces own Tease resistance by half on 'god' score of 20 and up.]
Pluto(Hades)-esque - Corrupted [Basic attacks reduce enemy's Toughness by ⅙th of your current Strength. Increase the amount of Gems taken from you when losing a battle on 'god' score of 20 and up.]

Had to erase the other one. Made a mistake in one of the entries.
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There is something relieving about doing brainless tedium on rare occasion. I get to feel like I'm helping without doing anything impressive.
Merged 167 small tweaks, plus rearranged some buttons and stuff.
Please do report typos and other little oversights.
I should do more writing instead though
>>71072
>I don't want to verbally / sexually / physically assault Phylla
Don't worry, I'll fix it when I get to it. All the abuse will be by choice.
>>71074
Corruption reduces inhibition at low values and eliminates your conscience at high values. You may still enjoy seeing people happy, you may want the best for people close to you, but if you do like hurting them then it won't bother you nearly as much as it should.
With demonhood being the entire lack of a conscience. It's not strict evilness, kindness can be practical and enjoyable, but there's no voice in their head saying "this is wrong" at any point.
And so the player should be like that too. With high corruption, you have the option to do whatever you want, even terrible things, either because you think it'll get you something good later or because you don't think it'll have a consequence that matters.
It shouldn't be forced outside small details like kneejerk reactions or being caught up in the moment in a way that is predictable.
A corrupt player should only abuse someone because the person playing would like to, or it's highly predictable like someone being an unrelenting bastard to the player and then the player beats them. High corruption making the player smack them around aggressively before they calm back down and can choose how to conclude it makes sense.
But 99% of writing for corruption is made by retarded cartoon furries who think corruption is sauntering in an exaggerated swagger and quoting gangsters from bad movies.
>throw out requirements
I disagree. Do add choices, but it's okay for some acts of cruelty to need you to have less of a conscience first. Just don't force the player to do it.
Some stuff can have alternative criteria. Enough corruption or, alternatively, a high libido, very high lust.
This is my take on the whole thing, personally. I wouldn't say I'm the authority though.
>>71079
>Corrupted transformation variants
I did make it that you get dark variants of the dryad TF if you are awake at 3AM at camp instead of sleeping.
The concept itself is fine
>Dark dragon
You just reinvent Hellfire but as an AOE.
>M Cheese
Not a thing, it is mouse cocoa (for whatever reason)
>Pure mouse
>Corrupt rat
I do like it in some ways, conceptually.
>God mead
Did you know that's not a transformative? There is not god form, it's a healing item.
>score of 20 and up
I don't think there's any race score in the game that gets higher than 10. The highest the game ever checks for is 9. There is no score of any kind tied to mead.

The idea itself can be used pretty well, there is potential there.
>>71076
>>71080
Give me a break on the mouse transformation item. Haven't played in a long time, but the suggestions still stands. (I do agree on that bit about Fenoxo's item naming habits. I don't get mouse cocoa either.)

You do know that God Mead gives you a Zeus like beard if you drink too much, right? It COULD have been a transformation, but for some reason not a lot of thought was put in to the effects of the item. We already have a healing item, so why make another and make it sound like something that could do more than just heal you and give you the Greek whiskers of might?

Absolute waste...I could heal better with a pill, potion or spell any day.
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>>71080
That and I forgot the score limit. I usually end up with some form of mutant score mid-gameplay anyway.
>>71081
>You do know that God Mead gives you a Zeus like beard if you drink too much, right?
Odin like. It gives you a manly viking beard not an effeminate greek beard.
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>>71083
...effeminate? Zeus? Their isn't an anime femboy version of Zeus going around is there?

I'm asking for a friend...and science...a science friend of science.
>>71081
>You do know that God Mead gives you a Zeus like beard if you drink too much, right?
Very rarely, and how do you track a score of body parts for god as a race? Definitely not 20 parts to come up with. The most I could think of is a beard and being giant. That's a score of 2, not enough to be a thing. If it could have been a transformation, do tell me what else it would do
>Not a lot of thought went into the effects
It's a super healer item. The heal pill does almost nothing with a potential downside of libido and lust, milk is mostly fatigue, spring water is mostly lust. There's vitality tincture which does more stats on top of healing, but god mead still heals more raw HP. Off the top of my head, there is nothing that can stand in for it right now.
Healing options with magic cost fatigue. Black magic can fail and backfire, divine wind hits everyone, kitsune fire is a very weak heal, and leech is primarily for spellblade builds. And, again, all the spells cost something to cast. A consumable has benefits.
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>>71085
Hrmm...well, can we at least agree that 'mouse cocoa' needs to be changed to 'mouse jack' (like Monterey jack or pepper jack). Makes a hell of a lot more sense than a chocolate powder being related to a rodent and the name itself doesn't sound all that much... sanitary.
>>71074
>Subspace
 Oh, I see. Well, that seems like something Izma (and possibly one or more of the other very submissive) lovers would enjoy, especially if they were one of the ones that would take well to being Lolified.
>TFs
 Mm, I suppose. After all, most of the NPCs who were affected by TFs were either forced to do so after being defeated by others or unwittingly did it to themselves by unknowingly consuming enchanted food. There are few characters who intentionally use TFs to change their bodies.
 But I still think Heckel is brave / confident / stupid enough to demand a wager with such high gravitas as this. If it was her idea after she saw the Champion with Lolipops (and she knew what they did), and she held the Champion to the same rules if they lost, then it would be a fair challenge.
 Heckel seems like the kind of woman to walk around outside flexing on people wherever she can just to make herself feel better than them, and Gnolls are native to the Plains, so it's reasonable that Heckel would be familiar with the Bizarre Bazaar (and Telly's stand).
>Corruption
 I agree with decoupling Corruption from requirements for personality-based scenes, but I do like how Satan said it in >>71080.
 Don't force people to act one way, let them make a choice. Maybe put a sentence just before a choice to say that your character has a growing urge to choose one particular prompt if you really want Corruption to play a part in the decision-making process.
>>71079
 Intriguing TF ideas, but...
>Corrupt Rat
 I think I can hear Rathazul grumbling in the corner. 
(I'm aware that Corrupted / Infested Rats are an enemy type in this mod, but I play with Filth (and guro) off because it seriously freaks me out, so I don't encounter them. Same with addictions and parasitic infestations. Can't stomach them.)
>>71080
>Won't have to domestically abuse Phylla
Oh, thank Marae. I like playing a good character, and domestic abuse is definitely NOT good in the slightest. I want to make people happy, not crush their spirits and break their hearts.
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>>71087
>I like playing a good character,
Then stop being corrupt, dingus
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On my previously-mentioned topic of Feral scenes (especially those that could be procced at high Rut/Heat with a feral member of the same species as your Race), I thought it would be amusing if you ended up undergoing one that echoed one of the Bad Ends that you get by using too many TFs, except, this time, it's someone else who's consumed too many TFs and Feralized themself into a horny animal.
 If Debug and Silly were on, and you had experienced at least one TF-related Bad End, your character could even think to themself about how this feels very familiar, and how they have a small thought at the back of their mind that this animal feels like it might have not always been what it was now.
 I think there were Feralization / same-species mating Bad Ends for Horses, Foxes, and Cats? Were there others?
 
 Also, another thought, one thing Xianxia did that I enjoyed was actually adding the support for insectoid races to have multiple arms.
They basically had a complete overhaul of the TF system (where you could brew potions to TF specific targeted parts of your body with varying levels of efficiency depending on the level of the potion), and one of the TFs for insectoid races (Antmorph, Beemorph, Spidermorph, Mothmorph, Butterflymorph) was to have their arms split into four, allowing them to wield two sets of light weapons or hold larger, heavier weapons more steadily.
 They also ported over Frosty from TiTS as a possible TF race, and the Frostwyrm race was also graced with multiple arms.
>>71088
 Well, currently, high Corruption (or a high score in the perk that makes Corruption not needed for those scenes) is the only way to access certain Incest scenes.
The downside is that both of those immediately proc the hostile, abusive, violent variants of other scenes.
 Currently my character is at 0 Corruption with 100% Corruption requirements removed for scenes, but I still end up with the abusive variants due to that bc the game assumes I'm 100% Corrupt.
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>>71090
I think what you really want is non-corrupt incest options, not better corruption.
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>>71091
Incest probably should be a corrupt act (though the game currently isn't consistent on this at all).
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>>71092
That should probably be contextual. I don't think Minerva is corrupt for getting sexually assaulted by her daughter. On the other hand, Isabella's kids... that is pretty fucked.
I would probably say grooming is corrupt but if Tamani's daughters are taking their turn to rob the sperm bank what's a stud to do?
>>71087
Ain't gotta be a plague rat or any kind of 'filthy' rat. Just like how you have the ability to turn off full furries, the rat transformation shouldn't be relegated to nasty fetishes and should have a TF of it's own to use at the player's discretion. Not all rats carry diseases in this game as Rathazul can prove.
Actively pretending the Earlking's hounds are his shota sons
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Speaking of typos, there's a isabella scene that happens automatically that's not using the accent coaching, dont remember what happens in it. It'll probably pop up when i'm coding the new isabella stuff
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>>71077
This. 
Fuck gating of scenes, just let me choose and be on my merry way. Game will open up and be much more fun this way.
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>>71091
Fixed up corruption would solve this issue though, as well as many others.
>>71099
>Horrible and corrupt acts should be able to be committed by everyone!
>Completely nullify a core mechanic
>Take the corruption out of corruption of champions
Go play CoC II, its more your speed apparently
>>71101
>Take the corruption out of corruption of champions
Who is saying it's being thrown out? The suggestion was to let you be corrupt faster, the scenes would still gain corruption but you could gain that corruption sooner than it would normally take to meet the requirement. Corruption isn't a requirement for being an awful person, it just makes it easier to be your worst self. Why would I need a high level of corruption to butt fuck a goblin? What If I'm playing a champ that is just a rotten apple from the start and that lets the corruption of the land seep into them that much faster since the initial inhibitions were already degraded? Our character comes from outside of Maraeth, and afaik corruption is a specific thing to Maraeth. So are we implying rape only happens in Maraeth but not in Ignam since nobody there has high corruption?
>>71083
Odin is very girly. They do magic like some sort of sissy.
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>>71101
You misunderstood. I want corruption to stay, but I want it to not try to guess player taste and behavior or force it. I am absolutely fine with it being a consequence of one's action though and affecting how the rest of the world will approach the player character.
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>>71103
It's not even being corrupted faster or having to be the worst self - but leaving how "bad" they want to be to the player. If one's merely horny and hedonistic, they don't have to be a cruel asshole, nor is someone a cold-blooded prude because of not letting themselves be raped by random creatures they don't like.

The corruption requirement for actions is bullshit because it does make predictions and tries to categorize player as moral/immoral, which is dumb when corruption or lack of it stems from whole variety of situations and actions lending themselves to it may stem from different codes of ethics.
So when is corruption going to be properly defined?
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>>71105
Odin can get women without having to transform into animals or golden showers to trick them into it. Plus by some accounts Odin has a daughterwife, unlike Zeus who only married his sisters, aunts, and cousins, so Odin is the clear winner.
So there's apparently expanded revamp of original CoC at
https://github.com/Kitteh6660/Corruption-of-Champions-Mod/releases
Has anyone heard of it? How good it is compared to vanilla? Could its content be integrated with this version?
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>>71114
Play this mod instead of asking stupid questions
>>71114
No one gives a shit about that version
Hell the reason HGG Edition even exists in the first place was to correct the titanic mistakes that thing created
>71114
Bad bait. No you for YOU.
>>69713
NTA, but I'd imagine mixing PureHoney could "cut" the Brobrew into something more manageable.
>>69774
Would love if we could lead/kite the flaming chicken into the frozen tundra, to literally cool her off. Maybe trap her there even until an event where you found her shivering/dying in the blizzard.
>>69951
Is there any template, or maybe easy to read through encounter one could read through to "copy" stuff from?
>>70138
Half the time, I don't encounter that guy until halfway through the game.
>>70589
Look under B for "Bald Foxes"
>>70596
As far as funny references go, I'd be down for a many-ears race that's a wholesale reference to a particular popular manga with lots of MG's in it. For the sole reason that they're cute
>>70633
Feel like it would be more fun if it also scaled with how much time passed in the realm while you "remain" pure, but coding that in a way that feels reasonable would probably be a nightmare
>>70652
>>70662
Building up on your idea(s), if there was a questline where after fixing the tower, you could fund and schedule public "training" facility and some of the guards and mages as overwatch periodically, and then could ask some of your followers (or non-follower npc's) as guest instructors, in a "collect them all" fashion.
>>70711
>I Must Go, My People Need Me
>>70766
>>70770
lmao
>>70815
Who's the sister's master again? Was it that Devil that points us to the lake at the beginning?
>>71101
>>71103
Heroism meter when? It would fit well with the purity sword above, and could lock you into stupid choices just like Corruption does.
>>71096
This reminds me that broken Erlking scenes suck. They deserve a rewrite.
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Beastmaster Alice with a pomeranian attack dog (it's the only one she could get)
When you beat her, walk right past the alice and fuck the dog instead
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>>71133
Pomeranians are one of the least fuckable dogs though
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>>71103
>The suggestion was to let you be corrupt faster
<Fuck gating of scenes, just let me choose and be on my merry way
As you can see, that is not, at all what was suggested. If you really think the initial comment in any way reflected what is being said now, you should be ashamed.
>Why would I need a high level of corruption to butt fuck a goblin?
It's that you need to be corrupt to butt fuck a goblin, you need to be corrupt for HOW the butt fucking occurs. 
Silly mode answer: Not breeding gobbos is inherently corrupt you heretic
>What If I'm playing a champ that is just a rotten apple from the start and that lets the corruption of the land seep into them that much faster since the initial inhibitions were already degraded?
Is the Corrupted trait still I thing? Let's you gain corruption x% faster? If its not, then that's apparently all you want. And if it is, then you already have what you're asking for.
>Our character comes from outside of Maraeth, and afaik corruption is a specific thing to Maraeth. So are we implying rape only happens in Maraeth but not in Ignam since nobody there has high corruption?
Well the elders made a deal with the demons, so clearly Ignam HAS corruption so your point is moot. Unless there's some mental gymnastics about how the elders could SOMEHOW barter with demons in a plane of existence where what makes them demons, doesn't exist.
>>71106
>You misunderstood
Well that tends to happen when what you say and what you apparently mean are entirely different things.
>I want it to not try to guess player taste and behavior or force it.
I can only guess that this comes back to a lack of consistency between writers, original or otherwise, and what a corrupt champion should behave like, and what makes them corrupt to begin with.
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>>71108
The short version is basically not being an empath.
Refusal to care for your partner (eg. using them as a living onahole), or worse, delighting in your partner's misery, is what makes you corrupt.
Having lots of lovey-dovey, hand-holding, full-eye-contact sex won't make you corrupt.
Except for all the times it doesn't work like this.
>>71135
>Well the elders made a deal with the demons, so clearly Ignam HAS corruption so your point is moot. Unless there's some mental gymnastics about how the elders could SOMEHOW barter with demons in a plane of existence where what makes them demons, doesn't exist. 
They made a deal with the demons in Mareth, through the portal. There's no Corruption or demons in Ingnam.
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>>71134
It's a demon pomeranian
>>71138
And in the super corruption ending you go back to Ignam, so if Ignam is in plane of existence without corruption, how does that work? Also the elders somehow made a deal with demons and came back without ANY corruption? X to doubt.
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>>71142
They didn't "come back" the elders never left. The portals are one-way only until the far future when Syrene figures out a way to reverse it
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Pretty sure this thread has put more thought into the plot than Fen originally did, basically none of it actually makes much sense when you consider how the portal and such works.
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>>71144
Then... how did they make the deal? The portal can't be one way, at least not until after the elders make the deal, like otherwise its physically impossible. Either the elders are stuck in Mareth with no way to enforce the deal, or the demons are stuck in Ignam with no way to enforce the deal.
And if the demons go to Ignam, my point from earlier still stands.
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>>71145
Pretty sure this one post put more thought than Fen did tbh
>>71146
Are you implying the demons promised something they could never ever give?
Would a demon do that?
Would a demon lie?
I can't believe the elders were sending people through the portal for nothing, never to be given the promised power
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>>71149
...Except... except we KNOW the demons did hold up their end of the bargain. Hell, the problem isn't that the demons maybe lied, the problem is that the demons somehow existed in a universe where, as anon claims, corruption doesn't exist. And then stayed there. Without corrupting anyone. Or being noticed in general?
If you really think the answer to what I said is "lmao demons lie bruh" you aren't old enough to play this game.
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>>71150
The demons never gave them anything, and they were never in Ingnam. They could only speak through the portal while unable to pass through it
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>>71151
>They could only speak through the portal while unable to pass though it
This is bad bait and you should feel bad
>(you)
right back at you, bud
The only explanation I can think of is something like
>when the portal opens the first time, the demons threaten to do something bad if they're not given a sacrifice
>Ingnam ignores this because why wouldn't they
>coincidentally there's a famine or plague or something and everyone blames the demons
>the next year they toss some guy in and there's no famine, so it clearly it must work, guess we better keep doing it
But even that assumes you can see and talk though the portal, while I don't think that is ever confirmed in game.
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>>71154
Which is exactly my point. The portal can only be one-way from Ignam's side, otherwise the entire thing lacks any semblance of logic
I miss Chronicler.
>>71132
As a follow up to this, what's actually the general opinion about proposing rewrites of existing scenes? Some of them are distinctly lacking in my mind
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>>71157
When they're from revamp, you'll generally get easy support because their bar of quality is so low.
From vanilla, it's not very egregious, but some guidelines
>If nothing is removed, you're just adding, you're fight
>If things are changed, you must do better than the original and, generally, maintain the same premise of the scene. 
>Summarize what is explicitly wrong with the original
Sometimes it will be overly apparent that the original has major issues to fix, like when the player runs at Lottie and says BIG OL BEAR HUG
But you should list the significant gripes you're addressing
<Removing player-quoting
<Adding istaur support
<Fixing over-characterizing of the player
Etc.
If you can't articulate in words what's wrong with the original, you probably shouldn't touch it and instead focus on making something new.
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>>71158
>you're just adding, you're alright
oops
>>71158
That makes sense and more or less what I'd consider to be the criteria. For me it's mostly the aforementioned Princess scenes which have annoyed me for quite a while.
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Fetish Cultist Rewrite + Genderless Support [Finished]
https://pst.moe/paste/lyyegp
More and more I find adding support for niches to be a fun challenge rather than a chore.
Full disclosure, the proofreader is me, I don't expect anyone else is going to do it.
>>71160
Ideally you have written something original for the mod before trying to change something old, but there is stuff below the standard of quality
>>71162
Yeah I've done a lot of thinking and not a lot of doing
Am I the only one that associates "cunny" with loli? Surely everyone does.
So when I see the game describes the bee girl's vagina as 
Her cunny looks sort of like a human pussy, but is ringed with small bits of exoskeleton to grip down tightly. However, the most notable part is how it seems to be an almost literal honey pot.
Is this a joke? It's not silly mode, but the cunny is a honeypot
>>71164
I've only ever heard it used either with lolis or by britoids and their neighbours.
>>71164
It's just British slang for a vagina. Then it got co-opted on the internet.
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>>71166
This game is written in American English explicitly, so that cunny is a honey pot joke whether the writer meant it or not.
>>71164
>Am I the only one that associates "cunny" with loli? Surely everyone does. 
That's true today, but not so much back when CoC was being written over a decade ago. It became a pedo thing and then a loli thing more recently than that.
>>Hellhound Marking Scene: https://pastebin.com/raw/aih8UQce 
Immediate thing I notice is inconsistent pronouns. The hellhound is both "he" and "it"
I think this is technically wrong to do (but I bet the in-game scenes are inconsistent too)
>The hellhound lies at your feet
[feet]
>The dog pays you little note as you disrobe, removing the bottom half of your [armor] to reveal your [cock]
Needs [if (isnakedlower)] check and probably [cocks]
>reveal your [cock], its girthy length swinging free between your thighs
there's a [cockeir] for their/its and also your dick could be very thin. It may not be long enough to swing.
>raising a foot
should probably have a [if (singleleg)] check and [foot] for hooves
>Taking your [cock] in your hand, you point the head of your cock
You're already referring to the cock, no need to say "of your cock"
>Your territory thusly "marked,"
I do like that detail.
>you redress
Need naked check and it's re-dress. 

Come back Conifer, fix your stuff
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>>71162
>Full disclosure, the proofreader is me, I don't expect anyone else is going to do it.
I can tell without reading it's an improvement over TDM's lesbian scenes.
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>>71171
A bar so low that it's underground
>>71154
I think the simplest explanation would be that demons did figure out how to breach the portals in smaller ways prior to Syrene's big breakthrough at the end. Not enough for a demon to escape, but just enough to communicate, send over small items like vitality potions, and maybe even sling spells to make good on the threats.
So I do still think Suwako (the Frog-Girl who the Champion can have children / tadpoles with, then have sex with the children / tadpoles) should have an option to eventually relocate to the Camp's river / pond and be accessible through the Lovers menu, instead of constantly trying to proc an encounter through exploring or rifling through all of the scenes in the Frog Girl subfolder of the Debug menu.
 (Suwako shares a scene folder with the regular Frog Girl encounter where said Frog Girl tries to hypnotize you and you have the option to submit, willingly carry her eggs, or fight back, so it's a cluttered mess in there.)
 Since Suwako can't speak in a way the Champion understands unless the Champion is high on her toxins, maybe there could be a prompt in her interaction menu where the Champion could intoxicatedly suggest to her that she could move to their camp with their children.
 Suwako and the kids would move to a pond splitting off of the same lake that Izma and her kids are staying at back at the Camp.
 Maybe Izma and Suwako could have some joint scenes down the line, and some interaction with Kid A would also be entertaining.
 Of course, there might have to be a (potentially amusing) scene where the Champion introduces Suwako to the other Lovers / Followers, and has to explain why a random mute Frog Girl and a bunch of her children have taken up residence next to their main water supply.
 Does anyone know who wrote the Suwako scenes? As far as I know, the sex scenes with her children, if not the entire character herself, are exclusive to this mod.
>>71178
>mute
I thought both frog girls spoke.
>Who wrote it
There's a search bar in the Credits. Try "frog"
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Makes sense now.
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So much old content is bizarrely stiff and weird.
She begins gently rubbing her hand up and down your [cocks] while looking at you in uncertainty. [say: Where do you want thizzz? I'm actually not zzzure what would be the mozzzt enjoyable for you...] she asks. You smile and indicate her honeypot, and say that you want to put your [cock] in there. She looks at you confused for a few moments before saying, [say: Really? That doezzzn't zzzound right, but ok.] She picks herself up with her wings and slowly lowers her honey pot onto your waiting shaft. In short order, you're fully engulfed by her.
You smile and indicate her honey pot and say that you want to put your cock in there.
It's so off to me.
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>>71180
 Huh, not very knowledgeable about Toho at all, so I don't recognize that character. Seems that's who the Frogmorph Lover is at least nicknamed after, apparently.
 But the description of her doesn't match that character, since the descripion of CoC-Suwako is that she's basically 100% anthropomorphic frog, but with a full head of hair, and that she's nude.

 Building off of my previous suggestions in >>71178 you could honestly make her a Loli toggle since she's not really a very important character and there's already Loli scenes with her children (going all the way to a very brief fingering scene with her tadpoles, which are basically the Frogmorph equivalent of Isabella's babies in this regard).

>>71179
 Suwako only croaks.
  Unless you ingest her intoxicating bodily fluids or those of her children (she plays into the stereotypical image of licking toads, so prolonged contact with her skin, saliva, or sexual fluids will get you high), which will allow you to understand what she and her daughters are saying, but only as long as you're still tripping out.
 They'll go back to being mute after you sober up. There's actually a scene where you go down on all of your many Loli Frogmorph daughters, becoming more intoxicated with each one, and at the very end, before you pass out from exhaustion, you can, to your surprise, hear them talking to each other in a way you can understand, then say they love you. By the time you wake up, you've sobered up and you're back to hearing just croaks from them.
 Worth noting it's a two-way street. Suwako and her daughters can't understand the Champ either, due to a language barrier. Suwako never learned to speak the Common tongue.
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Missed the u on tohou. Meh.
>>71182
2hufag is a huge lolicon, loves loli, total loli loving weeaboo.
I think if he made the frog-girl not a loli, the frog is best left as a not a loli. Especially since you already do get loli frog girls by impregnating her.
Can you think of any reason to make her a loli?
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Found out why the bee girl stuff is full of so much garbage
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I've been going through this thread and noticed talk about healing items. I've noticed the reverse is happening whenever I use healing pills versus God's Mead. Healing pills heal me fully while sometimes increasing my libido or sensitivity while God's Mead give me a buff but only healed me about 40 hit points. Not seeing how anyone saw the significance and God's Mead besides the small stat increase.
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>>71180
Ah, I remember her. Hardest boss battle in a Touhou based fighting game I've ever fought.

SHE SWIMS IN STONE LIKE SCROUNGE MCDUCK FOR HER BASIC SPECIAL!
>>71184
Gotta agree.
>>71184
Can you think of any reason to not make her a loli?
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>>71191
>Already implemented and written not-a-loli
>The character is canonically sexually matured and gets pregnant
>The character serves as a contrast with the lolis of her kind that you make
>The original writer had the option and inclination of loli and chose not
>The effort is better spent making new lolis instead
I'll admit, you've been significantly more retarded than this, as half the characters you wanted as loli were actively detrimental or counter to their characters, while this would be pretty inoffensive.
But you gotta have more than "why not" because there is ALWAYS at least the reason "because it is effort" as one reason why not. You need something to go on.
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>>71192
i am not even the same anon i just showed up
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>>71193
and let that be a lesson to ya
>>71085
The hell do you mean 'super healer item'? I used that shit in and out of battle today and it only gave me about a 3rd of my health back and gave me 1 point of Strength and Toughness. The pill healed me to full. Hell, reptillium did more than god's mead did healing wise. What's up with that?
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>>71181
Oh the entire passage is off really.
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>>71186
I'm starting to think that TDM is to CoC what TObs is to COC2 lmao
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>>71197
TDM? TObs? What are those?
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>>71198
faggots
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>>71199
Right, now explain what they are WITHOUT the obvious bias. Just wanna know what they are, not why you hate them.
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>>71198
>>71200
TDM, The Dark Master, has apparently written absolute garbage, see the bee text from a few posts up.
TObs, The Observer, is a 'writer' for CoC 2, and all his scenes are word salad garbage. I mean just paragraphs upon paragraphs for no reason than to have a lot of paragraphs. Like, the erotica version of trying to hit a word-count in college. Also the phrase 'kistune slut-wife' is repeated about, 1000 times too many.
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>>71201
>Also the phrase 'kistune slut-wife' is repeated about, 1000 times too many.
I'm pretty sure "womanly flower" is in every one of his sex scenes. Barely even an exaggeration, searching for and finally spotting that phrase is my favorite part of reading his scenes.
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>>71202
Oh it wouldn't surprise me. tobs can write like apes can sing, yeah TECHNICALLY it is what its called, but it doesn't make you wanna shoot yourself any less for experiencing it
>>71196
I'm well-aware, but the one line stands out as stereotypical of that brand of bad? It's all bad though.
You rub your abdomen, feeling her ovipositor deep inside you. You smile, it's time to pick up the pace and lift up your body, then drop it back down, impaling yourself on the intruder. You love every second of it
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I'm not writing enough lately.
Here's the current state of the optional demon boss in the red widow nests, the wasp
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Suggest additional attacks, maybe.
I also wrote killing her in the way that would most profoundly traumatize her as she dies.
I was thinking of having her chitin be used to make slightly different variants of the same armor depending on who you take it to, but I don't really have anything mind for the differences or who exactly. Sure, there's Yvonne and the gay Chile smiths, but is chitin the material for them? Yvonna does make the dragon eggshell shield, so maybe.
What differences would the be though?
>Mermaid
If anyone has suggestions for what to do with the lakebed, I ought to put an item in there that lets the player explore dry environments freely, and probably something related to wherever those ruby cores come from that let slime players retain fluids better, but I don't know, nothing really in mind.
>Bee-girl discussion
After how much time I spent reading the cult, and how horrible it was, and rewriting things, I'll say if anyone wants to rewrite the bee-girl to clean up that writer's other mess, I won't argue.
Bee a hero.
>>71195
No way, the item that randomly drops in the forest and can be bought early on from Rathazul is better at healing than the mead you find in the phoenix tower and randomly in shops?
I could have sworn is wasn't a full heal even in the early game.
Guess I misremembered. Should probably buff it.
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>>71187
>>71195
The main healing items all have different scaling, so they're all best at different times.
Heal pill heals 50+toughness. With the large flat portion and with toughness probably getting to max pretty quickly, plus the easy accessibility, that makes the pill easily the best healing item for probably the first third to half of the game.
Spring water is randomly between 20+5*level and 20+10*level, so it starts matching the heal pill past level 15 or so (earlier if you have low toughness for some reason), but the main benefit is that it heals lust too. So it ends up being the better choice around midgame-ish.
God's mead heals 33% of max health, so towards the end of the game (level 20+, maybe tank perks) it will heal a lot more than other healing items for most characters. Some builds might never have that much HP though, especially for children and elders.
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I'm planning to take a stab at things tmr, so if anything needs corrections before getting coded, the time is now
>>71164
This whole thing is really weird to me. Cunny was just an archaic word for vagina that'd be mainly used in fantasy/historic fiction or by people trying to be humorous but in the last year or so I keep seeing unironic paedos say it and making a big deal out of it whenever they see it. It seems like a really cringe forced meme.
>>71178
> Suwako and the kids would move to a pond splitting off of the same lake that Izma and her kids are staying at back at the Camp.
And risk all of them getting eaten by Izma and her kids?
You know they eat minotaurs right?
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>>71211
Yeah but we are friends
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>>71212
I'm just imagining the champ politely requesting that their shark daughter refrain from eating her half-sister.
>Pans to a disconcerted frog loli
>Nervous ribbit
>Shark licks lips
I could see Izma playing doting auntie on them and pinching their puffy cheeks and accidentally saying their cute enough to gobble up before anxiously backpedaling and awkwardly clarifying she wasn't being literal.
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>>71182
>But the description of her doesn't match that character, since the descripion of CoC-Suwako is that she's basically 100% anthropomorphic frog, but with a full head of hair, and that she's nude.
There are some fanart of her that shows her as a generic looking frog monster girl from time to time
>>71184
 Weird about that. Well, beyond the fact that, if she gets added to the Camp, there would be a Loli in the Lovers menu (besides Ember), I really can't think of one at the moment.
>>71192
Yeah 71191 isn't me that's just some other random Anon
>>71206
 Oh so she's like a Tarantula Hawk?
 Was she a Beemorph before being Corrupted into a Succubus?
 Also are the Widows in her scenes Feral spiders? Just curious.
Oh, but:
>She screams and swings her limbs around, but it only wraps her up in my strands and attracts spiders over.
Whose strands?
>>71211
  Not when the Champ's around, they're not. The Sharks all know the Champ's their Alpha, and what they say goes.
>>71212
 That too.
>>71213
 Also:
- Sharkgirl approaches Frog-Girl underwater and attempts to get a taste
- Sharkgirl immediately ingests hallucinogenic aphrodisiac slime with first lick (seriously it's on their skin, in their saliva, in their vaginal secretions, all their fluids are hallucinogenic)
- pleasure-high kicks in, instant friendship (or sex) between the two Lolis ensues. Bonus points if the Sharkgirl is a Tigershark and can penetrate the Frog-Girl.

Alright, moving on to a few random thoughts:
 1: So I know Kiha was supposed to be a member of a Lizan village before being kidnapped by Demons and turned into a Pseudodragon by their experiments.
 Was she a full-Anthro pureblooded Lizan like Arian (lizard head, digitigrade legs, long, claw-tipped fingers and toes, full-body scales, etc.), making the more humanlike features she has now a result of her experimentation making her part-Succubus, or was she always semi-human, like Helia and the other Salamanders? 
 2: If you turn Rubi into a full-Anthro Catmorph using Whisker-Fruit, you've effectively turned them into a pink-furred version of Lith from My Very Own Lith. They're both submissive Cats who are completely open to however their lover decides to treat them. Not sure if Rubi's as geeky as Lith is, though.
 3: I've come up with a rough concept for a functional pseudopenis for Gnolls. (Currently Gnoll Spots just turn your vagina black if you have one, and / or turn your penis into a dark, tapered version of a Canine penis with a really large knot, which isn't really even accurate since Hyenas aren't Canids.)
 The pseudopenis would take up (one of, if you have multiple) your Vagina slot, and you could use it for female scenes (with the assumption that it retracts for easier penetration, like real Hyena pseudopenises do), but you could also use it for male scenes, since female Hyenas have been known to have penetrative sex with each other or submissive males as a display of dominance. 
 (Although, in game mechanics, the pseudopenis wouldn't be able to impregnate NPCs unless you had testicles / could produce cum without them.)
 Besides expanding on the Gnoll Spots and making the case for adding the bit of the Gnoll NPCs in the Plains that is unattainable for the current game, I had one other reason to suggest this.
 Which would be having an anatomical option for a Herm character that Marielle wouldn't be turned off by, so that she wouldn't block off her Yuri scenes.
 You could just retract the pseudopenis before talking to her, and, bam, just a vagina. No penis, no problems.
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>>71201
Yeah, I'm not too keen on reading an entire chapter on what I'm doing at that very moment either. I'm just there for the transformations, to get strong and dominate a demon that's after my soul by any means necessary.
>>71206
That or just copy/paste the values with each other. Oh, and God's Mead can be bought from Tel'Adre's version of the Bazaar. It's one of the random things that appears in the shop weekly.
>>71207
Ah. That explains it. Though I feel that God's mead will fall short when I need it the most unless I do most of the brunt work (ie. Fighting against a bunch of phoenix harpies or dealing with statues.).
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>>71216
>Tarantula hawk
That concept is what inspired making a wasp demon there in general, but aesthetically she's inspired by red velvet wasps (pictured)
They have the strongest chitin of any wasp, it's like trying to puncture a popcorn kernel. They have the longest stinger to body ratio for mutillids and they make chirping insect noises to warn other creatures not to mess with them.
They're absolutely gorgeous too. Eastern red velvets are a brilliant bright red.
I'd call the chitin red velvet chitin but the alraune are based on black velvet petunias and there's no connection there, don't want to confuse anyone
>Was she a bee before being a succubus
She's not a succubus (and there's no such thing as part-succubus or part-demon)
>Feral spiders
In that scene, yeah. In the dungeon, you fight at least one drider at a time and a random amount of feral spiders.
>in my strands
more* strands
Thanks.
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Marbleanon, i made the pure/corrupt nightmare have a 1/10 chance of appearing if sleeping with her, is that too low or too high? it takes priority over normal dream stuff (not stuff like ceraph etc
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>>71223
I imagine it should be quite low, since people will probably be sleeping with her many days.
<t. not marbleanon
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>>71223
Marbleanon here.
 >>71224 is right, you can take her to your camp very fast and I'm sure most who get her as a lover do so early to benefit from her milk. Either way 1/10 seems low but is actually too high, 1/40 or 1/50 feel more reasonable.
Granted, this is based on the idea that the player would sleep with her everyday, but I think in this case it's better to calculate it with the most extreme possibility in mind.
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>>71225
Ok, i'll change it to 1/40. The clara camp thing is the prison talk right?
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>>71226
Yes, the little line added to the main camp scene if you imprisoned Clara after beating her.
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>>71227
Do you want to get credited as Anon or MarbleAnon?
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>>71228
I'm ambivalent about it, but I suppose MarbleAnon is fine since we're already using that.
Satan could you add helspawn sprites to the bounty board
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>>71097
I found it, it's the isabellaAndValeriaSpar scene, should this be changed to be using accent coaching properly? if so could somebody do it?
I think i'm more or less done for the day, if it's okay to have the demon lore unlock when reading the alice lore, then i'll code that, if it's not okay, then if somebody can figure out where it's supposed to be unlocked then i'll do it
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>>71221
>Velvet Ant Demon
 Huh. Aren't female Velvet Ants wingless, though? Only the males have wings, and that's just to track down the flightless females.
 On another note, Panda Ants are cool. They're black-and-white Velvet Ants.
>Not a Beemorph, no half-Demons
 ...huh. There are a lot of Corrupted characters that you could consider Half-Demons due to their severe Corruption, though. For example, Aiko's sister (as well as Aiko if she succumbs), the worm-infested Wolfmorph that Urta defeats in Tel'Adre (btw eww, I somehow got that scene even though I had infestations turned off), and at least some others, I'm sure. Typically quasi-Demonic Corrupted races have Demonic horns, overgrown sexual characteristics, and often other Demonic features.
 Also, I'm pretty sure I've encountered Cattlemorph 'Cubi (Cow Succubi, Minotaur Incubi) around Lethice's territory, but I'm not sure whether that was this mod or Xianxia.
 Anyhow that Demon reminds me a lot of the Beemorphs.

>>70902
 So I had an idea for the Herm Oral scene variant for Isabella's babies.
 You can already stimulate the vagina / cervix of a Herm baby in that scene (like you can with a plain Female baby) with your tongue if it's long enough, like a Dragon / Echidna tongue.
 Why not, for the Male / Herm Oral option, also add you slipping your finger / pinky into the anus to stimulate the prostate?
 Would be a more believable fit than my previous tonguing suggestion.
 With a Herm baby, the threefold sensation of the blowjob, cervical-depth tonguing, and prostate-stimulating fingering would absolutely blow their mind.
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>>71230
Kay
>>71233
Was thinking probably a dungeon end. Maybe the factory, or maybe we shrug off that codex as not worth implementing. Don't know.
>>71234
>Only males have wings
She's actually a demon, not a real red velvet. You are correct, like many species, the females have no wings and the males do.
>Not a beemorph
I didn't say that. Contrary, my headcanon is indeed that she was a bee-girl before becoming a demon. You picked up on it.
>Severe corruption is half-demon
That'd be a misleading way to say it. You either are a demon or you aren't. You have your soul or you don't. There's no partial state. But yeah, you can be very corrupt. It doesn't make you half-demon, just closer to becoming a demon.
>demonmorph people like Ifris and Pablo
You can get the aesthetics of a demon from succubus milk, inc draft, imp food, but it doesn't make you a demon any moreso than plastic surgery IRL makes you another race. They aren't really races even in the game, as they're not genetically like that. And for clarity, Ifris and Pablo, the demonmorphs at the gym, are not heavily corrupted.
>Some demons look like other things, cow succubus, mino inc
Yes. Demons can look like basically anything. The only thing uniting them in appearance is "a visible menace" that is vague. They usually have horns, wings, and a tail, but not universally. They can even change themselves to look the way they wish to.
If you turn a minotaur into a demon, they will probably still look a  lot like a minotaur, just very noticeably demonic.
Like plague rats, those are demons. They're rodent morphs of some sort that soaked in corruption while cramped together in burrows, fearing the demons, but the demons were polluting the ground-water to weaken Marae's roots and that was tainting the burrow. 
It's not "part demon" for a demon to have traits of their original race, nor for them to take on traits they simply like. It's full demon if they have lost their soul, and it's non-demon if they haven't.
>got the corrupt wolf scene without parasites allowed
That should appear without the worms involved with parasites off. Are you sure it was an infested wolf and not just a corrupted one?
>>71234
There's a lot of people who don't have any fondness for buttstuff, so if I added that into a scene that isn't obviously for buttstuff, I'd have to gate it off somehow like with an additional choice and that's just clunky to me. I don't think surprising them with fingering a baby's ass is as egregious as something like Savin surprising people with the player getting things in their ass, as many more people dislike that and a lot more strongly. But, still. They accept cock or pussy when they pick the baby with those parts, but they didn't pick buttstuff when they picked cunnilingus or dick sucking.
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Hey Anonnomás what was the final verdict on shota Alex's details?
I'm finally getting around to adding the [if (allowchild) {}] checks through the in-game stuff, want to be sure.


Checking at the mod's history, versions are usually 1.X.Y.Z
Z is just for bug fixes and discreet little stuff
Y is for new scenes or particularly significant internal stuff
X is for new content vectors like a full character akin to Evelyn, Sylvia, or Marielle, or a new dungeon like the Tower of Deception, or new quests like Akbal's Quest (v1.3 or 1.4 it was) with new abilities/gear and a boss fight
Between the X stuff, we'll get lots of one-off scenes in and fix up stuff as we go.
I'm setting some goalposts for myself. This is where I want to see us going. (timeline: years)
<<1.7 (this year)
>Huge Transformation overhaul, new mermaid TF, item, boss fight, accessory
>Rewrite of some mega old stuff that is below vanilla standards (the Cult)
<<1.8
>New dungeon, The Red Widow Nests, with new items and gear (you know where I'm at with that)
>Update Fera, decoupled from all Halloween stuff, update Akbal's Quest
>Rewrite of some mega old stuff that is below vanilla standards (help me jesus)
<<1.9
>New dungeon, The Fetish Church, with new items and gear (I have several elements outlined already)
>Expansion to available skills and abilities
I do not seek out a 1.10.0
<<2.0
>Combat redesign. Lust becomes a fully fledged combat style with hybrid styles viable
>Rebalance of all gear
>Rebalance of economy
>Rebalance of pacing (encounter weights, encounter conditions, unlock orders)
>Probably throw in some new encounters built from the ground up with the new system in mind.

It's a bit pie-in-the-sky, but I want goals. This is for me. We might get 1.10.0 and 1.11.0 if other people do big things. I'd talk about the other two dungeons I want to make for 2.1 and 2.2 but even in this context it feels like getting ahead of myself.
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>>71238
>Hey Anonnomás what was the final verdict on shota Alex's details?
https://pst.moe/paste/tzsjgp
I went with your suggestions. Measurements don't mesh with my imagination so my numbers usually come out arbitrary anyways.
Might need another pass with some feedback. As for genitals I'll leave that to the expert.
Not really sure how to handle the hair. Something I kind of want to go for is he could look princely if well groomed but he is a boy in a swamp so of course he wouldn't have immaculately well-kept hair. I like the idea of someone fussing over the shota's hair.
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>>71238
I already fear coding some of that
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>>71239
>Arbitrary
You chin to the top of your head is about 20 centimeters or more, almost 8 inches.
Someone that is 8 inches shorter than you would have the top of their head come just under your chin.
If you are 5'8", a 5'4 Alex would have his forehead to your nose, and you'd be able to kiss if you both tilted your heads toward each other with little more than you bending your neck to lower your head some.. 
A 4'5 Alex would come up to your collarbone, you can't even rest your chin on top of his head without leaning over a little, and it would require you to bend your knees or lift him up to meet your lips.
So, knowing that your head is 8 inches tall, give or take a few centimeters, you know a person 8 inches shorter than you is just below your chin. 4 inches feels short when up close.
Hope this helps you in general with visualizing measurements.
You should also measure the length of your hand, and the length of your wrist to your elbow. Not for this game, it's just really useful to have these lengths known so you can quickly estimate lengths day-to-day in your life.
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The parser conditional is "allowchild"
>4'5
Taller than jojo. I do wonder if we went too far choosing his lowest listed height as his canon. I think it was the oldest though.
>e might look like a prince if someone properly brushed his hair.
I know it's not an [Appearance] screen, just reference, but I'll note it wouldn't fit on an appearance screen. Just a bit too off.
You could say something like "Between his elegant body and pristine complexion, all he'd need is expensive clothes to bare a princely air." if you were more focused on comparing him to a prince than talking about brushing his hair.
I do think "wild side groomed enough to prevent tangles" does give that look of a not-deliberate-trap, a feminine soft boy that is naturally cute but all he's actively trying to be is clean.
>>As for genitals I'll leave that to the expert
Do we have an expert? That's much more arbitrary to me than body height. Yes, yes, let's talk about the dimensions of a cock. What's the length—what's the girth? What even is the thickness, is it diameter or circumference? And let's not forget the measurements of his balls.
What is the mathematical formula for hot cock? I don't know
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>>71241
Firstly, lmao. Secondly, I'm ambivalent to the formula. I'd say girth is diameter because it's more convenient to measure.
Lets say 3 inches black with the usual foreskin the other spider-morphs have. Is there future-proofing we can do for if a player wanted to give him gro+ or a p.incubus draft? I'm really not sure he will be developed to that point but if it's as simple as making and using a new parser now then why not. I have no fucking clue what normal sized balls would be for him, but if any answer is better than no answer, grape-sized balls in a small sac.
>a feminine soft boy that is naturally cute but all he's actively trying to be is clean
Yeah at the very beginning I wanted Alex to just be a cross dresser, but I've since leaned away from it in favor of something more organic feeling. Since there isn't really any shota I also figure this will be the premiere character for any pc looking to play "mommy" for a little boy, and that would clash if he was overly feminine. None of that is really 'for' me, but hopefully it fills more gaps this way.
>Measurements
I'll sleep on that and check my hand width.
I remember I was chatting with some foreign friends and one jokingly asked about my cock size. I told him it was the length of a soda can. They were in tears laughing over Americans using anything but metric to measure things.
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>black
I know the kin in the swamp have black skin on their crotch, but why? The skin elsewhere is why, it's just the chitin that is black. Why is the crotch made of skin but black like chitin?
Pureborns should have white groins like the rest of their flesh. This is my personal preference though.
And yeah, thickness is diameter, since cockArea is length x thickness.
>cross-dresser
While we do have Rubi for that, you could always have the player make Alex cross-dress. That'd give you what you want and give him a related but different niche than Rubi, who just is himself actively wanting to crossdress.
>the length of a soda can
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>>71243
I also kind of dislike the black cocks on the white spiders. Lets roll with pureborns have cocks matching the rest of their complexion then.
>force him
Honestly I think my favorite way of having that happen is just slutspawn making him do it because she thinks he is extra cute when embarrassed. I have no idea what purespawn dynamic would be there since there are now two blushing maidens, as hetero as yuri gets.
>Rubi
I'll have to revisit Rubi and analyze why I don't enjoy him that much. He fits some of the things I like on paper, and surely it can't be just cause he is in Tel'Adre that I don't like him.
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AnonMonkey, Salamander resolves true for hasClaws but is described as "nails" for [claws]. Same with Mantis but that's not obtainable so whatever.
Normal resolves as false and described as nails appropriately. All the other arm types seem to work just fine.
Look into it? I don't feel like it. Either salamander TF has a claw TF and it shouldn't be nails or it's not a claw and shouldn't be set to true.
Or they are nails and should at least be "sharp nails"
I don't feel like investigating this one.
>>71244
>white dick
Great. Pretty sure everything's pinned down, then.
>Spawn forces it.
Maybe in an isolated incident, Chastespawn has Alex try clothes that she/Helia bought for her in the preteen phase before it was clear the sheer scale of that age rate, and she just wants to see what fits him so it doesn't go to waste. And he's adorable, so she likes doing it.
While Slutspawn is more outright horny about it.
>Rubi is no good
It's Tel'adre, I can't think of anything I like there at all. At least it's not the gym.
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>>71245
>Purespawn
Ok I can see that. It'd be cute to see her wholesomely praising Alex's appearance in her old clothes. Genuinely trying to make Alex feel pretty.
>It's Tel'adre, I can't think of anything I like there at all. At least it's not the gym.
I like a fair bit in that town, I can look past a lot of flaws when I'm horny. I'm unironically into how loony the porn logic is with Kath's scenes, straight up furry anatomy. But on the less-obviously shit side, I think Brooke is alright but needs to be finished and Yara seems cool. Clearly the town itself isn't cursed enough to dissuade me from enjoying a character like Rubi.
Maybe it's because Rubi is a doll, like right down to swapping parts and playing dress up he is a start to finish a doll. That can't be the only thing then, because now the issue is why don't I find the doll cute? Maybe the way he speaks?
>>71245
>your fingers are now tipped with short, curved claws that look almost like fire in the [sun]light
from the TF it's claws so it should be described like normal lixard as i see it
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>>71247
lizard even
I'll note, Alex is described as a "little" spider boy/kin/boyfriend several times already. It was close
AnonMonkey, joining Helspawn with Alex should add sluttiness to her. Getting eaten our by your mom/dad in front of your boyfriend is not a very chaste thing to do. But I don't see it here. Do I need to add it? I imagine it should be the same as leaving them to their pegging session
flags[KFLAGS.HELSPAWN_PERSONALITY] += 10;
Correct me if I'm wrong and somehow the sluttiness is added already.
>>71247
Well I don't feel like fixing it myself.
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>>71249
You're right it haven't been added, although i think it should be more than the pegging session, since we're touching her rather than her pegging him
>Well I don't feel like fixing it myself
I was going to do it, i'm just busy that i haven't done it yet
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>>71250
>i think it should be more
I had put the slutspawn versions of text in the scene to personality 40+, and slut is 50, isn't it? I think my logic was on it being just +10 unlike getting her drunk and fucking her, where I decided on 20
The way I see it, the whole scenario is sexually charged whether it's with Alex or with the player. Anything you think it adds by it being incest or cuckoldry is sort of countered by it being sheltering and making her lean more to not jump into sex with other people without your approval.
I think it's just 10 slutpoints.
Maybe it'd be more if I wrote the option to outright fuck her, but I was lazy.
>attachment
Oh, no, I was handling that just fine, you didn't need to throw the personality score in there. Plus, I was sticking to 10 points. Guess I should have said something before taking a nap.
>>To that one autistic guy
In the Rathazul scene about aging, there's nothing about Amily's kids being bred as soldiers or to fight the demons at all. I think you misremembered. Ratty uses Amily's kids as an example of a makeshift way to speed of breeding and aging, and speculates that if Helspawn's growth could be duplicated, that could actually be a force to be reckoned with.
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>>71251
Ok, then i'll undo the personality score
>>71237
Alright re: the wings.
>Actually might have been a Beemorph before losing her soul
 I see, so I had the right intuition, but forgot it's losing your soul and producing Lethicite that fully converts you into a Demon.
 I understand the Demonmorph situation more now.
>Infested Wolf
 It...was pretty noticeably Infested. Extremely distressing description. Notably, I had Infestation overridden as turned off in the menu, but had yet to actually encounter the Worm Hazard sign in the mountain, so maybe it didn't save?
 > Re: Baby
 Perhaps you could have another option on the menu to do so, like Kath has a special sex scene (The Double Helix) if you're both Herms. That way, people could opt into it and know what they're getting into instead of being surprised, and there would still be the other option if people didn't feel like it.
 Relatedly, perhaps this game needs infographic symbols re: what you can expect with certain characters / scenes. I've seen other H-games do that (notably Paraphore, though that game has a lot of hardcore content that is far too extreme for this mod) and it helps people be informed about navigating story paths.
 >>71251
 A bit bemused that I've ended up being dubbed 'That One Autistic Guy', but I suppose that's how it goes when we all enforce our anonymity.
 Anyhow, it does seem that I got the details jumbled. It's been a while since I've seen that scene. (Homophones are fun.)
So building off of my thoughts in >>71216...

 What do people think about my suggestion for a pseudopenis option for the Gnoll? I think it would be interesting to see how it would open up different routes for characters that would reject a Herm Champ on basis of them possessing more typical Male or Female genitalia that they took offense to.

 And re: our discussion on having Suwako and her children move into the Camp and set up by Izma and her daughters...
 
Besides having that potential interaction I described with the Tigershark Loli and the Frog Loli, I came up with another that would take place between a Frog Loli and (potentially also Loli, as discussed in >>71038 and >>71045 as I agree with the idea that a character literally named Kid should be an actual kid) Kid A.
 This could even have the potential to end up creating a new Herm (and Loli, if enabled) Follower / Lover that you can play with / have sex with with in the Camp menu.
 Since my thoughts on it are a bit bigger than can comfortably fit on this post, I'll put down a pst.moe link (which I should've probably done with the pseudopenis post now that I think about it):

https://pst.moe/paste/gusjdt
Collected my case for the pseudopenis in a pst.moe post:

https://pst.moe/paste/ogapzl
Speaking of Kid A, someone should modify her sex scenes so that you can have vaginal sex with her repeatedly, not just once.
 Currently, the sex scenes with Kid A are either oral (she gives, you receive) or fingering (you give, she receives).
 The only vaginal sex scene is the very first sex scene you unlock, with you taking her virginity.
 I think there should be an option for repeats of this scene, simply editing out the parts about you deflowering her.
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>>71256
 I almost forgot, there's also Kid A masturbation scenes, but I'm not sure where those queue in ingame.

So there's repeatable oral, feminine, and masturbation scenes, but Vaginal currently only occurs once.
>>71254
> What do people think about my suggestion for a pseudopenis option for the Gnoll?
dont like it, not into it, sounds awkward to implement
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I want the eventual Helia/Spawn/Player threesome to have the option to put too much focus on Helspawn and have Helia get antsy, playfully at first. She does think it's hot, but then you and spawn just keep focusing on each other and it wears away at Helia's comfort.
"C-come on, you two, don't forget berserker-mom, I have needs!"
If you love Helia, then she'll pout at the end that it was more voyeur than threesome, but it was hot as hell so you'll get a pass as long as you make up for it later.
If you don't love Helia, she starts to lose steam, doesn't masturbate to completion, and asks at the end if you really needed her there, with a half-hearted chuckle to hide her insecurity.
Happily stagging Helia vs anxious, sad cuck Helia
It's what I'd do if I could be bothered to write it. The Helia love flag is very under-used. If anyone's unaware, it's set around the time of the pale flame, she asks the player if they love her, and you can just say no and it won't stop the arc at all.
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>>71258
>awkward
 How so?
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>>71254
 Meant to say in my pitch for the Limnaiad NPC that the reason she comes out looking like an axolotl is because the fact that both of her parents are children, combined with a chemical reaction from both of their toxins, caused her to achieve total neoteny, so she still has tadpole traits and will effectively be Loli forever.
>>71260
Probably that when in penis mode you don't truly have a penis for scene purposes (since it won't ejaculate and such) nor do you truly have a large clit for scene purposes (since it sounds like the rest of your vagina is inaccessible)
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>>71259
>If you don't love Helia, she starts to lose steam, doesn't masturbate to completion, and asks at the end if you really needed her there, with a half-hearted chuckle to hide her insecurity. 
That doesn't sound like Helia
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>>71263
Yeah but I would LIKE IT
Sylvia has a "I don't love you" option that doesn't stop things too, but I don't think it'd fit her either
>>71262
 Like I said, it could ejaculate if it was hooked up properly to a pair of testicles, or just if you could produce cum. (It's possible to do so even without them.)
 Also, the Champion can have up to two vaginas with the way that the game is currently set up, so it'd be possible to have both a regular vagina and a pseudopenis, if desired, so you could penetrate with the latter while being penetrated in the former.
I'd imagine the option to have two vaginas is somehow connected to the Kangaroomorph, since that's also how you unlock the Diapause perk.
 The two-vagina situation and ability to ejaculate with testicles would solve both of those problems.
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>>71265
>the Champion can have up to two vaginas
Only in terms of the code. This isn't possible to achieve, and there are no scenes to support it. So, no, the champion cannot have more than one vagina
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>>71256
 But I am pretty confused why only the first sex scene is vaginal with Kid A, and it can only be seen once.
 It seems like it should be an easy fix to make that repeatable, especially since the content of the scene itself is scripted to change depending on her confidence.
 And I do agree with the people who suggested that she should be a Loli toggle so that she's a young child / little...Kid at the very beginning.
>>71266
 Huh. The Debug menu has it as an option, and so does CoCEd, so it's odd that nothing has been made for it.
 Well, why not be the first CoC mod to do something with it?
 Half-joking here.
 But, no, seriously, it'd be cool to see.
 Also legitimately frustrated that there's no way for a Herm character to consensually have sex with Marielle since she's so turned off by literally any penis.
 Major part of why I suggested this.
 Heck you could just make her not turned off if it's in a genital slit / sheath for all I care since my character typically has dragon genitals.
>>71268
Marielle is a lesbian, she is not attracted to cock or cock-like appendages.
And you'll have a hard time having sex without your dick getting erect, so the fact it's in a genital slit isn't actually making any more difference than you wearing pants does. Once things get sexual, she will see that she doesn't like what you have there.
People are like that.
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>>71268
> Also legitimately frustrated that there's no way for a Herm character to consensually have sex with Marielle since she's so turned off by literally any penis.
And that makes her unique, stop trying to undermine it. The character is like this intentionally. If you showed up with a psuedopenis or anything equivalently phallic like an ovipositor I imagine she should have just as strong a reaction to that. If you're living in the debug menu to the extent that functions like having two vaginas matter to you despite not having any implementation than just get rid of your cock when you want to have sex with her and put it on later. You're trying to find a solution to something that isn't a problem. It's a feature, not a bug.
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I'll note that guy also wanted to push for characters to be lolified without even checking if they already were and saying "unless they already are" because not only does he contribute nothing, he won't even try to know what he's talking about
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>>71270
There is a running theme of undead being undickable.
>>71272
They are dickable. Once.
>>71272
If you don't count possession, Shouldra is still dickable. Not by you, but still. The retard ghosts gotta have their fun
>>71272
It's obviously an elaborate play on words. We can see that they are undead and undicked. If we look at it through a perspective where the point of being alive is to get buttfucked by hyper futa dick it makes sense that they would be undead, so they are a commentary on finding fulfillment without getting your asshole gaped. A truly remarkable retort to the life purpose prescribed by people like Fenexo.
where alex content
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>>71276
About 64 lines of proofing notes and a revision away. I've been chipping away but haven't really picked up the momentum I begin my projects with.
Unfortunately after so much time there are going to be whole sections I want to rewrite. Thankfully adding shota support is actually pretty easy and doesn't alter the flow of the scene.
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>>71277
Can you give a brief rundown of what scenes you've done, what scenes you still want to do, and what scenes you think need doing but you don't want to do?
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>>71268
It's technically consensual if she doesn't say no, right.
But in seriousness, Marielle would lose her appetite as soon as she finds out what freakish shit you have going on, whether that's a retractable pseudopenis or a genital slit or a second vagina separate from your man-business. The principle is what counts for her. She's a lesbo, a dyke, a femme, hard gay, not the copout futa– and femboy-fellating gynephiliac that the writer of Loppe's mum went with. That's not negotiable either, it's a significant enough reason for her being the way she is.
And I think that kind of exclusivity is perfectly fine for the game, as long as you aren't too harsh with it. Which is why she does have scenes for either sex, including options to stuff her. That, and because emotionless dubcon is hot.

I find it interesting, the times this has come up over the years. You're not the first to bemoan the lack of lovey-dovey dicking for the sake of procreation with one of the two full homos in the game. Puts a smile on my face.
Tangentially related, I've been thinking about writing more for her again, toy scenes being among the ideas. Maybe one year, I'll even finish some of it.
>>71278
I haven't finished any scenes. I have the Alex threesome and sharkcest oral in the works but I'm kind of struggling.
I plan on writing a Hel/HS threesome randomly triggered by going to bed with both of them. I find it weird that its an option to sleep with them both but it always stays chaste.
After that I might take a crack at writing a merfolk loss scene to sharks, or taking a crack at improving harpy daughters. recently I've been in the mood to write sexually aggressive women, but by the time I finish these scenes and write the next who knows what I'll be feeling.
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>>71279
>I've been thinking about writing more for her again
Praying for a miracle
>>71280
>I've been in the mood to write sexually aggressive women
No real reason to do a single focused thing at a time. Write sexual aggression while you're in the mood
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>>71281
>write what you want
If I do I know I for sure won't finish what I already started. I would love to just write for fun and not stress over the quality control but the point was to contribute to the mod and if someone is cleaning up after me I presume my quality won't improve.
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>>71282
Juggle things. Isn't Satan doing like 9 different things right now?
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>>71278
>scenes you think need doing but you don't want to do?
I write horny stuff so character driven scenes aren't currently in my preferred lane.
I know people hate the city but Brooke is half finished imo. She needs content outside the gym and I don't think she is as bad as the rest of Tel'Adre.
Harpy rework is probably outside of the reasonable scope of my abilities, I don't think the old incest content there meets our quality standards.
Corruption as a whole, especially corrupting the farm. I will accept a method of putting Kelt in his place without having Whitney turn on you as an alternative.
A talk option with Helia about her thoughts on incest or opinion on the champs incestuous relation with HS.
I can probably drum up a half dozen more, but I'll leave it here for now. I have a list of scenes that could use edits to support more genital features but it isn't finished.
>>71283
I'm not Satan. I've got some pretty serious ADHD and I've learned that I have to order the things I need to do before the things I want to do to have any shot at being productive.
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I did not wake up early enough to finish this. Gotta go
Here's the current state of Red Widow Drider (mature) Loss Rape https://pst.moe/paste/qnaopd
You think gigantococktards would prefer the legs rubbing that length in silk, or a spider body-job instead?
Lazy part of me says "it's a loss scene, who fucking cares, don't even bother with the entire penetration scene idea, just go with this weird gossamer stroking and cunnilingus thing"
>>71284
>I write horny stuff so character driven scenes aren't currently in my preferred lane.
The horny stuff is the hardest part for me. I always loved getting requests to do some stupid fluff scene, and I think it's fun designing creatures and coming up with these various plotlines and so on.
But god. Way too many sex scenes. Draining to get through a bunch of what I like and then think "well, I guess I need 2-5 sex scenes to fill this out now."
Some sex scenes are interesting though. The first time doing an underwater one, in the oasis consensual route, was fun.
It was fun doing the naga version of Helspawn drunk sex.
But 90% of sex scenes are just busywork for me. Endlessly thankful for the people that step up to the plate to do any of those for me, like the anon that did the zealot exorcism scene
I sit here halfway through a red widow loss scene and just think "eh... It's gotta get done."
Writing the encounter, the abilities, the outfit the mature ones wear, that was much more effortless. Kill Matilda, low effort.
I do feel at the minimum I need at least one scene I did myself before asking others, just so there's a basis for the style.
Matilda doesn't have any real animosity toward the player. She'll beat you down and then fuck you for fun, while degrading you if you're spider-morph or drider, and beeing gentler if you're bee-morph. Maybe gentle to dryads too, haven't thought about it much yet.
And then she'll let you go, crawling back home. If you enter her abode again, she will once more attack and play around with you. But she doesn't see the player as more than a silly nuisance.
Stands out because the driders leave you to be silked up and dragged into the egging nest for the bad end(losing consecutively; see: driderling doc), the alraune is probably going to restrain you and let feral spiders rape and egg you forever for her entertainment, but in a less gruesome way than the driders, and the queen kills you.
Matilda is the only fight I intended to have no consequences in that dungeon
I'm really rambling on and on.
>Corruption
Help me jesus.
>Talk to Helia about incest
I'll probably get around to that myself eventually. I want to expand some compatibility in some sex scenes, fix player-quotes, little touch-ups, and I'll re-familiarize myself with her when I do that. But I'd probably be fine just checking how she feels about incest with Kiri. Helia's half-sister, since her father Hakon is the father of all phoenixes. They probably had some kind of mention on the subject somewhere in there.
But if anyone wants to tackle that before I do, go ahead, I don't care.
>>General note
We should get some idea of exactly what is missing or where the destination is for a character to list them on the bounty board. "Brooke is half-finished" isn't really enough for someone to go on.
>I have ADHD and I need to order things
I feel like people would say I'm ADD for being the opposite. I just can't focus on one single thing or I burn out.
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I can't encounter the Hellhound Master, was it removed?
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>>71287
Pretty sure you need a very high hellhound race score or some hellhound race score + pregnant with hellhound
And I think you need marae's lethicite
>>71287
It seems it's bugged currently, it's not possible to ever get the first encounter.
Why can't we just rape the unmoving corpse after double killing the lesbian zombie?
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>>71269
 Fair.
>>71270
 Also fair, I suppose, though you're a bit more aggressive than the other Anon about the debug stuff.
>>71271
 Oh dear, are we back to that topic? It's well-worn out by this point and people explained why it would need more work, which I put into my second draft.
 It went over well, and I even recently suggested an encounter that could even end up producing a new NPC.
>>71272
  I was thinking about how going too far with the Dullahan ends in her death, which horrified me and made me reboot my save when I stumbled upon it. When she said 'Hey, if you get too passionate I might lose control', I didn't think she meant 'Hey, if you get too passionate my own body will dropkick me into a blazing fire and try to kill you.'
>>71279
 Also also fair.
 I was actually thinking that a second Debug item should be added to a shop somewhere (maybe Telly's, like the tome someone suggested?)
 This item would allow you to access a special menu to modify your genitals in a more extensive way than you can in the ingame Debug menu, as it would be more akin to the menu from CoCEd.
 It would allow you to change the number / length / girth / knot / type of your penis, the size / number / cum production of your testicles, and the type / wetness / capacity of your vagina.
 The flavor text of this item could claim it was the invention of an enlightened Elder Kitsune who wanted to experience all of the world's greatest pleasures, and wished to share them with their disciples, and so developed a way to turn oneself into a Hermaphrodite and change one's sexual characteristics with the wave of a hand.
 
 Now, expanding off of >>71254...
 Here's a little collection of notes that I have re: my frog/anemone child suggestion's personality, how she'd interact with others at the Camp, and how she could optionally be gently guided into becoming one of the Champion's Lovers, like how Dolores can become one:

 https://pst.moe/paste/pzhewm
>>71290
 Horrified after reading that.
I visualize Eleionomae as a Pure follower, with her conception being something of a counteraction of Corruption, and possibly even possessing some sort of purifying power. Perhaps either her mother (Frog-Loli) or Kid A could have eaten a Pure Peach, or it could have been a blessing from Marae (as a pure counterpart to Holli being a demonic boon from a corrupted Marae).
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>>71290
no one has wrote it yet
>>71286
>The horny stuff is the hardest part for me.
Sounds like I can focus on the things you'd rather pass on. Although I have no intention of trying to mimic a particular style of writing, I don't mind writing smut with existing characters. Since the two current projects feel like hitting my head on a brick wall maybe I will just try something new and come back to it.
I presume we take the realistic approach to underwater sex where communication isn't possible? Or do the aquatic races of Maerath just speak fine underwater? Do merfolk have an explore option to run into shark girls without the boat? Cause afaik boat is only way to encounter them and the idea of a merfolk paddling a boat on the lake is comical. I can just start writing from the point of being zero hp underwater if you don't need me to worry about lead up to the scene.
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>>71299
>I have no intention of trying to mimic a particular style of writing
I should note I don't mean writing style when I said style, I meant the character's sexual behavior. When they're more sadomasochist, more passive, very active, more talky, if they're just feral about it, etc.
I think other people being able to read the young adult drider calling you "strange [race]" and "prey" and so forth says a lot about her mindset and you can come up with her dialog in a player-lead victory scene with that in mind. She doesn't know outsiders well, they're very much "other" to her, but she does slake herself on their interesting bodies.
The driderlings are more clueless. Very curious, they want to experience something new, but they don't have sexual inclinations and won't think to do anything like that themselves. If you lose but they have high lust, I can imagine them trying something, but I'm not bothering with that.
But, anyway, writing one sex scene myself gives something to go off of for how other sex scenes with that entity might play out.
There's also more wiggle-room with generic enemies like them because they're individuals and can vary. It's just about having some similar elements across the scenes, not being the exact same consistent character.
>underwater communication
The shaman uses magic, telegraphed with the glowing light in his throat, and the player using the mermaid [Chant] works underwater.
I'm indifferent about non-magic means of talking. Perfectly fine having shark girls not able to talk underwater. Could give them some more vague throat-vocalizations that the player could presume makes sense to a shark. Doesn't matter.
>Do merfolk explore without boat
intending to expand on that. Just need to modify the boat encounters to have water variants of things. Their combat moves, etc. Then I'm inclined to have Boat be a choice to swim or row. Corruption gain swimming, less-so but still there if factory was safely shut down.
The zealot doesn't change because he stops you from getting on the boat in the first place.
>if you don't need me to worry about the lead up
Yeah don't worry about it, I'll fuck around with their combat and encounter text to fit swimming. And that will be available with gills, not mer exclusively, but mer will benefit a lot from +20 speed while others get -10 or -20. And whatever I do about a ruby core accessory is probably going to be mer-exclusive to encounter.
You can write based on existing sex scenes with them and just reimagining it as how it'd go underwater and we'll make it what that button does if you fought the shark girl while swimming. Or make an original scene.
Just going to note that fleshing out the ideas I had about my follower suggestion (which is collected in https://pst.moe/paste/gusjdt , https://pst.moe/paste/pzhewm , and >>71297 ) makes me further frustrated that I can't act on them in a constructive manner.
 I lack the skill and ability to write the scenes myself or figure out the coding side of them if they ever did come to be included.
 I'm just full of ideas with little ability to personally see them to fruition.
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Going to state for the record that Marielle is a joy to read, always. I join in prayers Wombat gets back on that horse.
Red Widow Drider (young woman) Silk-Job Loss
https://pst.moe/paste/enjkgo
Fuck it, if you want to put your tally-whacker into her pussies, you'll need to beat her and not be a loser bitch. Silk-job is the only loss-scene.
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Updated the Bounty Board: https://rentry.co/BountyBoard
Added new bounty: Themes and assets
It bothers me that the buttons don't match in Obsidian. Others too, but mostly that.
Also got a link to the Dark Gray Theme: https://mega.nz/file/4jgzTYaY#50xzU5v2hYvjkCv9ZAJLwlArRZtptfB3miglGY3SG-I
What do people think of stealing the Dark Gray buttons and using them for the Black theme in-game?

Anyway. Good night, I guess.
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Repackage your Linux build without using rars.  Fucking itch is too retarded to detect rars and tries to unpack it with a non-existent unpacker.  Manual downloads work fine but makes updating a pain.
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>>71304
And after dealing with the block bypass shit it put me in the wrong thread.  Disregard, cocks, etc.
>>71301

 Part 3 of workshopping my Follower idea, because I've really put a ton of thought into her at this point and I'm unsure if I can stop, even if I wanted to:

https://pst.moe/paste/tzycjk

 

Also, if I ever needed to be credited in anything re: the mod for some reason, I think I'd probably want to be credited as CloudAnon.
 
I'm admittedly kind of an airhead, and my constant daydreaming, naivety, boundless optimism, and being unable to take my ideas from my mind and put them down on metaphorical paper means that I effectively constantly have my head in the clouds.
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How do I find the Pillar of Apotheosis? It's the only dungeon I haven't done, and I read somewhere it was in the crag, but they might have been talking about the tower of deception.
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>>71311
It is and they were
>>71311
It is the Tower of Deception, but you need as much spell power as all the magic perks would add up to (so gear that boosts it would get you there without all of the perks)
Then you'll get an event at camp telling you to go back there, essentially.
>>71310
Stop all this double-spacing, your posts should be more condensed.
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The nun habit and nurse's outfit both tell me I'll gain +8 tease chance/damage when switching from one to the other. Which is impossible, it should be +0 if they're the same effect
Armor defense is 0 on nurse outfit, and the nun will say 4 (+4)
When wearing nun, nurse says defense is 0 (-4)
Tease stuff should work the same way. The +8 is even a green color just like the +4 armor, like it's highlighting that it's an upgrade, when it isn't.
>>71313
 Sorry, I remember being told that but slipped up.
Cockfucking. Currently there is a Minotaur scene, maybe a couple other penis-in-penis scenes I'm forgetting about. It is a retarded fetish incompatible with realism and I'm probably autistic for even wanting more of it. If I were to write scenes for it, what special considerations should I make to decide who should be eligible? It's already in the game and it isn't even the most outlandish thing in Maraeth so I don't want to hear why it can't or shouldn't be done. Should weird shit like this require a minimum corruption?
Initial ideas and reasoning for candidates, psuedopenis/ovipositors not included. https://pst.moe/paste/bbmfoz
Weird shit like this belongs in the game but I do care about where people think it should be kept to and how it should be handled.
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>>71310
I'm not reading your posts, but reading the linked stuff.
The first problem I notice is Kid A requires you have a vagina. FL requires you have a penis.
The limnaiad is thus only for sex-changing or herm players, narrowing things a lot. It requires both being impregnated and siring.
Second issue is that it requires one lover being impregnated by another one, not by you. Some people won't mind, some people very much will.
You've narrowed the audience a ton in each of these elements.
And then on top of that, you admit you aren't writing it. You just ideaguying.
I think you've sunk yourself into too deep of a niche to have any hope unless you were the one writing it.
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>>71317
Should require less girth than the dick you're fucking (obv). Logically it should be way less girth, but pornlogically just being less  in general kind of passes even though I personally dislike it.
Generally requiring the player have a dick less than half the girth, or just any amount less if it's a case like the bunny girl who lays eggs with her dick. Maybe even equal in that case.
And besides exceptional things, it should be on entities with huge dicks, like the mino or urta.
>>71318
>Kid A needs a vagina
 Hm. Perhaps there should be some sort of other way to gain an Anemone polyp other than that, like possibly anally, or having it simply suction to you. Or maybe you can get some other person at the Camp to carry the baby Anemone / transfer it to them.
Of course, if the ‘debug wand but for genitals’ that I suggested got added, then it would be less of a problem.
>One lover impregnates another
 Some people won’t mind, some might. It’s a mixed bag, yeah, but some people might even enjoy it. Also, it’s a chance to get some Loli x Loli content.
 Perhaps, during the choice to make it a Threesome between the Champ, Kid A, and FL, it could be written that the reason it was at all possible was because the Champ’s Purity and unbridled Virility, as well as the quality of their sperm, allowed it to absorb Kid A’s DNA and copy its traits? So it would physically be the Champ who impregnated FL during the Threesome, but Kid A would be a ‘genetic donor’ of sorts since she came inside FL first. Effectively a child with two fathers.
 The fact that Elei is half-Anemone and half-Frog is kind of intrinsic to her character, since she’s supposed to help reduce conflict in Mareth by promoting better communication / relationships between races.
 >Ideaguying
 Well, there’s some merit in ideaguying, though.
 It’s actually how I ended up helping pad out the current consensus about Shota Alex, after all.
 I came up with the idea about him being a little boy that Helspawn met while she was roughly his age, then rapidly outgrew him.
 There are a lot of users / contributors on here who have been not just understanding / sympathetic toward me, but helpful as well, by coaching me and giving me tips.
 Also, this may sound silly, given I’m here, but I’m actually not comfortable with the idea of personally writing erotic material.
 I’ll consume it, sure, and I’m comfortable providing inspiration / contributing my ideas, but even if I wished to go further than that, I’m highly lacking in skill.
 I'm creative when it comes to thinking up ideas, but not so much on translating them to text.
 My scene-writing skills would not be great, and my dialogue skill is abysmal at best.
It’s actually the main reason all of my posts re: this character (and my Lolipop suggestions, as well as the pseudopenis) have been bulleted lists. Easier for me to collect my thoughts in short bursts.
I appreciate your feedback, nevertheless, and welcome more, and further discussion, with anyone who wishes to engage me with either
 I’ve turned out to be pretty passionate about this idea, which surprises me a lot.
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Also another thought re: Elei is that she would consider Marae to be her great-grandmother, since it was Her Blessing that allowed her to be conceived.
 Elei as a concept is intrinsically linked to Purity and defying Corruption, as a Pure counterpart to Holli. I felt the good route for the Marae / Factory questline was lacking in rewards, since it merely gives you a chance to purify Minerva / help Marble and get a suit of armor, while the evil route gives you a variant of said armor, special perks, and an exclusive evil Follower.
It doesn’t really add up, so I decided to brainstorm a Pure Follower reward, and it all branched out from there.
 I even have ideas for non-hostile Pure NPC encounters in the Boat zone post-Factory, with its own boss encounter, but I can write up those in a pst.moe post later.
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>>71320
>Of course, if the ‘debug wand but for genitals’ that I suggested got added, then it would be less of a problem.
Blatantly wrong and completely irrelevant. Debug tools are not relevant to the design of content whatsoever. Those tools are for debugging, not for play.
>Some won't mind, some might
I remind you this takes two separate characters arcs with limited overlap in kinks just to start this.
It's not like it can't be done. If someone did write it all, it'd get in after proofreading and revising like anything else. I'm just saying, there's several layers of barriers to get to this content and that's going to reduce the chance someone else will invest so much effort writing it. One of the required arcs hasn't even been done—that being expanding on Suwako and her spawn. Someone interested in your idea wouldn't even be able to start on just the core idea itself, they'd first after to expound on the frog.
You're getting ahead of yourself.
>I helped with Shota Alex
No you didn't. You didn't say anything of any merit, you didn't give any reasons for him to be a shota, you contributed nothing, you convinced no one. I won't be so harsh, but it makes you look bad when you act like your input was significant when you didn't elaborate anything at all. All you said was "more shota" which has been spouted off for years by random people here and there.
You're doing much better when you actually do elaborate on your suggestions, like with Elei. Elei is too far away to work on right off, but you're doing the right thing picking apart the idea and all these elements. But cool it. Don't even reply to the shota bit, just silently file away that critique and continue elaborating on your current ideas.
>>71321
>Marae's blessing allowed her to be conceived
I definitely skimmed over that part what the fuck do you mean
Marae is like the great grandmother of all native races anyway though.
>Elei is a counterpart to Holli
I thought she was a crossbreed with a frog daughter and kid a
>The good route of factory lacks reward
You get a permanent, unique perk to resist corruption, your libido and corruption get reduces on receiving it, and you get nothing nearly as useful on corruption. Holli is unique for corruption, but that's the only thing corruption has going for it, and Holli makes several people leave your camp.
The good route definitely rewards you with more. And the pure armor is better than the tentacle bark.
>It doesn't add up, so I decided to brainstorm a pure follower reward
You could say the characters you lose when you keep Holli are your reward for not getting Holli.
A cop-out, admittedly. But the point stands.
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Haven't played nor checked out the thread in like 3 years, and I'm surprised you guys are still trucking.

Anyway, I got the itch to play again, so I want to ask, is there a way to start as a male and still gain the Big Tits perk later on yet? I always like to play a male warrior turning into a ravenous shortstack woman lusting after pussy but I like having the Big Tits perk for the feeling of "even my character's body wants him to be a girl."

Also, all these years, and nobody's pushed to add a Big Ass perk to character creation?
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Any female ferals in the game or at least Succubi Milk-able ferals? So far it looks like there's only males.
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>>71325
Assuming "ferals" is retarded furry babble for "animals", there are mares. There's also a short scene with a talking two-headed hellhound, dog-shaped in this mod.
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>>71325
I wish the fox kit shitpost made it in as a silly mode encounter, I liked that scene.
>>71324
When you Ascend you can pick the other starting perks and histories.
All of Rubi's commented notes are a 0-50 relationship scale while the code is 0-100
It's mildly confusing seeing "///relationship < 20" and then the code says <30
I suppose it doesn't matter, since it seems to function as intended
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>>71329
There are a lot of things like that, like half the vanilla comments from the original docs don't match the implementation.
>>71329
To be fair it was designed by a tranny
nothing about a tranny's mental gymnastics makes any sense, not even to other trannies
>>71326
Where's the female hellhound? I've only encountered males so far.>>71326
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>>71335
I think they're referring to the bad end where you give the Hellhound Master the entire lethicite of corrupted Marae and he rewards you with hellhound pussy
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>>71336
So just mares and a bad end, then? Kinda disappointing but I suppose the game does focus more on animal penis than animal pussy in the first place.
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>>71337
It's a cliché, but,
"Write it"
There's nobody against putting more ferals in the game in general, but people have their interests elsewhere and only so much time and energy to write.
If someone's to do it, it may as well be you.
>>71051 (OP) 
We really need more feral animal encounters, Whitney's horse and mare are nice, the Amarok is great and that random cow event when exploring the Farm is also interesting, but a bit more variety of beasts and animals would be nice, somethink like Pigs on the Bazaar, feral dogs on the Plains and maybe Tigers in the Deepwoods?
Along that we could need a toggle to hide/reduce/show said encounters for those who don't want to see them.
Finally, a perk that allows a female or herm PC to become pregnant by animals.
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>>71342
That's not how names work. Take a brief look at other posts and get an idea what's going on
>>71342
Yeah
>>71322
>Debug
 Alright, fair.
 I did, however, brainstorm an alternate way to get Kid A that doesn't require a vagina, so that could help somewhat:
 https://pst.moe/paste/xyahcq
>Two arcs, a lot of work
 Understood. I'm pretty passionate about this, but I'll try not to get too overeager about it. I thought it would be a really cute / wholesome / hot idea.
>[stuff]
 Alright, I'll drop the topic that shall not be named for now.
 But thank you for your compliment re: Elei.
>Grandmother Marae
 Ah, well, that ties into the backstory I came up with for how she was conceived, which ties into an idea for a quest that I came up with but hadn't elaborated on until now:
 https://pst.moe/paste/utxsda
Pretty much the item that enables Elei's conception is the Pure reward for finishing the Factory Quest as well as the new quest I came up with.
 >>Crossbreed between Kid A  / Frog Loli
 She still is, I've just expanded more upon the idea by having her birth be tied to a favor from Marae after saving her life / completing a quest for her 'children' (who appear in that quest post).
>Pure rewards
 Alright, fair point. I forgot about the Corruption Resistance perk, and I was already aware of several Pure followers leaving if Holli was allowed to bloom.
>Copout
 Yeah, I'd personally see that as a copout, but I understand your reasoning. I sort of wanted to expand on the idea and make a character that's as Pure as Holli is Corrupt, with Hollicynthia seemingly being a biological Fallen Demigoddess / Dryad daughter of the Corrupted Marae and all.
 A Pure Water Nymph to balance out the Corrupt Wood Nymph, if you will.
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>>71342
 I agree with your post, but you should leave the name / subject boxes blank unless you're part of the mod's devteam / a significant contributor.
 Learned that myself firsthand.
The alraune seems to be impossible penetrate in her flirt sex scene.
>>71347
> She still is, I've just expanded more upon the idea by having her birth be tied to a favor from Marae after saving her life / completing a quest for her 'children' (who appear in that quest post).
That makes no sense at all.
You're definitely dragging the concept down a lot by adding this element, it's completely unnecessary and contributes nothing to the character.
>A pure water nymph to the corrupt wood nymph
A fine concept in itself, but actively a bad idea to overlap with this Elei thing, that makes a character that takes 3 unrelated character arcs to get, each with something about them that filters a lot of players. As simply a cross-breed, it's not bad design, you merely limit the audience a bit and thus fewer people want to work on that, but nothing's wrong with doing it. Adding a third, yet again unrelated, element is just bad design. And unlike Kid A and Suwako, adding Marae is literally not relevant to this character concept. There's not a single god damn reason to do this.
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>>71350
>Quest Irrelevant
 ...hm. Point taken.
 I can keep that Marae idea to myself, then, and excise that bit from the quest idea.
 Speaking of, how does said quest look apart from that, and what would be a better alternative Pure Ending reward from Marae than unlocking Elei? (besides befriending / unlocking sex with the Sea Angels, that's already there regardless)
>>71350
>Good concept, poor execution, don't merge it
 Advice noted, and followed.
 Marae will not be part of the final concept for this character arc, but will remain focal to my quest / dungeon idea.
>>71337
Like the other anon said, be the change you want to be. Granted I don't know how tricky it would be to implement if it's not a scene for an existing encounter but it's worth a go. 
I've got ideas that I'd like to see added too but I'm just incredibly lazy.
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>>71357
As long as it gets written, I'm sure AnonMonkey will implement it, so there's no code concern
Came up with a new Camp Recruit idea...
 A strange fox that turns out to be a gullible Kitsune fan who was turned into a fox after a fateful run-in with the mischievous and deceitful Manor Sisters.
 This is a modular follower, in that you can choose how feral you want them to be, as, notably, their intelligence is on a separate range from their age and their physiology, so you can have, for example, a sapient talking feral fox or an animalistic, instinctual, mute kemonomimi foxgirl loli.
 There's a plot progression that does involve gradually transforming them back to human, but helping them become a true Kitsune opens up an 'endgame' free--play mode, where you can tweak the Lover's transformative properties at your leisure.

https://pst.moe/paste/unyqtm
>>71359
>modular
>can be anything
>just suggests sex scenes
Absolute non-character
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>>71360
 It's not all just sex, there's an entire plot there, and there are interaction descriptions between Rey/Vix and the other Camp residents in the beginning of the writeup.
 Those don't go away when the transformations start happening, they just update to account for Rey/Vix's physical / mental state.
>>71359
>this madman saw Ember and decided that wasn't fiddly enough to write
imo the workable idea here is "kitsune that is willing to turn into a fox for sex"
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>>71362
Ember isn't even half as bad. Ember is almost not fiddly at all. Ember is just male/female/child, really. Until someone expands Ember into a full dragon version, they are WAY simpler than the kitsune that can be both sapient/animalistic and feral/humanoid PLUS also male/female
And who's to say whatever else. 
Genuinely just a bad idea on a conceptual level
Why is it so rare to encounter Telly's shop? Am I missing something here, or is there a better way to encounter her other than just spamming "Explore"?
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>>71364
From 6AM to 6PM, she can also be reliably found at the Bazaar.
Explore is just a ~1-5% special thing that was added later
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Does this mod add any specific de-futa-ing to any of the characters, by the way?

>>71365
Many thanks. One wonders why the Bazaar guard is somehow level 30 when he's not even that difficult.
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>>71367
Removing Urta from existence is de-futaing in some sense.
Satan rewrote Amily's automatic futa-ing to be non-automatic, which is kind of pre-emptive de-futa-ing?
That's all I can think of. You could already dedick Kath and Izma. Still need someone to dedick Kid A, Minerva needs a much deeper rewrite to dedick.
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>>71359
A feral camp recruit would be great, but narrowing the scope would probably help with realizing it. Perhaps by reducing the TFs to a couple of stages and locking them to female with the option of Incubi Drafts for those so inclined.
>>71371
I dont think it's the TFs that's the problems, i think it's more the stuff after
>>71359
>Male or female!
>Any age!
>Make it herm!
Lacks a lot of identity by being too fluid, along with added a lot of workload.
Of course, the writing of the events is bad, but you aren't a writer so I'll just ignore the specific things you say and go with broad strokes.
>starts feral and can become all stages from feral to kemonomimi
Combined with all the earlier elements, once again a pain in the fucking ass. A male/female/herm, child/preteen/teen/adult, fox/semianthro/anthro/mimi, wild/simpleton/sapient intelligence.
The body, the age, the personality, the species, all so fluid that the concept is fundamentally retarded.
The idea has no focus and you don't contribute anything to it that actually helps whoever would write it. Come up with something you will write, you might learn something along the way.
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>>71368
>Satan rewrote Amily's automatic futa-ing to be non-automatic, which is kind of pre-emptive de-futa-ing?
Thanks, Satan.

That said, I take it you can't actually advance her relationship unless you're willing to let her sprout a cock or grow one yourself, right? All the bullshit magic in Mareth and one wonders why there's not even a hint of proper lesbian pregnancy.
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>>71385
I think being stuck with having to wrestle over one of you two changing or accepting the fact what you have simply won't work because this is so crucial to her is narratively valuable. 
Despite your hearts, some compromise just has to be made or it won't work.
Makes for a good break up too
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>>71386
Tonally, sure, but narratively, it's not exactly like there's no other options. If it was a more grounded setting with better established rules for magic (or if she went on some lengthy spiel about how her kids HAVE to be biologically both of yours and nobody else's), then you might have a point, but it comes off as just a bit annoying that there's already another character who wants to have a kid with you and is perfectly willing to run off and shag a rando if neither of you have a dick (Helia), as well as a general attitude of "magic exists to facilitate whatever the fetish of the writer is." Not to mention that there's also another recruitable mouse, who would probably be better for purer repopulation anyway -- even if you have to pull out the ol' turkey baster trick or something.

That said, I'll play ball. Do you know if I can make my girl grow a dick, give her the kids she wants, and then just get rid of it afterwards, or will she get mad at me for that (which would be even stupider)?
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>>71388
In vanilla, she'd moronically get mad about it, but Satan had it changed so that, after she confronts you to say that she is willing to grow a dick because she needs to have children but loves you, you can counter with doing it yourself.
Just don't do it before she reaches that point. She needs to reach that point of realizing at least someone needs a penis in this relationship.
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>>71388
Also, I think you need 5 batches of kids for her to be a follower. After that, if you get rid of your dick she won't care.
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>>71389
>>71390
Fine with me. I can tolerate being in penis-owning breeding lockdown for several weeks while spamming "Wait" until it passes.
>>71932
I believe you can let her grow the penis first, then go off and grow your own so you can impregnate each other and clear the requirement faster. You know, just in case you're like me and autistically optimize a porn game.
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>>71393
That is pointless and slower. If only Amily has the penis, you can get pregnant, use ovielixir to birth the same day, and repeat 5 times that day, potentially.
But if she gets pregnant, you have to wait a whole week.
So you have autistically anti-optimized. Dumbass.
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>>71394
>getting impregnated and giving birth 5 times in a row on the same day just to avoid the futa menace as much as possible
The amount of pain anon's Champion has to suffer is probably worth a medal.
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>>71395
This is about being optimal, not about avoiding futa. After all, futa is required for this. If you really want to avoid futa but still bag Amily, fully change yourself to completely male. You can fix it later.
But becoming both futa on the basis of "optimal" is retarded, because it's not actually optimal. Amily being pregnant slows it down, only the player can use items to birth in just an hour.
Did this mod change how getting kitsune tails work? Unless I've been monumentally unlucky, the method certainly doesn't match the fox jewel + minimum level + minimum intelligence method described on the vanilla wiki.

I know mystic jewels work (or perhaps they, too, stop working after a certain point?), but I'd rather not have the drop in max strength associated with that (is that also a new thing added for the mod?). If that's the only way, I'll put up with it, though.
>>71400
Like always, you have two forms of enlightenment.
Using fox jewels, you get the pure version, which means at 8 tails you need to take the jewel to a shrine and pray at it to get your final tail.
Using mystic, you get the corrupt version, which has different spells and it is faster to reach, with no prayer involved either.
I don't remember a minimum level though. Maybe that's a thing, I just don't remember it.
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>>71400
>I'd rather not have the drop in max strength associated with that
Enlightened vs corrupted has no influence on stat caps, both have the exact same strength penalty.
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>>71400
Requirements are basically unchanged from vanilla.

Requirements to grow additional tail (up to 8) by using jewel normally:
>Have 1-7 fox tails
>level >= (tail count + 1)
>(int / 10) >= (tail count + 1)
>Haven't had too many non-stat changes from this jewel already (change limit is somewhat random, fox jewel can be 1-4 but is usually 2-3, mystic jewel adds 2, alchemist history adds 1, TF resistance reduces it by 1)
If you meet all requirements, chance of extra tail is 1/3 for fox jewels and 1/2 for mystic jewels.

Requirements for 9th tail with mystic jewel:
>Meet all previous requirements (except with 8 tails, obviously)
>Have fox ears
>Don't have unpermed ninetails perk already (if you have one made permanent from a previous ascension, that's fine)
If you meet all requirements, chance of 9th tail is 100%, gives corrupted ninetails perk.

Requirements to grow additional tail by meditating at the shrine (up to 9):
>Statue is at the shrine, not at camp
>Have fox jewel in inventory
>Have 1-8 fox tails
>Same level/int requirements as always
>Have fox ears
>Don't have unpermed ninetails perk already (even if you're just growing your 2nd-8th tail)
If you meet all requirements, chance of additional tail is 100%, if it's your 9th tail then get enlightened ninetails perk.
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>>71407
Wish the shrine could just be put into the places menu instead of shitty random chance at deep woods
>>71051 (OP) 
Does anyone can just upload their written scenes on that Google Drive link for revision? Ofc following the Guide and the Rules
Askin cause' i feel like Marble's sister needs to be something beyond two lines after the Purification Quest.
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>>71401
Turns out I'd just gotten monumentally unlucky, not getting a single tail proc in 10 minutes of savescumming. Apologies. No idea what the chances of that are, but it was enough to make me question it.
>>71404
Having only ever played as a vanilla human (twin-tailed kitsune at most), I had no idea racial scores affected your stat caps. That's neat.
>>71407
My fluffy tail champ thanks you kindly for the information, anon.
>>71409
That's just an old archive. New submissions are put on pst.moe and then posted on the thread similar to posts like >>71302 or >>71162
Then you get feedback, people pointing out all the mistakes and helping you figure out what needs changing, then you post your revision after receiving that feedback. The feedback will look something like >>71170 but linking your post instead of linking the paste itself (that one linked the paste because the post is gone)
>>71359
 Came up with a boss fight for the Strange Fox quest and a few more notes. Might add more later. 
https://pst.moe/paste/pctwvj
>>71371
 Fair. Which would benefit from being trimmed?
>>71378
 Any tips?
 Also, I've come up with two storage containers for the Camp:
 1: Toybox
 Can be built at the Camp. Holds all the Champion's children's toys (teddy bear, rubber ball, etc.) and children's clothes so they don't take up room in their inventory or other storage systems. Can interact with NPCs who can be given / played with using toys (like playing catch with Helspawn or giving Akky a (short-lived) teddy) while toys are inside the Toybox.
 2: Black Box
 A different kind of 'toybox'. Can be bought at the Bizarre Bazaar. Holds all the Champion's masturbation aids and sexual paraphernalia, such as lingerie and other kinky outfits. Since most of the sexual paraphernalia doesn't take up inventory space to begin with, this is mostly a way to inspect / admire the Champion's 'collection' and access the specific scenes with them through the menu.
 Could also use them on Followers / Lovers in sex scenes.
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>>71414
>Toybox
For all two items that'd go in that. You can put 10 teddybears on your bed, that's basically storage for them. Already has been brought up if we expand the number of items that would go in that, but there's just too little to do with it for now.
>Black box
Already have a dresser for undergarments and there's no shortage of space for other outfits either.
And no real benefit to being able to inspect the key items, which you already can use on NPCs too, the box wouldn't add that possibility at all. If anything, this actually messes with options like using the dildo on monsters and stuff out in the wild because it stands to reason you don't take them with you, you surely leave them at home. 
So this is just actively a bad idea.
You're such an unhelpful person
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>statue of a long-haired teenage goddess in a ruffled dress seemingly offering salvation
>unknown swirly runic script everywhere
>a buckler with a clock in it that stops time and has storage space (for guns, were they to exist)
>tons of statuettes of armed women in myriad outfits, many vaguely cute/sexy (magical girls...?)
>meet a girl there who is a zombie
I may be retarded, but it just dawned on me -- is the temple in the Bog a Madoka reference? If not, then that's a number of interesting coincidences.
...Also, is there anything to do there other than pray/bathe and romance Marielle (cutie btw)? There's no stat tracked for it in the stat tab so I'm not certain praying there really does anything, but it feels like it should.
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>>71416
Yes it's a Madoka reference, but only the writer thus far as actually know what the references are, it's been lost on all the rest of us besides merely being told it is a reference somehow.
The only purpose of the temple is Marielle, the rest is window dressing and a free shield.
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>>71417
Ah, yeah. The last time I played this mod was a few years ago, which was before I watched Madoka (amazing anime, honestly. I see why it's considered so influential), so the references were lost on me back then. The references (and therefore the temple's history) seem fairly straightforward to me, though -- some religious order dedicated to magical girls set up shop there long ago, venerating Madoka as their goddess. Something something destruction and the passage of time. Presto, temple ruins of a lost order.

Just kind of a missed opportunity to not put in a magical girl staff/dress as a weapon/armor, or something like that. Or, perhaps such a dress is something Marielle can craft and I haven't brought her the right item for a Commission yet.
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>>71417
>>71418
There was going to be get deeper get magical girl stuff too. 
It never got made.
I have been waiting ever since.
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>>71419
Is the author known? Or is it known that they still hang around here, possibly? If all they need is writing help, I am a fairly competent writer.
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>>71420
The in-game [Credits] list everyone that has contributed and what it was they did, so not hard to check.
They pop in now and then
>>71418
>Just kind of a missed opportunity to not put in a magical girl staff/dress as a weapon/armor
There is a dress, indeed tailored by the temple's sole resident after she's had a few days' time to get her creative juices flowing.
>>71420
I'm still here, for what it's worth, keeping up with the general goings of the thread.
It's been six years now since anything concerning magical girls has been written. I don't think there's any more coming. But I commend that one anon who's been holding out hope and reminding me once or twice a year that there are people who for some reason want magical girls in CoC. Futile as your vigil may be, you are not forgotten. Could've taken a shot at writing and done it yourself by now though, you lazy retard.
The whole idea was a questline you could stumble upon while [Explore]ing. It had a lush meadow with a pair of white chairs you would find a non-copyrighted dress on, a roaming Walpurgis-like superboss you inadvertently let loose to get fucked over by, a selection of nightmares to be had while wearing the dress, and Marielle actually doing something and helping you cleanse that dress to stop the bad dreams. Should all still be backed up on mega, here: https://mega.nz/folder/vwsTTKTK#cqIFLXjohkoH89yZY7WJ4w/folder/exsxwCoa
It was rather silly, and ultimately scrapped for that reason, besides scope bloat. What was left then was only a replica dress in Marielle's inventory, and whatever was already there in the temple. I had a dungeon in mind as well, to bring the quest to a close, but that never made it onto paper. Follow an ancient trail below ground, fight through traps and shadows of long-dead girls to find something unexpected (???) at the end.
Someone else also wrote some related stuff. My memory is fuzzy on it, but I believe it involved QB visiting you during the Ingnam prologue? Never made it anywhere substantial, either.

At the end of the day though, I think mahou shoujo in all their wonderfully frilly nonsense, as fun as they are to write, don't fit the theme of the game and are better left to more or less subtle references at best. Not that shit like the clockwork shield is particularly subtle.
>>71422
Reel in that scope a bit and I honestly think there's a lot of potential there, tone be damned. What is the tone of this game, anyway? Dark lewd fantasy? For as much as I don't think the game takes itself too seriously, it allows for a wide variety of tones to exist inside it, like a smorgasbord -- a little of this, a little of that, all contained in neat little regimented boxes, which is itself the design of the actual "game" portion of this game.
No need for QB, no need for a dress nightmare catalyst. Honestly, I think a simple dungeon located beneath the temple would've been perfectly serviceable, with a notebook containing a dress design to give to the tailor cutie and a choice between a classic magical girl staff and a more on-the-nose rose-adorned bow as a dungeon completion reward -- maybe with a scene where you get cuddled by the last vestige of that "goddess" as a reward for cleansing her temple and get a perk from it that stays with you. Point is, if something like that is in the game, is it really such a bad thing? Is it so tone-breaking? Honestly, I don't see it. Game needs more cuteness, and magical girls are condensed cuteness. I lost most all my restraint the moment Alices were added to the game as a generic mob type.

Really, what I'd like are common encounterable magical girl mobs to spar and lez out with, or, better yet, a cute, romanceable magical girl you can give pure succ milk and purple eggs to to give huge, dress-stretching mahonkers and panty-stretching madonkers, but yeah, maybe *that's* going too far. A small dungeon, though? Perfectly reasonable.
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>>71422
Marielle cute. Is she still on the fence about trap dick confusing her sexuality?
Also is she the explanation for the profileration of pantsu in a fantasy setting

Also it can't have been over six years don't do that to me.
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>>71424
pic related
>>71422
>Not that shit like the clockwork shield is particularly subtle.
I think a good reference doesn't have a noticeable impact if you don't know it. People who have never heard of Madoka will notice the shield kicks ass and is a strong item. Teenage goddess in a frilly dress next to a young zombie girl is a good reference, it's strange if you don't get it but it doesn't feel out of place for the vibe of the location.
I had no issue buying there was some old culture that revered a now forgotten deity and the history is simply lost now. Easily could have been a race that fell into Maraeth like the spider-kin and over a few generations got assimilated into the nonsense.
>>71423
>common encounterable magical girl mobs
That level of delusional cosplaying fits in with the fetish cult I think. Unironic magical girls sounds silly mode at best unless you can tie them in with or write in something to ground them in the setting. Maraeth is a genre soup but most of the stuff in it has a reason for existing, usually involving portals, demons, magic, or natives eg: spiders/champ, bizarre/phoenix, sand witches/Circe, Amily/kitsune respectively.
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>>71425
pic. I'm retarded.
>>71425
>unless you can tie them in with or write in something to ground them in the setting
I mean, sure. I honestly think if you position them as an "order" or something like that, then they occupy a similar space to the Sand Witches, which have been in the game all the way since vanilla -- only with a slightly sillier aesthetic. If you listen to their lore, they're bolstering their ranks specifically to fight the demons and despite how wide-reaching the implications of that sound, they don't end up having any real impact on the plot because the game just shrugs and goes "yeah, they're THERE, but they don't matter because you're the hero who's going to pre-empt everybody by cranking the big bad demon's neck first." In other words, you have a group of powerful, sexual, magically-enabled women dedicated in theory to some kind of noble ideal (defeating the demons), all under the command of a central figure. Just swap around some words (and swap quantity for quality), and you could have an order of magical girls in a similar position -- maybe even of particular interest to Corrupted Champs who see that, immediately think "Tags: Corruption," and want to pervert it for their own ends. Or perhaps there *was* such an order, but it got corrupted by the Cult before you arrived, and it's up to you to free them from that to be heroines of justice once again? Could even have a team of 5 be a miniboss for the cult, and if you give them all some pure honey, they undergo purification and start renovating the place after you end up clearing it out.

Point is there's surely several ways to make it make sense. I don't think it's any silier in concept than, say, the early-game factory dungeon.
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>>71427
>I don't think it's any silier in concept than, say, the early-game factory dungeon.
Yeah as long as it has a viable explanation like some you've given. I'm just saying if it was a random stand alone encounter without any lead up or follow up it would be very out of place. It can fit as long as you do something to work it in but it doesn't automatically fit the setting stand alone like the satyr or something. Satyr are almost unconnected to any other content but they don't need an explanation to fit in.
>>71415
 Scathing. But I won't let it deter me. You do make a good point about the monsters though.
>>71423
>What is the tone of this game, anyway? Dark lewd fantasy?
That's what I've tried to work with, mostly.
As others have pointed out, the justification for it all is a real snag here. I don't have much to add. Roaming magical girls in full getup to fight and romance should be out of question. That's where it would stop being a mere reference and be absurdly blatant, even to someone unaware of mahou shoujo.
I'd more or less dodge the blatancy by doing what you pointed at, and keep it self-contained within a temple dungeon, likely with the girls themselves in varying states of non-aliveness and you picking up hints and clues in the dust to piece the puzzle together. I've been wanting to do something more active with Marielle, and indulging in dungeon diving alongside her is one of the more reasonable ideas I've scribbled down. Not sure about the setup though. What to do if you've killed her, or pissed her off, or how to keep her from discovering the dungeon herself and going in there solo.
And there's still a timeline issue. The temple so far implies a venerable age, but humans came to Mareth only what, a few decades ago? I had an explanation for that set up, though it hinged on the Walpurgis boss, wherein during their war with it, they dimension shifted as a last resort to seal it away from their world, and ended up in everyone's favourite involuntary migrant realm. Unfortunately, I think that's a card that shouldn't be played willy-nilly, and I already did it with the zombie. So it'd feel a bit much, so close together.

>>71424
>Is she still on the fence about trap dick confusing her sexuality?
Was she ever?
And she certainly has helped spread the gospel, despite her wearing none. I once had the thought that she could be a principal supplier of clothes to Alices, if Satan ever cared to explain where the hell they source their tights and stockings and fairytale frilliness from.
>>71434
>Alices
How would they pay for it? They're pathetic creatures
Is Marielle just horny for little girls and donating it to them?
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>>71434
Last I recall Marielle kinda goes for femboys sorta but the actual dicking part was unpleasant. Or maybe i'm forgetting
Also Marielle pantsu when, I need it
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>>71435
>Marielle is a repressed lolicon
fund it
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>>71435
The Circle of Alices convenes once a fortnight to throw all their hard-earned gems together and purchase the most lavish of garments for the few (un)lucky members of their ranks chosen to make a move on the champion.
>>71436
You do get the occasional blush or awkwardness out of her if your femininity is high, even while dicked. But you're still romantically and sexually dead to her as soon as she's aware of the thing. Or at least you're meant to be.
Guess I should've gone with something more elaborate than a plain femininity check on those little variations, but that was too much to work out at the time. And looking it at, that initial talk about her sexuality and your potential chances with her is still way too ambiguous if you've got a cock, even after several revisions. That might be where you got that impression.
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>>71439
I might just have bad reading comprehension, it came off as 'vaguely wanting to try trap dick but finding it a bit unpleasant', given she lets you put it in IIRC. There's a joke about the kinsey scale somewhere there, but if she's meant to be pure dyke that's fine. Makes you wonder if she'd resent toys, really.
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>>71437
She's already a lesbian
being a lolicon is just a given at that point
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>>71440
 In what scene would she let you if she knew you had a penis?
 My character is a female-presenting Herm and can't so much as kiss Marielle since she's put off by that fact. She says she knows that my character is a woman, but can't get around the obstructing appendage.
 There are dubcon scenes where she can have vaginal sex (when she falls asleep while you're both trying out the sweater, as well as convincing her to relieve you while you're both bathing in the Temple), but it's clear that she's pretty unhappy when she wakes up in the first case, and she's clearly reluctant in the second.
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>>71453
There's a bath scene where you can fuck her, iirc.
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Happy Halloween, here's a rough draft of a glacial rift demon I call a mora
https://pst.moe/paste/ufaxxe
Incoherent amalgamation of several ideas I've had and several myths. I think the tail makes it too "busy" of a design. But I do like the thematic angle of the gentle sweeping on the snow that erases her steps. It suits the origins of this.
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>>71449
Scene where if you are a loli and she makes you the magical girl dress she sobs a bit because you look so fuckign cute on it when?
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Most things on the Chronicles is coded or getting coded, writers and proofers rise up, make me go into the code mines again
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>>71463
>Most things on the Chronicles
Most of the [Finished] things
>>71453
No wonder her father killed himself after he found out the undead bitch of a daughter he was raising turned out to be a genetic dead end
>>71463
Give me a couple years and I should have something for you
Alice!
I'm going to Alice.
I wish Marielle had more friendship stuff, as a guy i want to talk more to her and headpat her a lot.
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>>71434
>Alices, if Satan ever cared to explain where the hell they source their tights and stockings and fairytale frilliness from.
Honestly i just think it works like in touhou, where the fairies are somewhat implied to spawn and respawn with frilly dresses

>>71461
Would be funny if she really got into it if you talked to her as a loli and dressed as a mahou shoujo
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>>71460
Happy Halloween. We do need more genuinely frightening but fuckable demons. Don't think it's quite too busy, but I also cheated by looking it up first. Would the tail ever come into play, gameplay-wise?
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>>71475
What do you think would be possible candidates? I like Marielle and the dullahan but they did lose out on the spooky factor in the undead department. First thing that comes to mind are a rusalka or a kelpie encounter at the lake (I'm a sucker for mythology) for something more malicious. The mora there gives me wendigo vibes.
>>71476
Go for kelpie. Their sticky whatever that leaves you stuck mounting them has potential for being stuck mounting them
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>>71476
A nix or a vodyanoy, if we're keeping it to water spirits. Otherwise, something like a namahage? Japanese demons manage to be goofy rather than scary, more often than not. A kasha could be cool, if we're not straight-up plagiarising Touhou again, or a drider corrupted into a disease-spewing jorougumo.
>>71477
Unsure if it would be male or female, bestial or humanoid. Though now that you say that it gives me an idea for a scene with a substantial variation. Need high enough strength to not get stuck or high enough toughness to hold you breath as you get pulled into the lake. Otherwise it ends up being a loss like the taunt choice for Sand Witches.
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Thoughts on adding a bounty board to Tel'Adre that gives the player mini collection quests for gems? For example, collect X item(s) and turn them in for slightly more (or sometimes less) gems than they'd usually sell for and some xp.
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>>71481
I've never found myself thinking "You know what this game needs? Meaningless fetch quests." It wouldn't hurt anything, but it seems unnecessary, it's not like it's hard to get gems or xp.
>>71476
didnt satan make a joke scene of the MC fucking a eldritch abomination on the void and impregnating it?
>>71481
Maybe if it is actual bounties to kill/defeat some demons? But that would involve writing characters to be hunt.
Only MMO-tier fetch quests are really uncessary.
Here is more Marble-related content with a bit of Jojo for added measure.
Marble Kids and Jojo https://pst.moe/paste/ipjqrz
And two small reworks, like another anon had suggested.
Standard lesbian sex rework https://pst.moe/paste/qwhoiw
AddictionSex rework https://pst.moe/paste/dyltbt
They change the lesbian version to not use a toy on your first time ever with her unless you aren't a virgin.
>>71457
 Correct, as I mentioned in the post you replied to, but it's not exactly completely consensual, as you have to goad her pretty hard to do it, and it's clear that she's unhappy with the arrangement the entire time. Ejaculating inside her further causes her to show her disgust, though she's subtle about it.
 On another note, I've decided to bring together my original suggestion posts and edit them based on feedback I've received:
>Strange Fox / Vix, the Cursed Kitsune Groupie:
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 ( Took advice from >>71371 )
 <- Reduced stages of age regression to 3:
~ (Adult (Feral)  / Young Adult (Anthro / Mimi)
~ Juvenile (Feral) / Teen (Anthro / Mimi)
~ Kit (Feral) / Small Child (Anthro / Mimi)
<- Reduced stages of DeTherium to 3:
~ Semi-Feral (basic stage, like a Feral fox with semiopposable digits and a limited ability to stand / walk upright, think a Felyne from Monster Hunter or the Moon Dog from D&D: https://tinyurl.com/5xkyr6vc )
~ Anthro
~ Kemonomimi / Foxgirl/Boy (See post for explanation)
<- Reduced Intelligence scale to two options:
~ Off (Behaves like a Feral fox, even if Anthro / Mimi)
~ On (Behaves like a person, and talks, even if Feral)
<- Added Boss Fight for initial quest end, which reoccurs with stronger difficulty for each trip to the Shrine
<- Vix now starts as Female but her sex can be altered to Herm / Male and back again with Purified Draft and Purified Milk as desired
>Elei, the Limnaiad:
 https://pst.moe/paste/wcnhva
<Consolidated all three posts into a master doc and did some editing to make it look nice
>Sea Angels, and the Devilfish:
 https://pst.moe/paste/yljouq
<Removed connection to Eleionomae from the Good End reward; instead gives you a Perk that lets you summon a root from Marae's tree to whip enemies. Bad End reward is a horn that can be made into a wand which boosts Black Magic.
>>71480
 That reminds me...I don't know whether it was in another mod, or even the Vanilla game, but I think I remember a recurring battle against a Ghoul / Ghul in, I think, the Desert.
 It approached the Champion from behind in the form of a dust devil and manifested as a large, ghostly, non-anthropomorphic hyena before attacking.
 I don't remember whether or not it could be sexed after defeating it; if it could be, then it definitely changed to more Anthro proportions for it, as I recall this version of the game was tetchy about Feral content. (Akbal turned Anthro for sex.)
 There were also recurring battles against packs of regular Feral hyenas that couldn't be sexed after combat.
 If someone could track down those encounters somewhere, they could possibly prove to be interesting to do something with re: having more Feral sex scenes.
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>>71489
Pretty sure thats just a mimic
Ghouls don't shapeshift
>>71489
The ghoul was one of the enemies revamp lazily threw in with zero scenes/content. It was in this mod for a while too, but removed a long time ago along with other low-quality revamp additions.
It appeared as a normal hyena at first, then when you attacked it, it turns out the hyena was just an illusion and it was a ghostly creature with a heavily randomized appearance (every body part was random and could be almost anything).
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>>71495
>ghostly creature with a heavily randomized appearance (every body part was random and could be almost anything).
That's literally not something a Ghoul is capable of doing
What the fuck were those revamp faggots think they were doing
Do they think a zombie and a vampire are the same thing? What the actual fuck man
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>>71501
It's not that much of a stretch, just a mishmash of different ghoul myths with some generic monstrousness thrown in (turning into multiple animals instead of one).
They (as djinn, in some myths) are already shapeshifters that take the form of different animals and, notably, humans with animal features, so it just takes that idea to an extreme and mixes a bunch of different animals.
>>71051 (OP) 
Did anyone save Quiet browser's/ LukaDoc stuff from CoC/FoE/TITS? Looks like they purged all their shit back in 2017. Wish I saved it.
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>>71488
It's a pity because I like the idea of testing her sexuality a little with androgyny but not her going 'WOW I LOVE COCK NOW' just really on the fence, but maybe the 'it's okay if it's you' meme is gay
I still want some kind of monkey girl in game though. And/or collecting pantsu. Gotta make a wife shrine.
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>>71501
It's closer to the original Arabian ghul rather than its current iteration though it probably could've been done more cleverly. Writing a shape-shifting enemy in a game like this seems like a pretty tall order. 
Now that I think about it, the desert wouldn't hurt for an additional enemy since I imagine many people choose to make the witches stop attacking.
>>71507
>monkey girl
I'd be surprised if it wouldn't end up being genderbent Sun Wukong.
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>>71509
I'm not against that. Reminds me of someone I think could fit in Maraeth pretty comfortably.
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>>71510
I'm not against that, though I was thinking something like Makura
>>71510
I remember that doujin. I'm not a footfag but a monkey girl obviously would need a foot scene.
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>>71512
Unoriginal. We need a scene where you plow her doggystyle while she uses her hand-like feet to fondle and or finger the champ. Feet like those could pinch nipples while performing cunnlingus. I'm not even into feet, I just feel like you got something unique you should leverage it.


Maybe I should read the doujin. I only watched the hentai. Reverse rape content isn't as rare as it used to be but SJ was one of the first ones to hit so many boxes for me.
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>>71515
I can imagine that someone sticking their toes up your ass could elicit some comedic confusion.
Well if the other poster want monke they should give writing a go.
>>71512
Do we include the ofuda ripping off her pubes and the weird bisexual stuff she has going on
Come to think of it I can't think of any girl in coc with a bush
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>>71517
Crazy considering there are women literally covered in fur.
I don't remember weird bisexual stuff with SJ goku. It does remind me that the closest thing to a shotacon character we have is Issabella isn't it? Even then she is shotacon coded more than openly.
>>71518
I swear she ran a literal dyke nest of horny monkeys and fucked a few women amidst shota rape.
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>>71519
I'll check it out later for research purposes exclusively. Front and center she has a fixation on cock though, so I don't really see her caring for anything bisexual unless its a means to an end.
>>71518
I might just be misremembering, it has been years. But girl on girl is always hot, even if Po-ju got me into loran
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>>71517
The only one I can think of is the milk bath girl from the desert cave.
>Between her lithe legs and childbearing hips is her cunt, a short stripe of dark, downy hair drawing your attention just above it.
Not even the designated milf Sophie has any, something to keep in mind for the future.
>mfw only anal in the doujin is at the end and it's peak
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>>71521
girl on girl never did anything for me, but I'm probably odd one out there.
>>71522
Personally I prefer it this way but even I have to acknowledge the injustice the bush enjoyers face in this game.
>only anal is tentacles
wack. the priest getting rimmed was hotter.
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>>71523
Ideally there'd be something for everyone you know? I'll even acknowledge footfags and armpitfags not getting a piece of the pie.
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You may not know, but I'm quite a fan of ball-jointed dolls. I've messed around with how I might write one as a character, but shelved it as a "probably think about it if I make an ivory harem dungeon"
But somebody has been talking about making a doll character, so I want to share what my idea was.
https://pst.moe/paste/wynpxd
>>71473
My headcanon is the mansion kistunes love forcing Alices to play dress-up and let them leave dressed properly. But nothing is canon until it is in the game itself. I only wrote the one where they play dress-up with Telly as a shitpost.
>>71475
What do you mean looking it up first? A mora from slavic myth has no visual elements in common with it. The tail is mentioned in one of the attacks, I thought? It's mostly just an element of their backstory though.
>>71476
>wendigo vibes
It's hard not to. I tried making the concept from scratch, the backstory informing the design. The hooves and antelope elements are reflective of being a prey animal, and antelope in particular because I was looking for ones known for a "sad-looking" face. Emaciated is just obvious. But then the only thing making it not the modern cryptid variant of wendigo is that the horns aren't antlers.
A little disappointing. I'm not sure what it is, but wendigos being pop culture cryptids makes me less inclined to borrow their aesthetics.
>Rusalka
I did actually have an idea in mind for a drowned woman with elements of mantis and sea slug.
But for the myth, doesn't sound that frightening, just a sopping broad innit? Bit plain. You can make a spooky encounter out of that, but it quickly loses luster given the context it is in, I think.
>Kelpie
The sticky horse? Well, it's distinct. I'm not interested, myself, but I think it has traction
>>71518
>closest thing to a shotacon character we have is Issabella isn't it?
Probably. Marble and maybe Sophie have elements of it? 
>>71524
Oh yeah, that's something I forgot. Armpit sex for the doll girl. Important to fixate on those ball joints.
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>>71525
I don't care for dolls but that's a neat idea though my first instinct is to 'save' her. Enough lethicite and she can become a real girl!
>But for the myth, doesn't sound that frightening, just a sopping broad innit? Bit plain. 
That's just me being creatively bankrupt and being pretty happy with plain. I do however see the notion that a writeup should stand out in some capacity.
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>>71507
>I like the idea of testing her sexuality a little with androgyny
I get the appeal, but it's just not within her character. She's much too old and set in her ways to still be on the fence about something as basic as being fine or not with cock.
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>>71526
oh, I forgot to mention, I would name her Copélia after the famous old ballet about the dancing doll whose beauty captured a man's heart and he nearly lost his soul in his effort to have her for himself. It is pronounced koh-peh-lia, so I spell it as I do to make it clear, but it's actually a double p in the original French. I think if I spell it that way, most will read it like kah as in copper. Also, she copes. Her personality is all coping. I like that cope is in her name, even if that's silly.
I didn't find the name until later on, when I was searching for anything to tie into her name beside something silly like naming her Fifi after polymer clay. I was genuinely shocked how perfect the old french performance connected to it.
Ramble aside
>happy with plain
I think plain is good, but it's also hard to be creative and easy to be plain, so I try to avoid plain where I can so I have license to make plain where I either feel it really is the best choice or absolutely cannot think of anything more creative.  Succubi are a little plain themselves. Ah, look... It's a woman, but she has horns and is solid white. And there, a woman, but she has horns and is solid purple. Aye, that one there's a woman, but she has horns and is solid blue.
Oh look at that
That's a woman with horns and she is red.
Look at this. It's a woman. And this one is wet
There are a lot of things that work well without deviating a lot from plain, and a lot of things you can do in presentation and personality, but you see the point I'm getting at.
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>>71522
>The thought of stopping yourself doesn't even cross your mind. On the contrary, when you locate the little tuft of pubic hair
>Sinking your hands into the girl's small, pert butt, you pull her close to you, wrap your lips around her labia, and press your nose to her tiny bud and soft patch of pubic hair
Zombie pubes.
>She continues to rise, drops of moisture sliding down the smooth green skin of her torso as her body ascends from the lake until she's up only to her waist, then up further so that her well trimmed pubic hair is on display, the red carpet clearly matching the curtains
Kaiju hair, even well-trimmed it's probably enough to bury your entire body in.

If we assume shitposts are canon (and why would we not?), I vaguely remember Telly having a fluffy bush.
>>71528
Yeah no I get it. It's also easier to come up with things for ideas I like.
Thought about the doll modifications? Plug and play so to speak.

>>71529
I stand corrected. Trying to go through all the characters and scenes is a little tedious.
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>>71529
I know I didn't write that shitpost, if such a thing existed.
Telly is small even by Alice standards, which is an average 4'2 (taller than Jojo), Telly is 3'10"
Telly is the size and proportions of a 6-year-old. Not even the peach fuzz of early girlhood there.
>>71530
>Doll modifications
I'm not opposed to it. If I were writing it, I'd probably not bother because changing her parts is work and I think you really have to get them from the artist who made her, which is yet more work to write.
But not penetrative parts. Besides the parts bonded over flesh—her face, essentially—I think rigid, unfeeling porcelain.
A gentle and soft flow in the shape that puffs out to denote her vulva, a small hint of a clit cleanly detailed in, and painted with subtle hues. Something to command a desire from the viewer, but deny the reality. I think it's good for her character to be literally unfuckable, not just unable to feel it
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>>71527
I ain't protesting the 'GOD WHY DOESN'T SHE LOVE COCK LIKE MY PORNO PROTAGS' cause I hate that cliche, I think I genuinely just misinterpreted what the scene was going for, as it's confusing as to why she'd let you go that far, so my guess was curiousity from androgyny. If i'm wrong it's fine.
>>71529
The amount of smut where suspension of disbelief stops at pubes tires me the fuck out
>well ,it could be fluffy and any colour we want ,but even in this fantasy setting you get black razor wire, because that's just not believable otherwise

>>71531
I'M NOT INTO DOLL JOINTS I'M NOT INTO DOLL JOINTS I'M NOT INTO DOLL JOINTS
Fucking Arbuzdubesh gave me a thing for the weird puppet mouth
imagine it flapping on your dick like a change slot
>oh-idon't-feel-quite-like-myself
>>71434
Come on, a little marielle pantsu? Just a bit?
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>>71532
>weird puppet mouth
I don't know what the other writer interested in doing a doll would do, but personally I'd just make her face a middleground between porcelain and skin, with her able to slightly open her mouth and use her tongue without need of hinges or exposed joint. Like it says in the doc, her head and heart are her, with clay only bonded to the skin to be uniform with the rest.
>I'M NOT INTO DOLL JOINTS
LIAR
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>>71532
>I hate that cliche
As do I. Dicking lesbians is blessing for boners, dicking lesbians straight is a blight upon the universe. And I wasn't thinking you were whining or anything, don't worry.
Which scene exactly was it that threw you off? And what about it did so?
I think I'll already have to touch up the initial sex talk where you make her admit to being a dyke and ask her if she's down to fuck, even if you're a man. While she has her reasons to not firmly shoot you down right there, she should be less ambiguous than she sounds right now. It ought to be clearer that the entire initiative for fucking her comes from the player, and she's just not saying "no", up until a certain point.
>a little marielle pantsu?
Don't know how I'd do it. At least not in a way that makes sense and doesn't get me tangled in scope creep. I have thought about coaxing her into modelling her underwear collection as well, but that's a whole lot of scenes and a disgusting amount of variations to write. And then I'd probably want lewd options for most of them, at which point it would double her current word count. I'd never be done.
Best you have right now is her lifting the magical girl dress for you. No pantsu, though.
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>>71535
Hard to explain I guess, I suppose i'm used to things kinda shutting you down hard if the other person hates something absolutely, so the fact she lets you put it in even if she kinda despises penises is the ambiguity. Is it because she has feelings for the PC despite their gender, or is it because the PC kinda put her on the spot and her personality finds it hard to be assertive? Did she want to see how it felt? What's special about the player? Like I might just be a retard and got the wrong impression, but it has been years since I read it. I doubt it really needs a change, beyond maybe her talking about it after rather than just most awkward bath ever to stop it feeling like a sore wound between you.
Thematically I find something interesting about people who are romantically compatible but sexually incompatible, if that makes sense; she can't get over that part even if she holds deep affection. It's bitter.
Doll footjobs when, though. ..or was that already in? Fuck.
>scope creep
A dogeza where you ask her to just wear panties for her one time and lift her dress because seeing something like that reinvigorates your hero's soul. Perhaps too memey. As for lewd options, while I wish there was a pantyjob somewhere in the game, i'd be happy just to see slightly embarassed/aroused doll, but those are dreams. Don't feel pressured on my account.
>>71525 
>Kitsune forcing alices to play dress up
Desire to know more intensifies
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>>71533
I might've just been thinking aloud on how that weird puppet mouth gives me a whyboner, rather than trying to alter your character.
Though now I kinda want to see a great fusilli knockoff who runs a brothel of puppets that just kinda stay limp on the bed most the time. All different species and weird monsters, but not quite right, obvious joints and simplification of features, strange textures.
It raises questions. Does he have to animate them when you get down to it? Where did he get all these puppets? Why are they so varied? How the hell is he turning a profit in the land of anyone being down to sex in five minutes? Why do some of them look familiar?
So here's a pitch that I alluded to in the Eleionomae section of my post collection in >>71488 , but only just got around to completing it, as it took me a while to compile:
 I like to call it:
 >Reigning Catsharks and Dogfish
 https://pst.moe/paste/pnsujz
 <Overview, part one:
 Meet Kitty the Catshark, a quite unlucky Loli Tigershark who's far from what you would picture when you think of her species.
 Unlike her sisters, she's kinda' shrimpy, meek, and somewhat lacking in the below-the-belt department.
 Will the Champion help this underdog prove that size isn't everything and reach the top of the food chain, or is she doomed to being a plaything of her sisters and being subject to repeated Bratty Correction by her aquatic neighbors?
 Time will tell!
 <And part two:
 If you thought Kitty was unusual for a Sharkmorph, then prepare to meet her offspring, Rex the Dogfish.
 - Rex is just as runty-looking as Kitty (though still seeming to pack a bit more muscle)
 - Rex is a big, sensitive softie who would rather talk than fight.
 - Rex is a Shota.
 Wait, what?
 That's right, unlike the rest of his siblings, Rex is a Shota Sharkboi, which surprises his entire family once they realize this, as male Sharkfolk have become something of a rarity in recent times, necessitating the evolution of Tigersharks to carry on the species.
 Through some stroke of luck, Rex managed to come out a boy, though this comes out in high risk of being unbalanced by his unaggressive nature, putting him up against his competitive sisters.
 Will this puny pup succeed in his attempts to become Top Dog?
 Or will he be put in his place with little more than a whimper?
 Or will he throw all expectations aside and come up with a shocking third option to display his dominance?
 Only the Champion can find out!
Screwed up some formatting in my first post so I tried to delete it.
So here's a pitch that I alluded to in the Eleionomae section of my post collection in >>71488 , but only just got around to completing it, as it took me a while to compile:
 I like to call it:
<Reigning Catsharks and Dogfish
 https://pst.moe/paste/pnsujz
<Overview, part one:
 Meet Kitty the Catshark, a quite unlucky Loli Tigershark who's far from what you would picture when you think of her species.
 Unlike her sisters, she's kinda' shrimpy, meek, and somewhat lacking in the below-the-belt department.
 Will the Champion help this underdog prove that size isn't everything and reach the top of the food chain, or is she doomed to being a plaything of her sisters and being subject to repeated Bratty Correction by her aquatic neighbors?
 Time will tell!
<And part two:
 If you thought Kitty was unusual for a Sharkmorph, then prepare to meet her offspring, Rex the Dogfish.
 - Rex is just as runty-looking as Kitty (though still seeming to pack a bit more muscle)
 - Rex is a big, sensitive softie who would rather talk than fight.
 - Rex is a Shota.
 Wait, what?
 That's right, unlike the rest of his siblings, Rex is a Shota Sharkboi, which surprises his entire family once they realize this, as male Sharkfolk have become something of a rarity in recent times, necessitating the evolution of Tigersharks to carry on the species.
 Through some stroke of luck, Rex managed to come out a boy, though this comes out in high risk of being unbalanced by his unaggressive nature, putting him up against his competitive sisters.
 Will this puny pup succeed in his attempts to become Top Dog?
 Or will he be put in his place with little more than a whimper?
 Or will he throw all expectations aside and come up with a shocking third option to display his dominance?
 Only the Champion can find out!
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So I got the red bodysuit. What's next?
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>>71509
CoC2 does have them. Not sure if you're able to transform into them but there ARE monkey people. I do agree on them being in this mod, but if you want a frame of reference (or to know what to stay away from when writing lore), the reading material's there.
Anyone ever thought of dinosaur people? Something to add to the plains or the swamp?

I'm thinking something like the Ceros tribe. Stalwart, rough around the edges and suspicious of strangers out he gate, these tribespeople will only trust a hard head and an even harder battle fought. Their village runs on a certain hierarchy that you are either born into or transformed into: Monoceros (Small horned, single pronged Ceros males and females treated as the bottom rung submissives. Nicknamed 'mini's'.), Biceros (Average horned, two pronged Ceros. Higher in the hierarchy, but still answers to the...), Triceros (Large horned, three pronged Ceros, the ones who run shit. If you plan on standing up to them, you better have a minimum of three horns yourself.) and the Big Horn (Village Chief. The biggest horns out of the Triceros rung and the strongest fighter/hardest head in the village.). Triceros who challenge the Big Horn will risk it all in a battle of headbutting. First to fall unconscious will admit defeat and must drink from a special Ceros Flask that contains a specially concocted tea. This tea will reduce the the size of the Ceros who drink it and remove 2 of the 3 horns on their head. The hore will stay the same size as it is as a symbol of loss and a reminder of what they used to have before they challenged the Chief/were challenged by a 'bigger horn'.

Transformatives come in two versions:

Ceros Flask: A flask containing a mixture of Ceros dandelion and berries from the plains for taste in order to become closer the Ceros people. Repeated swigs may increase your rung.

Ceros Tea: A flask containing tea leaves steeped in spiked water and 'essence of bitch'. You are what you eat, as they say...though in this case, drink.
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>>71541
Let them fuck you in the ass
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>>71543
>Anyone ever thought of dinosaur people? Something to add to the plains or the swamp?
You mean more flightless giant chicken people?
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>>71543
I feel dinosaurs are pretty niche and they'd kind of stick out. CoC is fairly firmly in the medieval fantasy postcode and whilst there are things that might be considered exceptions like minotaurs or the sphinx they blend in more. The game is pretty light on scalies out of the basilisks and Ember.
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>>71546
Does a triceratops look like it evolves into a chicken to you?
>>71547
But you guys wanted to add frog girls despite there already being tongue slinging chameleons in it already and monkey people a pretty much hairy humans with tails and opposable toes. If that's the bar, why not triceratops people?
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>>71545
Is that what you let 'em do? Hey, there's no shame in it.

5 bucks is 5 bucks, after all.
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>>71549
I'm just one anon with an opinion, if you write it I doubt there'd be riots. The frogs and chameleons were way before my time besides.
Instead of dinosaurs I'd go with crocodiles myself. They're in a similar ballpark and would fit well in the swamp or the bog.
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>>71551
Alright, then Ceros in the plains and Crocs in the swamp. Question is: Are you steering for a DK reference, how are you stick with a different theme for your croc people.
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Damn text to speech.
>>71552
A DK reference? I was just thinking that you've got swamp puppies in places like Florida
>>71540
 I'm thinking of maybe writing an expansion post where Kitty can have the same autopenetration options as Rex can.
Also having Kitty get an encounter where the Champion investigates strange noises coming from their Cabin and finds Kitty having sex with Akky (either domming him by sitting on the Champion's bed, holding Akky in her lap, and penetrating him anally in the fleshlight-position, or letting Akky dom her by having him mount her doggy-style), giving them the option to either:
 - Watch, then either
 ~ Leave without making themself known
 ~ Step in
 - Or step in immediately, then either
 ~ Encourage her to carry that on, since you find it arousing and she's training herself in Dominance, raising her self-esteem (and Dominance rating if she was domming Akky)
 ~ Or scold her, telling her that Akky's your pet and you won't stand for your daughter doing something so un-Alphalike, lowering her self-esteem and Dominance rating.
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>>71540
>This carries over into her sexual characteristics as well, with her breasts barely managing to reach A-cups
Her sisters are prepubescent girls who are still flat because they haven't started developing yet, and you say she's supposed to be noticeably smaller and younger-looking than they are. A-cups then would be huge, basically oppai loli. Having any breasts at all would make her more developed than her sisters.

I'm skeptical of the idea in general, but that part really stood out as something that either wasn't thought through at all or shows a lack of understanding of the existing content you're adding to.
>>71555
>or letting Akky dom her by having him mount her doggy-style
Cat penises aren't very big at all (I doubt Akky would still have his gigantic demon cock when he's completely turned into an ordinary cat otherwise), and humans have fleshy butts that would get in the way, so I'm not sure doggy style would be very plausible unless she was actually baby-sized and not just toddler-sized. Missionary position would make more sense (even for anal sex), it doesn't have to be doggy style to be submissive.
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>>71537
>is it because the PC kinda put her on the spot and her personality finds it hard to be assertive?
Don't want to be too specific, neither here nor in-game, rather letting readers take their own guesses, but you're asking, so this part there is the long and short of it, yes. Sprinkle in a feeling of debt, a from a mortal perspective strange and inconsistent valuing of her own body, and her liking the champion in a general sense. Or fearing, depending. I made sure that in both instances you can stick your dick into her, you're basically ambushing her, setting her up in an awkward position that places her at a mental and physical disadvantage. She would shoot you down if you approached her like a non-rapist about wanting to bone her.
And I'm not the one writing any dolls, if you think that's me. Marielle does have a footjob though, albeit a substandardly written one. I do also liken her to a doll, a couple times.
>ask her to just wear panties for her one time and lift her dress
That's an awful lot of overlap with her magical girl dress scene. Do have a look at that one, if you've not read it before. I'd rather not do the same setup twice for the same character.
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>>71559
Fair enough, I may be denser than I wish, though i'd think it's blurry to call it rapist-tier. Pressured, certainly, but then we get into what defines consent, which is a fuzzy essay land for sociologists and debatably varies between person and personality.. I mostly just wanted to clarify what you were getting at, so it feels a bit uncivil to essentially argue the point; if it fits her personality that you've written then that's logical.  Or maybe I don't wanna feel like a jerk, who knows? I just think straight/bi femboy is cute.
As for the doll, I might be conflating because she reminds me of a certain doll-joint girl in a recentish game.  I don't think I recall the magical girl scene, but honestly my memory is fucking awful. And don't sweat it otherwise, if you think she's done she's done. I'm just a weird pervert.
As a last question, apart from Marielle, what else did you write? I swear i've seen similar stuff but i'm unsure.
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>>71559
Just to clarify that stream of consciousness chain of bullshit there I have no issue with her being abjectly full dyke and you cleared up the confusion, though its interesting how indirect a person she is. Seems to work on hints and expecting the PC to not be a dense retard or a coomer. I suppose her talking about it a bit would be something but I wonder if it'd be hammering it a bit too hard and souring. Fuck if I know.
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>>71561
>i'd think it's blurry to call it rapist-tier
Sure, that was hyperbolic and humorous. She does have a straight-up rape scene in her intro, but the rest was only ever intended as dubcon at most. Whether or not a few of the world's jurisdictions may disagree.
>I don't think I recall the magical girl scene
It's just a cute dress she has on offer after a while of living in the temple. Just wait a few days, have her try it on, don't be an ass to her, and there you go.
I've not actually written much at all, come to think. You can check in the credits. Apart from Marielle, it's the mesugaki cat-sisters in Tel'Adre that have been left forever open to a continuation, and then a few miscellaneous scenes here and there, like some silly stuff for Alices, or finding a winged spear in the mountains.
>I wonder if it'd be hammering it a bit too hard and souring
That would be my fear. She's indeed quite indirect, or evasive about certain things, shaped by a genteel upbringing and her manifold experiences on the road, so she would be loath to divulge the details of her reasoning. Even what little she clarifies when trying to kiss her, she'd rather not have to say at all. Do I get that part of her across well enough? I don't know. Maybe. Hope so. But anyway, I'd think it could end up being too heavy-handed if I went and spelled it out to the player.
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>>71550
>5 bucks is 5 bucks, after all.
Sadly you gotta do it for free
CodeMonkey is still here, just so very busy with life, i am expecting to get to the mines a bit on the weekend
>>71556
>Kitty's sexual characteristics; Loli Sharks are already very young and not that much more developed
 I actually managed to space that part, which is hilarious.
 I shall take that in mind and remove that mention of her looking younger so she just looks shorter / shrimpier than her sisters.
 Y'know, like a runt of the litter situation.
>Akky domming Kitty would be more logical as missionary
 Fair point. I can take that into account while writing the pst.moe post outlining the scene proposal.
 Also thinking of making a pst.moe post outlining general sex scenes that the Champion can have with Akky, including:
 - an innocent belly rub / tummy kisses session that has the opportunity to transition into tenderly giving Akky oral
 - A scene where a Champion with a penis decides to orally penetrate Akky, leading to deep-throat with Akky's purring proving especially stimulating to the Champion
- A scene where a Champion with a vagina lets Akky sniff and lick them, potentially leading to full vaginal sex
 - A scene where a Champion with a penis sits down with Akky on their lap and starts patting him, with the option to end up aroused by the stimulation and decide to pleasure yourself with him, which is inspired by this animation: 
 https://e621.net/posts/2899368
And this short:
https://e621.net/posts/579216
 And also having two scenes with Rex (Kitty's Dogfish son) domming Akky:
 - The first one (also chronologically first, as it would unlock the ability to repeat it and let Rex have more sexual options with Akky) would:
 ~ Start with the Champion taking Rex to spend some time with Akky in the cabin, having the both of them sit on the bed and coaxing Akky over
 ~ Akky, curious about Rex, would begin to purr and start rubbing his body against the sharkboi's bare skin, causing him to start getting aroused
 ~ As blood begins to flow to Rex's penes, this catches Akky's attention and he doubles his rubbing, starting to lick them as well
 ~ Rex begins bucking his hips a bit from the stimulation
 ~ and eventually, if the Champion doesn't stop him, he grabs Akky and double-penetrates him with his coiled penes, pumping away and stirring the cat's insides as his penes wriggle and pulse inside him.
 And the second scene:
 ~ After Rex has had sex with Akky at least once, the Champion can allow him to do so again, with the Champion even having the opportunity to get involved if they have a penis
~ This would result in a spitroast scene where Akky takes Rex while simultaneously taking the Champion orally
~ This would be based on this animation:
 https://e621.net/posts/580616
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Is bimbo jojo still a thing?
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>>71562
Still, regardless I do find the idea of ambiguous feelings interesting. Conflicted, incompatible affection. Something stirred within her but fated from the start. Bitter.
>mesugaki cat sisters
Are those the one who tease you about being a pervert and have the panties? You have a talent for making me feel-self loathing, i'll give you that. I'll have a look at the magical girl scene. Makes you wish you didn't have some kinks, but c'est la vie.
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>>71567
Kick the ladder.
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>>71566
Nah, we talk about maybe doing something to bring it back, but no one ever has good ideas or the will to see it through
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>>71569
Why would you do that anon
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>>71565
 Modified version of Reigning Catsharks and Dogfish, making the necessary edits and adding Rex and Kitty's sex scenes with Akky:
 https://pst.moe/paste/rfsdns
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>>71279
>whether that's a retractable pseudopenis or a genital slit or a second vagina separate from your man-business.

What about how TiTS does it with hardlight? But magic. A spell or accessory or ring or piercing or whatever. Phantom Phallus.

Have it? Gain the option of using a mystical dong that disappears as soon as its not needed. Perhaps even a quest or event to upgrade it. From magic strapon to phantom penis that can feel to something that can impregnate (or egg-nate).

Maybe even teach it to Shouldra. Hell, make it BE Shouldra.
>>71577
 You know what that's actually not a bad idea (I'm the one who suggested the pseudopenis)
>>71577
I don't think you're getting the issue, anon. Also Shouldra is dogshit and deserves exorcism
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>>71579
 What aren't they getting?
>>71577
A not terribly new idea for anyone too lazy to chug an incubus draft any time they want a cock. The technology is there in the world of Mareth, just ask Ceraph or the factory omnibus or probably any of the other high-ranking black-magic-savvy demons. Doesn't Shouldra have scenes that make you grow a temporary cock? Correct me, it's been a while. And someone did write a concept for toy like that, years and years ago. A cum-capable strap-on, along the lines of the one that Vapula gives you, but more true to life, less hoops to jump through to get it, and able to impregnate. Same writer that came up with a village tribe of lesbian goat-girls, which the thing would have presumably played a role in. Died somewhere in the bunker-hopping, though.
But in the context of Marielle?
She'd be tolerant of the TiTS hardlight, if we're talking about fucking her with it. Likely not be thrilled, but that's just a toy, and the less real it looks and feels, the easier to persuade her to let you have your fun. As soon as we're stepping into lifelike territory though, she's going to have issues with it, up to flat-out refusing you if it's an actual dick you can snap in and out of existence. No difference to a futa, at that point.
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>>71572
 New post about sex scenes between the Champion and Akky:
https://pst.moe/paste/jewlgb
>>71488
 Extra post for Vix the Cursed Fox / Kitsune, containing a new sex scene, elaboration on the mechanic that enables 'free mode' after their quest is completed, and a post-quest interaction event with Jojo:
 https://pst.moe/paste/dmidvl
>>71572
 Extension post with some smaller 'fun facts' about Kitty and Rex:
 https://pst.moe/paste/tnuxlw
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>>71592
Forgot something minor, here's an updated version.
https://pst.moe/paste/vomkcm
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I've been working on a rework of Minerva's purification that removes her anemone dick. Usually I would remain quiet about it until I'm done, but since it changes content rather than only add new one on top, I thought it was worth presenting the plan before it's finished to gather opinions.
'Allow friendship with pure Minerva
Make her purification route available even if you aren't romancing her. An option to ask Minerva to you time to think your answer after her confession is added, allowing you to be friends without rejecting her.
'Remove her dick
Change her purification scenes to keep her breasts the same and dedick her, and change every scene accordingly to fit her new form. This means the TakeHerDick sex scene will not be available after purifying her
'Fix sex conditions
Eating her out becomes exclusive to a champ who's romancing her, since other scenes using her vagina are reserved for romance. Also added romance conditionals for dialogue in scenes that missed it despite being available for both lover and friend.
The scene where she eats the champ's pussy is added to the sex menu.
Merge revamp's updated dialogue and description
Currently, purifying Minerva changes the Appearance and Talk options to give you entirely new scenes that say very similar things to the original. That is changed to merge them with the regular versions with conditionals. The text from the revamp is also changed to fit Minerva's new dedicking purification
Fixed typos and low quality writing
I'm not the best to judge quality of writing, but Minerva's has problems with typos, wrong use of tenses and redundant statements. The revamp content in particular would not pass current quality standards. Aside from the problems mentioned, they also have lines such as
>Sitting across from her you ask about her past; how did some come to find be like she is and find this place.
>He makes several arcane-looking gestures with his hands, and taps her on the forehead (he has to give a little hop to reach that far) and then on her chest
'Human Minerva
I am actually debating myself on adding the choice to turn Minerva back to her human form. It's interesting in paper, it would require a lot of additional work making her sex scenes very different to accomodate the loss of all her monster features, and it may change her character too far away from her initial appeal. For this reason, this last point is not so much a planned feature as it's a concept that may get dropped or aproved after everything else is done.
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Second sex scene added to the extension post for Vix-
 A scene where you have a Herm Vix knot themself, with the result of impregnating themself with kits / children.
 https://pst.moe/paste/tddpvd
>>71597
 Will there be an option to keep Minerva a Herm? Just because several people find it unpopular doesn't mean everyone does.
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>>71599
Questions like this is why I wanted to talk before finishing it. Minerva's problem is with her parasite, which is a separate creature from her anemone dick, and she never actually says she's against having a dick. I want the dedicking to happen during her purification for the sake of pacing, so as not to have the player go on a fetch quest for an Egg after the big emotional payoff of healing her from corruption. However, if more than zero people want to keep her as a herm, a simple option to tell Marae to not take away Minerva's dick and balls is fine. While for Jojo I could add an option to give her a new anemone dick or to make the Egg not necessary for the ritual like in the original, though I'd still want to change how the ritual works.
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>>71020
 So here's Take 3 of my Lolipop Suggestions List:
 https://pst.moe/paste/xqhtfr
 It takes into account the feedback given by those in >>71023, >>71024, and >>71034, refer to those posts to check what was said.
 Next I plan to make a post about which Lovers should have incest scenes between the Champ and their children (as well as possibly between *them* and their children) who do not already have them.
>>71597
>allowing you to be friends without rejecting her
Satan letting you avoid sex in the romance was enough for me and fit her character, but I'm certainly not again a friendship route if you do it well.
>Change her purification to keep her breasts the same
You have to change literally everything about it, the entire thing is a colossal amount of retarded
>Human minerva
Making her de-transformed seems like a lot of work. I'm not against it, but not needed. But she shouldn't count as a non-human, she should be like isabella, where she still makes human offspring because that's how the world works. There's absolutely no reason purifcation would make her into a brand new race, that's retarded.
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>>71599
>certainly not again a friendship route if you do it well
Truth be told, it's actually more fitting for CoC lovers to need to be romanced to help them, but such cases are often something that needs sex to be solved, such as wanting kids. What it all comes to is that I think a champion who is being heroic should have the chance to heal her even if she's only a friend.
>You have to change literally everything about it
I'm aware of the issues. I began writing a list of issues I had with her current purification content, but I stopped as I kept rereading it and the list got too long.
The gist of my intented rewrite is having her purification keep her body the same as when you meet her except removing the anemone and, if Marae heals her, making her golden because I don't want to waste the sprite. This would also give a slighlly different result for a different solution. I'd also change her dialogue, specially the part in which she says
>I had long ago given up hope of being able to return to my human form, but now I am pure again
As if she had turned into a normal human despite being very far from it. While the anemone is not the same as the parasite, despite how easy it's to confuse it, it is a parasite on its own and doesn't fit a character called pure. Of course, neither should any other penis be part of a non-corrupt woman, but that would be getting into a bigger conversation. Ultimately, if the champ can have 0 corruption while having an anemone dick, Minerva should too, but other characters wouldn't ignore how strange it is,
On a related note, what is the opinion on the tower being a holy nexus that Marae can transport to? I have mixed feelings on the matter. While I would have liked it better for its origin and purpose to remain a mystery, I don't want to change the current version on a whim.
>she shouldn't count as a non-human, she should be like isabella
Yes, I wholly agree with you. Since she is like the champion, her DNA should be human after all. My intention was changing all of your babies to be only human, give a more detailed description of them if you're the one giving birth, and make it usually one baby with a chance for twins and a lower chance for triplets, instead of always being hermaphrodite twins.
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Here's a post re: how the Champion could approach some of the Camp's residents about pursuing incestuous relationships between the Champion (and possibly themselves) and their children, as well as an argument for the Pure Jojo romance path, attempting to do a better job at explaining why this should work in spite of the admittedly rushed, sloppy, rough draft that currently flounders in the Debug menu:
 https://pst.moe/paste/ivlhim
<Post centers on Amily, Ember, and Jojo
<The Champion individually presents Amily and Ember with much the same argument, reasoning that they would be able to increase the respective population of their species much faster if they involved their children in the repopulation effort
<Post contains a rough plan for a more realistic, properly paced romance with a Pure Jojo, as well as a heartfelt plea from the Champion regarding how Jojo should retire his vow of chastity to ensure that his order has a future (with the option to sex-change Jojo to Herm or Female [or at the very least make him Mpreggable] in order to work around the possibility of a Male Champion attempting to romance him)
<Post then makes a similar suggestion re: Jojo's children as it does with Amily's and Ember's
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>>71606

Oops made a mistake on the title of the post but the content is all good
>>71600
 I am one of the non-zero people who enjoys Minerva as a Herm. I think the Anemone is as much a part of her identity as a Siren as her Shark and Harpy traits (and as such is a major inspiration for my own hybrid character idea, Eleionomae the Limnaiad, who's the Hermaphrodite daughter of Kid A and one of Suwako's Frogfolk daughters).
>>71602
 Doesn't she end up having a Sharkfolk daughter after somehow becoming a Shark?
I guess what I'm saying is that, while some Beastmorphs in CoC start out as 'purebreds', it does seem that some can be Humans who end up transforming into Beastmorphs and contributing to their population through having children with 'purebreds', resulting in more Beastmorph children.
 As another example, transforming into another race does have the Champion stating that they're now a member of said race, not just a transformed human.
>>71604
 Again, I kinda' like the idea of a new race being born from romancing Minerva. It's pretty romantic, and it's consensual on both sides, not like the Harpy Queen's Phoenix Experiment.
 Re: the Tower being hallowed ground, I also like it, because it's another really romantic idea and Minerva's reaction to Marae sanctifying it is incredibly cute.
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>>71608
> Doesn't she end up having a Sharkfolk daughter after somehow becoming a Shark?
Yes that is how humans work in CoC. You give birth to your partner's race. Human x Human makes human, but Human x Anything Else makes whatever the else is.
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>>71604
>making her golden because I don't want to waste the sprite
You are not wasting the sprite, it took literally less than a minute as a non-artist to do it. It's a palette swap, it's not an original sprite. The default sprite is all that matters here.
Marae making her golden doesn't make sense as-is, and probably won't make sense without pulling stupid arbitrary bullshit. Don't hold onto that. We can re-use it as the bimbo sprite since bimbofication makes everything blonde, even feathers and stuff. Set it aside, don't worry about it.
>Tower a holy nexus
It's revamp shit. iirc, Satan said alraune are born from nodes in the roots of the goddesses where they should manifest themselves easily and quickly, but haven't in a long time. There could be the idea the tree that makes the oasis especially pure is growing from a place one of the goddesses had once been, but perhaps not as over-hyped as revamp made it. It's a place Marae has been before, not a place that is uniquely powerful.
>if you're the one giving birth
Reminder that if Minerva is about to give birth then you'll be in camp and almost see her, then find a note that says 'im giving birth come quick' and then you go to the tower and watch her shuck some twins out. Revamp is such a blight.
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>>71051 (OP) 
Got a rather long concept for a quest that lets fellow animal fuckers have more and better scenes about it, is not finished since i don't have much free time (Fuck you work) but i'm posting what i have to see what you guys thing about it, giving tips and corrections or tell me to fuck a rat and die in a ditch

https://pst.moe/paste/owzizt

Got some other ideas for other things but this particular thing got me acting unwise 

>>71409
Write fast or i'll mog you
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>>71608
>it does seem that some can be Humans who end up transforming into Beastmorphs
Last time I read about this question the answer was that no matter how much you transform you keep your human DNA outside of bad endings. You can be considered no longer human, but will still pass the genes of a human. I imagine it was done to simplify the creation of offpsring  and not have to worry about any outlandish hybrid kids.
As >>71602 said, Isabella only gives birth to humans. She originally gave birth to Lacta Bovines too, but that was removed from this mod as it contradicted canon.
The Marae scene does turn her fully into a monster, so that one would allow you to have siren children, though I still believe making the kids always herms would be strange, since the penis isn't actually a part of her body, but another creature fused to her pubis.
Anemone aside, Marae making her a real monster is something she does too easy. The revamp uses the Nexus thing as a justification, but I think changing somebody's race should require a less trivial effort than the revamp asks, that is why the flowchart mentions a lethicite. If with one she can turn Lethice human and give her a new soul, she could change Minerva's race. Using the same logic, she could make her human too, but I'm still leaving human Minerva as a concept that maybe gets picked after, to avoid scope creep.
>>71610
>Marae making her golden doesn't make sense as-is
Duly noted.
>Satan said
It does fit with the codex information. I trust the champ on that. I suppose the Nexus thing should be fine as a passing piece of lore at most.
>Revamp is such a blight
Minerva's side has some entertaining ideas at least, but the quality, as I said before, is lower than the original version. I was under the impression that it was written by a different author, but it's the same person.
>>71615
>She originally gave birth to Lacta Bovines too, but that was removed from this mod as it contradicted canon.
She originally gave birth to only humans. Revamp added the abilitiy for her to give birth to bovines, and also it requiring feeding her lethicite so that she'd lose her humanity, which doesn't make sense on the face of it.
>Marae needing a lethicite
She's not making a whole new soul though. Marae already trivially alters who own creations to be something new. Which, I add, is my personal canon for why humans always yield to the other race's genetics. Marae uplifted all these creatures to be like humans, and that means humans have a natural compatibility to propagate the native race's kin.
And then something like demons is demon mechanics, overpowering things. Goblins may not be Marae's, but they use advanced alchemy to greatly empower their breeding effect. As far as I know, there is no non-native race that doesn't have either their own unique explanation or simply isn't human-compatible(for now).
Yes it was all done to simplify breeding from a design standpoint, but it does make sense.
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>>71615
>She originally gave birth to Lacta Bovines too, but that was removed from this mod as it contradicted canon.
"Originally" as in when this mod split off from Revamp, not originally as in vanilla. Revamp threw in a lot of lore-breaking stuff and was happy to use lethicite (which Isabella just happened to carry around for some reason) as an all-purpose magical "do whatever anyone wants" token.
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>>71616
>Marae already trivially alters who own creations to be something new
Well, if that's true, that simplifies things for Marae. No need for a hard-to-get Lethicite.
>Revamp added the abilitiy
I can't navigate the original source code for the life of me, but I trust you and >>71617.
I'll be honest with you. It's been so long since I played vanilla that some aspects of it and the different mods begin to blend together.
Thanks for the correction.
>>71614

Seems good but initiating the quest seems awkward. Any chance of starting it with a random encounter somewhere? Like someone's camp in the Forest/Deepwoods, for example.

>or tell me to fuck a rat
Well, now that you've mentioned it...
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>>71619
>Seems good but initiating the quest seems awkward.
I know it feels a bit out of the way, but i wanted it to give more spotlight to Aunt Nancy since i think she's very under used, besides the trope of the barkeeper that shares old stories that turn out to be true is interesting for me and could also be used by other authors as a way to introduce their own stories and creatures while giving more exposition and dialogue that wouldn't be possible if you just stumbled into it.

>Any chance of starting it with a random encounter somewhere?
I had that idea when starting out, but as i wrote the rough draft i noticed it lacked a little something somewhere, and after researching some more about werebeasts and reading some novels and writs about them i got the idea of giving Aunt Nancy the first step so people would interact with more NPCs in the future, like someone could give the weaponsmith dialogue about a "Legendary weapon that was lost in the Volcanic Crag" or having Callu The Otter give warnings about a new creature that has been spotted on the lake and you later find them both fighting and you can rescue Callu and she becomes a follower in your camp, things like that.

>Like someone's camp in the Forest/Deepwoods, for example.
Would fit, but besides Lumber, Tentacle Beasts, Kitsunes and the odd Goblin there's not much to find on those places really, and just starting to find the werebears there could feel a bit anticlimactic without proper buildup.

>Well, now that you've mentioned it...
I was talking about those Plague Rats, why were those added again?
Was it written for the people with a STD/STI fetish or something?
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>>71620
Can't we just have a monster to kill and not need it to be a fetish
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>>71621
no matter what concept you come up with for a monster to slay I guarantee you someone down the line will ask for a way to lay it.
That said, I wouldn't mind some "monster-first" creatures added into the game. Characters that were first and foremost a monstrous creature and fucking them is a subversion rather than the expectation. The whole "lay the dragon" thing only has it's charm when said dragon is a dragon in more than just name, and Ember doesn't have any of that charm cause your encounter begins with jacking off on an egg instead of trespassing into a fearsome creatures lair.
>>71609
 Hm.
>>71615
 Well, from a game mechanic standpoint, that makes some sense, but from a lore standpoint, that seems kinda' lazy. I mean, in some places that the Champion's children are described, they seem to inherit at least a couple traits from the Champ, like hair color, and I swear I saw somewhere that one of them had fox ears (my character was a Foxmorph-based Kitsune). 
 Hm. Maybe Marae could be approached to 'cement' the Champion's new appearance as their true race, since it seems like a copout to have the Champion readily acknowledge and embrace that they're now an entirely different species and then have them simply result in human offspring.
 Re: Isabella, meh, that does seem like a copout as well.
 Maybe not always herms, but perhaps having a healthy chance of resulting in herms. Perhaps, when Marae purified Minerva and restructured her to make her a pure Siren, she ended up fusing the Polyp to her and effectively mingled up their DNA? So now the Polyp could be considered part of what a Siren is.
 I mean, it's considered a part of full-blooded Anemones.
 And as far as Marae goes, heck, she's the one who created every nonhuman race. She can do pretty much whatever she wants.
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>>71621
While i find the idea of just have monster that are there just to be slain, this game kinda limits that since the very base of this game is a fuckfest, i can add the Kill option with some epic hunter kill and change some of the interactions with the werebears and lesser bears so you NEED either Lust Draft or Fuck Draft to sex them and not just beat them and fuck them like the rest of the enemies.
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>>71627
I read this shit after i posted only to have a little stroke and realize i need to not drink while i'm writing, holy shit.

But yeah having monsters and beasts just to be slain is a cool and badass concept, the very base of the game is to fuck everything that casts a shadow, so having some scenes to breed them is kinda mandatory but can be solved by making them hard to get or just optional, besides i'll add a few kill scenes that change based on the weapon your PC holds.
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>>71626
>Maybe Marae could be approached to 'cement' the Champion's new appearance as their true race
That would be an incredible amount of work for a pretty small benefit. It wouldn't just be a ton of work to write/implement, it would add significantly work to *future* content involving the champion's children, and make it harder for people to add new things.
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>>71629
He's a low-functioning autist, just tune him out.
>>71628
Yeah it doesn't matter that you have to expect most things can be fucked, you just need more plague rats where that's not the point. People fucking those are weird, but the option is there. It's not for a disease fetish, it's for a monstrous demon creature that exists to be destroyed and to fill out a small piece of lore (the fact all rodents besides a few were conquered by the demons but you never see rodent-like demons)
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Just wondering, but are there any actual *enemy* encounters that are gated behind silly mode? Or is that something that this mod doesn't even touch? Silly mode, I mean.
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>>71632
Silly mode is used pretty frequently in the same way vanilla uses it
>>71632
It'll have to be something really dumb and nonsensical but the reward it gives also gamebreakingly overpowered like how the TF2 meme gives free xp and boat has the custom katana
>>71629
 Understandable.
>>71630
 Autistic, yes, but actually high-functioning, thank you.
 And for another thing, does anyone know if the Manor Sisters actually have names?
 From what I've seen, they're mostly just referred to by '[Color]-Haired Kitsune' since they're malicious and secretive. I don't even know if the the scene where the Champion goes to their Manor and has the foursome with them (with the Champion possibly getting a Bad End where they're tricked into becoming their sex slave) gives them names.
 I mean, even just giving them nicknames based on their hair color (like Scarlet for the redhead, Raven for the brunette, and Amber for the blonde) would be better.
 Mainly asking this because my Strange Fox / Cursed Kitsune Groupie quest idea has events that revolve around encountering and battling the Manor Sisters as part of its progression.
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Considering the idea of writing a post with ideas for Chastity items that can be worn either in the lowerwear slot or in a slot of their own, preventing the use of your genitals (penis for cages, both for belts), both consensual and if you're defeated in combat, and either being applied and managed by the Champion, or entrusting the key to one of their Lovers.
 Then I'm thinking of making a quest idea post involving a loincloth with an enchanted Chastity Cage that turns the Champion's (largest) penis into a live snake, or causes them to grow a serpent penis if they don't yet have a penis to begin with.
 The loincloth would be found on the person of a large, demonic-looking skeleton (with the skeleton of a serpent protruding from its pelvis) that would be found, decapitated, slumped over in a throne in a temple deep in a forested part of the Deepwoods.
 This is all meant as a reference to Humbaba from Mesopotamian myth, and some depictions of Baphomet that picture them as a Hermaphrodite with a serpent for a phallus.
 Also the Chastity idea would tie into the alternative way to get Kid A that I came up with in my Elei post (pregnant Anemone attaches a special fleshlight-like nursery polyp onto one of the Champion's penises, preventing them from using it and having it milk them to orgasm periodically as it feeds on their fluids to facilitate the gestation of Kid A).
Alright, so besides making Rubi able to take Lolipops (like I suggested before), you really should be able to go further with the Transformatives that you can give them.
 - Right now, you can give them Whiskerfruit to give them a full-body coat of white fur, fluffy, padded, and clawed handpaws, digitigrade padded / clawed footpaws, a cat's nose with whiskers, cat ears, and a barbed cat penis, but you can't turn their Imp tail into a cat tail. (which I really want to do), so they can't truly become a full catmorph yet.
- You can give Rubi Pure Peach Pie (made in-scene with 5 Pure Peaches) for Tigershark skin, an Anemone penis, and feather-tipped Shark ears, giving them some Siren traits like Minerva, but that's the extent of it.
 Haven't tried Equinum on them.
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>>71641
>>71643
>>71643
keep it to one post instead of multiple if you can, stop the indentation and dash formatting that nobody else is doing. It seems like nobody is engaging with your ideas guying, I suggest redirecting your effort to writing since you haven't been able to actually get any traction on your ideas, either that or just stop.
I'm not hostile or ill-intentioned here, I'm just stating you're outside of the flow of the rest of the thread and the majority of your posts aren't causing any productive discussion or engagement. I'll credit you've been cooperative with feedback but you have generated many ideas and the overwhelming majority of them have not gotten significant interest. Interest is a limited commodity and when you output a lot like this it spreads it thin, which is to say nothing of the actual quality itself.
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Is "Liliador" too masculine to people?
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>>71645
I would assume it to be masculine from the -dor, which I would expect to be -dora for a feminine form
>>71614
I was more interested in female minotaurs and force them to become a female only race.
Breeding cowsluts is better than the current minoshit.
>>71644
I will say that the most common engagement I've got from my posts is a few Anons telling me that my suggestions have very narrow scopes for the target demographic, as well as experienced contributors like Satan and Sharkanon who give me pointers.
Also, I apologize about the formatting. I was just trying to ensure different topics don't blend together, as it seemed easier to me to read that way.
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>>71654
>experienced contributors like Satan and Sharkanon
At least wait until I actually finish something to lump me in with Satan as an "experienced contributor" lmao. One of us keeps the ship afloat and the other one has intermittent spirit.
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This happened to me just now. A scene triggered where Isabella says she needs to be milked and the text is all messed up. She's fully accent coached if that matters.
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>>71657
Fixed
That feral conversation earlier in the thread did make me realize there really is a lack of it despite having several areas you'd run into a slew of animals, such as the farm. How difficult would it be to add options to the farm to fuck certain animals as long as they were basic "you have a dick under X size" requirements? I'm willing to write them just for the sake of having something that in hindsight should've always existed be in the game. I'd also probably be willing to also write something for hellhounds, since I always thought they had fuckall in terms of content.
>>71659
If you want it, then go write it. As long as it fits in then i dont see a reason why
>>71659
Stables can use a few more scenes for the horses.
There's a scene exploring the farm where you can get horny looking at cows(but you don't get to fuck them), you could do something with that.
These are pretty well laid out already, making it difficult for you to fuck it up.
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>>71659
Definitely lacking in Feral content to be sure.
Horses at the Farm could use some more expansion; right now you can take a stallion vaginally or lick / deepthroat it, but you can't take it anally or even penetrate it for a change. You can also have vaginal sex with a mare if you have a penis, but that's it, with no other options.
>>71661 did mention the presence of Feral cattle, and the Champion having an intrusive thought about them, but there being no current way to act on it.
Actually, >>71659, as long as we're talking Feral content, and your offering to write some, I did come up with an idea for a follower who is basically an aspiring Kitsune that you have to essentially rescue from the Foxberry Overdose Bad End (but not without the potential to have some fun first): https://pst.moe/paste/luqomd
That quest idea has the NPC end up as a sapient humanoid (either Anthro or Kemonomimi) for storyline progress, but there's a feature built into it where you can have them change back into a Feral fox and/or reduce their intelligence to that of one (as well as any other previous transformation option that you desire).
I also wrote a post about ideas for a mechanic to engage in sex scenes with Akky (Formerly Akbal, the Demonic Leopard Demigod terror of the Deepwoods, now the Champion's mostly-harmless housecat): https://pst.moe/paste/jewlgb
>>71614
Updated it a bit, sorry for the delay, i've had some situations lately.
https://pst.moe/paste/qdeorw
Give feedback, i'll know if you read the thing or not.
Has the imp multicombat stuff been coded yet?
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>>71667
No, i haven't cause i have no idea how to code multicombat so i've been avoiding it
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>>71669
There are multiple enemies in combat in the manor, the tower of deception, and the phoenix tower. Maybe the mino sons too? Maybe not.
Hellmouth summons imps mid-combat.
Maybe these examples will help
>>71664
>living claymore
I feel that we have enough living equipment already with Valeria and the vague sense of will inside the beautiful sword.
>more orcs
Working on it
>isabella babies
Hope someone does something with it, plenty needed to feel more complete there. By all means, have at it.
>>71664
>you can fuck a hellhound (Granted is heavily implied they were normal people corrupted by that dude on the mountain) and give birth to them, but other animal NPCs can not?
No one wrote it, plain and simple. You don't necessarily need to explain away why previously absent content is now going to be accessible, otherwise this game would be a much more horrendous mess than it is.
That said, the hellhounds are sort of explained and so's the reason you can breed with every humanoid race. No reason actually justifies being impregnated by a feral creature. In this specific case, maybe needs further reasoning.
>The quest starts when you go to the bar in Tel'adre and get a [Light Drink] from Aunt Nancy after you have enough affection
Seems a little unrelated, and cuts out people who don't drink
>You don’t feel like getting a heavy drink at this hour and you’d like to hear some stories from Aunt Nancy,
Do I? I'm just getting a drink. At this hour? I just like it light, I don't drink heavy.
Would help to not explain to the player why they're doing what they're choosing to do, since they have their own opaque logic to their character that might not line up. Maybe they are here for Nancy to talk about herself, but they don't need you to tell them that they're here for that, they just are. And why is it light drink only?
Anyway, probably write something that just conveys you sit down to order a drink and Nancy starts making conversation.
>stories from Aunt Nancy, after downing
Either a semicolon or you need more connective tissue here. Honestly, the two halves are so disconnected that even a semicolon seems wrong and it should be a period.
>your recent adventures and exploits the aged spider-lady
Missing a comma after exploits.
>spider-lady asks you something “Say friend, would you be interested in listening to a tale that the driders like to tell?” The bartender asks
Period after something, lowercase the in "the bartender asks" since that's the dialog tag (unless you meant for "asks you something" to be the dialog tag, in which case remove "something" and add a comma after "you") and also remove one of the "asks" whatever the case may be as it's repetition without purpose.
>The bartender asks and waits for your response.
As opposed to not waiting for a response. I don't think it really adds anything to mention that. You can get rid of that whole sentence and change up the lead in to the quote and it'll be smoother. 
>Would/Wouldn't
Should probably be Yes/No, that'd make more sense and be consistent with usual style.
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>“There is a story that mentions a large and muscular human hunter, almost as hairy as some of the local dog-morphs. He tracked and vanquished a group of demons that tried to corrupt the deepwoods but after being badly wounded in the hunt he was chased deep into the swamp by the remainder of the demons, but as they almost had him, a large beast that heard the commotion showed and seemed to assist the wounded hunter before the demons could finish him”
It's not very good dialog. Messy, running on. May help to interrupt with gesturing and rework it in general.
>Her 8 eyes
Just making a note to check if she has 6 or 8. Also would probably want it spelled out as eight, but probably doesn't matter.
>before the demons could finish him
>instead of finishing the wounded adventurer
A bit repetitious and the meaning in "finish" is a little different between the two, as the demons would kill or rape him while the beast would be assumed interested in eating him. With the ambiguity of what the demons might do, "finish" is best there, but the beast is presumed to eat the hunter as predators are wont to do. So that second instance should be eating him, probably. Or you can use a more colorful word like devour, or whatever.
>However it was
Whatever it was
>take him as her mate!
>Some people believe
Don't put line breaks in the middle of dialog. I thought it was an accident, but you put line breaks elsewhere too. The only breaks are in paragraph breaks, not singles. And the line break doesn't make sense, nor would a paragraph break.
>it cared for him by hunting small animals and collecting berries
Why small animals? The beast needs food too, and this hunter is a big guy. It's smoother to say "hunting game and collecting berries" or instead of collecting berries, "foraging". 
>they couldn’t accomplish such a feat”
Missing period
>Aunt Nancy raises her gaze at your face, clearly intrigued by this particular part of the story.
Just a smidge strange in general. It reads like she's reacting to your story, not her being the teller, and it's probably best "to your face" not "at your face." At sounds more reactive, like her gaze is raising in response to your face. And if you did mean it that way—as the player having an intrigued look on their face that Nancy is picking up on—then the whole thing needs adjustment.
>story.
>Meanwhile 
Needless linebreak.
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>>71688
>Nancy keeps telling the story, with a slight smile and blush on her pale face, likely amused by your facial language.
Aside from how oddly it is written, you've also done nothing to filter this by players interested in bestiality. Some players are drinking at the bar and not interested in fucking animals, so while pondering what the people of the world think about the subject is fine, you should be more ambiguous about telling the player how they feel about it themselves, or prompt them to pick how they feel about it. Remember, you established no requirement that they had to have been fucking horses all day while in heat before getting to this, they could just be a regular person building their character's alcohol tolerance or trying to get closer to Nancy. Nancy, the drider, who I don't think has anything to do with bestiality prior this. Careful not to just pull out of left field with "you're obviously interested in animal sex"
But I don't think it's at all objectionable to wonder what the world thinks of it, all things considered.
Also it's a "tale that driders like to tell" and reads like an ancient fable, honestly, even though demons have only been marauding through Mareth for a bit over 20 years and the Deep Woods has existed for less than that (it thrived like crazy because Marae sealed Fera there some time between 15 and 25 years ago)
I don't think you mean for it to be an ancient story, but it just has that tone and style.
She's a mature woman. When a 40-year-old woman brings up "a tale my kind like to tell" you don't expect it to be something that happened in her 30s.
Shouldra's author ran into something like this with Shouldra's backstory, being informed she couldn't have died that long ago if it was by demons since the demon stuff is not that far back. So he changed it to "dark orcs" or something like that. Old vanilla game compromises.
>sealed a deal with a “Goddess of crimson eyes” that once inhabited the deepwoods
Well, now that's an inconsistency. I'll give you credit though, Fera would grant that to a highly accomplished hunter and a mighty beast, even before the corruption. She'd probably need some effort done to curry her favor or reach her at all, but on the right track.
Also "the goddess of crimson eyes" is clunky to me. Crimson-eyed goddess would be better, but also a bit of an odd name considering how few would have ever seen her eyes and more know her by her sphere of influence regarding predation and survival.
The only people that would know her for the eyes would be people or beasts of renown abilities for survival that probably pass on the element of the encounter that was about a mighty hunt or predation, or slaying some incredible creature.
But crimson-eyed goddess is mysterious and paints a picture, so it probably would be the way it passes through fables. It'dbe a whole rewrite of the scene for it to be a fable, but you know.
>But this is a rather old story and likely just a myth from an old era
Right, there it is. You don't know much of the timeline of events. Also you forgot the period.
>your slightly drunk fantasy of a man making love with a wild animal
It is funny to write this before giving the player the option to say it's a disgusting story. Same critique as earlier, though.
>you tell her that it’s a disgusting story and question why she would ever consider telling you that besides making you throw up the beer you just drank.
A bit extreme. Could work it more as how bizarre and off-putting the way fables feature strange sexual relationships. Less explicitly "I might vomit" and more open-endedly like "fables be that way, that's fucking weird" and the precise tone being inferred by the person playing.
>[Player Name]
"[name]" would really convey what you mean just fine, and also that's the actual parser tag that would work in-game. So just make it [name]. 

I'm stepping away from it for now, but so far I can say you have a long way to go as a writer and many revisions to make. I glossed over a lot of details. But it's a start.
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>“Friend, this is history is very popular among the many patrons of this tavern, mainly the adventurer type claiming they saw the beast or that they saw the hunter behind a tree on the forests, i wanted to tell you this story after a certain rumor started among some of the patrons about “Large beasts and loud growls” on the deepwoods, some of them even boast about going out there and hunting the beast, if you consider the idea too please take care [Player Name]”
A sentence so run-on it could be called a marathon, with many errors.
I don't want to pick apart the errors in writing. I'll critique the overall ideas.
>>The bartender telling a fable to lead to quest.
Fine for hints, but so drastically unrelated to the contents of the quest that it shouldn't be required. Few are hanging at the Wet Bitch. Fewer are drinking regularly. Fewer still are banging Nancy. None of these steps involve fucking animals. If the bar was a main hub, that'd be different, but you live in the wasteland and Tel'adre fucking sucks.
>[Player Nose]
why capitalize. Also if you type [nose] whose else COULD it be but the player's?
>>The quest involves the deep woods
It's commonly touted the area is way too congested with content. No reason for this to be in the deep woods besides the fact it's a place animals and hunting would logically be, but there's also the forest, the swamp, the bog, and
>it seems to live on the Swamp and comes to the Deepwoods to find prey.
Well now it's extra retarded that this starts in the deep woods. Start in the fucking swamp. And who writes a note like that? What is this, shoveled out Skyrim quest #900?
Driders live in the swamp too, that makes it another layer of stupid that this doesn't start in the swamp.
>commas
You should check out the writing guide in the OP. There's a whole section on just commas
You seem to be a non-native English speaker. That hasn't stopped some people from churning out good stuff, but it may take you a bit to get to grips with writing natural-sounding English.
>[Weapon] [Nose] [Eyes]
You shouldn't capitalize things when they aren't the start of the sentence or a proper name.
>the Goblin Druid
Shouldn't be a proper noun
>Goblin's song
You are human, not Human. You have a pet dog, not a pet Dog. These aren't proper titles, so they aren't capitalized in English, typically.
>the Goblin Druid stopped its song and dance because she was gawking
You mixed the goblin's pronouns "its" and "she." It should be consistent, either you can tell it's a female and call it female pronouns or you don't. You don't do both. If you're unaware, the feminine pronoun for "its" is "her" (male is "his")
The beast can be it/its/their so on because you can't tell from a casual look that it's male or female
>the beast manages to take hold of you into a Deadly Bear Hug
Don't refer to attack moves as Proper Titles. Especially not one that should be silly mode.
>“I was a fool thinking i was a match for this beast”
No player quoting allowed.
>>Find the beast and gob
I think they should be tuned down, neither of them seem like they should be all that tough, but have them fight together as a pair in one fight, with the druid using supporting abilities until the bear is felled, then going offense(obviously a smart player takes out the gobbo first). It'd make the fight more interesting.
>[Fuck the Beast] [NEEDS lust draft and 60+ lust]
You can fuck everything else with just 33. Your requirement makes no sense, the lust draft should only be if the bear hasn't been lusted up in combat, like the lust fuck with an alice, you can win via lust or use a lust draft. 
>>Beast cave map
>bear horde
Do bears ever fight as a group? I know it's "werebear", but still. If going horde, it should be 'cause you got close to the cubs, like what sets off a lot of real bears. Even if you don't know you're near the cubs.
In general looks like nothing particularly good here.
>>My thoughts
Just make feral breeding a byproduct of the perk you get for freeing Fera. No need for all this.
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>>71690
Noted, as you might've noticed i'm not that good of a writer but i'll take all of this feedback and improve.

>Just make feral breeding a byproduct of the perk you get for freeing Fera. No need for all this
I know, but i wanted to make a quest with new enemies for animal fuckers and not just an extra effect on an old perk, but fucking up is how people learn
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>>71692
Everyone starts somewhere. 
I think the first thing to do with adding feral breeding is writing the actual pregnancy content. It is technically the only thing missing from that being fully functional. Extra stuff like a quest or more ferals to fuck can come after, and this way it'd be a more focused plan that you can refine.
A quest would realistically be 100 times more writing than you've done so far, what with all the extra dialog you still need, the combat stuff, the combat sex, the other fights, all the other sex, all the locations, it really adds up. You aren't even 1% the way through that scale of a project. Not a good way to start.

Just do pregnancy. Much smaller scope, much easier to hone in on how to improve your writing, and when you're done, it can go into the game right away without needing to wait on 99 other things.
>>71676
The fuck is this?
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>>71695
cheese pizza probably. moderation takes days to clean this shit up. Either that or malware, fuck around and find out.
How do I get rid of the eel parasites?
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>>71698
starve em to death
That worked, many thanks, now I just need to figure out what how to get to unlock the Old Manor and how to fuse the Terrestrial Flame or whatever the message after getting level 5 of it means
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Alright, I wanna write some snuff. Who do we want on the chopping block?
>>71718
You should approach the idea with a character already in mind. Pick the generic monster you hate the most after the imp, because he has enough victory content.
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>>71719
You should approach your grave with the shame of your father's disappointment. Thread requests are always fun.
>>71718
Snuff, a full blown gore scene? Here are things I'd be delighted by
>Ivory succubus
Either savage ryona, beating her to death to destroy her perfect visage. She should resist, fighting back because this is a drawn out gore toggle scene and not a sudden execution, but she's been worn down by the fight and can't actually stop you. I'd say it even makes sense to require an HP victory.
Another I'd like is to taste perfection. Bite, rip, and eat her flesh while she struggles. That'd be pretty corruptive, and can involve the player being driven into a sexual frenzy too, fucking her while trying to eat her flesh.
>Ceraph
Honestly, she's misaligned with the lore. She should not be anywhere near as easy to beat except when you consider the fact she's obviously going easy and losing on purpose to taunt and corrupt you. She's having fun, and she enjoys submitting as a slave since it really doesn't interfere with her life at all. She doesn't live at camp, she lives with her own harem and visits you when called upon. The choice to kill her should probably just wound her and she fights you off and leaves, finding it's just no fun if you're going to be such a brute. But an alternative is that if you have gore enabled, have the kill scene start with a sudden wounding blow and then she fights back, saying that's no fun, and you have a really tough struggle taking advantage of her wounded state to keep pressing the kill, wounding her more and stopping ehr from escaping. Tells a better character narrative of her being too self-assured and arrogant to realize how much danger she was really in until she unexpectedly got hurt and then everything fell apart from there. She was strong, but she underestimated you and overestimated her temptress abilities, and she dies for it.
It'd be a lot more satisfying, but also hard since the player could have any sort of weapon and without claws it's a bit silly for a low strength player to beat her to death with their fists, the weapon is really vital here. But if it is a whip... I mean, you could wrap it around her neck and make it a scene of erotic asyphixiation that leads to her death, but so much is different from the non-whip version that you're basically writing an entire additional scene.
A lot of work.
>>71718
Minotaurs.
I hate those things.
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I need something to work on to refamiliarize myself with the code (and familiarize myself with haxe), and combat is usually enjoyable to work on.

So, does anyone have any suggestions for things that need buffed or entirely overhauled? For example, combat abilities that you think could or should be fun, but are currently too weak or don't do anything useful, or they're just too plain and unfun and need spiced up. Or races that don't have anything going for them and could use some sort of ability or perk, weapon types that could use a more flavorful ability, etc.
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>>71730
MY TIME HAS COME!
MINOTAUR SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE!
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How come there's no option to fuck Tamani's newborns when you catch her giving birth out in the wild?
>>71704
>how to get to unlock the Old Manor
Romance the Dullahan
>>71734
Either that, or turn those things in all-female cowsluts to breed
>>71731
What about unarmed fighting? Could add a couple extra basic techniques as special abilities, maybe some more in-depth mastery stuff. If you're feeling ambitious, you could even extend that to learning techniques from e.g. Jojo. That's maybe getting a little too xianxia for this mob, but it'd be funny if we did that better too.
>>71731
Dual Wield needs to be a thing
give me my weeb fantasy
CoC2 adds female imps now?
What the bloody fuck?
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Ivory succubus snuff scene, as requested. Been a while, nice to see you fellas still trucking along over here.
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It's weird that in a horny game about corruption there's all of one wild rabbit encounter and it's an easter parody.

You'd think mass rabbit bitch orgies would be a slam dunk for breeding content.
>>71755
>Batter
>//Accepting alternative button names if someone has a better one. Smash?
I'm inclined toward a silly mode version of the tooltip for batter saying "Not the baby kind."
>So pretty. So, so pretty. You barely even notice you're swinging your arm
The so pretty bit comes off silly to me.
A lot of it comes off too dramatic. She knows she can fix bruises and scars easily enough, losing all sight of anything to find something reflective to look at the bruise is just goofy. It was one punch. One punch. Where'd her playfulness go? The ivory lashing scene if the player has a whip showed it better, with her keeping her cool at first until getting more despondent as you take it too far. She seemed to be offended by playful when you hurt her there but when you didn't stop she was just hoping you'd get it out of your system and be done, as you're just such a brute!
I would think that pacing works better, where the beating gets worse and she tries to banter and play at the start before the severity of what you intend sets in.
>With her on the ground already, it's ridiculously easy to get ahold of one of those pale, slender arms, and before she can wrench it free, start to bend her joint at an impossible angle. It seems her frame was built for looks rather than durability, because it takes just a bit of pressure before her elbow snaps like a twig.
Too easy and too soon. You punch her once and then just snap her elbow next. There's no build up in intensity there. In fact, you decrease the intensity by just broadly scratching and hitting her after that. And it lacks detail.
You could easily write an entire paragraph that only describes tearing her hair from the roots, but instead it just happens in a list of what you do. It lacks impact.
I think the elbow snap should happen later, and it should have a little touch of emphasizing your muscle tone as you bend her arm back if you are toned, pinning the arm between your bulky limbs if you're high thickness, and leveraging the arm backward against your leg/foot if you're below 50 in both those values. Gives it some character.
Maybe she's fed up after you ripped out her hair and she's through letting you do this, or so she tries to express as she reaches out to get her whip, but that's when you grab her arm and snap the elbow.
That's something you're really missing in there: dialog. Ivories are pretty darn chatty. They chat in all their scenes I think.
She is being slowly beaten to death and she never says a single word in this whole scene.
She almost says "please". It starts with referencing that she had previously spoken.
But here, while you're beating her to death, she doesn't talk.
You can't characterize the player too hard for obvious reasons. Obviously they want to beat her to death, you have some freedom there, but beyond that, you have to focus more on the description of the act or characterize other people in the scene. I think dialog from her would do a lot for the scene.
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>>71757
>You fracture her ribs with [if (feet) {a thorough kicking|a swipe of your [tail]}],
This list, let's rip into it. You fracture her ribs with a kick. That's a hell of a kick, and she should react hard. That's a mighty strike and she'd be winded, coughing, struggling to retake her breath that was just forced out, and squirming with pain as she has the compulsion to move, but moving exacerbates the pain in her ribs. She can't stand back up because bending would hurt. You can do so much to sell the impact but it's just part of a list.
>rip her hair out by the root,
Like how a bundle of sticks is harder to break than just one, a bunch of hair is a lot harder to rip out than a few strands. You could pull her hair and she really gets the rough play aspect of it, there's the learned instinct of this as a sexy act, but if you realy wrestle that hair hard and tear it from her head, that's a burning, yet chilling sting, and a heavy offense. Her body would be largely unharmed, so while it hurts, she'd not be any worse off to verbally lash out at you for ruining the silk that frames her wondrous face. Surely you must know some limits! Again, with order, it fits before before breaking her elbow, and the ribs are a pretty heavy impact to be doing so soon too, but you might be able to pace around it, especially with good dialog.
>tear at the velvety membrane of her wings with your [nails]. 
If you have claws, maybe, but I imagine they're pretty darn tough and not textured enough to easily dig fingernails into. 
>Anything to draw just a bit more suffering out of this wretched demon. 
And it's so ironic! You say anything to draw out more suffering while just glossing over all the fun of describing that suffering.
>By the end of it, her pure white flesh is absolutely riddled with bruises, cuts, and scratches, and she can barely pick herself off the ground, so many of her bones are now broken.
We're a fraction through this! What bruises? What cuts? Multiple bones? When did that happen?
I thought this was a ryona style snuff scene but you skipped all the ryona! You skipped all the suffering! I'm baffled.
>But, hatred lends you inspiration
That's so extreme! I just like violence and poetic justice, it's fun hurting her in a way that directly attacks how she looks, it's exciting, exhilarating! Why am I now a petty angry edgelord? That's why you scale back how hard you characterize the player. Some people just get off on violence, some are pissed at how narcissistic the ivories are, some could have any other reason. All you know in the scene is that the player likes violence, they want to revel in the physical assault, so you need to focus on the assault, not on how the player feels about it. The player knows how they feel about it, you don't have to tell them.
>couldn't save her. As you savor
This probably bothers nobody but my brain pinged "save her" and "savor" as repetition even though it technically isn't, they just sound the same.
>The rock that's going to kill her. Fast or slow?
Weird that this choice comes up—oh, it's a question of fuck the battered and bloodied succubus or just finish killing her. I don't think the buttons are good, it'd be clearer to say "Rape" or "Finish" or some such. The tooltip "Enjoy the last of her beauty" doesn't say enough.
>cock hard else wet
Genderless get a lot of options with the ivory and you didn't specify no genderless here. Should note that. [genitals] says anus if you have no genitals, iirc.
The rape is a let-down since it keeps mentioning how beaten she is while the beating was just so non-existent.
>Just in case, you punch her some more
Again just... No impact, no meat to it. Just "oh also some punches"
>You don't pay much attention to her reactions any more
You never did.

Full-on gore toggle scenes are like sex scenes of violence. You don't just say in a sex scene "you fuck her, and you pound her, you really fuck her hard" and then move on to the next part. You describe the sex. In a guro scene, you should describe the violence, not just
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Kiha can have kids now right? What were the rules for it? Conception is only possible on days divisible by 5 or something like that?
I've been playing Xianxia recently, and I like it. I enjoy picking optimal perks and levelling weapon proficiencies. Writing and companions are not nearly as bad as I thought they would be.
>>71757
Tough crowd, what a world.
>A lot of it comes off too dramatic. She knows she can fix bruises and scars easily enough
I do think I wrote a lot of this scene without considering that she's a reasonably high level encounter with some degree of magical prowess, but she is also supposed to be a bit drained from the fight already. And, I do also like there being an element of her prioritizing preserving her beauty over her wellbeing. I think I can take a two birds one stone approach with some back-and-forth along the lines of what you suggest below. I'll probably have her disregard you a bit more directly/openly (would she really be coy/polite to someone threatening a national treasure like her, etc.), but I'd rather keep the focus on her vanity over her playfulness, for this scene at least.
>You could easily write an entire paragraph that only describes tearing her hair from the roots
And here I was thinking you'd complain over it being too long. I was legitimately a bit worried I'd written too much for a generic sex scene on a repeatable combat encounter (it's at about 1.7k), so I was trying to pare it down in places, but if I missed in the other direction, hey. And I think lists/montage-style-action do have their place, as long as there's enough meat elsewhere to support them, but point taken.
>You fracture her ribs with a kick. That's a hell of a kick
"A thorough kicking". Many kicks. Montage action, I really think this sort of writing has its place, used well.
>That's something you're really missing in there: dialog.
Thought about that right before posting but couldn't be assed to do any at the time. Really I'm just a bit lazy about figuring out her speaking style.
>I thought this was a ryona style snuff scene but you skipped all the ryona!
I asked for a "who", not a "how". My original intent was to have the focus be mostly on the rock, but it turned out the way it did. I'll definitely streamline and rethink this section a bit, though, but caving her head in is definitely meant to be the "feature" performance.
>That's so extreme!
Woops, honestly I meant to replace that.
>Genderless 
It's kind of amusing to imagine you menacing her with your asshole, but I don't know if I'm gonna bother, since genderless players already get the snuff part of the scene. Maybe jam the broken horn up your ass while starting at her pointedly?
>Again just... No impact, no meat to it. Just "oh also some punches"
Really? It describes where and why you hit her, it describes her trying to struggle away from you as a result, which is brought up again like a sentence later. It's one detail in an overall sex scene where most readers are going to be focused on the sex. I'll give you that the pacing is fucked in the intro, and there's a bit too much tell over show there, but there are plenty of reactions/descriptions of damage and such in the back half.
>You never did.
Like, you've got a good point here, but you're overselling it.
>You don't just say in a sex scene "you fuck her, and you pound her, you really fuck her hard" and then move on to the next part.
To be fair, a lot of your sex scenes do read kinda like that on first draft.
>you should describe the violence
So did you feel similarly about the horn and skull breaking parts? I do think it would be nice to include some more distinct stages of head trauma there.

My brain is so rotted by the kind of writing I have to do these days. Just constant short, corporate snippets. Rustier than I thought I guess.
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>Length
You spent the length poorly, I think. It is long enough, perhaps, but it doesn't savor the violence in any of it. Misplaced attention.
>Montage action
It is montage action but without any of the non-montage action included.
>Genderless
You can just note that the sex option should be disabled if you lack genitals. It'd be better than awkwardly fitting them in.
>sex scenes do read like that on a first draft
Fair, it's a start, and you have good English. I'll definitely concede you did better than I would. Writing is not my forté. I probably did overdo it on the critical tone. My bad.
>Skull breaking
I was a bit to checked-out on the scene by then to appreciate it. Her dying is the climax, it's the gush gush, in my opinion, and those tend to be briefer than what you wrote. But it's alright I guess. Nothing wrong with it I can discern.
I'd probably make it shorter, where busting her head open and killing her is one single meaty paragraph. Perhaps part of that impulse is that you titled that section "end it quick"
But I do think it compares well to cumming, it's the finale of the guro scene for her to die, so a tone of releasing tension and a length more comparable to orgasm could do well. I don't know. If you changed the rest and kept the end, I wouldn't complain, but if what I said still makes sense to you after you redo other parts, it could be worth it.
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>>71759
Same way as usual
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>>71764
>You can just note that the sex option should be disabled if you lack genitals. It'd be better than awkwardly fitting them in.
You are one humorless cunt, sir.
>Writing is not my forté.
Then why are you giving this kind of feedback exactly?
>I was a bit to checked-out on the scene by then to appreciate it.
Like seriously, if you're gonna get stuck on the first thing you don't like about a scene and then decide the rest is so unworthy of evaluation that you don't even bother to read it, you're giving really shitty feedback.
>I'd probably make it shorter, where busting her head open and killing her is one single meaty paragraph.
You're an actual sped. You complain strenuously that there's no in-depth violence, and then for all the parts of the scene with in-depth violence, it's "meh, why bother".
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>>71767
>Then why are you giving this kind of feedback exactly?
Imagine criticizing a genre you like while not being a creator in that genre. What a ridiculous thing to do. Let's all go enjoy Starfield and Concord since we're not game devs and can criticize it. That's what we need, no more judging things we're not skilled in.
Braindead take.
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>>71768
I actually do think most things gamers say about game dev is kinda retarded, like there's a massive tendency to assume they know why/how things went wrong with the most stunning overconfidence. Like, would you want everyone at Bethesda to go down to the steam forums for their game and start directly implementing suggestions? There's a difference between offering your general opinion/impression and offering specific suggestions for what to change. Like, yes, of course feedback has less value when the person giving it doesn't know what they're talking about, lmao.
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>>71769
You think the writer of the scene is so new and inexperienced that they can't parse the criticism and pick and choose how to rewrite it?
A game dev gets criticism the game is too long, so they either ignore it or chop off parts of the game? No, they tackle the pacing of the game to make it feel less drawn out.
By all means, you go uncritically enjoy things. Live your life. Happy for you, anon. Enjoy your slop.
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>>71765
That doesn't exactly help, unless by "as usual" you mean the combo spells like Eruption, if that isn't what you mean by "as usual" I am still completely fucking lost
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>>71770
Eh but I didn't actually say any of that stuff though. Interesting fanfic about me I guess, thanks for your support.
>>71771
>unless by "as usual" you mean the combo spells like Eruption
That is what I mean. All the combos work a certain way, the hidden spell works the same way, just moreso.
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>>71773
Okay, that makes sense
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>>71774
If you're struggling, the spoiler is: Have molten plate active as well as all combo-starting effects all at once.
Once you use it one time, you can do it again without as much setup.
>>71767
>stuck on the first thing you dislike
It was the first half of a 1700 word scene, and I did read all of it. I just didn't discuss the latter half much because I felt like I was biased to dislike it. I explained my reasoning for what's good or bad about it and how perhaps it could be improved but that the earlier portion is more pressing.
I certainly believe I explained all my logic.
>You complain there's bad pacing and lack of detail in the early violence and then ignore that there's an ending with more
It's like a sex scene where there's very little description for the sex but the orgasm is several short paragraphs.
Sure, there's a graphic head trauma part... You know, when it's over, and she's not suffering anymore. Be meaty and descriptive about it, but i say the balance of when and where the attention is is just whack.

There's also all the other critique, like the utter lack of dialog, which I made a big focus of.
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>>71776
>If you're struggling, the spoiler is:
Just "all combo-starting effects", or "all ongoing effects except the hidden effect of Geode Knuckle". Molten plate is already included in that (it allows Shell) so no need to single it out.
>Once you use it one time, you can do it again without as much setup.
I'm not sure what you mean by that, the requirements are the same whether it's the first time or the billionth time. The only thing that changes if you've used it once is the ??? tooltip.
Once you get the achievement, the tooltip explicitly lists "Quake + Scorch + Molten Plate" as the requirements and the ??? button disappears for good, but still no easier to use than it always was.
Am I missing something with the new forg girl? I've fucked her pussy multiple times but nothing seems to be advancing with her.
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>>71792
You're not fucking her array of daughters now?
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Is there a save editor that works with /hgg/?
The old one I used to use seems to no longer work with current versions.
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>>71798
The old one seems to work fine for most. I just use the in-game debugger.
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I have a save with Joy and Holli from an earlier version of this mod. If I load it Joy turns into Jojo and leaves, and I can't find a way to prevent that or reacquire Joy. Is there a way to do that without restarting?
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>>71798
if all you want is to add items you gotta use the ingame debug menu/command/wand thing
for anything else like modifying stats or body parts the old save editor works just fine
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>>71801
Joy is no longer in this mod, and there's no way to have both Holli and pure Jojo.
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>>71801
Get FUCKED loser
>>71799
>>71802
I just want to edit height and fertility/virility since the ingame debugger for some reason doesn't allow for that. But whenever I use the old save editor the game hard crashes anytime I explore or after any scene when loading an edited save.
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>>71793
She doesn't appear to have gotten pregnant at all.
>>71805
You might have edited some flags that weren't used anymore

either way skill issue
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>>71808
I didn't edit any flags.
I just opened the save editor and changed height. Loading any edited save (or unedited that passed through the editor) instantly crashes the game once you end the next scene after loading it. It's 100% consistent on android.
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>>71810
>android
well there's your problem
stop playing this shit on mobile and get a proper PC
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>>71820
No, I don't think I will. Replaying this on the shitter was the only appeal
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>>71821
How are you supposed to masturbate to the scenes if your hand is holding your shitphone while your other hand is fist deep up your ass?
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>>71822
I don't hold my phone, I put it on the counter in front of me and use a mouse with it.
I prefer CoC for toilet gaming because era games are too involved for a quick shitting session
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>>71823
You bring a mouse with you when you're taking a shit?
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>>71830
And when I go to bed. Capacitive touch screens are degenerate, so I refuse to use them except when absolutely necessary.
I finally finished working on Minerva's purification rework. It changes a lot, mostly related to her losing her dick and her purification.
First is the one were I wrote the definition of all the flags I made up for this, which don't exist yet.
Sex scenes rework + new flags: https://pst.moe/paste/meejkq
Then the rest are these
genericMenu rework: https://pst.moe/paste/rhtnkw
Sex menu rework: https://pst.moe/paste/qvyeqq
Appearance rework (changes the text in the Appareance scene): https://pst.moe/paste/umduzx
Talk scenes rework: https://pst.moe/paste/rhlijb
Confession scene rework: https://pst.moe/paste/wchjhi
New purification choice: https://pst.moe/paste/ynhcdl
Purification by Jojo: https://pst.moe/paste/hhmpfh
Purification by Marae: https://pst.moe/paste/qydpot
Pink Egg scene: https://pst.moe/paste/pgfufv
Visit intros rework: https://pst.moe/paste/tyvjxn
Bath time rework: https://pst.moe/paste/hvkesu
Minerva.hx rework: https://pst.moe/paste/jmpgvd
Finally, something I left unfinished and I don't intend to pick back. It's a few concepts and scenes or fragments of them related to Minerva and pregnancy.
Minerva pregnancy plan: https://pst.moe/paste/mpbwzc
>>71834
Proofers assemble
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>>71836
I do proofing often but lately I just want to spend every possible moment of free time sleeping. I hope the other proofer I've seen around here is up to it. I have high hopes, since Minerva has potential and just needs reworking.
>>71803
>no way to have both Holli and pure Jojo
Is it no longer possible with enough corruption tolerance from NG+ bonuses?
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>>71926
It was never possible, at least in this mod. Corruption tolerance only applies to things that check your own corruption, which isn't relevant here.
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>>71927
Ah. Just checked, she is the exception. Jojo does leave if she's there (but not Amily). I assumed he wouldn't because he'll stay with Vapula & Ceraph with enough corruption tolerance.
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>>71935
>he'll stay with Vapula & Ceraph with enough corruption tolerance
That's because in Vapula's case (he doesn't leave over Ceraph to begin with) he'll stay if you have low enough corruption. You don't need corruption tolerance at all, it just makes the corruption requirements looser.
Marbleanon here.
I'm going to be busy for around 30 days, so I won't be able to read any post until then, and if I do I won't be able to correct any scene. That includes all the minerva content here >>71834
>>71935
>he'll stay with Vapula & Ceraph 
Nobody knows Ceraph is your slave because she doesn't live there and you only summon her when you're alone.
Except Shouldra, I guess, but she's no snitch.
im new
which files should i download and how do i make it run,
i dont see any such instructions
ive never used a flash player before.
am on linux
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>>71966
Download the coc_hxgg_flash_1.6.19.swf
Download the flashplayer_linux
Open the flashplayer and open the swf using it.
You can also set it to run swf files using the flashplayer when you double click, but exactly how to do that will differ based on your system, I'll leave that up to you.

You could skip the flash player and download the .tar.gz file, but that is just coc + flash player packaged into one thing, it's bulging with extra file space and there are other flash games you'll probably like trying in the future, plus updates to CoC, so it's better in the long run to get the flash player and swf file instead of one single package.
Your distro might also have the adobe flash player available, and that would work too. Don't use Ruffle, however. It has to be the adobe flash player (ruffle is still in early development and has a number of potential problems and rendering errors)
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>>71967
thank you
the linux says "flashplayer_linux is an unrecognized file type" and doesnt run it
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>>71968
actually never mind i forgot to tag it as executable
>>71967
>but that is just coc + flash player packaged into one thing,
To be clear, there is no flash or flash player involved in that version as it's a native C++ build.
>it's bulging with extra file space
Largely due to being uncompressed. .swf files are gzipped by default since they were intended for web distribution. The tar.gz isn't too far off the size of the swf and player already. Could be made smaller by compiling with more aggressive file size optimisations and then packing the executable itself rather than archiving. That would actually need to be set up though.
Could a scene where you force feminize a mino work? Could you make them go full female or would that mess with the lore?
>>72035
Off the top of my head, I don't know any established reason that doesn't work, but I'm no expert on minos
>>72035
I don't know why it wouldn't be possible, but Marethian races are highly resistant to transformation. Feminizing a centaur takes 15 succubi milk or 10 succubi milk and a pink egg, I'd expect a minotaur to be similar.
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>>72035
Why not just add wild cow girls to be encounterable
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Holy moly, this thread is still going? And with real writing, coding, proofreading, et cetera? I thought productive activity had degenerated into pointless bickering over a year ago now. How many (not)2hus is the game up to now? Last I recall, the (not)Scarlet twins were still in progess, but nearly ready to be added.
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>>72111
>Last I recall, the (not)Scarlet twins were still in progess, but nearly ready to be added.
Still not added
You can fuck and impregnate Suwako and her spawn at least
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>>72113
Oh hell yeah, another frog girl. I was always kinda disappointed with how little content there was for the original one.
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>>72111
i (monkey) has been kinda waiting for something to take my interest and throw me into another coding spree
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>>72114
>I was always kinda disappointed with how little content there was for the original one.
the original one might as well be deleted with how worthless it is
>>72118
code a way to equip a gun in offhand so we can bloodborne our way to killing everything
I've picked up some other projects outside of writing. I hate leaving something unfinished but I can't force my interest. I have been thinking about writing something for this again, but I don't think it will amount to much worth if I can't establish that I'm someone who finishes their projects. It might be that I can't reasonably meet quality control standards at my current skill level.
Ultimately I think there are a few ways for me to go forward with writing.
Something changes and I regain interest in my previous work or find a way to work on something I lack interest in.
I start a new project and hope there isn't a hiatus that kills my interest.
I abandon expectations of realizing my scenes in the game and just write for it's own purpose.

I don't really see the first one happening without something significant changing. The second one I feel is unfair to the people who supported and worked on my existing scenes with me as I feel I'm not honoring the effort they put in alongside me. The third feels somewhat unproductive and unless my writing quality significantly improves I don't think I'll be producing abandoned projects with enough merit for someone to want to adopt. Maybe there is a middle ground somewhere that I can mesh with.
For what it's worth, I've kept up to date with the thread this whole time. I am still interested in the project even if my scenes haven't engaged me.
Are there any scenes with a mating plug? Either characters that cum inside you and glue up your pussy/ass with cum, or the ability to do it yourself?
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>>72130
A natural plug sounds weird to me, but I can get behind slapping some kind of talisman pasty on, like vid related.
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>>72130
>>72131
Knots don't count?
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>>72132
As much as just keeping the dick in. I think the core of anon's fetish is that it's something that traps the cum inside even after the sex is over.
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>>72137
Then Otter girl and that Gym bench press lady should count since they use their bikini bottoms to keep the cum in their cunts after you fill em up
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I've been away for a long time. What happened to external image pack support?
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>>72140
Still working just fine innit?
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>>72130
not a single one far as i know
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>>72144
Don't the parasites kinda count as one?
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>>71051 (OP) 
>>72131
>>72132
>>72137
>>72139
>>72144
picrel is the only one I noticed, and it requires a pig dick. Also, how am I supposed to encounter the goblin broodmother?

>>72148
Which parasites?
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>>72153
>Which parasites?
both worms and eels
we don't talk about the last type so thats pretty much all of them
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>>72153
>goblin broodmother
Isn't that from Urta's quest?
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>>72154
Thanks, I'll check out the parasites then I guess. I didn't realize they involved thick semen/semen plugs. 

>>72155
Oh, that makes much more sense. I never really bothered with Urta much. I guess I'll try out her quest this run before I reincarnate.
Does anyone know how long Urta's pregnancy lasts? I'm pretty sure it's been longer than 60 in-game days.
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>>72163
Pregnancy events are bugged in the latest release, so Urta won't ever give birth when visiting her at the bar. The bug impacts other NPCs too, though not all of them use pregnancy events to trigger birth.

There's actually a second, unrelated bug (broken since vanilla, in fact) that prevents Urta from giving birth when you sleep.
>>72140
>>72143
Appears to be working in the flash version but option does not appear in the html version.

I should have payed more attention to the big red warning despite everything else seeming to work fine.
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>>72169
>payed 
It's "PAID" ESL-kun
Not that it particularly matters, but is it impossible to turn off Survival mode once it's switched on? It says it's a local setting, but I tried to start a new save file and it wouldn't let me turn it off.
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>>72171
If you load a save with it enabled, it stays enabled. You need to make a new save before loading one, or else you carry settings over.
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>>72044
>>72035
>>72038
>adding cowsluts
Yes.
>turn all minos into cowsluts
Fuck. Yes.
>>72171t
What this guy is saying
>>72172
Is you need to turn off the setting before starting a new save and to not reload the save that has the setting turned on

give your saves a space between em
like if you have a survival mode save in slot one save your non-survival mode save in slot 3+ or whatever
just make sure they are visibly far apart from one another so you don't accidentally load it in
It's kind of an unintended exploit, but you can actually disable survival, realistic, and hardcore for a save after they've been turned on.
When you open the game, before loading a save, go into the game modes tab in options and choose override. Then the next time you load a save, those settings won't be loaded from the save and it will keep the override settings instead.

The new game issue should be fixed in the next release though.
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>>72188
>The new game issue should be fixed in the next release though.
Nah
You should keep it as a feature that only oldfags know about while newfags just bumble around like headless chickens so we have something to laugh about
I'm an average writer, but I wish I had more free time. I'd love to write a bunch of stuff for this game despite not knowing a single thing about coding. 

I would want to add a School to Tel'Adre, similar to the gym, but to the scale of the school Degrees of Lewdity, where you would experience events differently depending on the character's age (classes for kids and teens, a job as a teacher for adults and elders). Certain students and teachers would be sexable/romanceable. Yes, it would basically be a minigame within CoC, though I guess it wouldn't have to be depending on how it's coded. This is definitely the most unrealistic of all the stuff I would want to add.

Speaking of the gym, I would want to add a sexy mouse lady that teaches self defense classes, and allows you to train your Strength and Toughness, as well as raise your Fist Mastery faster, and without needing to worry about your safety in real combat. 

I would love to add a Dungeon to the game, either something to do with Goblins or Kitsune. There should be a group of Goblins that was never corrupted by the Demons, and I'd like it if they had males in this village, as well as a Goblin King and Queen. Hell, now that I think about it, it would be cool if most of the major races had Dungeons. The Kitsune should have a bustling village hidden behind a portal somewhere, with a bunch of male and female Kitsune. I'd like to see Spiders/Driders with a dungeon.

I'd also like to write more content for Ro'Gar, as I really like his sex scenes. Maybe even make him romanceable, so we can find his Orc village?

There's a lot more stuff I can't think off the top of my head, and to my detriment, I don't write any of this stuff down. The last thing I can remember is that I thought it would be nice if you could give Lolipops to Arian and Izma.
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>>72191
>I'd love to write a bunch of stuff for this game despite not knowing a single thing about coding. 
You don't need to care about that

just figure out how scenes are formatted and let the coders figure out how to add your shit

just make sure you proofread
or make sure someone proofreads for you
There is a constant need for proofers
I'm assuming Pablo has a sex scene in the gym, is there any reason my affection is maxed out but I can't do anything except exercise?
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I realize not everyone here probably likes Urta, considering there's an option to remove her from the game entirely, but I think Taoth should be explored more. Considering he's the God of foxes and kitsunes, I would expect him to be a boss if a kitsune dungeon ever came to be.
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>>72195
I like urta. She's kinda stupid, but I like her.
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>>72196
I want to fuck her stupid horsecock and saturate her infertile nuts with actually useful seed. Maybe the next time she fucks that centaur at the bar she will finally knock someone up, even if it isn't hers.
I think there is already something adjacent for oozes with her.
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>>72194
You lack a penis?
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>>72194
>>72202
Really always thought he was strictly a gym buddy.
>>72200
That's hot. And yeah, you can kinda do something similar to that if I remember correctly, if you're a slime you can straight up shove your whole body inside her cock and sleep inside her balls (your body ends up changing color to milky white if I remember it right), and she'll end up having to fuck someone to get you out, so she technically ends up impregnating someone with YOU. I kinda wish that would get explored a little more since Urta technically ends up becoming your "father", sort of.
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>>72205
It should change your age down to child if you choose to do that scene.

>>72202
I definitely have a dick. Maybe... it's not big enough? I'll try that.
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>>72206
>It should change your age down to child if you choose to do that scene.
Is the secret to eternal youth going down Urta's fat dick and becoming her semen? Why do demons even bother to use magic to make alices when they could use this far simpler method? Are they stupid?
On a slightly more serious note, could something be done with this? Urta does have all those daddy issues, and wants to be a better parent than her old man, so could you leverage this in some way? Like bringing up the fact that she technically IS your dad now and make her take responsibility for that by, I don't know, going to play catch with her or some shit, what do people even do with their kids in mareth?
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>>72207
>what do people even do with their kids in mareth?
Hide them or fuck them.
>>72207
The people needs a sanctuary area like Tel'adre, your camp, the farm, the sand witch's cave, or Minerva's place to raise kids. It keeps everyone safe from predators.
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>>72211
You say that, but it clearly doesn't work since I keep getting into those sanctuary areas.
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>>72214
You're a special kind of predator.
The PC is already able to do things nobody else can, only makes sense they could also be the only Cunny Enjoyer that can cross the barrier and enter Tel'Adre 

Not to say there isn't any Cunny Enjoyers in Tel'Adre, but the dont have to pass the barrier
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>>72223
Technically Edryn is one by accident, because there's additional scenes if you enter the city and your PC is a child, Edryn will acknowledge that and treat you as a kid (It's pretty adorable, honestly, like she gets mad at your village for sending someone so young to "be a hero" or whatever.), but that's only during the introduction, and after that she's back to her usual self and age isn't considered anymore.
That COULD have changed, it's been a while since I've last played this, but I doubt it.
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>>72223
>>72229
Isn't there also that weird guy that gives you "ice cream" if you're a child character?
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Alright, I'm feeling like a fucking moron. Is there any way to back out of the debug console UI? All it's telling me is that the only available command is "Next" and that's doing a lotta fuck all.
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>>72230
wait, is it ice cream or is it "ice cream"? I thought it was a bait and switch where you think he's weird but is actually nice or something
>>72232
Did you not find the button that says "EXIT" or "CANCEL" ?
Have the vampire sisters been added in yet? Last time I checked they still needed to be proofread. I'm kind of wondering, just how much stuff is there that's more or less done and just needs proofreading?
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>>72279
There's many a things needing proofreading
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>>72283
anything you're looking forward to in particular?
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>>72285
anything that isn't the puke and die kek, i'd say go for cultist?
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How come Light Rail Revenger is 2H? Just make it disable shields while letting you equip another 1H weapon so you can dual wield
>>72287
I'm assuming the "die" stuff is related to gore? Like how you can rip spider people's legs off and beat them to death with it. What the hell is the puke stuff?
somewhat unrelated but I wish there was an option to take home the spider people you maim. It's kind of stupid, but I like the idea of just completely turning around and being like "wait, I'm sorry for ripping your legs off, let me take you home and take care of you now."
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>>72297
Check the chronicles, "Goblin Piss & Puke & Cum & Die" is the scene name, and it's not really something that i'd like to code
>>72297
>"wait, I'm sorry for ripping your legs off, let me take you home and take care of you now."
Or just turn them into living thread dispensers?
Repeated visits to the Kitsune Mansion should result in them giving you permanent magic tattoos that work like Uma's Needlework. They could give womb tattoos, breast tattoos, and dick'n' balls tattoos. I imagine they would do similar things to the Needlework at the cost of permanently raising lust. Thoughts?

Also, I was wondering why those with high intelligence can't somehow rework Marae's lightning bolt spell? And why can't the PC unlock Levitation/Wingless flight?
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>>72333
>Also, I was wondering why those with high intelligence can't somehow rework Marae's lightning bolt spell? And why can't the PC unlock Levitation/Wingless flight?
Because you need 200+ INT for that
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Ox i think we should release an up to date version soonish, i dont see myself coding another scene soon, so we might as well put the latest scenes out for more motivation
What's the current protocol for proofing abandoned works? Also, a number of links from the Chronicle give me of one kind of another; is that just me, or did they get taken down?
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>>72343
If its abandoned then you can just take it and claim it as your own
change the author/owner of the scene to yourself and pretend that the original guy never existed

gaslight everyone into believing it was your idea right from the start
>>72343
You proofread it, post it here, and somebody who knows the author better will try to contact with him if enough time passes, and if there's no answer he'll apply the corrections himself.>>72343
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>>72340
Just need to ascend enough.
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My camp is going to be more inbred than the Middle East when Kiha's super soldiers breed with Sophie's harpies.
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>>72408
Counter-clockwise from the far right:
Helia, Isabella, Amily, Marble, JoJo, Champion, Sofia, harpy daughter, Rathazul, Kiha, ?, Izma
Who is the white dragon-ish character?
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>>72411
Ember
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>>72408
Why is MC a nigger?
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>>72414
idk it's just one of the first results when searching for corruption of champions camp
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>>72417
I'm surprised it wasn't some random big titty bimbo futafaggot
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>>72412
Huh, guess that makes sense. Thanks.
>>72418
that would've been more preferable than a nigger though.
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Is there a list of every perk that can get transferred with ascension?
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>>72425
I can assure you that the tranny-furry abominations the average player can create are far worse.
>>72426
Event perks like Fera's boons and Marae's blessings (corrupt and pure), various transformation perks like Lustzerker, Enlightenments, dragon fire, flexibility.
You can perm the second magic set, but you can't perm Dull's counter stance. You can perm Raphael's perks.
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>>72430
>Raphael's perks.
How do you get those normally without having a vagina anyway?
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>>72433
Damn
I thought you could just bro it up without making it gay
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>>71051 (OP) 
I want to write something about amazoness and other exotic, jungle-themed creatures but i read here that the Deepwoods are already overcrowded, so my question is this_

Is there a chance a new area could be implemented?
Something like "Before (or maybe after) killing Lethice you can sail on a ship or explore further lands so we can add more and diverse creatures or questlines?
>>72444
>Is there a chance a new area could be implemented?
Just use the normal woods
>>72444
>Is there a chance a new area could be implemented?
There'd need to be a lot of new encounters there to justify it, would be dumb to add an entire new area for just a couple things.
A new Place instead is an option too though, something like the farm or town ruins, maybe you find a patch of jungle-like woods at the edge of the swamp or bog. Might make more sense if you just have a few related things in mind and not enough to justify an entire area.
Or you could find some jungle-dwellers away from home, lost and wandering, then you could put them pretty much anywhere.
>>72440
He is tied to an otherwise unused orphanage that could work as a basis for an alternate path.
>>72414
I wish he was a character in the game so I could fuck his butt sloppy style
>>72444
Swamp and bog are pretty jungly
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>>72462
I'd rather not have more events go between me and fucking my frog daughters
It's already a pain just needing to murder the zombie homo just so there's 1 less event to cycle through
>>72452
>orphanage
And here I am still waiting for the lolicon perk. 
Mesugaki loli slut in orphanage when?
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Is there a way to view how the existing scenes are parsed?
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>>72489
Click HXGG sourcecode in the OP
Navigate as 
src > classes > scenes
Basically everything is pretty easy to find from there. If you know a specific string of text in the scene you want to look at, you could just use the search function to find it and jump to that spot instead of navigating manually.
ctrl + f is helpful in general for quickly jumping to the right part of the file you want to see.
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>>72490
Thanks a lot, I missed the scenes folder.
>>72485
uoh orphanage
>>72452
Could've sworn there was a way to access that as a man without fucking him when he shows up
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>>72507
You don't have to fuck him regardless
You can't get his skills as a male regardless
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>>72508
So you're just locked out of some random area just because you lack a vagina? This game is turbo bigoted it seems
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Is there a way to reset the Fallen Paladin perk?
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>>72543
Bite the cyanide capsule canonically hidden in your mouth(Lethice bad end) and start a new game.
High power, high punishment. You can't fix it
your penis is torn, robbing you of your virginity
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>>72548
your penis is torn, robbing you of your penis
on the upside, you now have an anemone daughter
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>>72548
DoL is 2 blocks down buddy
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>>72561
I forgot all about DoL, I thought it was a reference to this
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>>72575
It could be both
It's still honestly retarded either way
>>72452
Having some convoluted access to a location like that seems like a pain in the ass anyway. Why not give Tel'Adre an unlockable area for random residential encounters? Earn enough trust in the city and then you can enter the Suburbs or whatever. Meet people, make friends, do some homewrecking, teach sex ed at school, buy out the orphanage, then find those damn kittens again and fuck their mom too.
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>>72588
The content gets written first, then the place is added, there's no point to unlocking an area with nothing in it
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>Tel'Adre ice cream man
I'm surprised I didn't get raped like the Tiger in the Bazaar.
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>>72589
Well the area already exists
just write up some new content for it
>>72591
well, Tel'Adre IS supposed to be a pure/uncorrupted city, isn't it? Even if it's filled with a bunch of futas and furries and futa furries and furry futas
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What are all of the uses for Liddellium/Lolipops? Strictly for PC use? I'm a bit disappointed I can't use them on Followers/Lovers/Slaves aside from Ember. I would like to turn more of them into shotas.
>>72593
Except for that predatory little girl.
Each difficulty level should add another boss encounter before Lethice. I want to fight the Hellhound Master.
>2 hands
>10 fingers
>can only equip one ring
Wack
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>>72597
It follows traditional sense of the vena amoris of the ring-finger, supposedly a vein specific to that finger that goes directly to the heart. Though it doesn't actually exist, it's the reason the ring finger is that specific finger, and there are various ideas of specialness about that.
You may have 2 hands and 10 fingers, but the power of the ring enchant would only really work when using your special gay finger. (fourth finger of the left hand)
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>>72598
Your explanation sucks and the limit is still retarded
Even FromSoft games like Dark Souls and Elden Ring lets you equip 4 accessories
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>>72602
Skill issue.
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Let's just pretend I didn't disappear for months, the important thing is I'm out.
Desert Shaman Post-Fight Victories & Loss
https://pst.moe/paste/daivkb
With that, I believe the entire desert event is written up. Just need a way to direct the player to it when they're fully transformed with the cursed garment.
Mermaid Shirt NPC talks
https://pst.moe/paste/xzpizl
Now the player will be able to get a version of the shirt to wear without it being stuck to them. This will allow you to get mermaid TFs again after having already fixed the curse before.
You can also just get a nice curseless non-TF undershirt just because you like it. Masculine upper garments aren't very common in the game iirc.

Need to get up to speed with things again
To the anon who did the exorcism zealot loss, I expected a quick and small updated version after I replied to the last one, which is why I didn't update the chronicles with it. Where is it now? I didn't see any revisions following my last proofread of it.

Also: Can shark-girls talk underwater or should they make different noises to communicate that the player can't understand?
Weigh in.
>>72634
Tie it to a gills check.
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>>72634
Feels a little like I'm phoning it in, but I just want this stuff done.
Desert Shaman scenes [Finished]
https://pst.moe/paste/bdjqei
Added some more herm bits, fixed what errors I was able to spot like an extra space here and there, expounded orgasm  a little, some height checks
>>72636
On the one hand, that mirrors the naga having a language you don't understand unless you are a naga. On the other, I do think that mechanic is a bit dumb. It still makes more sense for the naga because I seem to recall the gimmick was that the vibrations in the sand is very fundamental to the language, and you need a body that lays across the sand like that to comprehend the nuance.
Also you would only see those scenes if you have gills regardless, so the distinction is a bit moot.
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>>72634
A sharkgirl screaming glubbbbb!!! at you underwater is funny though
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I'm thinking the event for getting the ring that lets you traverse dry regions as a mer should be along the lines of
>Underwater lake exploration
>Shark man (stated in-game to be ravenous and out of control) breaks loose
>Miniboss battle, he has two dicks and a ruby-studded cockring
>When defeated, one of the shark girls chains him back up
>The cockring used to be lighter but darkened from corruption over time
>You're rewarded a ring that is more aqua in color
I don't recall if I ever stated my logic, but I was thinking roots of Marae are exposed in various places in the lakebed and essentially calcifies some of the taint in the water, forming a pearly substance that continues to absorb the toxins until getting so heavily tainted that it's a ruby red, then breaks off and float away, still attracting taint but not able to purify it, so it forms a slime around it. That's where ruby cores come from.
The pure pearl is the same substance but before absorbing anything at all. The aquamarine is the purest that the sharks can get.
So it has a bit of the essence of the lake and secondarily also reduces corruption slightly. I think there's a ring like that already, so it's essentially a straight upgrade of that. Probably decreases fluid loss for slime players too, just like the ruby core does.

Still don't know precisely how to direct mermaid players to the desert for the oasis event.
>>72639
Strongest argument one way or the other so far.
I might make that the [if (silly)] version of underwater shark girl dialog if people generally push for intelligible speech.
Hm.
>Most shark girls travel in small groups, ruled over by one tiger shark girl. However, there are larger communities that can be found in the lake.
I'm not bothering, but if anyone loved sharks, there logically should be small group battling, and adding underwater stuff sets up the option for other, larger shark community content.
>>72638
Underwater Compatibility - Sharks
https://pst.moe/paste/waliqx
A number of smaller fixes, getting rid of player quotes, adding support for other stuff
>Separated Naga Anal+Tail into its own scene so it doesn't prevent nagas from having vaginal sex (made vaginal support naga)
>Separated Naga Hypnosis into its own scene and made it male compatible, not just female/herm. (Made regular girl-on-girl support nagas)
Etc. Heavier rewriting with the naga specific scenes, the rest is just generally touched up. Not all of it is up to standard yet, but I'm not bothering. This is just to pave the underwater content.
Note that it's entirely fine to add additional scenes that are exclusively underwater or above water. The reason all of them were made aquatic-compatible is because it was easy. It is not required.


The temp term I've used for when something is underwater is (swim). Coder can pick any standard they want.
>>72507
It's since been fixed, but you used to be able to get the orphanage scene as a man without doing any of his content. But then in that scene you're lovers, and you have sex, there was no choice to avoid it.
>>72520
"Orphanage" is a euphemism/joke, there is no actual orphanage. There are technically orphans there, but it's just a hangout for all sorts of criminals, beggars, and whores. The only thing to do there is have sex with Raphael, or talk and then have sex.
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>>72655
I feel a deep sense of disappointment
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I really feel nothing for the shark boss event. Thus far it's this: https://pst.moe/paste/wyfzrp
So I decided to take my mind off it and experiment with how i might to an underwater slime-girl. Jelly-fish loli: https://pst.moe/paste/qhvoio

I welcome opinions and suggestions.
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>>72655
>The only thing to do there is have sex with Raphael, or talk and then have sex.
There's also getting groped and breastfeeding a bunch of brats if you're a lactating slut if thats a thing you're somehow into
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Hi, it's been a long time since I played CoC, and back then I remember using some images packs, but now I can't find any one.

Does someone know where I could find one? Or just sahre theirs? Would be awesome!
>>72667
There could be if someone writes it, but why would you want to lock any content behind romancing the worst character in the game?
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>>72670
>Raphael
>the worst character in the game
>not FUCKING URTA
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>>72670
>>72671
Just stop railroading with Raphael, letting the player direct how they act around him, and he's pretty much fixed.
Urta is a deeper rewrite issue.
That said, Urta doesn't exist, so it's easy to forget.
>>72670
>There could be if someone writes it
Write something thats already in the game?
Nah fuck that
just give me access to that place without meeting with that loser
in fact I want to find that place so I can fucking KILL that faggot for even daring to steal my shit
>>72671
>URTA
Who?
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Mostly just a custom intro for anemones underwater, the rest are such small touches that a coder should just decide how best we should parse underwater/boat and I'll make the changes directly to the code since they're so small.
I'll take care of the loss stuff through the git after we figure that out, for now here's intro and victory stuff: https://pst.moe/paste/xcfmrd

Is AnonMonkey alive by any chance?
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Man, I should really get off my ass and finish the scene I was trying to write. I just hate how many if statements you have to put in. Makes it super clunky to write. Anyone got any tips on that?
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>>72666
cute
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Mermaid Princess Quest [Ready To Code]
I checked over things on my own, making fixes and adjustments without another proofreader. Best I can do.
Item, TFs, Minutia: https://pst.moe/paste/luoggq
NPC interactions/cures: https://pst.moe/paste/fbrarq
Exploring Desert, Crag, and Boat(with swim option added): https://pst.moe/paste/wstzxt
Oasis Shaman Event (Consent or Battle + Win/Loss): https://pst.moe/paste/bvslfa
Shark Edits For Underwater (and some extras): https://pst.moe/paste/waliqx
Small Amount of Anemone Edits (remind me to edit more after the rest is coded): https://pst.moe/paste/xcfmrd

Strictly speaking, this can be worked into the game as it currently is.
Features:
>Masculine upper-garment with small tease bonus
>Mermaid TF
>Underwater content and expanded usage of the existing gills TFs.
>A very long casanova sex scene where you're treated like a prince/princess.
>3 other sex scenes
>Unique combat skill for AOE tease + speed debuff, based on your tease bonus.
>Multiple "cures" including removing the TF effect and getting a normal shirt.
Bonus content not required for initial release includes making an underwater slime (the jelly-girl) and the shark man boss for the ring that keeps you moist.

Shark Man Boss encounter + fight + one sex scene (Still WIP): https://pst.moe/paste/zlvylv
In all likelihood I'm just going to finish the required ending stuff and ship it, even though I'm not happy with it. Anyone is invited to move the fight to another event instead, or rewrite the encounter, or whatever.

>>72681
There are a lot of scenes with 0-3 if statements, there's a lot you don't strictly have to bother with. I just find I naturally want to use more over time.
But if you feel you need a lot, maybe actively try not to think about it the first draft through, then when you're re-reading your scene to fix stuff, you'll pick up on good places to put if-statements.
Probably half the ones I use came from the second pass.
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>>71834
>I wrote the definition of all the flags I made up for this
We stopped using flags many years ago, but should be clear enough. The system we switched to is savesomething. Idk
>Removed the romance conditionals from the Cowgirl sex scene since it should not be available unless you are romancing her.
Eh, seems unnecessary to bother in theory. I don't mind a scene having small variations that aren't going to be normally possible to see. Reminds me of unique stuff happening when sequence breaking in old games.
But on the other hand, whatever you clipped out was probably trash.
>first time sex talk
Four instances of "..." in quick succession. Would be better to break up the dialog into two parts with some gesturing or emoting. Repeated ellipses looks bad.
>
outputText("[pg]Minerva blushes and looks you up and down, looking a little nervous. [saystart]Well... it's been a long time since I have been with someone, let alone someone who wasn't some domineering beast... I guess it would be all right, some companionship would be nice...");
if (player.hasCock()) {
outputText(" just... not in my vagina, all right? That's... special.");
}
outputText(" Did you have anything specific in mind?");
if (player.hasVagina()) {
if (minervaDedicked) outputText(" I don't want you to play with my pussy, it's... special to me, but I can eat yours.");
else outputText(" Would you mind how we do it? You're the one asking, so... would you want me to fuck your ass? Or... do you want me to try to fit between those sexy hips of yours?");
}
outputText("[sayend]");
>
For one thing, it looks like this shows both cock and vagina outputs if you have both parts, which is very repetitious. Whoever originally wrote it probably intended an elseif on the vagina instead of just if.
But since this is all being edited anyway, it can be a lot smaller and more concise as:
>[pg]Minerva blushes and looks you up and down, seeming a little nervous. [say:Well, it's been a long time since I have been with someone, let alone someone who wasn't some domineering beast...] Her expression shifts to something more receptive. [say: I guess it would be alright, some companionship would be nice... [if (hasCock) {just, not in my vagina, alright? That's... special. |[if (hasVagina) {I don't want you to play with my pussy, it's... special to me, but I can eat yours. }]}][if (minervadedicked) {Did you have anything specific in mind|Would you mind how we do it? You're the one asking, so... would you want me to fuck your ass? Or try to fit between those sexy [if (hasVagina) {hips|lips}] of yours}]?]
That's that entire chunk of text with parser conditionals instead of the old method. Might be less readable to some, but I find it easy to do as a writer.
Still not too fond of her dialog, she's awkward, but I'm not changing it. My point is just that it fixes the repetition a bit and avoids outputting both cock and pussy in an awkward way. You can also use (isHerm) to make variations specific to having both.
>dick too big
>(Utils.rand(2) == 0 && player.hasCock() && player.cockThatFits(minervaACapacity()) < 0)
Why is it a random chance that your dick is too big? Or I'm reading it wrong.
>squeeze into your cute cunny?
That's british slang, this is an American English game.
Maybe I shouldn't read over the exact content since a lot of this is just you wrapping old text in new conditions.

Her dialog feels so awkward to me.
"Sure, love! I always have fun when we lie together, and I could use some of our quality time. Since we're together, I'll even let you have my pussy, I bet you like the sound of that!"
I'll dig more into this another day. If you want, you can point me to more specifically what you want me to look at as it seems like a lot, or tell me what you don't want me mentioning because it's unfinished/untouched.
Are you marbleanon? Did we give you a name or are you just anonymous? Need to put this on the list.
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>>72676
I am quite alive, just came back from a long vacation, so i'll need a good TL;DR since i'm quite jetlagged
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>>72693
>>72685
WE GOT WRITER AND CODER WE'RE ALIVE BOYS
>>72687
Yes, it's me, the anon who wrote Marble things. I said to call me marbleanon for the sake of convenience, but I'm cool with being uncredited. Anyways, as for the rest of the comment

>I don't mind a scene having small variations that aren't going to be normally possible to see
I see what you mean and I can agree with the sentiment, I adopted a more conservative approach while working on it partially to not accidentally change the menu to allow vaginal sex without romance after seeing the conditionals and then have to undo the change. In the current version it's still impossible to have sex with her without romance, so the few alternate lines can be kept.
>long text about ellipsis and repetitive dialogue.
Yeah, looking at it months later I can see it. I just added the
<I don't want you to play with my pussy
bit trying to keep it in the spirit of the rest of the dialogue, but the two ifs instead of elseif went over my head. As for the {hips|lips} addition, it sounds fine, but I wouldn't put it since there's no scene where you suck her dick. If somebody were to write one I would add it, but I do not like futa so I won't bother. In her current state, I would end with
<You're the one asking, so... would you want me to fuck your ass? Or [if (hasVagina) {try to fit between those sexy hips of yours|maybe you have something else in mind}]?
Otherwise your restructured version is good.
>Why is it a random chance that your dick is too big? 
That's from the original file, so I didn't touch it. I think rand(2) is what it uses to track how many times you've visited her, since the code has the line 
if (Utils.rand(2) == 0) {minervaThirdPlusEncounter();}
Basically, Minerva will initially refuse to take a cock that's too big, but after meeting you a few times is more open, if hesitant.
>That's british slang, this is an American English game.
That's just part of the original script. I left it because I don't feel comfortable changing someone else's dialogue, even if I changed a lot. Since turning Minerva into a british woman would be a bigger change, changing the one word is a better choice. However, as a compromise, I suggest to put a silly mode conditional there, even if it's for champions who are short or have very tight vaginas. I already put a conditional with a "Get pregnant! Get pregnant!" line in another scene, anyway.
>you can point me to more specifically what you want me to look at
In the end everything must be checked, so anything you proofread is good. The order I put it in is perfectly fine, since sex is the backbone of the game, the gui is vital to play the game, and the rest is the changes in sort of chronological order but not truly because the game is not linear.
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>>72693
TL;DR: https://rentry.co/CoCChronicles has a list of what's currently complete and ready to be coded, and stuff already coded is not listed.
Implement whatever you want, but when mermaid TF stuff is in, we update to 1.7.0
If you take too long, I'll throw more underwater content at you. But if you move fast enough, it's fine to throw it into a 1.7.1
>>72695
>no scene to suck dick
Surprised. I remember her having at least a whole row of scenes to pick from. At any rate, I was just getting the idea itself across, the exact words don't matter.
>I think rand(2) is tracks visits
I think utils.rand is for rolling a random number from 0 up. 2 as in 2 numbers, so 0 and 1, which would make it  50% chance. if (rolls a 0) and (player has a dick) and (no penis fits minerva's capacity) then, with all conditions met at once, gets this scene.
Utils.rand means that it is pulling from Utils.hx to find the rand function, like how player.hasCock is checking player.hx for that information
>that's just part of the original script
Part of Minerva's script is her sneaking into camp and you barely missing her as she leaves a note saying "I'm giving birth, come quick"
Anyway, the point is that it doesn't belong, not that she should be made British. Making if silly mode for [if (isChild || height < 60)] is fine. Arguably doesn't need to be silly, even, since lolicons seem to adore the term. I wouldn't argue, I am indifferent.
Alternate gag, make it a [if (metric && silly)] condition.
>everything must be checked
I do not like proofreading, and knowing there's a lot you didn't touch makes me expect a lot to touch on.
I might just gloss over a lot of the content and look at the broad strokes. Don't we have two or three other proofreaders that hang around? Where have they been?

Anyway, I'll add your range of links to the Quality Control section late tonight before bed, or anyone with the rentry password can do it.
Woke up early to see AnonMonkey is already at it with that mer stuff.
Anon is right, we're alive.
Utterly shocked I could answer a question on the git too. Don't count on that happening much.
>>72695
>Minerva blushes and smiles at you, looking pleased that you're eager to spend some quality time with her. "Sure, love! I always have fun when we lie together, and I could use some of our quality time. Since we're together, I'll even let you have my pussy, I bet you like the sound of that!"
It does not stop looking so awkward to me.
It is also repetitious. Spend some quality time? I could use some quality time.
And the "I bet you like the sound of that!" really reads like someone talking to a child.
>I'd be happy to play with your hot pussy - what do you think, my dear?
change " - " to "--" ie "hot pussy--what do you think"
>shark-like harpy
I've always pictured her as a harpy-like shark, myself.
Skipping 90% of text right now. not proofreading what I assume is untouched, unless I happen notice something while scrolling.
>I don't know. That's... special... After the things I have been through, I don't want to just do it with anyone. You... </i>have<i> been really nice to me though... I guess I can trust you.
A bit much on the ellipsis. Also we don't use HTML tags anymore, <i>have</i> would be [i:have]
But this is inside dialog, so it'd look liked "You... have been really nice" and I hate that, myself, I say we change all in-dialog italicizing to bolding instead. Emphasis outside dialog as italics, inside dialog as bold.
Which would be [b:have]
>With a smile, you gently remove your clothes and put them aside,
I'll probably have this entire sentence just not appear if the player is naked, but feel free to use [if (isnaked) {}] for naked variations to stuff
>letting the base of your member feel the heat in her groin and making you more aware of the one in yours.
The one heat? Strikes me as odd. While often it's best to avoid repeating yourself, this is one case I think it is better to say heat twice. "the heat in her groin making you more aware of the heat in yours"
>her surprisingly cool cunt
Her totally rad pussy. Why would it be cool though? I see it is a recurring detail, but why?
>Her moist, lower lips
You add commas to make it a list of adjectives, which reads like "her lips that are moist and lower". Which is odd. I'd write it "Her moist lower-lips"
>just love how your " + player.cockDescript(x) + " stretches me?.
Errant period in there after the question mark. Could use a cock size check
The scene is selecting (x) cock, picking the first dick that fits Minerva's capacity, which might be very small (or enormous)
>Tell me how much you need to cum. Tell me and I'll let you blow your pent-up load deep inside me. You know you want it just as much as I do! So do it, ask me to let you and fill me with your cum until it's gushing out!
"So do it, ask me to let you" is wrong, she wasn't telling you to ask her to let you cum, she was telling you to tell her how much you need to cum.
The original dick version is more consistent
>gushing out! [if(minervaRomanced){[if (silly){Get me pregnant! Get me pregnant! Get me pregnant!|Impregnate me!}]}]
If minervaRomanced is false, empty space between out! and the end-quote. Put the space inside instead.
<it's gushing out![if (minervaRomanced) { [if (silly) {Get me pregnant!
>You NEED to cum
Change all-CAPS to italics instead. You [i:need] to cum
>her tight, hungry cunt, the tightness of her walls
Tightness of her tight cunt. Suggest removing tight.
>grabs your dick again and begins gently jerking you off until it grows stiff again
again again
>onto your[if (minervaDedicked){dick 
onto yourdick

Minerva's hypersexual needs are implied to be her vulnerable to her own anemone venom, and you removed both the penis and also the vaginal components. Shouldn't she not be relentlessly trying to make you cum over and over until she's cumflated?
Plus, the venom forces you to keep going originally—in the dedick version, no venom. I think it goes to
>>72703
i woke up at 4am, i was not alive. Fun fact, before now there was no undergarment that had a remove text,
>random camp events *perhaps* should be appended to the start of the camp description, not get the screen to itself
do you mean to place it like the "Your cabin is situated near the edge of camp." and other camp follower text, but just at the top?
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>>72704
Yes. Exact implementation doesn't matter to me though, just an idle thought in there about how to keep gameplay smooth.
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>>72705
i have no problem putting it there, but a player might miss it
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>>72706
The longer blurbs still get full attention, the others being subtle doesn't particularly bother me. Though, perhaps the repeatable ones get full attention the first time, then are quietly at the top of camp screen whenever they happen to re-occur?
Should note not to re-roll for them every time the camp screen is displayed, too. Don't want to jump around between storage, character menus, and so on and then find you somehow gained 20 femininity even though you never actually did anything, all because of rolling those quiet events tons of times just flipping through menus.
I bring up that possibility because I remember similar things, like how you could visit Rathazul, not actually do anything, return to camp screen, and repeat to drain your lust without passing any time. Not sure that's still a thing, specifically.
>>72703
>It is also repetitious. Spend some quality time? 
Yes, that's my fault. Not for writing it, but for not seeing it and rewriting it, despite doing it to similar cases.
>change " - " to "--"
Missed that. Yes.
>I've always pictured her as a harpy-like shark, myself.
Her main body looks more shark than harpy, but she's more often described as shark-like, so shark-like harpy is more true to the text, so to speak. In my eyes, her initial description makes it out to be an irrelevant argument, as in either descriptor fits her and the point is she's a weirdo mishmash. And I'm aware you were likely quipping, but I found it funny to discuss.
>too much ellipsis
ctrl+f ... gives me 318 matches in MinervaScene.hx. At that point it just a part of her character that she talks...like this. That said, I suppose from exposure I just accepted it and started ignoring how much there is. When pointed out months later, it is excessive. I don't know what to tell you, though, other than say that yes there's a lot of ellipsis.
>inside dialogue, so it'd look like
Fuck
>errant period
Fuck!
>again again
>onto yourdick
FUCK!  Oh well, even with technology and multiple rereads, mistakes will be made. That's what proofreading is for.
>but feel free to use [if (isnaked) {}] for naked variations 
I might be wrong, because I don't remember anymore, but I have a feeling I never found how the game tracked if you were naked and decided to assume it didn't based on what I found, so I just let it as is and hoped somebody would correct it if I was wrong instead of asking. But it's just a mad theory.
>I think it is better to say heat twice
>I'd write it "Her moist lower-lips"
>Could use a cock size check
>she wasn't telling you to ask her to let you cum, she was telling you to tell her how much you need to cum.
>Change all-CAPS to italics instead. 
>Suggest removing tight.
Fair enough.
>Put the space inside instead.
Typical blunder. It was bound to happen at least once.
>Why would it be cool though? I see it is a recurring detail, but why?
Your question made me figure it out. It's got to be the anemone. The anemone girl is described as cold and cool in sex scenes, so that was probably what the writer had intended. All the cilia in her vagina would be part of the anemone, and would make it cool to the touch. That's something that'll have to be changed for dickless versions.
>The original dick version is more consistent
It's going to be cooler too. Jokes aside, I'll have to fix the inconsistencies.
>Shouldn't she not be relentlessly trying to make you cum over and over until she's cumflated?
I suppose you're right. I think the logic behind my choice was that I assumed Minerva would still be the type who likes it rough even without the anemone. I was more focused on the effects the anemone had on the champion during those scenes, but it's true the thing stings Minerva as well. Really, at the least the characters finding the energy to keep going without the anemone's intervention is wrong, since it makes the point of the anemone existing moot. I guess if I had to change only one thing, it'd be that.

I appreciate that you took the time to read all that when you said you don't like proofreading. I have too much on my hands to dedicate myself fully to fixing those problems and all the others that surely are in the rest of the rework, but I will take all that in mind when I can.
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>>72703
>You add commas to make it a list of adjectives, which reads like "her lips that are moist and lower". Which is odd. I'd write it "Her moist lower-lips"
The comma is wrong, but that hyphen is even more wrong. It should just be "moist lower lips".
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>>72708
>Missed - to --
Happens multiple times
>At that point it just a part of her character
I've had reticence about changing existing things like that before, but it should be questioned what of that is part of her character.
She trails off? Pauses a lot? There are other ways to write that trait for variety or flow. Sometimes, use ellipsis, but there's also like the other example I gave where her dialog is split from one continuous quote with ellipses to two quotes separated by describing her expression. Sometimes filling the lull between her words is better. Depending on execution, it could distract from the fact she is pausing, which isn't necessarily bad. It could emphasize the pause.
You understand the point though.
>I never found how the game tracked naked
I've always just used psuedocode and let a coder figure it out when I don't know how the game handles something.
I've started developing more of a habit of looking at the parser directory on the git though, to actually know what specifically is used. You're welcome to either of those methods.
>you read all that when you don't like proofreading
I like having other people contributing more than I dislike proofreading
>>72710
yeah do it this way
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Shark Man Miniboss: 2 sex scenes, non-sex ending, and Aquamarine Ring
https://pst.moe/paste/uixccq
Still no attachment to how I did any of this, though it's pretty uncommon for me to try a threeway scene and that was interesting to do.
Not my best work.
Needed: Loss scene. Probably just get fucked very hard and semi-violently then waking up 8 hours later, needing to do the fight again. I'm taking a break from it though.
Speak up if you have any better ideas.
Satan can you mention any TF that specifically happens while sleeping? cause as far as i can tell, there currently isn't any
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>>72713
Not Satan, but the Corrupted Dryad vines progress while doing so
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>>72714
as far as i can tell, no, it does not (atleast if we're talking about the Obsidian vines/Black vines) it has slightly different text if you're sleeping while it happens, but it's not locked to sleeping
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>>72715
You get unique TFs from the vines when not sleeping at 3am, and as a result of that, you can only get rose-red flowers while sleeping.
There's also the displacer beast cock. You can only get it from the dream, and thus only while sleeping.
Technically, if you choose to continue after a bad end then it was all just a dream, but I don't think there are any unique TFs there. The only bad end TFs I can think of are tentacle cocks from Marae and dog cocks from the hellhound master.
I wonder where Anonnomás is.
>>72713
I think the bimbo/bro stuff adjusts your body overnight to stay in the signature figure.
The vines specifically happen over night, with variation whether asleep or not.
The old pre-vines dryad TF from the leaf dress was over night, with dreams as a component I think.
Nothing else comes to mind. The anon mentioning displacer beast cock sounds familiar, I think that's the special cock sock
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>>72719
i've more or less figured it out, besides the force waking-and-staying up at 4:00, is it a hard requirement? i can make the event happen at 4, so it pops and then you go back to sleep and wake at whatever time you have set the alarm to (or 6 which is default)
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>>72721
Not a hard requirement, I don't care.
What is the mermaid "legs" description? naga is "snake-like coils"
same with "feet" description, naga is "coils" or "coiled tail"
Above is in Creature.hx
Do you have a writeup for PlayerAppearance for what it says when you have a...fin?
Is the mermaid body technically reptilian?
Do you have a writeup for restoreLegs, when you lose the fin and gain regular human legs?
Do you slither on the ground as a mermaid?
i dont assume that a mermaid has "coils" what do they have instead? it's mentioned in many places with isnaga
Does mermaids lay eggs?
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Maybe having goo skin and a horse centaur body should make the player's race kelpie.
>>72725
>legs
fish-like coils
serpentine coils
finned snake-like coils
>leg
memaid tail
fish-like limb
>feet
flippers
coils
>PlayerAppearance
I do not, do you need me to figure out how to format and write it or do you have it covered?
>restoreLegs
Just the naga one but replace your sinuous snake-tail with your mermaid tail
>Slither on the ground
What's the alternative? Flopping? Maybe silly mode [walk]/[walking] can be flop/flopping, otherwise slithering. Ground travel be like that.
>I don't assume coil
I don't have an alternative. I will listen to suggestions though.
The whole transformation is basically fish-naga. Which, amusingly, is more like the naga of several other properties like Warcraft. The CoC naga is more like what is often called gorgon or lamia.
>mentioned in many places with isnaga
I'll be going through after you to check on a few hundred isNaga checks on the git and make isMer changes as needed, mostly where it explicitly says snake stuff. But if you notice something in particular I should watch out for, I'll make other edits to isNaga instances.
Like I said probably, mermaid tail resolves True for "isNaga" and isMer will specify mermaid exactly.
>eggs?
If there was a natural mermaid race, probably, but I wouldn't make the player lay eggs as it.
>reptilian?
Fish don't even exist taxonomically
But I wouldn't describe them as reptilian, even if they might be. A player with scales instead of normal skin might think of their mermaid as reptilian. Otherwise, probably not.
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>>72726
i haven't made these changes yet, since i went into hyper autism mode and skipped dinner. I've gone though a bunch (but not all) of the isnaga checks and put it on the git
>I do not, do you need me to figure out how to format and write it or do you have it covered?
i cant write for shit even the most basic stuff, so it's all on you
> but I wouldn't make the player lay eggs as it.
There is a defeat(?) where you get egged by a spider, and nagas think of it as their "clutch" so would a mermaid?
>>72727
Also does mermaids have the snake fangs & snake eyes as a naga does? what TFs besides gill and tail/body counts towards mermaid
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>>72727
>I've gone though a bunch (but not all) of the isnaga checks
You really didn't have to do that, and I'm not sure what you'd have even done at those checks...
More interested in you making all the content functional and we can worry about minutia later. The idea I had in mind was that the mermaid stuff would all be playable and there'd be a pre-release test build people can report bugs on(like we did with the last update) while, in the meantime, I'd go through all the isNaga checks and other little things to make sure mermaid always makes sense.
Then in the true release of 1.7, all of those details will have been done.
>spider egging clutch
I guess. I'll look at it myself in-context later and change it if I feel differently about it then.
>all on you
Alright I'll get back to you on that.
>>72728
Mermaid TF actively feminizes, reduces male genitalia, grows gills, and goes directly from any leg type to mermaid.
The race requires the mermaid tail and gills.
The TF will not remove naga traits so if the player happened to use snake oil and get fangs and snake eyes, that's that.
The sea-snake thing is just a little detail if the player does happen to go naga before going mermaid.
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>>72729
>You really didn't have to do that, and I'm not sure what you'd have even done at those checks...
i neatly put it all on the same commit, so you can just check the changes on said commit. It's mostly just adding the isMermaid() check to the places where it checks isNaga()
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>>72727
>PlayerAppearance
>case LowerBody.NAGA:
>your body transitions into a long snake like tail. Your snake-like lower body
<your body transitions into a long {mermaid tail|snake tail}. Your {fish|snake}-like lower body
>Below your waist your flesh is fused together into a very long snake-like tail.
<Below your waist your flesh is fused together into a very long {fish|snake}-like tail.
Without however you want the code side of that to look.
>>72730
>It's mostly just adding the isMermaid() check to the places where it checks isNaga()
That... should be unnecessary. The idea was that isNaga would apply to the mer body, the only places to add isMer would be to make it different than the naga version.
>check the commit
<Attached
Something doesn't seem right here.
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>>72731
i've fixed the appearance and the error locally, but i'm done coding for the day. The amount of places where isNaga and isMermaid would differ changes greatly if we're going with serpentine coils vs fish-like coils, but there's still many places where you insert your tail into orifices which you cant with the mermaid tail i have in mind (classic mermaid) or where you wrap it around somebody, which i can't imagine a mermaid tail doing
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>>72732
>The amount of places where isNaga and isMermaid would differ 
In a lot of places, the check is pretty logistical and that would be the same. The genitals are in a slit in the same spot, on a singleleg thick tail. The mermaid body cannot use Constrict, it doesnt' squeeze with a ton of strength, but it does curl around things, so there are a lot of spots where the naga tail wrapping around someone doesn't need to be different. The constriction stuff would.
Tail penetration varies. I describe in the transformation scene that the fin is translucent, flexible, and very soft, and it can be compressed flat against the tail or expand to a wide arc. A lot of cases, tail penetration will work, perhaps with a little rewording.
Like I said, I'd go through all of the checks in the game and make whatever changes I felt necessary, or add !isMer to cut mermaids out entirely where they're too different to be resolved.
You don't have to worry about those details.

Make isNaga count mermaid. Snake or fish, both would be isNaga.
isMer does not count naga lowerbody. Fish only.
Maybe would could add isLamia for snake only. If ever there'd be another non-snake serpentine tail, it might be prudent.
Also if there's a reason not to spell it isMer and to fully write out isMermaid, let me know. I know a lot of people think of them as Merman and Mermaid(en), so isMer seems more right to me.
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>>72733
Gotcha
>not to spell it isMer and to fully write out isMermaid
No reason other than full-text name is what we usually do with our conditionals
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>>72734
>Usually full name in conditionals
Could do like str/spe/tou/cor/etc and have both a shorthand and a full one.
There's also isherm that has no fully written-out ishermaphrodite
I could be done like
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"ismer"            => () -> player.isMermaid(),
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Shark Miniboss Event (Finished/Code-Ready)
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Every scene got at least a little adjustment.
Contains threesome with dilf and young woman, getting double-dicked when you lose, watching the girl and man go at it, or singing and avoiding anything horny.

Unless anyone suggests what to rewrite in the event, it's shipping like this.
AnonMonkey, I told you if I finished this before 1.7 comes out, this is going in with it. And it'll be better for it, gives something unique to do in the lake. Even if middling.
We'll see if the jelly-girl gets done for 1.7 or has to be 1.7.1
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>>72726
>Maybe having goo skin and a horse centaur body should make the player's race kelpie.
Would be nice as it could open the room for sticky sex well technically goo girls could do it too but yeah
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Oh yeah, I just remembered
Since the sea shirt drops from the zealot, it'd be really nice to also get the entire Fetish Cult rewrite in the update.
Which really isn't that much, so shouldn't slow things down. Adds some much-needed shotacon to the game, and improves the quality of the lake and boat, which will be places under scrutiny in the update. 
>>72741
>it could open the room
It does not change anything, still goo skin either way.
[race] is largely just a flavor thing
Though, now that you mention it, it could be neat to have certain combinations of TFs give unique effects. Kelpie could make it so there's a chance receiving a melee attack stuns the attacker for one turn. Not enough to depend on, but a little bonus, as they get stuck and have to wrestle themselves off of you. For flavor.
I wonder what else there could be?
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>>72740
>>72742
There was realistically no way i was finishing before you, and i'd much rather have it all in one big expansion
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>>72742
>I wonder what else there could be?
Well the phoenixes are already in-lore salamander-harpy hybrids so that could probably be a good place to look for another flavor thing. That being said i have ZERO clue what did they even got out the hybridization. Was it ever mentioned?
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An Alice That Loves Balls (RARE)
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Alices really don't need more content. But when inspiration strikes... 
>>72743
Never know what could happen. I might accidentally take salvia and have to spend the next 40,000 years as a Rugrats VHS tape in a musty attic. There's a nice, secure feeling in knowing I left enough things finished to update to 1.7 as-is.
Don't take salvia. You'll become the long dreams guy from that Junji Ito manga
Point is, you could have finished, and if it happened, no one would have to wait on me.
>I'd rather have it all in one big expansion
We'll have an even bigger one next time.
>>72745
Lewd variant of it?
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>>72745
>>72740
>>72736
Remember to add all of this to the chronicles, cause i will forgot
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>>72745
Balls
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Among the things that would drastically change the feel of the game, one would be Long Crawl(A mode, like Long Haul) where the areas you explore are all dungeon-style with randomly generated tile layouts with some semblance of logic for where special encounters are. Maybe as simple as the further you are from the start point, the higher the chance of a rare encounter.
I think CoC II and TiTS may sour a lot of peoples' feelings on it though, despite its different implementation.
Wouldn't happen anyway.
>>72752
I shouldn't put that much effort into a shitpost.
...HOWEVER,
It's What She Would Have Wanted
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>>72753
The other stuff is updated, but this last one is a shitpost, it might be too stupid for the game.
Maybe Alices should get a rare chance to drop rubber balls though. They're only level 6 and relatively easy to beat, and it's an early game throwable. Not a half-bad find and not unbalanced. If you don't see Telly until the Bazaar, you'll be way too late in the game for the balls to serve any practical use normally
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>>72758
It needs an unpenis'd version, but otherwise it's a good addition to the game, someone should implement it ASAP.
>One eyeball is bruises and mishapen
bruised and misshapen
Requesting that the Crag Witches Potent Pregnant/Prostate perks come with a permanent glowing red/pink womb tattoo that lasts through Ascension. Pretty please?
>why
It would make my penis happy.
>With gills, player has a small (10%?) increase in all fatigue costs
Is it only physical-costing actions or is it also magical?
What is the difference between fish gills and mermaid gills?
Should i save up my questions for one big post, or trickle them in as i get them?
when the shirt is "enchanted" is it cursed? should it still block gill changes when unenchanted?
swimming with izma kids, does gills decrease the amount of fatigue used?
swimming with helia, does it reduce fatigue with gills? (currently no fatigue change)
Milk baths doesn't get extra fatigue reduction bonus, as it's not water or should it?
Random cock shrinkage event, all cocks or just a random one?
does a mermaid have a "reptile" underbody?
what color does a mermaid have? blue?
do i use fish scales for skin or lizard scales?
Hypothetically, if one were to write such a thing, how would a 13-year-old bimbo differ from an adult bimbo?
Vertical proportions would be an obvious difference, but not something that would come up much in text.
Horizontal proportions are kind of key to the whole bimbo concept, so while assets would of course be somewhat smaller, the overall proportions probably couldn't change much without losing the point, right?
In terms of speech and overall personality, adult bimbos already tend to go for a sort of "sex-crazed retarded child" feel, so I'm not quite sure what would change there.
It would be decidedly dull to just throw in a bunch of adjectives referencing her youth and then call it a day, even if that would likely be enough to get some people going.
>>72767
>I thought underbody was a quadruped thing, for whenever you use Taurinum to turn your animal legs into a taur form of it
Underbody is used for all kinds of furries and scalies. Naga uses it for both the main scale color of their tails and for differently-colored ventral scales.
I'm not sure why things were done that way (they could've just added color or skin to lowerbody instead for example), underbody is seriously overcomplicated due to things like that.
It makes sense to handle mermaids and naga similarly, but that could mean adding a fish/mermaid underbody, just reusing naga underbody (it's all specially handled anyways so it's not like there'd be a real difference between using naga and making mermaid), or cleaning things up so underbody isn't sometimes used as a second lowerbody.
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>>72768
I forgot to add:
If color/skin is added to lowerbody, mermaid could do without any underbody at all as long as it just needs a single scale color, but it would still need an underbody (its own or reusing naga) if you want a secondary color, differently colored ventral scales or fins or something.
>>72767
She uses her appendages to inject a lust toxin so you will fertilize her, rut her and have her trouble swimming away for how much cum she was filled with
>>72758
You never dissapoint me
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>>72767
Finally
sex with Aurelia
Does anybody actually play with Survival mode turned on?
>>72785
Once every few years
>>72785
Everytime. Vitality potions stave off the hunger until I get to Isabella for her safe milk.
>>72785
always
>>72785
I've never tried playing without it, seems dumb.
Is chant a physical or magical attack? also need some tooltip text and usage text for it
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For whenever ox sees this, could you check if the sexiness stat works correctly, i seemingly dont see the statboost when equipping upperwear vs none
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>>72803
I'm not ox, but both* sexiness stats work correctly, undergarments just don't display bonus stats in their item descriptions currently.
get_description in Undergarment.hx needs the line "desc += generateStatsTooltip();" added at the end, either before or after the naga note (I'm thinking before would look better, but I'm not sure).
You can look at get_description in other equippable types for examples.

*There are, confusingly, two sexiness stats that do different things, first is the undergarment property that boosts tease chance, then there's the bonus stat that boosts tease damage (which I don't think is ever called sexiness in-game, at least, only in the code).
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>>72805
I added it (and comitted) to the stats screen, and the value (sexiness in code, tease dmg in text) didn't change with/without a bra
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>>72806
The commit doesn't add sexiness to displayStatSummary to actually display it, you just added the link. You also haven't committed adding sexiness (the bonus stat, not the undergarment property) to the shirt.
It should work if you do both of those. See pics for example, I added 11 sexiness (the bonus stat) to the training bra and made it display in the stat screen and undergarment tooltips.

The regular sexiness stat that some existing undergarments have (the one that is called sexiness in the game) isn't displayed anywhere outside of the item's tooltip, same as armor defense.
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>>72807
I forgot there's a limit of 5 images.
>>72807
Instead of doing .boostSexiness(11), add a comma and then 11 to the undergarment, that's the sexiness stat i'm talking about that seemingly doesn't increase anything, unless i'm being as dense as a wall of bricks
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>>72810
That's what I mean when I say the regular, non-bonusStat sexiness. That doesn't increase tease damage, it increases tease chance, and it doesn't use the bonusStats system so it can't be displayed that way (and isn't currently displayed anywhere in the game outside of tooltips).

It does work in combat though, I tested both sexinesses to be sure. With a new character and no sexiness (either kind), I failed 20 teases in a row, then after equipping 100+ sexiness (the kind you're talking about, the non-bonusStat kind) I succeeded 20 times in a row.

To check/use the value of sexiness in the code (like for Chant probably), you'd use player.upperGarment.sexiness and player.lowerGarment.sexiness. Pic related shows how tease uses them for example.
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>>72812
i get it now, pretty retarded that the non-bonusStat is named as such, and that it isn't properly reflected in the stats screen
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>>72813
Yeah, it would be a good idea to rename the bonus stat (since it's only named that way in the code and not in the game, and the non-bonusStat was there first) to make things less confusing.
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>>72813
>>72814
And done, which you may need to account for if my merge request is merged before yours is ready.
BonusStat.sexiness is now (or will be after merging) BonusStat.teaseDamage
BonusStat.seduction is now BonusStat.teaseChance
Sexiness (from undergarments) is included as part of tease chance in stats.
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I have been permabanned for spam, somehow, so no random jellyfish picture this time.

Something I'm going for in the design is that her body is smaller than a child, though far bigger than a faerie.
And if you have underage set to fully on, I want several parts of the text to give a more toddler-like impression. I am not sure I will ever find a way to make a toddlercon enemy if not this, so I should give it my best shot.
Let me know how i could improve or further capitalize on this.
Shibari Jelly (Male)
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Probably going to do a second tied up scene where you flip her over and use the bell like a bed to fuck her on, and call the two scenes Tie Up and Tie Down.
But I need more scenes than that, so still speak up with suggestions on how you'd like to lewd her.
Goodnight.
>>72785
Exclusively. It's a roleplay mechanic more than a gameplay one, and I like to starve my character a lot.
>>72802
>Physical?
Physical would be weird wouldn't it? Magical
>Usage text
From the first paste, where it introduces Chant
Your eyes drift shut and the world goes quiet. With a deep breath, you begin to sing a wordless tune--gentle and rhythmic. Its refined, careful sound soothes any that hear it.
>Tooltip.
Did forget to do that.
Sing to slow down and allure all who hear it. Scales with tease bonus.
To further elaborate, the power level of this move should be pretty bad on a single target unless you're really geared for tease. The lust damage it does will always be less than picking [Tease] but, of course, it is AOE and also packages in the speed debuff, making it still worth doing at single targets when you're a lust build. 
We have quake, dragon breath, and so on HP damage AOEs, don't think we have a lust one.
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>>72820
>I have been permabanned for spam, somehow
Some of your posts were deleted too.
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>>72821
Nah I deleted a few that were redundant because I had updated the contents, or that I had any suspicion might trip some alarm bell on the board or whatever.

That board's really so far and away deader than what we had back in the 8ch days. Deader than Julay. And people complain a lot that CP doesn't get cleaned up very fast.
And now this.
I wonder if we should start cross-posting on another imageboard. Cultivate a cozy place that doesn't take 3 captchas to post
>>72816
Nice, although i'm still of the opinion that the undergarment sexiness stat should get renamed also be tease dmg/chance
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>>72823
I think that would make things more confusing again (there shouldn't be two stats that are named the same but handled differently), plus it's been sexiness for 10 years now, it's what people expect and are familiar with.
You can even explicitly see what it does now, so I don't see any reason to change it.
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>>72824
>(there shouldn't be two stats that are named the same but handled differently
Why would tease dmg/chance be handled differently on underwear vs how its handled on armor?
>it's been sexiness for 10 years, people are familiar
And sexiness hasn't been clear about what that means for 10 years. It doesn't make it good.
If you won't change sexiness to match what it says on armor, change armor to say sexiness so people know they're the same thing
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>>72824
i just mean backend wise, for the typical player it can be called sexiness
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>>72825
>Why would tease dmg/chance be handled differently on underwear vs how its handled on armor?
I think it makes sense as a flavor thing; undergarments have it as a standard, inherent property, like defense on armor (which is no more clear than sexiness on what exactly it does), while a rare few armors have it as a special bonus. Basically, because they are different, even from a player perspective and not just a quirk of the code.
Having sexiness as its own thing also allows the stat comparisons to be shown. That could potentially be done for special bonuses too, but it isn't straightforward to do (you have to consider additive vs multiplicative, and the addition/removal of bonuses entirely, rather than just a change in a single always-present value, and you have to display all that information in an easily understandable way in the very limited space provided).
>If you won't change sexiness to match what it says on armor, change armor to say sexiness so people know they're the same thing
Both options look kind of bad, in my opinion. The former because of the reasons stated above and also because having the same special bonus on 80% of all undergarments would feel pretty off. The latter because it splits up tease chance and tease damage in a very awkward way, like in this example here. You'd have to add a new stat for tease damage and do the same thing with that, which will make it even less clear what these bonuses do.
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>>72827
>because they are different
How are they different? I thought they were both the same tease damage bonus, 1:1
Defense on underwear isn't treated any different than defense on armor
>your pic
Wait, is sexiness tease chance not damage?
>It would look off
Just don't bold it on underwear
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>>72828
>How are they different?
In the way I described in the preceding sentence. The mechanical effect is identical, 1 point of sexiness increases your tease chance by 1, but the context is different.
In the same way, if there were a weapon that added block chance then it would be displayed differently than block chance on shields even if it worked the same, an armor that adds weapon damage would display it differently than weapons even if it worked the same, because the bonuses are in non-standard places.
>Wait, is sexiness tease chance not damage?
Correct. That will be visible in-game with the changes I made.
Frieren event when?
What does the Eldritch Staff look like? I need to know to satisfy my autism.
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Who do I have to beg to get the Spellsword changed to give +80% spellmod?
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>>72835
it looks like dried squid
>>72836
No one because nobody gives a shit about that thing or the bitch that gives you that thing
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>>72836
>>72838
Nobody wants to write for Dominika because she's hard to write. She was designed to be more complex than other NPCs by her author, and was given a mysterious personality. Her unfinished plot is a tall order to complete, too. Symphonie already explained what her plan was building up to, she wants to destroy the city to open a portal and escape Mareth, but there's a lot to fill in and making it live up to quality standards and expectations wouldn't be easy. Not to talk about possibly having to write events for a destroyed Tel'Adre if her plan were to go through unfoiled.
There's probably more to Dominika than I know, but if memory serves right she was originally written her as an OC for another game, so there might be other stories out there to help get a better idea of her character. In the end, though, there is plenty of blank spaces to fill, and that's daunting.
Also she's only found at the bar, and only two hours a day. You can easily miss her or forget about her.
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>use trap oil to get wings
>balls shrink to "compressed balls"
I'm having difficulty trying to imagine what that's supposed to look like? Could anyone post a pic as an example?
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>>72841
Not at all
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>>72841
I believe it's when the testicles are small enough that the sack more resembles a single sphere than a proper package. Basically their balls haven't dropped yet due to how unmasculine/feminine they are.
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>>72845
You know what? That's not so bad. What tags did you use to find this?
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Hey is there a way to edit the save? I tried the CoCED but it doesn't use the save to file, and when I tried to search for the  .sol in the route /data/data/com.coc.hgg/files it doesn't exist in my tablet. I'm using the coc_hxgg_android_armv7_1.6.19.apk
>>72846
There's no real tag for it from what I know. Best you can do is go through the list of traps/shota to find something.
>>72839
>Dominika 
That slut is literally from a WoW ERP sesh
Fucker was never going to be lore appropriate because its from a completely different mythology and magic system entirely
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>>72838
>>72839
>>72851
Why does Dominika have to be a part of the sword getting buffed? Why can't Arian or Circe take a look at it and enchant it?
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>>72852
Dominika has to be part of getting the sword in the first place because you get the sword from Dominika.
If claw-users had a way of getting an alternate Wait button that (in addition to the normal effects of waiting) gave a bonus to normal attacks on the next turn, what should the alternate Wait be named?
I can't think of much, best idea I have is "Lurk".
>>72854
It would be Track
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>>72854
>>72854
I'm sure there's a Pokemon move or ability that would work. I know Zoroark has "Hone Claws".
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>>72858
>Track
Tracking is active, doesn't seem very fitting for an action (or lack thereof) that's more like lying in wait.
>>72859
>Pokemon move
Looking through a list of pokemon moves, I don't see any that quite fit.
"Hyperspace Hole" sounds like it should be in CoC though.
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AnonMonkey, update your commit more often, I want to feel excited
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>>72861
i've gotten so sick i can barely breathe
>>72860
Calm Mind? Plot? Psych Up? Sharpen? Work Up?

This one isn't Pokemon, but how about Seethe? Smoulder?
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>>72864
Something with a feral/animalistic style or clearly claw-based would be most fitting. Sharpen fits with claws, but would be pretty weird in context.
If not a name that fits the theme, there are a whole lot of possibilities and it's easy to just pick whatever, but that's a bit bland so I was hoping someone would have more thematic suggestions.
How do you encounter the demon camp that drops Liddellium?
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>>72864
>Smoulder
You forgot Mald
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Is it possible to get higher than 97% lust resistance without Bro Body?
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>>72869
I guess a better question would be: is there a way to get more than one Chi Reflow perk?
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Those bastards, they banned me and they poisoned AnonMonkey.
I am still banned by the way, the appeal did nothing so far, so you'll just have to imagine the conspiracy-related image/video.
Jelly-girl Victory (Female)
https://pst.moe/paste/pyqklr
Previous shibari renamed Tie Up and this is Tie Down.
Just need oral and that'll be the minimum 3 scenes done.
Encounter itself: https://pst.moe/paste/idcbcl

>>72867
You don't, it was never finished. Some rando started coding it while it was a WIP and I rushed it out for them, but they completely botched liddellium and that item does not work correctly. So the whole thing was disabled for another time.
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>>72869
You can get higher with equipment. Huntsman's Cane gives *1.5, Purity Ring *1.1, Divine Bark Armor *1.1.
Berserk gives *1.6, Uma's relief massage gives ~*1.11, Bimbo Champagne gives ~*1.33, Test Resolve can give ~1.18, but none of those will be reflected on the stats page.
With all possible resistance bonuses you should get to ~99.33%, I think that's the highest lust resistance possible.
>>72870
No, you can only have one, but it's irrelevant to your lust resistance anyways, since it's additive. You're already way past the cap on additive lust resistance and a lot of your additive resistances are wasted already.
Base+additive caps at 75% normally, then ascension adds 5 for a max of 3 ascensions, so the cap can reach a total of 90%. After that, only multiplicative resistance can push you any higher. The screenshot shows 115% base+additive.
>>72871
Did i finish the first paste? i do not remember, can you check/confirm everything is as you wanted it?
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>>72874
Your last commit that is visible to me was 5 days ago, you titled it "only need to fuck with the bodycolors I think"
>[if (isnaga or ismermaid) {[rest on the ground]|kneel down}]
"isnaga or ismer" is still redundant(not mentioning the many cases of that), and you put "[rest on the ground]" in brackets by mistake
>[if (fat) {\"physique\"
We don't actually have categorical thin/fit/fat/muscular conditions in the parser, I think. I put it there in place of figuring out what the thickness and tone scores should be. It becomes hard to be consistent and lengthy to put thickness > ## && tone < ## in so many physique checks.
... Alright, let's see. Based on Player.hx
I don't see myself using the extreme values much(besides emaciated), but I'll note them
<titanic
thickness > 90 and tone > 90
<hulk
thickness > 90 and tone >= 50
<obese
thickness > 90 and tone < 50
<fat
thickness > 70 and tone < 50
<chubby
(fat) or (thickness > 50 && tone < 25)
<muscular
thickness < tone and tone >= 50
<average (or averagebuild if "average" is too generic)
thickness and tone both > 30 < 71 or default
<fit
thickness < tone
<thin
thickness <= 30
<emaciated
thick and tone under 10

This is probably poorly constructed, I'm braindead with code and numbers. But ehh figure it out. Some of these are meant to overlap. Someone obese is also fat. 
>removeText
>(!saveContent.bound || !saveContent.enchanted)
Code is a bit confusing to look at, but you then check if it's not bound, then give the destruction text. I don't see if this destroys it, but also if it isn't enchanted then it also isn't bound, so the completely dispelled shirt would also get the destruction text, and that's not intended. If you got rid of the magic entirely, it's just a shirt, and you can take off and put it back on freely.
>your [if (isgoo) {slime
I should have written hasgooskin, I make that mistake a lot. isgoo is being fully goo, with the amorphous legs and all, I think.
>[if (bald)
I think I meant [if (!hasHair)
Do not think we have a bald condition
>[if (cabin)
The actual condition is (builtcabin). There is a [cabin], but that outputs cabin or tent, it's not a condition
>Chant
Line 334 on NobleShirt the text for chant seems to just be sitting there, inexplicably. Guess you didn't finish that one. We can discard blind-immune if it's any hassle, not important.
>[if (ismermaid or isnaga) {[slide your fingers over your crotch]|kneel down}]
Brackets again, and redundant ismer check (you did a lot of those)
>gills fatigue checks
In hindsight, the code perhaps should have been if the shirt was at gills stage or player ismermaid. This is just checking the gills are the mermaid type, which I think is a specific type, meaning mermaids with fish or anemone gills get no downside.
Code is not my forte, you must understand.
>[if (isnaga || isgoo || ismermaid)
This is just (singleleg)
>It does not accommodate people with less than one leg (Harpy)
silly when it listed as a single leg, but also it's more natural to say "no legs" than "less than one leg". Saying no legs gets it across better.
>can not accommodate people with one leg.  (HellHound)
Well now you're just being inconsistent with yourself.
>>/*MERMAIDTODO*/
I think all of these are cases where you were going to touch up existing naga scenes, but I will be handling those on my own so just leave it.
Make sure to check that isNaga resolves true when mermaid lowerbody. Double check. You didn't do it in your commit.
And some of these ismer you did will actually break the scene for nagas.
>CombatAbilities.hx
Found chant, but you didn't finish it
>Farm.hx
You removed snake from the non-mer naga output
It should be like
<[if (isnaga) {in your [if (!isMer) {snake-}]cloaca
>(player.isNaga() && player.lowerGarmentPerk != "NagaWearable") || player.isMermaid())
Should be ((player.isNaga() || player.isMermaid) && ... so on.
>sexiness
Make sure you're aligned with how Koraeli changed that in !55

>>anything else
I didn't see the shirt drop, remember to do it when you apply t
>>72884
Rather than having isNaga return true for mermaids, it would probably be less confusing to add a new function for "isNaga || isMer", since naga has been one specific thing until now.
Maybe "tailLeg" or something?
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>>72884
That was 3975 characters, I can definitely confirm it was under the limit
But one again, it cuts off the end, which read:
>>anything else
I didn't see the shirt drop, remember to do it when you apply the Zealot rewrite
>>72885
Potentially, but 9 times out of 10, naga and mer would get the same output, so it'd be changing a hundred isNaga to tailLeg.
tailLeg is better for future-proofing if more tailLeg types were to be added
The amount of work isn't really any different at the moment.
What I do know is that going to every isNaga check in the game just to add "or ismer" is a bit silly. tailLeg is a solution. I'm fine with it.
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>>72884
God i love getting actual feedback within a day when i ask for it, wish i got it at work. When i get non-sick i have lots to look at
>>72885
>>72886
also i can do this, but do you want to go though naga (not just isnaga) and make the changes, or do you want me to do it
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>>72891
Isn't it just a reg ex to change all isnaga to tailLeg? Then a little manual touching of the isnaga function itself.
After that, I'll go in and touch up all the actual instances of tailLeg to add isNaga or isMer where it needs to be tailored.

I know nothing of code. Koraeli could say what the right way to easily do it is.
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>>72896
It depends on how many of the naga checks would apply to mermaids. If it's most of them, then just changing all isNaga to tailLeg and then changing some of them back while manually reviewing every tailLeg makes sense. Otherwise, reviewing all isNaga and changing them to tailLeg when appropriate makes more sense. But it doesn't make a huge difference either way, since the hard part is going to be thoroughly reviewing all 429 instances, not changing the conditions.
Aside from isnaga, you'd also need to search/review all instances of NAGA (all caps), but there's only 58 of those so it shouldn't be a big deal.
I skimmed through all instances of naga other than those, and didn't see anything that would need addressing at all and wouldn't be caught by the other searches.
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>>72897
I had skimmed over a lot of the isnaga stuff months ago and it looked like 90% of the time, mer applied just fine. It would just be minor touching up
Most of the time, it isn't snake-themed, it's just the logistical difference of having a tail instead of legs. Some stuff will need to be naga specific, like the hypnotism scenes from early CoC, but mostly it's all the same.
>>72896
Yesn't, there's some places that doesn't use isnaga, but instead checks the lowerbody (as mentioned in 72897), but otherwise you're right
>> 72871
Does the jelly-girl have breasts and/or nipples? Don't see it mentioned in the pastes either way.
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I wish one could turn on/off parasites by type.
Is there somewhere I can find a list of all of the races you can change yourself into, along with that bonuses they provide? I just found out you can combine Kitsune and Dragon transformations to uncap speed and intelligence.
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>messing around with cheat sword
>test it against Helia
>she blocked instant death
Am I in danger?
How are things coming along, AnonMonkey?
Jellyfish Oral
https://pst.moe/paste/uidsno
Fucking her in the face, not the mouth, while her mouth is sucking on the player's balls seemed like a fun thought. I like using the permeability of her membrane with some purpose to it.
>>72901
With underage enabled, definitely flat chest.
Beyond that, my mental image is just a vaguely human-shaped miniature slime hanging from a jellyfish.
If goo-girls at the lake have nipples, I guess she does too.

I request somebody write Kiha putting her foot down if the player brings Vapula to camp and force you to boot one of them. They should be strictly incompatible.
Ceraph doesn't need that because she doesn't stay at camp, only arriving in secret when summoned.
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>>72911
i'm just about getting healty again, it was bad. Deadline for this needs to be a monthish if we dont want another big delay, so keep pushing me
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>>72912
Let's get a 1.7 pre-release at least done this month.
Tell me your favorite kinks, I'll try to work it into content to motivate you.
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>>72913
it's far and few inbetween i find a good petplay scene in any content, but you dont really need to work it into anything, just keep poking me so i feel obligated
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>>72913
Finding a random pregnant goblin(or even Tamani) giving breech birth
And fucking her not-yet-fully born child so her baby womb gets a taste of cum before she even gets a taste of her own mothers milk
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>>71051 (OP) 
But I don't want lolis, I want giant titties
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>>72918
No dessert until after dinner, now hush and eat your lolis.
>>72918
Giant titty lolis
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>>72920
I concur. Game could use at least one oppai loli besides the player.
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I should make sure I have something spooky for an October update.
Mora, The Weeping Willows
Encounter + TFs + KILL: https://pst.moe/paste/cupuml
Loss: https://pst.moe/paste/vqmsjj
Victory (Penis): https://pst.moe/paste/evbdaa
>>72914
I reference Pet by A Perfect Circle in the loss, that'll have to do in the short-term.
>>72915
It was specific to AnonMonkey, the coder I depend on to get anything done. But you get points for creativity. A breech birth in progress is functionally an adult-to-pedo adapter. If I could ever be bothered to read Tamani content, I may do that.
>>72923
The game also lacks what i would call bellyriding, tying someone under you as a taur and going for a run (or swim if mermaid?). Also great news, boos said he's closing the office next week so i should have plenty of time to code if plans allows
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>>72924
Forgot to say, i believe only helia has such a scene?
>>72921
Surprised you can't lolify the bathgirl
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>>72921
Would it count as child content or not?
I like oppai lolis.
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I'm amazed that people are still making contents.

>>72923
Boo, not enough description about them curves
>>72854
Scratch? Something like that. Maybe you use a tree nearby as a scratching post.
Or whet. Like grinding your claws against a nearby stone or hard surface to sharpen the edges.
>>72931
Child. Otherwise it'd just be shortstack.
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Last time I played this mod was two years ago, how much changed since then, the community too, not just the game
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Get fucked, monkey, I'm giving you yet more work to do for 1.7.0
Jellyfish Girl [Finished]
Encounter: https://pst.moe/paste/cxsnjc
Loss (Breastfeed): https://pst.moe/paste/udpwqp
Loss (Upside down bj): https://pst.moe/paste/evfbly
Victory (shibari for penis): https://pst.moe/paste/yrfcyg
Victory (shibari for penn't): https://pst.moe/paste/dyiljo
Oral Sex: https://pst.moe/paste/jbdqwm

>>72937
The changelog does the job on the game front.
Prolikewoah is still a 0 discoverability site with slow, ineffective moderation and bugs that never get fixed. Inexplicably I am permabanned for "spam: post containing -"
I hope to find another website to crosspost the mod on.
The current writers are, intermittently, a Marble-loving anon who wants to overhaul Minerva, and Asteroth that wants to fuck Urta.
And I'm still here.
The current coder making updates possible is AnonMonkey, the only reason anything is getting done. 1.7 is a big, intimidating update for him, but he's working on it. Ox and Koraeli are also present, but mostly active enough to consult about code and not implementing things. 
After 1.7.0 drops, we'll at least have a spooky demon to fuck in October, and I have to proofread over 230,000 words according to a wordcounter so fuck me I guess.
You can check the chronicles for stuff that's work-in-progress.
Currently, hardly any monster attacks can be parried. Sometimes there's a sensible reason for it, but often the attack is something that logically would be parryable, but just isn't.
Any objections to going through and changing that, so anything that it makes sense to parry can be parried?
It would allow parrying to be a viable defensive strategy alongside blocking and dodging, very useful if someone coincidentally wanted to add something parry-focused. But it would also make it even easier to avoid being hit, and that's not really something that needs to be easier when it's already not that hard to get >50% block chance and >50% dodge chance.
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>>72939
>but mostly active enough to consult about code and not implementing things
I can help implement scenes  if needed, but my interest in working on the mod is intermittent at best. So as long as there's someone else willing to do it, it's better to let them get more experience. That also lets me work on other things without burning out.
Let's kiss cute slimes!
https://pst.moe/paste/raupuf
>>72911
>If goo-girls at the lake have nipples, I guess she does too.
Seems they do, I guess. Never realized.
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>>72939
Thanks, guess things quieted down even more since thrm but atleast the mod haven't been abandoned
Wish I could help with coding but my old PC is all busted and I'm too dumb for that shit
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>>72943
Then proofread or write, you can do that shit on a notepad
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>>72944
hell, if you really wanted to code, grab a simple scene and just look at the other scenes, and try
Forgot my name earlier but w/e
>>72940
Sounds like an oversight, don't see a reason to object to fixing it.
>>72943
There was a time I worked on this mod with a half-broken ancient laptop that ran Windows XP, it doesn't take much to contribute if you had a strong interest. If nothing else, you can read and give feedback on submissions.
>>72942
A mere half an hour after I declare it complete. I'm a little skeptical, and it's quite a big scene, but I like the concept to make a recurring button tietle. Even if it is a bit of a stretch
>[if (hasgills)
You can only encounter explore the depths of the lake if you have gills. Maybe there'd be an alternative one day, but presumably that alternative would also let you breathe underwater
>her [jellycolor] curtain of dangling strands
Unsure if "her blue curtain of dangling strands" is the right way to do it, "her curtain of dangling blue strands" sounds better to me.
>her small body [if (allowchild) {appearing not much older than [if (ischild) {your own
I should say the way I envisioned her was very small, like a 5-year-old(or younger, with full underage). Definitely appearing younger than a child player is underage is enabled.

The scene is really odd, and reminds me a lot of Lesbianon. I remember them writing a cuddle scene for the Hellmouth.
It feels like the scene meanders around quite a bit for such a simple premise. Wordy, flowery, and emotional for a random nameless goo mass that tried to assault you. I wouldn't dwell on it as much if it were half the length that it is.
Maybe it's too early in the morning. I could use a second opinion
I'm assuming 3'4 is the shortest you can make your PC?
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>>72936
Saddening.

>>72939
What about them curves
>scrolling down through text on Android highlights all the text unless I'm playing on mobile mode
>The mobile mode makes the whole game look like shit
I think I got too used to these tiny unconfortable buttons that may make you misclick a option because of the game not being made with phone screens in mind.
>>72923
>A breech birth in progress is functionally an adult-to-pedo adapter
I saw an animated vid of a succubus having her daughter fucked like that in e621 once
seems the vid got removed since I can't find it there anymore
wish I saved the thing
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>>72947
You can get down to 3' by being 3'4" and then turning your legs to goo with slimy cloth.
Asteroth's submissions':
Urta Public Blowjob (Horny): https://pst.moe/paste/tpisjv
Urta Public Blowjob (Not-Horny): https://pst.moe/paste/mzxdld
Whitney Romance Route: https://pst.moe/paste/szzolw
I proofread his Urta stuff three times each, probably fine now. Whitney romance is new, and he's not good at character writing, so probably needs lots of feedback and weighing in with thoughts and opinions. Haven't read it, myself.
>>72952
>seems the video got removed
e6 banned all non-furry lolisho from the site
Was it middling quality with synthesized spanish voices? If so, I may have seen that artist on mastadon. I don't recall seeing that video in particular, but they had a succubus with a baby as recurring characters, and it sounds like something they'd do.
· · · insaneanimus, or @SexLizard on baraag. Searching the #babycon brought them up right away. Apparently not synthesized, it's their own voice put through a modulator.
Wonder if I could make a baraag account to post the mod on or if that's focused on just visual arts.
>>72947
As I recall 3 feet is the hard minimum. So, I suppose it is possible for a player to be as small as the jelly.
The average human 8-year-old is 4 feet tall, the size of Jojo.
The shortest Alice in the game is Telly, at 3'10"
3'0" is so small.
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>>72965
>As I recall 3 feet is the hard minimum.
It's the minimum in practice, because there's currently nothing that can make you smaller when you're that small, but there's no hard minimum. For example if you edit your save to make your height 1 inch (or even negative probably, though that might cause an error somewhere), it would stick just fine.
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In all the events, encounters, and quests all of you perverts have come up with, I'm honestly pretty shocked that not once has anyone come up with a character or enemy that performs some honest, actual, real level drain (or stat drain, as it might have to be, given the limitations of the codebase).

...Of course, there are encounters and battles that lower your stats depending on the outcome, but that's not really the same thing. I think it'd be nice to have a character who directly makes you weaker in order to make themselves stronger -- permanently -- for future encounters. Maybe could limit it to silly mode if that's a bit too much of a leap for the lore, but either way, I want a girly girl with a fat ass to knock my character over, sit on her face, and drain like 10 points of my Strength into herself, making her hit harder for every single time you fight her thereafter.

Of course, I haven't seen all the encounters in the mod due to only playing once or twice every year or two, but I'd never encountered anything like that before.
>>72966
Negative would mean you're a universe sized giant
>>71051 (OP) 
Where is the save editor?
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No Bimbo Jojo in this version?
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>>72977
/hgg/'s quality standards are higher than other mods.
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Does anyone know the name of the old man demon you encounter with Dolores?
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>>72975
There's actually a button in-game for it. At the top when in play, click [Data] and you can save, overwriting any save data with the gamestate you currently have, editing what is saved there.
>>72979
Allocer
It's a riddle about splitting in half and recombining, and gives you Cerallo
Hey Anonnomás!
Finish Izma and Alex
Where are you, buddy?
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>>72884
it's me, your monkey back in the mines.
>gills fatigue checks
unless you're really set on it being ismermaid, i actually like it best if it checks if you have mermaid gills (possibly add the other gills?)
>(player.isNaga() && player.lowerGarmentPerk != "NagaWearable") || player.isMermaid())
is whatever is NagaWearable also "MermaidWearable"?
I've done the tailLeg, who were going to go though all the isnaga and ismer? you or me
chant...is to be coded, didn't have too too much time today
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Aesthetically, I like the dress I'm giving the red driders in 1.8, so I want it to drop. Rarely, and it's from the dungeon's mooks, so it doesn't need to be amazing. I think something like
"WdwDres", "Widow Dress", "black widow-silk dress", "a black widow-silk dress with a miniskirt", 4, 1000, "A black dress with crimson strings to tighten or loosen as needed. The top rises up to just cover the chest, exposing the cleavage and shoulders of the wearer, with net-like sleeves that dangle open around the wrists. The bottom is a short, ruffled skirt, just large enough to cover a drider's groin, but would fit well on any body-type.", "Light");
True for isnakedlower
Enemy's current lust increases accuracy of player biting skills. (all bites, not just spider fangs.)
Additional tease bonuses and +2 defense for being a drider or spiderkin.

I think it makes for a unique blend. Not optimal gear, but not bad.
>>72984
>I like it with mermaid gills
That would mean that mermaids who have different styles of gills don't get the drawback. I'm not dead-set on this, but that just doesn't seem right to me.
It can be both. Mer gills or having gills and being mer.
>is whatever is NagaWearable also "MermaidWearable"?
Whatever is NagaWearable is tailLeg wearable. It's a trait of lower wear in not requiring it slide between legs. Loin cloths and the sort.
Also pretty sure bikini armor and ivory corsets should not be wearable on tailLeg
Though I could just change one little piece of text to make corsets simply not include the panties if you can't wear panties. Which is what I probably ought to do.
Bikinis, though, I feel like the panty style bottom is integral to the outfit.
>Who is going through all the isnaga and ismer
Me. I'll do it after you finish implementing stuff, during the downtime when we put out the pre-release and try to get bugs caught.
>>72985
>It can be both. Mer gills or having gills and being mer.
Isn't the focus point of the debuff because you have gills so you have a harder time breathing, not because you're a mermaid?
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>>72986
Because you are a mermaid, your gills are far more sensitive and effective. Having a different kind of gill isn't going to change that
The alternative is to replace whatever gills with mermaid gills, which limits aesthetic options
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>>72987
aaah, getcha, they're sensitive because you're a mermaid, not because they're mermaid gills, in which case it'd be better if it's all gills imo
>>72985
>Though I could just change one little piece of text to make corsets simply not include the panties if you can't wear panties. Which is what I probably ought to do.
A lot of armor as described would be a problem for naga/mer, taurs, and driders. It's probably fine to just gloss over that and assume you don't wear the bottoms in those cases, or the armor is otherwise modified to fit.
>>72983
I'll make another attempt this weekend at Alex. It's closer to finished and not as big. I make no promises on if I actually accomplish anything but I'll atleast give it another shot. As for where I am, I've just been lurking this whole time, other projects have taken my attention but I intend on returning to this one eventually.
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>>72990
It takes a haiku 
to bring you out of hiding
can't believe this shit
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>>72985
Should we change NagaWearable to something like TailLegWearable? to make it clearer what it does?
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>>72992
I don't see why not
>New commit!
>>[if (isnaga or ismermaid) [rest on the ground]|kneel down]
I said you mistakenly put "rest on the ground" in brackets and they're still in brackets, and now you've removed the bracers.
>>[if (ismermaid or isnaga) [slide your fingers over your crotch]|kneel down]
There has been a misunderstanding here

I did say I'm going through these all regardless so I guess it doesn't matter, but I should tell you that you misunderstood the problem.
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>>72993
there's not much oxygen down in the codemines these days
>>72987
so do you get something out of the drawback?
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>>72978
So no.
Damn, I want to corrupt and make Jojo into a bimbo.
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>>72982
>There's actually a button in-game for it. At the top when in play, click [Data] and you can save, overwriting any save data with the gamestate you currently have, editing what is saved there.
I'm sorry, but what are you talking about? I see nothing of the sort.
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I intend to have the Mora done and implemented in an October release like 1.7.2 or whatever.
For 1.8.0, The Red Widow Nests and Akbal's Quest Redux need doing. In Akbal's Quest, the fuckery statistic will make the fight easier instead of harder. I'll also expand the content in it.
I think the Kitsune Manor should be a miniature dungeon in it. Entirely puzzle-based, not combat. Short.
If nobody wants to take up writing that on my behalf, I'll have to read up on haunted houses and escape rooms for inspiration. This may also be the time to get that trio kitsune children who each have three tails but use an illusion to pretend they're one monstrous nine-tailed fox beast.
The maximum fuckery result would be getting the kids to help you set up a highly frustrating trap for Akbal. 
>>72997
In the water, a net gain of 20 speed (40 over being on dry land) and high fatigue regen.
On both land and water, an AOE lust + speed debuff attack that is enhanced by your tease bonuses. As a perk, like kitsune spells or feline flexibility, so you'll have the option to make the chant attack permanent in NG+
And I guess you get to be a mermaid. That's worth a drawback on its own to some people.
Just you wait until I re-implement Liddellium and you can get all extreme drawbacks with no benefits.
>>72982
Thank you, for some reason I kept thinking it was a miss-spelled anagram of Oracle
>>73004
Liddellium should act like the opposite of Bimbo Liqueur and grant a perk that raises Speed and Intelligence, capping your Strength and Toughness to 25 or less, and maintaining your height, chest, thigh, and ass sizes (also cock size, optional) to below a certain threshold.
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>>72982
>There's actually a button in-game for it. At the top when in play, click [Data] and you can save, overwriting any save data with the gamestate you currently have, editing what is saved there
Where?
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>>73000
>>73014
Pretty sure the dude's taking the piss, mates. Think for five seconds, you press the save button, and it overwrites your current file. In other pedantic words, it does what? I mean hell, he spelled it out completely.
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>>73004
>ust you wait until I re-implement Liddellium and you can get all extreme drawbacks with no benefits.
Excuse me but alicefication is net gain in cuteness that cannot be beaten so clearly the benefits are great
>>73015
Oof. Here I thought it was some sort of technobabble I didn't get.
Should the IsMermaid resolve to true if you have the tail, but not the gills? chant requires gills + tail
I need some perk text for the chant attack (to make it permable)
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Combat with kitsunes says five and a half feet tall, big titties, curvy. The scenes say it. Mansion says it.
But the intro, specifically, and luring the player to the mansion, says little girl. Just 4 mentions. Original says woman. No transition to the illusion either, just a lazy unfinished lolification from pre-OCA days I guess.
I suppose I'll just revert it back to the original text since it's just inconsistent.

Unrelated note, anyone wanting a scene for raping Telly? It'd be hard rape.
Any other characters that seem sweet/peaceful that you currently can't abuse but you'd like to force yourself on them?
>>73024
Well, isMer as I use it is always about just the tail. Mermaid as a race, with the perk, requires both the tail and any gills.
>Perk text
Aqueous Allure - Grants Chant, a lulling song empowered by seduction.
>>73011
No, cap 60 strength and toughness(that is to say -20/30 for liddel and -20/10 for child, -40 net), initial drop to 25 or less str/tgh, increase fatigue costs, near-immunity to TFs as the only benefit. Cannot cast Might or Heal, or any other self-target black magic. Enemy black magic does not work on the player.
That's the design doc from years ago, and I'm sticking to it.
People were dead-set that they wanted the item to be obtainable even though it's mostly bad and permanent. Many just want to use it on NPCs like the plague rat, but some want to drink it.
If you want to shoot yourself in the foot, I won't stop you.
Instead of bimbo style where every night it restores your body to its desired state, you can change to anything, but it's extremely difficult and unlikely. Like TF Resistance on steroids with no toggle option.
It was made for demons, you aren't one of those, and you're also non-native, so it's still easier for you to change than it is for an Alice. But you probably aren't going to TF anyway.
>>73004
>This may also be the time to get that trio kitsune children who each have three tails but use an illusion to pretend they're one monstrous nine-tailed fox beast.
cute yes
>Unrelated note, anyone wanting a scene for raping Telly? It'd be hard rape.
I mean it's kinda overdue even if i probably don't have the heart for it
when you get a new shirt, the interactions about the curse shouldn't reset right?
should the NPC cursed conversations be under talk menu if they have one?
can the shirt be unbound and dispelled at the same time? (specifically ceraph rn) if so then the two scenes make no sense if the other scene has been done
does greta destroying the shirt allow her to disenchant too?
idk what's going on, but the [arianhe] is throwing many errors

The first two docs should be done now, besides those questions
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>>73028
>idk what's going on, but the [arianhe] is throwing many errors
It should be [arian ey]. All the NPCs that have their own gender tags use the NPC's name followed by ey/em/eir/eirs/emself.
You can look through SingleArgLookups, DoubleArgLookups, and ConditionalConverters to see all the valid parser tags.
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Still though.

Save editor please?
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Considering the Mayble milky/massage/handjob thing was at least 60% TheDarkMaster, maybe it should have been credited as TheDarkMaster. 
>>73028
>the interactions about the curse shouldn't reset right?
Right. A lot is just the obsidian vines all over again, even with NPC talks about it. You could even make it addButton(10, because it is always impossible to have both the vines and the undershirt—
Right, I think I forgot to write that interaction. Not that it's a huge misstep since it still removed the undershirt when getting the vines, but it should perhaps be destroyed in the process.
<alrauneInsides
As they set in place, a horrid burning sensation drives you into a frenzy[if (hasarmor) { to remove your clothing[if(/MERSHIRT/) {, only to find it tearing its way through your undershirt}]}].
>Can it be unbound and dispelled at the same time
If it is dispelled, it is unbound.
When the curse is fully removed, there is nothing that would bind it to the wearer.
Ceraph and Greta can both do that. The dispelling makes it a completely mundane item with no TFs and will not break when unequipped. They're both explicitly skilled with curses on equipment, with Ceraph the superior in that.
Arian has enchanting skills, but not so much cursing. He can still rid the binding for free, but the more core effect of TFing is beyond him when it's a style of magic he doesn't recognize.
>Does greta destroying it allow her to disenchant it
I don't fully understand what you're asking. If you have worn the shirt before, but currently have it as a regular item in your inventory, it can be dispelled by either demon regardless if they personally have seen it before since you know it is cursed and the curse isn't active yet.
If you're wearing it, the active curse is less amenable to tampering, so it gets destroyed if it's early enough. Later, the curse it tailored more closely to you and harder to get rid of.
>>73029
>All NPCs
Could have sworn Nieve was [nhim] [nhe] etc. The player is [him] [he]. I'd really prefer the system be consistent across the board, regardless. Oh well, easy solve at least.
>>73032
In options, activate Debug Mode, then either type in "debug" or use the debug wand to open up the debugging menu. Neither save editing nor debugging is advised, but you should have everything you could want there.
>>73036
>Could have sworn Nieve was [nhim] [nhe] etc. The player is [him] [he]. I'd really prefer the system be consistent across the board, regardless.
That's mostly just a difference between local and global tags.
Normal/global tags can be used anywhere. They're all defined in the parser files I mentioned, and Arian, Ember, Rubi, and Benoit all use those (and I decided to add Nieve too, just in case). Since they can be anywhere, they need more consistent, unambiguous, and easy to follow names, hence the two words and the neutral gender. Male and female pronouns both have some ambiguity ("his" can be either "her" or "hers", "her" can be either "him" or "his"), so you need workarounds like "his2" or using male pronouns for everything but then also having "hers". They/them/their/theirs (which the neutral pronouns we use are based on) is unambiguous.
Registered/local tags only exist in a specific place/time (specifically, it's normally from whenever they're registered to whenever you return to camp), they might be used only for a single scene or only for a single NPC (typically registered at some common entry point for all the NPC's content, like the NPC's menu). Since they can't be used just anywhere, these only have to be understandable within a particular context, and can be named more freely (like using a shorter and simpler "nhe" instead of "nieve ey"). They can even overwrite other tags temporarily. Nieve uses these, which works fine since Nieve is almost entirely self-contained (there's just one line that references their gender outside of their file).

There is some inconsistency in the PC using gendered pronouns, but then the PC is inherently different from everyone else. It doesn't seem worth changing to me, especially when they're absolutely everywhere and it's been this way for 12 years, the change would cause more confusion than it resolves.
>>73036
should the NPC cursed conversations be under talk menu if they have one?
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>Exploring Desert, Crag, and Boat(with swim option added)
Does these require both tail & gills, or only tail or only gills?
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Way too much namefagging without actually posting content.
Red Widow Drider Breeding
https://pst.moe/paste/fsxlde
Already started on the lesbian scene. Have not started with driderling scenes. They are prepubescent and don't know anything about sex for the most part, and are all virgins. A level of innocence but an instinct that can be tapped into as their arousal builds. If someone wants to get started on that, feel free, my last version of the driderling file is: https://pst.moe/paste/bltsze (bad end still unfinished)
>>73038
Just put it in the same slot the vines talk would be, wherever applicable. If that is inside the talk menu usually, then put it there on the others. If it isn't, then I guess not. Moth handles the vines and generally knew how to make good calls on things, plus Chronicler was still alive and fussing about where it mattered.
>Git commit
<[ArianHe] to [arian ey]
Messes up the capitalization intended. Did that mistake several times. Should be Ey. Make sure all the ones I had capitalized originally have their pronoun capitalized. (one was Arianhe, capitalized the A but not the H. But Ey is what needs capitalization, not the arian part, that part doens't matter)
>>73039
Debuff zones require tail and gills to drag you down.
Underwater adventures only require gills, but the mermaid form gets good regens and speed.
Picking up momentum, feels motivating.
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>>73040
skipped over that document for now

desert shaman encounter, low, middle or high lust gain. Also with the reject talk
desert shaman fuck, does it only remove the shirt if you have it, or is it not available?
how would you say his stats are compared to the sandwitch? and what does he drop?

would you believe it, we didn't have a [prince/princess] tag before now
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>>73041
>low, middle or high lust gain
That's a tough question, so I didn't answer it. I'm not really a numbers person.
The fight is, in the grand scheme of things, pretty easy, since he's slow in water and you're fast in water and chant gives you that extra turn and he can be stopped dead by running out of speed.
Getting lusted fairly high before the battle might be OK.
Really a feel-it-out kind of thing. I have no idea. We'll start with middle I guess.
>does it only remove the shirt if you have it
I don't even understand what you're trying to ask. The entire event requires full transformation with the cursed shirt on, says at the top of the doc.
>Stats
Somehow, inexplicably, I wrote "not slow because water" but he is slow specifically because water. Maybe I meant "not fast"
Health and strength better than the average for desert encounters. Good intellect. You'll have to figure out what the numbers are in that regard. He's harder to fight than a sand witch.
>Drops
Just money and experience.
>we didn't have a [prince] parse
I never would have guessed.
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>>73036
Aw, but I want to have more control over my dicks, balls, and transformations. Can't change that with Debug Menu.
And not having to be a centaur's bitch.
And not having to be a fox rapier's bitch.

...We kind of need a wiki.
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>>73043
Yes you can. Easily. Trivially. Skill issue.
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Do we have a function to stop a monster from doing their turn? i cant find it if we do
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>>73050
There are a few ways to do it, but if it's for the chant/shaman interaction, I'd have chant give a status effect (maybe a separate status effect that lasts one turn and is only given to the shaman) or just set a variable on the shaman. Then if the shaman has that status/variable, have performCombatAction return the "do nothing" action instead of the usual AI.
I thought monster AI had a way to guarantee a certain action (in which case you could just use the normal AI system for this), but it seems not. Might be worth adding that.
we should make a conditional for small/medium/large/verylarge cocks
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>>73042
what kind of pregnancy does he give you? imp?
i might also have overestimated how much code i can churn out
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>>73052
Why? Seems like it would cause problems in exchange for a tiny bit of simplicity.
I can see an argument for the cum quantity conditionals, people generally won't have much intuition for what numbers to use, and they get so absurdly high as to be meaningless to most people anyways ("medium" is already several times what's humanly possible). So it makes sense to have defined thresholds like that so you can gloss over the issue. If you're off by an order of magnitude or two, almost nobody will ever notice or care.
Penis size, on the other hand, is something people are generally familiar with (both in terms of what makes sense and in terms of what size they have). If penis size is several inches off from what the scene suggests, people will notice, so it should be decided based on the specific context rather than having generically-defined thresholds.
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>>73055
So that whenever a writer writes if(small cock) then the parser doesn't fuck up, and i dont have to arbitrarily set a size, what is a small cock? 2? 4? 6? if we had some set sizes then they know what sizes go though, and i dont have to pick a random number. It'd also never not fit in with the scene, cause the writer would put it there
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>>73056
Writers generally don't need to know anything about how the parser works or what tags exist, that's up to the coders. Satan's scenes are a lot easier than most in that regard, since Satan is pretty familiar with the parser and how things work, but in general handling all the parser stuff (or deciding what should use the parser and what shouldn't) is a big part of implementing scenes.
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>>73056
>>73057
Satan also has a tendency to not care about specific details like that and leave them all to someone else, more than most writers.
>>73057
but writers (should) also know more about they've written, so they know better about what would count as a small cock, rather than me, who just picks a number. I just want some numbers so i dont have to pull one out of my ass every time, making the scenes who get it less random and more "correct"
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>>73059
In the end, someone will be making arbitrary decisions no matter what. Making arbitrary decisions on a case by case basis is better than making one arbitrary decision (and often an unknown one too) for everyone.
For the [if (small cock) {little }], I'd go with length<5
>>73054
Well yeah, that's how demons work.
>>73041
>Cannot cast Might or Heal, or any other self-target black magic. 
>Like TF Resistance on steroids with no toggle option.
But if it did allow for this it would be perfect. Also, I want an option to use this on Akbal, except it just turns him into a boy.
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>>72999
Same same, I used to always do that to him too in the vanilla version
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>>73067
Bimbo jojo was not in the vanilla version.
You can still corrupt him in /hgg/
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>>73068
Uh? I remember being able to do that, did I mixed up vanilla with xianxa mod or expanded edition?
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>>73073
Yep. Bimbojo is in Revamp/UEE. It was never good enough to get into vanilla CoC
In my canon, driders trace their roots to a particular event with Fera, so I try to give them a little of that flavor.
Red Widow Drider Sapphic 69
https://pst.moe/paste/glqyem
It's also a bit of my take on anon's jellygirl kiss thing in terms of vibes.

I'm pretty busy until the middle of May, it turns out. At the same time, I really want to write more scenes faster.
Updated Bounty Board with more detail on my projects if anyone wants to help.
>>73066
I'm not against people making alternate endings for Akbal. But there is the precedent already that Liddellium turns the consumer into a female child. It'd be like if Jojo drank bimbo liqueur and, inexplicably, still had a penis.
It also doesn't make the victim stupider, just unsexy and weak. He might not have the stamina and constitution for much of his magic, but he still can be a serious brat. Total problem child. He'd need to be chained to a fence post and given a muzzle. He'd be a nightmare and definitely not cute at all.
Plus half the camp should leave in protest for having not just a demon, but an especially defiant one.
Maybe Fera could use a little ounce of that sealing magic that had turned him into a jaguar and, in its original intention, meant to make him a cat. Apply a sprinkle of that to make him a catboy with his magic suppressed. His mentally faculties slightly diminished, so he's even more childish while still aware that he fucking hates you.
Him being a corrupt catboy that "believes" he is a demonic "god" is much less of an outrage and more of a pitiable thing. Clearly he isn't actually a demon and just needs correction.
Don't forget the muzzle though.

Anyway I'm not writing 20,000 words of shotabal bratty rape correction slave. Someone else would have to.
>>73054
yeah, demons make imps
And don't talk like that. You have the capacity to code the entire update this month.
Maybe Koraeli should code the jellygirl though, since it is loli slime content and you're already getting experience doing combat stuff with the other things.
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>>72937
Nothing, there have been no updates.
New thread when?
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>>73082
When 1.7 drops I guess
>>73082
If someone wants to make a thread, you can title it Drowning in Code Edition in honor of AnonMonkey being 3 weeks deep in my Mermaid docs and not even halfway done.
Find a demon, a loli, or a monkey(drawn) floundering in the water for the picture. 
Usually someone makes a new thread by now, don't know why no one has yet. Maybe it's because Chron is gone.

Or you can just wait for me to do it.
>>73077
>Maybe Koraeli should code the jellygirl though
god no, i'm actually excited for her, almost my motivation, make Koraeli do the cultists since i'm dreading that
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>>73077
>Anyway I'm not writing 20,000 words of shotabal bratty rape correction slave. Someone else would have to.
I'll give you $5 whole dollars if you do exactly that. $10 if add scenes where you correct him with your pussy/ass.
Replies: >>73090
how common is the shaman encounter?
is "increase fluid" player.slimeFeed()?
if a player has multiple different fluids in inventory, do i just pick a random one? i assume everything transformative still happens
Replies: >>73090
Good waking up to commit emails in the morning. That's waking up to progress.
>>73087
Surprised to hear it. Loli is Korrie's lifeblood, so can't count on anything else.
Maybe if we had a shotacon dev the zealot could get scooped up.
Also code the shark boss stuff last, as I miiight revise parts. After all the rest, including the cult stuff, is done, do the shark boss. But if I don't do it, go with what's there, since getting updates out is a great morale boost for everyone.
Though you can code the aquamarine ring ahead of time since that isn't changing.

The shark boss stuff really feels like my worst work I've ever put out.
>>73088
First shota camp-anion is getting primary female player focus regardless where it comes from.
But I definitely have too long of a list of things to write as it is, if you check the BountyBoard. Maybe I'll consider it if more work is taken off my plate.
>>73089
Pretty common, considering it's a one-time exclusive event that only happens if you fulfill pretty specific circumstances. Probably a weight of 1.0? I think that's the default. Would mean anything else with no weight has just as much chance, which probably ends up about right?
>fluid
It's the slime fluid system, I know that much. There is something in place for the player having fluids and they can get it from drinking liquids.
>random?
Prioritize the ideal fluids, spring water and milk, the rest can be random. If you want to go the extra mile, prioritizing non-TFs in general would be nice. Vitality tincture, scholar tea, mead. Though, some of those might not have the slime fluid code for it, even though it probably should.
>transform still happens?
Yeah I don't see why not. Especially if it's the path of least resistance.
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>>73090
>it's a one-time exclusive event
That's a shame, i thought it was just a regular encounter
i assume it only happens if it's still enchanted
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>>73090
>Loli is Korrie's lifeblood
what are shotas but alternative lolis
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Can somebody (with coding skills) help me or come with alternative ideas for how to add a "transformative" tag to items, to more easily sort items that transforms, or would it be better to just make a list of every item that transforms you
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>>73093
Gay
>>73093
only if dressed up on girly dresses like the ones alices wear
>>73045
Okay, but save editor please.
My brain is frying because I don't sleep enough, I'm just going to toss out this spotty unfinished Halloween enemy that I was thinking could let you see very corrupt scenes that either don't practically work or would be too much effort
https://pst.moe/paste/boapoj
Includes a decent chunk of hardcore Telly rape.
Brain too foggy to come up with what interactions to give, such that it's not just fight, nor do I know what other scenes to offer or what a reward for victory should be.
Losing or accepting the offer of the scenes would give you a ton of corruption, don't know how much, but among the higher amount the game ever gives in one go.
Blind wouldn't blind her, but it would dissipate the darkness effect and let you see her.

Also was thinking the shark boss content could be retooled and expanded with more flavors of dagon or cthulhu or whatever, though not super overt, and maybe include a mermaid NPC named after Melusine. Fuck Undine. Rusalka is an option but Melusine is what sounds good to me. But I have no real ideas there. I just know I hate the event as it stands.
>>73092
Nahhh it's a lengthy princess-courting kind of play that really wouldn't work repeated.
The doc says "Requires mermaid body and gills and stuck with cursed shirt on"
Full curse, full form.
I enjoyed writing it quite a bit, particularly the consensual route. Don't get to write both those vibes nor in the water like that. Would be nice for it to be more accessible, but I'm content for it to be a niche little thing most people will never see.

Don't forget to fix Arian's pronoun capitalization, AnonMonkey
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>>73107
>Don't forget to fix Arian's pronoun capitalization, AnonMonkey
didn't i already do that?
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>>73110
While you're around fixing things, I hate that I have to read "Male Dragon-Man Child", but if I switch to female pronouns it says "Dragon-Girl Child". Could you change it to drop the "male" and just say "Dragon-Boy Child"?
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>>73112
I'm not around fixing things, i mean i fixed it, but i'm not going around fixing things, that was for a new scene/event
>>73095
You can look at the weapon tagging system (Weapon.hx, WeaponTags.hx, WeaponLib.hx) to get an idea of how to do it. Except instead of putting tags in the constructor (I only did that with weapon tags because they were replacing something that was already there), just have a function to set tags, like Weapon.addTags.
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>>73118
you say that as i just put it there and got stuff to work (kinda)
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>>73119
I would have responded earlier but I somehow slept for 13 hours.
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>>73120
Could you give it a once-over and see if i made it somewhat right?
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I'm going to start cross-posting my writing (and game updates) on https://8chan.moe/hgg/res/10.html as well as here
Mora Bonegrind
https://pst.moe/paste/cbehlh

>>73110
I didn't see it because I was looking at ArianScene.hx instead of the noble shirt file, and meant as more of a "make sure you did it" since I didn't feel like figuring out why I wasn't seeing it. Sleepiness.
>way to assist. [arian ey] places a hand
Missed the Ey there
>>ArianScene.hx
>before continuing.[say:I couldn't manage
I missed a space before the [say: there
>>73112
It looks like the redundancy check for race+gender only checks if it says boy or girl, not man or woman? So you'd end up with male dragon-man. But you shouldn't get male dragon-boy, it'd snip "male" if the race were using boy/girl.
A lot of races, like cockatrice and red-panda and wolf and so on will say boy/girl, it's not an age check or anything like that. Meanwhile, even if you're a child, dragons with human faces are man/woman.
Oversight to correct on both ends, it seems. Underage dragon-people should probably be boy/girl. Though dragon man-child does describe dragon players
And checking for man/woman should probably be "-man|-woman" to avoid incorrectly seeing huMAN as redundant gender mention. If I'm understanding it at all.
Not that I'd fix it, I don't handle code, but weighing in. I do fix typos and most simple text errors though, so feel free to point out any problems you find.
>>73120
Envious.
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>>73122
>Underage dragon-people should probably be boy/girl.
simple and easy fix would just be changing -man to be -boy
>>73121
It looks fine to me. You'll also want some way to check the entire inventory for the presence of items with specified tags. Probably one function that just returns true/false, one that returns a list of matching items. You can look at player.hasItem for reference there.
>redundantRaceGender
I'd probably do:
return ~/\b(?:girl|boy|man|woman)\b/.match(race);
\b to prevent matching human or any future race that contains girl/boy/man/woman as part of a word.
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>>73126
>You'll also want some way to check the entire inventory
Yeah, i just wanted the actual system to be correct before i start doing all sorts of stuff with it
You somehow made a better regex than the one i was starting to cook, faster than me
Why is itemcheckups so fucking weird
>>73126
I need a check again, cause what i've made feels wrong
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>>73135
>public function  get_itemTags()
I missed it on the first check, but you don't actually use this. I don't see any need for getters or setters there, so I'd just remove it.
>Std.isOfType(cast(itemSlot.itype, Useable), Consumable)
I can't think of a reason you'd need to cast when checking the type, it should just be Std.isOfType(itemSlot.itype, Consumable)
>GetConsumablesWithTags
Lowercase g
>addTags(...args:ConsumableTags)
You use arrays for everything else but a rest argument here, I'd probably make it all consistent one way or the other.
If you want a single function that can accept an item or an array of items, you can use something like (the formatting here might get messed up):
public function hasTags(value:OneOf<ConsumableTags, Array<ConsumableTags>>):Bool {
    switch (value) {
        case Left(tag): return itemTags.contains(tag);
        case Right(tags):
            for (tag in tags) {
                if (!itemTags.contains(tag)) return false;
            }
    }
    return true;
}
You can read about Either at https://code.haxe.org/category/other/passing-different-types-to-a-function-parameter.html, and the OneOf example mentioned there is already implemented (OneOf.hx). Remember to import OneOf if you want to go that route.
Also note that I'm not sure whether or not Ox would be in favor of doing it this way, but it seems good to me at least.

Nothing else stands out as weird, did some basic testing and it seems fine.
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>>73136
>OneOf
I like that idea, but now i'm afraid of slapping it everywhere that i want to either give an array or single item, like in hasConsumableWithTags
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>>73137
I got spicy with it, am i flying too close to the sun?
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>>73139
I would just have hasConsumableWithTags return a Bool instead of rolling has and get into one function. Easier to read and use if you keep them separated.
Cross posting on https://8chan.moe/hgg/res/10.html#38
Red Widow Nests Bad-End (Incubator)
https://pst.moe/paste/tvucan

It occurs to me. isCentaur is just taur + isHoofed. They could be a cervitaur or whatever variation of hoofed animal. Centaur miight need more specificity. It is only a small handful of occurrences though, so could handle it any other way easily enough.
>>73107
The Telly rape was really good, the little there is.
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Cross-posting on https://8chan.moe/hgg/res/10.html#45
Driderling Straight-Shota
https://pst.moe/paste/nkkinv
Great change of pace, can't think of a time I've had a chance to write shota besides the zealot rewrite.
>>73154
Thank you, anon, I appreciate that.
I always enjoy writing Telly. Probably won't finish that scene until I can flesh out the encounter though.
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While I'm making lethite and furrite piercings apply properly, what types of encounters would you expect furrite to boost the chances for?
The description says "enhance the wearer's appeal to beast-people", and currently applies to minotaurs, hellhounds, and (because of revamp for some reason) Jojo after he's been raped a couple times.

Anything that would be fur-covered outside of nofur mode?
Anything with furry parts?
Only things that can be considered "bestial" in some sense, and not the more civilized encounters?
Scales and feathers too, or specifically just fur?
Only beast-people, or actual beasts too (amarok and hellhounds)?
What about encounters that involve animals but they aren't the central point (mainly thinking of the Erlking here)?
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>>73169
It should also boost Naga and Antlion encounters in the dessert and Gnoll and Satyr encounters in the plains
Had the sudden thought, does the swim stuff with the boat have separate encounters than the boat? And if so, should we have a way for the player to learn how to swim? (Should swim also be a conditional tag?) maybe these are answered in a doc, but I am unable to check them right now
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>>73164
I'm surprised there's no mention of long foreskin like the adults.
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>>73164
Taurs giving Telly a ride when
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I'm reviving the ancient traditions.

This is not an actual release
Just a test build, mainly because I want feedback on balance stuff.
Usual disclaimers apply, expect it to have all kinds of bugs and quirks, reset your settings, corrupt all your saves, NTR your cat, etc., making backups is a good idea.

The main thing I'm interested in is help with balancing some new unarmed combat stuff, and any other input you have on it.
Iron Fists perks have been buffed (mostly just for fists, not claws) and there's a new perk, Fists of Fury. Requires level 12 and 1+ fist mastery, unlocks stances that can be used when unarmed and not wielding a shield.
Mostly focused on bare-fisted fighting, but claws get their own stance too, if you have Natural Weapons and 1+ claw mastery.
Probably horribly overpowered and uselessly weak at the same time. Let me know what you feel needs tweaked, fixed, or redesigned.

Download: https://mega.nz/file/DhdnHAhT#bR9Q1GycYJiuzcVQrBkLSR9BXPgYJ5bgbbxjJuNN8tk
Changelog: Can't be bothered tbh
Source code: Pretty easy to find, don't be lazy
>>72991
I don't think I have it in me to come back to editing it yet. Writing doesn't take a lot out of me but editing to make it not shit does. I'm also not currently engaged with the content in the same way I actively was when I started. Maybe I'm elective or flakey, but I have little control over where my interests take me. If I start playing the game again I will probably take a more serious attempt at finishing my works again. Until then writing is fine, but the editing and proofing kills all the fun for me. I'll keep lurking for when the interest to play the game again strikes me. I don't think I will be able to make worthwhile contributions to the game unless I'm willing to put in the effort to get my writing up to quality standards, and with my current priorities and interests, I'm not.
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Proofread and polished a few scenes.
Widow Nests pre-badend and badend. https://pst.moe/paste/vxhpnv
Driderling encounter: https://pst.moe/paste/zqcjym
Driderling straight-shota: https://pst.moe/paste/mjmvkv
Need the option to fuck a loli driderling in her pussy, noting they have no sexual experience either, like the boys.
The girl-on-girl clam jam should be called tribadism because they've got a bit of that tribal atmosphere to them.
The way I imagine displaying the sex scenes is the first row for the lolis, second row for shotas, third possibly for both at once, or maybe the feral spiders.I don't expect a lot of feral spider scenes to ever be written, so those could be jammed wherever.
Maybe something like this, who knows
[Fuck Vaginally] [Tribadism] [Fuck Epigyne] [ ] [Fuck 2 lolis]
[Take Vaginally] [Fuck Face] [Fuck Spinneret] [ ] [Fuck 2 shotas]
[Threesome] [Foursome] [Teaching] [ ] [Leave]
Not to say this is list of scenes to be made, but how things might get laid out. We'll see if anyone wants to submit stuff over the next few months. If no one does, I'll probably only write 4 or 5 scenes for the driderling fights. We can also, of course, do 1.8.x updates that add more. There is no time limit on getting scenes in.
>>73178
Have gills, can swim. It's underwater, a lot of going to the lakebed.
>>73184
No mention of foreskin on the adults, you're mistaking the spiderkin with driders.
Of course, I doubt anyone's circumcising the driderlings. But they're unrelated to the spider boys, so no recurring motif. The foreskin forces have 2 legs. Driders have 8.
Alex is not a drider, he's a spiderboy. You'll get your foreskin shota there.
>>73201
Not enough room in the shop
>>73217
You can always write something new for fun and not stick to it. Maybe unilposting will help.
>>73220
>You can always write something new for fun and not stick to it.
>for fun
<to what end?
Depression hits hard man.The pleasure in of itself is immaterial. If I write it will be because it's something I wanted to do, but the desire will never be correlated to something so easy. Keep up the work though Satan. You're progressing towards an update that will give me reason to actively engage again with this ancient game, and I'm not the only one.
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>>73222
AnonMonkey does a lot to keep my energy up. When I get emails about that merge getting new commits, I feel pretty amped.
And you know, when 1.7.0 is truly done (after the prelease is done and the full version of 1.7.0 is out) what can AnonMonkey do? I can write any time, there's nothing stopping me, practically. Monkey has nothing to do if nothing is ready for implementation, it's my moral duty to keep a backlog building so it's never over. I will work this man to death, god damn it.

I might consider editing Alex for you, but I kind of fucking hate proofreading and I have a lot of other stuff to do. But it'd be really fitting to get Alex ready before 1.8.0 when all the other spider stuff comes out. Two different options for spider shotacon, can you imagine? One with phimosis and an oversized shirt. Helspawn will say "This is my boyfriend" and I'll go put my hand on his shoulder and say "Our boyfriend"
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>>73224
i would rather keep my life thank you
>>73224
>I might consider editing Alex for you, but I kind of fucking hate proofreading
I'm not going to ask you to do anything I wouldn't be willing to do myself. And I feel you on engagement. Even though I hated editing, the proofing, critique, and engagement I got while writing carried my motivation to continue.
If you *want* to volunteer yourself as my ghostwriter I won't contest writing sex scenes I'm interested in that you don't want to do yourself, but don't make a proposition you won't be satisfied with the outcome of. I'm not going to ask you to suffer on behalf of implementing my wants into the game so I won't have to, you have your own projects to work on.
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I'll be straight fucking honest I'm as drunk as I can make myself. Sorry requester, I'll clean it up later.
Requested by an anon in another thread.
Helia's Nightly Needs
https://pst.moe/paste/qxapsq
Well, you chose to sleep with a sex-crazed berserker. You chose to promise her you can take care of all those needs.
Also started making some new random blurbs for Telly's [Chat] option because I like that button. https://pst.moe/paste/jeryrg
>>73226
Don't think too hard about it. If you want to feel helpful in smaller parts, give more feedback on stuff. Pitch half-baked ideas, crack jokes.
It's a community, not an office job. We're all just shooting the shit and getting a game out of it.
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The idea I had in my head about the driders back in October last year was that these codex-mentioned red widows are a result of Fera. That's why I went with the white flytrap holding the spider in the intro.
I'm not sure how or if the backstory will end up in the game in any capacity, but essentially the old myth goes
A red widow spider did not die. It was cunning, it was deadly, and it continued to grow. Year over year, the spider became more deadly and ever larger. The orcs that at the time lived in some abundance in the area had a reverence for strength and power, and unsurprisingly this resulted in some worshiping the Goddess of Predation. A huntress among them devoted herself to Fera and knew of this colossal, legendary spider lurking deep in the swamps. She ventured in, equipped with a mighty orcish halberd and all the equipment she needs. She stalked, she tracked, and eventually she found the spider that had grown for years and years into an apex predator. A giant, easily as large as an orc.
And they fought.
It was a close fight, metal against carapace, but despite the injuries, the spider sunk its fangs deep into the orc huntress's torso and pinned her down. Things grew dim and dark.
Fera appeared, delighted by the power and cunning on display. She saw the spider for all it had done and thought to herself: "Marae is so infatuated with uplifting all her children to be as wise and smart as humans Hmph. Maybe my children can their uplifting..." And so she fused the dying orc's body to the giant red widow, granting utter and complete dominion over the intellect to the victor. The feral, cunning spider now had the wisdom of an orc, but nevertheless the bestial psychology of a spider. The orc could never die. Her will is gone. The first drider is created.
And that's why the codex says the red widows had this bizarrely transformative venom. Survive enough of it and that remnant of Fera's power causes you to take on the spider's traits. The original drider continued to propogate. With the abilities of a sapient being, she consolidated her territory into a grand nest. She bore younglings, more driders like herself, as well as more widows, seemingly at random. It was many years. Many long years. The drider queen no longer hunts. She doesn't need to. She is too large and powerful for any of her many children to defy. They bring her all she needs. She is an apex predator entirely artificially. She is corrupt by the toxic murk and the decades of demons destroying the land. Lazy, selfish, and stagnant.
To evolve, the system needs to be disrupted. Fera will enjoy seeing her champion end the overgrown arachnid's reign.
Of course, she wouldn't do it herself. Mortals only grow by adversity.
>>73230
I'll sleep on that. Also thanks for the Helia scene. I had a gripe about how Shouldra was more needy and insistent than the person you actually promised to sate. It bothered me that you could ignore her for weeks and not keep your promise and it didn't seem to matter.
Since I'm in the board for dev and writers, is there a way to make so that the PC can have always have and use the biggest dick possible for all NPCs?
Having to micromanage your dicks is annoying.


>>73230
>Well, you chose to sleep with a sex-crazed berserker. You chose to promise her you can take care of all those needs.
Drunkposting gives people strange power.
>no you can outlast her by a lot
sad
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>>73234
>>no you can outlast her by a lot
no way i wrote that, I know for sure I had it in my mind that she was fucking you into sleepy time.
>drunk power
debuff
>always use biggest dick
iirc the default is dick 1 unless specified by the scene, like one or two I specifically make it pick the smallest dick you have.
Something I wrote recently specifically uses the biggest.
Not sure what it w—oh it's the Helia scene I just did. I have to be honest, 60% of this scene is foreign to me.
>outlast
No I'm rereading it, you finish together at the same time. I should adjust it to have her push you more, but you definitely don't outlast her. Earlier when she's feeling herself close to the edge, she pulls back. Although she's mad horny and pent up, theoretically a hair-trigger, she doesn't orgasm until the end.
Helia's Night Needs (+Female)
https://pst.moe/paste/buyebu
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>>73237
idk about you, but i like the image that she curls her tail around your leg at the end more
is pudding a fluid
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>>73240
It's non-newtonian
When can I give Arian a Lolipop? When can I give Rathazul Lolipop to make him younger so he'd be interested in putting his rat dick in the PC?

>>73240
Depends on the consistency, I guess? When I was in kindergarten, my teacher liked me so he would give me a Snack Pack pudding cup during lunch, and I would "drink" it out of the cup, mostly using my tongue instead of a spoon.
Is OculumArachnae a fluid?
Do i call the item consumption scene on spring water & milk too? or just the others
does the item consumption proc the transformative & other effects, or do we just gloss over them?
we have to look at some item shortNames or change the text, cause with example succubi's delight, it returns "Succubi Del." as a shortname
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>>73247
>Is OculumArachnae a fluid?
The description includes "A small glass jar containing a viscous light-orange fluid", so I'd say so.
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>>73249
but it also says "you eat the fluid"
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>>73250
That's revamp writing for you.
>>73247
>does the item consumption proc the transformative & other effects
What's the point of distinguishing TF and non-TF if it didn't?
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>>73253
Confirmation and sanity check. And also most/all TFs have loads of text in them when used
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>>73258
I don't particularly care. It makes sense that you wouldn't be immune to TFs just because you're thirsty. Though, it is a magical TF effect you're wearing, so really anything can be brushed off if it's enough of a bother.
I really don't care, whatever you think is best. I'm inclined to say it procs whatever happens when you drink it normally
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>>73237
>no way i wrote that, I know for sure I had it in my mind that she was fucking you into sleepy time.
One of the worst thing in every fenoxo things: no matter your stats, you can't outlast NPCs. Not surprising from present fenoxo, but surprising for fenoxo past fenoxo or mods.
>debuff
that scene you did was hot af though.

>iirc the default is dick 1 unless specified by the scene, like one or two I specifically make it pick the smallest dick you have.
Christ how annoying. It mean the PC would need to be a monsters with thousand penis of every sizes just to be sure.
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>>73259
After messing with it, i'm asking you, when i call the consumption scene, then it'll clear all text (since all items do it when it gets used) and i can leave it as is, dont call the scene but use the item, or finangle a way to have it not clear all text. Pick one, each takes it's own time to do
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do you get the bonus speed in lake too?
the fatigue reduction, is it only in swamp,bog,boat,swim or is it whenever you've used a fluid item (or near water)?
what are the encounters when swimming? i'm treating it as it's own encounterzone
>sharkGirlEncounter ///If not mer, swimming gives -20 speed, mer get +20 and bonus fatigue recovery each turn
Aren't mermaids the only who can swim right now?

i'm posting doc per doc, so you'll get many messages
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>remind Satan to edit more after the rest is coded
consider yourself reminded to edit more anemone
>>73281
>Aren't mermaids the only who can swim right now?
Not according to >>73220
>Have gills, can swim.
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>>73285
gotcha, fixed
Is climb in a barrel a randomevent, or is it an event with kida, when does it proc specifically

I only have barrel and sharkboss docs left, and you wanted me to wait to do sharkboss...now to do the cultists
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>>73287
>now to do the cultists
I could do those if you'd still rather not.
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>>73289
I would rather code the jellyloli (ofc), but today is the last day where i'm on vacation so today is the last day i can churn out a bunch of code. So you tell me, if you'll code the cultists or not
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>>73290
>you'll code the cultists
Got it.
>Also, we should have them trigger at level 2, NO factory requirement.
Why change the factory requirement? That would be a pretty huge and impactful change, since there would no longer be a safe place to explore beyond level 1, so it needs a pretty strong justification.
It would also be weird to get a "there are new things here now" scene the very first time or first few times you explore the lake, which is pretty likely if level 2 is the only requirement.
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How do we usually track if something has been encountered? just a statusEffect?
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>>73302
Use SelfSaving. See the one-offs (wagon and skull) in Exploration for example.
There's a lot of leftover code from vanilla (and some old mod code) that uses status effects for all kinds of things that aren't status effects, but it should be avoided.
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>>73303
I figured it wasn't statusEffect, but i looked at the log and couldn't find a new monster to look at, so i had to ask
what's jellygirl's ass, hips, height, boob, hairlength numbers? and description?
i need some text to put in when failing to escape her grab (already grabbed)
how thick is the jelly's tentacle? (for loss cuntbuttchange)
I am not smart enough to give the lust regen/speed bonus, fire resist and the Charge Weapon stuff
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>>73305
>lust regen/speed bonus
Option 1: You can just stick it in performCombatAction, but if you do that then she just regen while stunned/feared/constricted/etc.
Option 2: Add a preTurn function to Monster and have it fire at the beginning of doAI, before the stun check. Handle the regen/speed there.
Option 3: Give the jellygirl a status effect (extending CombatBuff) that heals and changes its speed buff in onCombatRound. For the speed, you can either restore() and re-buffHost, or buffHost the difference between the current buff (check with buffValue) and what it should be.
For updating the speed boost, you could either remove/add a CombatSpeBuff (or if you go with option 3, restore/buffHost), or just increase the buff by ((current buff) - (new buff))
>fire resist
Monsters have a fireRes property already, just add it to the constructor. It's a multiplier, so a fireRes of 0.1 means fire damage is reduced by 90%.
>Charge Weapon
What I would probably do is use the AfterDamaged reaction, and combat.lastAbilityUsed.isWeaponAbility.
override public function react(context:ReactionContext):Bool {
	if (context == AfterDamaged && player.hasStatusEffect(StatusEffects.ChargeWeapon) && combat.lastAbilityUsed.isWeaponAbility) {
		outputText('[pg-]The jelly is shocked by your attack write something better here you'll probably need to note the damage manually like combat.getDamageText(number)');
		takeDamage(player.statusEffectv1(StatusEffects.ChargeWeapon));
	}
}
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>>73308
>then she just regen
then she won't regen
>>73264
>no matter your stats, you can't outlast NPCs
Don't you outlast them about a third of the time?
A lot more if you count combat victory scenes. Both vanilla and modded. That the nympho berserker needs exhausting sex makes sense to me.
>the PC needs many dicks
nah just one. Whatever you start with is good for nearly everybody in the game.
>>73276
Let your heart guide you, but if you need direction, path of least resistance, and if the difference is still too slim, summon the item's use text and without clearing.
>fatigue bonus
Boat. No debuff, but no buff, at lake, bog, swamp, since you don't submerge in those, you're just in a moist environment that your body likes. The real power of your body is its ability to swim. If we ever add swimming in the already established ocean at the rift, that'd be another place for full bonus. The red widow nests have an underwater portion too.
>swim
Have gills, can swim. Mermaids just get bonuses for doing it.
>>73287
>camp barrel proc
If the writer wants to speak up about it, I invite them to, else it's let's say one-time only and very rare by default, but increased chance the higher your fatigue is. If you got it without Kid A, then you made Kid A, you can do it again. Maybe as simple as adding to Kid A's creation scene that it resets that variable.
<Well, maybe is Izma is close.
I didn't notice this mistake in the scene after making anon change something.
Shoutout to the anon, I still like the touches they did.
>>73299
>Why change requirement
They are substantially easier than the factory. Vastly so. And not really any harder than the slimes and oozes that spawn at level 2. Zealots are also the easiest battle at the boat
>The first time you explore the lake
Highly unlikely the player is level 2 the first time. The lake is only safe at level 1 already and could be tough getting a level without at least grinding a little at the lake for speed.
But we could do it like unlocking areas, where it's lake explore counter being something. Maybe 20, like deeper areas.
But you greatly exaggerate the impact this change has, they are nothing.
>>73305
>tentacle thickness
Tough because they're super compressible, squished and warped by the walls. The way I see it, it can change virginity, but nothing more
How to do that numerically, you figure it out.
The thinner tendrils don't penetrate 
>ass hips height boob hairlength
Hair is hard to define. Maybe very short, counting at the connection between the head and the bell. Maybe the bell is counted as the top of the head and the tendrils are hair, which would be a couple meters.
Maybe 0 hair. Pretty sure the value actually never matters since those details aren't shown to the player.
Height is arguably 3 feet.
The rest depends on underage being full, half, or off. In that order
Smallest (1? 0?), 1 point higher except still flat chest, 3 or 4 points higher for off.
These numbers mean nothing to me whatsoever and are completely arbitrary besides being age toggle dependent.
>fail to escape text 
Your struggles manage to snap a tendril or two, but for naught, as you continue to be entangled.
>>zone
Also yeah you can treat swimming functionally like another zone, it doesn't share all encounters the boat has. No kaiju. Has an extra jellyfish not encounterable without swim. Could have more in the future.
>this is your reminder to do more anemone
Was probably going to do it during prerelease time, when people are testing sheer functionality and I'd be updating my branch with all the changes, then editing my now-up-to-date fork to merge back into master before the full release. Since anemones drag you off the boat and into the water, it's mostly good as it is, just a few little things to do.
Also don't hold back on the shark when everything else is done. We ship as-is, as I said.
>>73311
>And not really any harder than the slimes and oozes that spawn at level 2
>The lake is only safe at level 1 already
I was thinking the goos/slimes also required clearing the factory (they don't, factory just changes the encounter chances), leaving no pre-factory combat encounters unless NG+.
Since those are already encounterable, you're right that it's not super impactful. It does make the lake notably less safe though, by doubling the chance of a combat encounter.
>Highly unlikely the player is level 2 the first time.
For adults on normal difficulty, it's pretty likely. They wouldn't have any trouble with explore/forest encounters and could easily get to level 2 (or higher) if they explore those a bit before moving on to the lake.
I'll go with 20+ explorations.
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>>commits
>Anemone
>and [if (swim) {rinse it off in the lakewater. You }]gather
meant !swim. 
>mixes with the water[if (swim) { below}].
meant !swim
>Jellyfish
>crystal
I'm still iffy about it, maybe reduce weight on that one
>>73312
>doubling the chance of a combat encounter.
That's a fair point I didn't consider, though still minor.
>Adults could well handle the forest and explore fights
Then they easily dispatch cultists.
But 20 is probably fine. It makes sure the arrival of the cult never feels like it is immediate, they're always a "new presence" feeling encounter at the lake, and you're super likely to have the beautiful sword if not another weapon
>>73311
>Let your heart guide you, but if you need direction, path of least resistance, and if the difference is still too slim, summon the item's use text and without clearing.
i'm not changing a scene without asking the creator first, doesn't sit right with me. Shower thoughts thinks that we should keep it without item usage scene right now (and give a corruption boost if transformative) so it's done for release, and then if i have time then i'll add the item usage scene, or do it post-release, since i dont know how much time i'll have
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>>73323
Reminder for myself; check if there’s a skin oil that sets you to be most
>>73323
I'm perfectly fine with that.
Hey Anonmonkey, what do you like about petplay? What sort of details, vibes, styles? How do you feel about infantilizing? Like forcing an Alice to continue acting like a kid, even moreso and for longer than their usual charade. Petplay and dom/little type stuff has crossover, so I'm curious how it all comes together for you.
Do you like pet-play more when it's a big thing, like a character having to always act like a puppy around you, or when it's more self-contained, like a single roleplay session?
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>>73334
That's a hard question, i haven't thought much about why i like it (or maybe i just cant explain it) but i know one thing about it, and it is that i dont like the puppymasks (or whatever they're called), and i think that both options are viable, however if it's going to be a longer thing then it's better for it to be a camp follow/lover/slave/pet in the way that they should have the bitchsuit on more permanently rather than if it were in a town, then they wouldn't know when you would be visiting and thus would have to put it on, whereas if it's a single thing then that would be more optimal. Regarding infantilizing, i dont quite see it as the same thing (although i like both), it would require mental age regression (i guess that's the name?) so it'd have to be a camp follower/lover/slave because (in my mind) they'd become mentally regressed and dependant on you, in addittion it'd also have diapers, rattles, rocking horses and such and wouldn't necessarily have them bound to all fours like petplay, although they'd still be on all fours, just not bound and at most they'd be stuck in a crib. I hope it answers you since instead of an answer it's much more of a stream of consciousness
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While I assume this would probably take a lot of work coding, I would just like to put my request out there regardless. I think it's stupid that uncorrupted Jojo and Amily refuse to coexist with Vapula or Holli, considering that they don't care one single bit about Ceraph. So my request is that Vapula and Holli are set to be summoned, like Ceraph's ruby bellybutton piercing, by putting on some new permanent jewelry, like enchanted gold bangles on the wrists for Vapula, or a vine choker with a gem on it for Holli. I was also thinking that certain jewelry come with either buffs or nerfs, like Ceraph's bellybutton piercing granting +10 to minimum lust, or Arian's talisman becoming a permanent necklace that also grants a +5% in addition to the one time use spell. Again, I realize this is probably too much work to code, or downright impossible, but I just wanna put my request out there.
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>>73344
I mean, isn't Ceraph kind of a secret? It's not like she's just hanging around the camp, you gotta summon her. (And usually it's not even her that shows up, right?)
>>73308
Wait, why does she get a speed boost from being horny?
>>73311
>description
didn't mean hair description, i meant this;
>The shark girl stands [if (metric) {over 165 cm|almost five and a half feet}], with gray skin[if (!swim) { shimmering from water droplets catching the [sun]light}] and slender muscles built for swimming. Her shoulder-length silver hair brushes past her pretty face and her eyes are a striking shade of red. She has rows of intimidating sharp teeth glinting in the light. A fish-like tail protrudes from her backside, wrapping around her toned legs at every opportunity. She's wearing a rather skimpy black bikini, strings done in such a way that they move around her fin; though the swimwear itself barely covers her perky breasts and tight snatch.
but for jelly
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>>73351
Isn't that in the doc?
>Unlike goo-girls on dry land, this creature's translucent [jellyColor] mass is largely concentrated at the top, in an umbrella-shaped bell, surrounding a ruby-red nucleus. Hanging from the bell is a small, cute little [if (allowChild) {girl|miniature woman}], whose compact size contrasts the danger of her many sticky tendrils draping around her.
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>>73352
so it is
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Crossposted like always. https://8chan.moe/hgg/res/10.html#66
BloJo's Bazaar Adventure
https://pst.moe/paste/rnujbb
I have no reason to believe the guard would not take a free bloweyjoey as proof you're corrupt enough for the bazaar even if he can see your corruption is low. For one thing, if you're willing to suck dick for cock out in the open right at the entrance, you probably won't stay so pure for long, especially not within the "wonders of the bazaar".
So go off.
Also I think his level should be 15. We don't actually have to change anything else, but 30 looks ridiculous. Stat reduction is optional, it's nice to really incentivize debasing yourself to get non-corrupt entry because it's thematic. Avoiding both corruption and being a whore should be tough. Just don't make him higher level than Lethice. Revamp is retarded.
>>73342
>puppymasks
>bitchsuit
what the fuck are you talking about
I thought pet play was just acting pet-like, wearing a collar, varied between affectionate stuff or an unruly pet that needs discipline. Maybe loyalty stuff. Commands.
I thought be bound and unable to walk on anything but all fours, having a mask, stuff like that was a different kink. Like encasement adjacent. Being deprived of your capacities.
I guess it's a good thing I didn't try writing it yet, I'd have missed the mark.
>it's also have diapers, rattles, crib
I think infantilizing is somewhat more broad than that and is often a disparaging sense of being put down or made out to be like a child, treated as such, or to purposely act as one. Kinkwise, I was thinking of just dom/little. But I feel like abdl is also distinct from just infantilizing in general
I suppose it's all a world I'm not really in. I've always been into more of the blood play sphere of stuff, myself.
If I tried writing either of these, it wouldn't go near as far as you want, I believe. I think it would feel too out-of-place in CoC for me if I went the whole nine yards.
>>73344
>They don't care about Ceraph
Because Ceraph doesn't live there, as you know. They are unaware of what you're up to with her.
Frankly, I think it's stupid that not more people fuss about Vapula. Kiha should hardline say "We kill her now or I leave."
>Make Vapula summoned
Seems ill-fit for her as a character, she's a slob, not the sort to be good with fancy trinkets like Ceraph is.
>Holli
She's a tree.
>Work to code
Probably very little.
>>73353
I wasn't describing the hair, just talking through what the numbers would be. I hadn't even noticed you asked for description. Or I didn't understand what you meant and forgot by the time I posted.
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>>73360
>I thought pet play was just acting pet-like, wearing a collar, varied between affectionate stuff or an unruly pet that needs discipline. Maybe loyalty stuff. Commands.
That is the general gist i guess, or i guess you could call it the lesser kind? still good with me
>I thought be bound and unable to walk on anything but all fours, having a mask, stuff like that was a different kink. Like encasement adjacent. Being deprived of your capacities.
Encasement is way different to me, a bitchsuit can be as simple as just taping the forearm to the upper arm
>But I feel like abdl is also distinct from just infantilizing in general
It's all about how hard you go in the fetish i guess?
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Crossposted.
>>73220
Driderling Shota Facefucking
https://pst.moe/paste/svmoak
I'd prefer if you want to take up new scenes, you announce it. I'm fine skipping any of these scenes, but eventually they need doing, so I will write it if no one else does.
>>73367
One thing that came to mind was Unil, who over the course of thread discussion, was leaning into being forced to act like a child despite her being a mature adult. Keep the charade so the camp doesn't question her presence so much. And then over time she becomes the mask, unconsciously sticking to it when she doesn't have to (alone or just you around, like inside the cabin)
Her growing genuinely attached to her stuffed toy that you get her
When you treat her like a kid in private, she initially is upset because she wants to be herself when there's no need for the act, but eventually is enjoying the treatment and doesn't think to protest when you do it in private.
But it's mostly a sleep-deprived tangent

Have a good day.
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>>73383
Isn't Unil a faraway dream
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Just a suggestion for anonmonkey on the jellygirl, in the penis victory scene, I'd change (cockArea>=8) to something else. Maybe just thickness (>2?), maybe thickness or length (length>7? 9?).
The main reason is that cockarea as a concept is dumb and nonsensical, better to avoid it when possible. Plus in terms of realism, even being so small, bulging would take more than an area of 8 with typical proportions anyways. According to a friend.
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I like adding little fluff to Telly. I'm chipping away at more [Chat]s https://pst.moe/paste/sqplqd
If there's something you want to talk to Telly about that wouldn't deserve a scene to itself, I could add it to [Chat].
>>73396
Unil is as close as we want her to be.
>>73401
For the record, Monkey, I don't care about the numbers. Though there should probably be more than "2? 7? 9?" a little confidence would be nice. Pull out the F.A.T.A.L. manual and throw us some numbers for how big a dick needs to be to bulge a baby.
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>>73401
Probably should go by a length number
>>73404
>For the record, Monkey, I don't care about the numbers.
if only you did, then i didn't have to grab a number out of my ass
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I had a thought while at work; we dont really have any gloryhole content where you're getting the suck or getting the fuck, only scenes where you're doing the sucking
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>>73407
True
thats actually disappointing
>>73407
>or getting the fuck
If you have mino cum addiction, there is getting the fuck at the glory hole by minos.
You also can put your penis in various suspicious holes like flowers and pumpkins. Basically the same as gloryholes.
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>>73406
>Probably should go by a length number
But thickness is the most relevant there
I've (mostly) coded the barrel scene, but there's some formatting that's wrong or something cause it makes an incomplete sentence for me and i cant figure out how it's supposed to be
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>>73412
Apparently you're quiet set on figuring it out yourself since you aren't mentioning which one gives you an incomplete sentence.
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>>73413
>The first caress of the water within washes away your exertion as steadily as the tide, filling your lungs with new purpose as [if (kida) {Kid A settles in beside you, evidently unsure of why you've climbed inside this time, but wrapping your arm around your daughter seems to serve as answer enough. It's rather[if (height > 84) { cramped, but still}] cozy when she nestles into your embrace, and [if (isday) {the bustle of daily life fades to the gentle lap of the water|the night rests quiet and peaceful}] as the two of you bond in your own amphibious way, your tail winding lazy loops around her legs as you pull her close enough [if (height < 60) {to rest your head upon her shoulder|[if (height < 72) {lean into each other|for her to rest her head upon your shoulder}]}]. It's effortless to remain beside her for as long as you'd like, drinking in her affection as readily as the cool water all around and letting [if (height < 60) {her dote on you like you were [if (ischild) {her|a}] child}|[if (height < 72) {the world pass by in silence|your fingers tangle in her gooey hair}]}], the two of you content to watch the [sun]light shimmer off your [underbody.skinfurscales] with every shift of your tail.|you dive beneath the barrel's rim, luxuriating in the [if (isday) {comforting|refreshing}] coolness that surrounds you. It's like you were meant to be here, a private sea all your own, the world outside little more than a distortion beyond the surface. You could soak for hours and let the stress melt out of your limbs, minutes passing by like ripples as you [if (height < 60) {swim|float}] with effortless ease.}]
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>>73414
>[if (height < 60) {her dote on you like you were [if (ischild) {her|a}] child}|
Erroneous extra bracer after child, remove that.
Don't know if that's the only issue, but I see it
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>>73415
it wasn't just that, but it was also it. Should be more or less done.
@satan do i have the go-ahead with the boss or do you want to fiddle with it still?
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>>73416
what else was it
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>>73417
me forgetting to register [kida] as a tag
>>73404
I checked the F.A.T.A.L. manual, all human babies have a Vaginal Circumference Potential of 3-4", but this only determines whether or not any tearing occurs (and how pleasurable it is, but that's less relevant here), the manual doesn't say anything about bulging.
Vaginal Depth Potential is equal to height/12+(2d20)%, so with a height of 3' it would be 3-4", but again that only determines safety.

So let's consider the circumstances. While realism is a reasonable goal in the absence of other considerations, there is still the context of the world and genre to consider, and that influences things in multiple directions.
Many individuals in Mareth are cartoon-like and can be penetrated (often without note) by objects longer and/or wider than their bodies. This would suggest that we should adjust the required size upwards.
On the other hand, bulging is itself a turn-on to some, furries in particular seem to enjoy the cartoonishness of it, so in catering to such tastes, bulging can in some cases be caused by absurdly small penetrations that couldn't reasonably have any outward effect (or, indeed, any penetration at all of any size). So we might adjust the requirements downwards.
Importantly, the body in question is also made of goo, and as such the mechanics of the human body only apply very loosely at most, and we can only speculate on the specifics of such a body. If the internal goo were to be highly compressible and the membrane restraining enough, it's plausible that no bulging would occur until the width of the penetrating object approaches the width of the body, or the length is sufficient to reach the surface (which naturally depends on the angle, which could be highly variable when thrusting into/through goo). Or if the goo weren't very compressible or the membrane does very little to hold it in place, perhaps penetration with even a pencil-sized object would be sufficient to cause pencil-sized bulging.

Personally, while acknowledging the fantastical context, in the end I'd still lean more towards the realistic side of things. Further, precise sizes are uncertain here, but I'd estimate something apporoximating the size of a 1- or 2-year-old. Thus, I'll (somewhat arbitrarily, as any decision here must be) go with a requirement of (cockthickness > 2 || (cocklength > 10 && cockthickness > 1))
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>>73423
I say the human body resists bulging, designed to have the internals expand and contract a fair bit.
While the goo girls don't have distinct compartments of their internals meant to warp more or less than any other part. And most of the mass in the jelly-girl is in the bell, not the body.
The body would but more easily warped than a human's.
I appreciate the numbertism though. Good work!
>>73416
As I said, if I didn't make anything by the time you get to it, we ship it in as-is. If I do rework it though, the fight would basically all be the same probably. We can improve upon it in a future update, if I ever come up with soemthing I'm satisfied with.
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>>73424
>The body would but more easily warped than a human's.
I did go with that. 2" diameter probably wouldn't bulge a typical human 2-year-old (beyond the mons, of course), and length wouldn't be very relevant (until it gets very long) due to the angle of the vagina.
Cultist/zealot stuff essentially done, pending a few details and further testing.

>shota zealots
According to the doc, they should always be children if moreKids is enabled, otherwise always adult. For a generic repeatable encounter though, I think having both possibilities is better than always being locked out of one. I'd suggest having a 25-50% chance of shota if underage is enabled but not moreKids, and a 75-90% chance of shota with underage+moreKids (always adult if underage is disabled). Does that seem good?
>a firm mushing of his oral tendril
Not silly mode?
>I'm inclined to axe the armor changing thing. It only affects comfortable clothing and makes not much sense. Maybe add more outfits to drop table instead, filling the void, and giving them an effect of lowering lust resistance.
Anyone want to write names/descriptions? Otherwise I'll just leave the armor changing in for now. It seems fine conceptually, might as well keep it until there's a replacement, and I'm not interested enough to come up with some myself.
>The [if (shotaZealot) {young }][zealotSkin] zealot is 
Should maybe explicitly mention what the color is referring to here, or at least that it is a color? "The olive zealot" for example seems off to me, and would probably confuse people. "The white zealot" sounds like it would be something more like the ivory succubus rather than just the usual "white" skin.
>Zealot religious loss
Last paragraph doesn't work with the bad end, will need to be changed or at least have an alternate version for that case.
Also wow that's a long scene, more than 4 full pages.
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>>73428
>25-50% chance of shota 
I suppose that seems good, but I'd feel inclined to make more of an effort to clarify to the player when it's one of the other if it could vary, and I don't really feel like doing so. They're also so similar. The zealots aren't two encounters, they're one, and I think the limitedness of the difference between shota and adult is too clear if the player is swapping between them at random.
If it's always one or the other, the mental image is clearer.
>zealotSkin zealot
Probably meant it as [zealotskin]-skinned in the first place and forgot to add skin since the tag says skin.
>Zealot religious loss
That anon is addicted to length and also abandoning scenes after receiving feedback. I guess I should have spent more time trimming it down after he didn't respond. That said, it's a loss, kind of whatever.
>doesn't work with bad end
Looks like just make the last paragraph the if/else with the bad end text like the student loss does.
<if (player.inte < 10 && rand(2) == 0) {
<outputText("You find that your mind is unable to return[..]
<<else {
<The cathedral is gone when your eyes open some time later[...]
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>>73432
>If it's always one or the other, the mental image is clearer.
I suppose so.
>Looks like just make the last paragraph the if/else with the bad end text like the student loss does.
Feels disconnected and mechanical that way in my opinion, whereas the student rape has an actual transition.
>>73410
>If you have mino cum addiction, there is getting the fuck at the glory hole by minos.
Thats gay and still being the receiving side of the hole so that doesn't count
I want a fuckable bard/singer corgi that can appear in every town at random
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>>73453
Isn't the weaponsmith a corgi or something?
He was a tiny dogman iirc
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>>73454
Victoria tailor is a corgi yes, but she isn't quite what i wanted
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>>73459
Since we disagree, let's just compromise and have Victoria a corgi and make the bard something else, like a bee, or a goblin, or an elf, or something.
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>>73460
I literally searched the code for "corgi" and she was the only one that popped up. What i wanted was a not busty but not completely flat that i can interact with in various towns
>>73342
Am I playing an older version? All fetish zealots are adults for me. I think mine is 1.6.19.
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>>73486
Wrong quote, but answer is that it's getting rewritten for 1.7
New thread >>73509 >>73509 >>73509
do not eat shortly before swimming or you will get cramps
I wish there was a post apocalyptic Hell Comes to Frogtown/Mad Max/A Boy and His Dog inspired game to make CoC and TiTS a triumvirate. 
It would be called CUNT Copulation Under Nuclear Territories
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>>73811
Sounds like it'll just be another cannibalism simulator like NEO Scav

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